NEW Nurse Comic sketch
Added 2023-05-28 16:42:25 +0000 UTCHey dolls, i need your help with this one, orgnialy i was just gonna make a short 1-2 page comic for the new nurse everyone likes....it kinda grow more then that XD
to show everything etc.
i need your help with texted/dilogue!
the comic goses:
Page 1) mistress who runs the infermary is sick of one client who is very dark and edgey, mybe they argue alot or something, and so she descided she could use a new nurse, someone bubbly and happy, and knows just who to send.
page 2) wakes up with dollifaction progress allready in full swing
page 3) releaved and thinking the worst is over, hes leaves the assembly line only to end up in reconditioning, brainwashing begins
page 4) afew hours to a day later, that once drak edgey client, is now a new nurse doll, happy and bubbly and ready to start her first shift as a nurse doll.
Comments
||Page 1: (Panel 1) "Hey! I've been waiting for hours! What does it take to get some service at this place?!" (Mistress, through gritted teeth) "We're short-staffed today, many nurses are in training today..." (Panel 2) "Oh? I guess your nurses don't have the right qualifications or professional attitude. How about *you* service me directly?" (Panel 3) Mistress: "You're right, my mistake. It is an attitude problem." (Panel 4) Mistress: "With the proper training and attitude, anyone can do it." (Panel 5) "Huh?! No...wait.." ||Page 2: (Panel 1) "Ahh, what's this on my face!" (Panel 4) "It's so tight! Are these, breasts?!" ||Page 3: (above Panel 1): "I've got find a way out of here...Have them fix this!" (main panel) "Wait, this can't be the way out!" "Noooo!" ||Page 4: (Panel 1) Mistress: "Ah, you're back from training." (Main panel) Mistress: "We have quite the backlog of patients today and it could be a long, tiring day. Are you ready?" New Nurse: "Oh, of course~! All it takes is the right mindset! I'll get to work right away! Who's first on the schedule?"
Katharina Lauth
2023-05-28 22:12:22 +0000 UTCMan, you should really start using spellcheck or something.
Newton
2023-05-28 18:11:00 +0000 UTCOr something like this, it’s just a rough idea
Ivy
2023-05-28 18:04:13 +0000 UTC“what do you mean no one’s available to give me a shot?, just get one of those hot nurses to do it” “Sir, All of those ‘Hot Nurses’ are extremely busy, actually… I have an extra right here, follow me sir” Last page “Well? How was your first day?” Oh! It was wonderful Miss!
Ivy
2023-05-28 18:03:46 +0000 UTCIn the last page, I see the mistress asking how the new nurse feels. Cue the bubbly nurse saying she's happy to help the patients with a giggle.
Jack Max
2023-05-28 16:53:10 +0000 UTCjust enough so the reader understands whats going on i guess, theres no real limit to how much
JC
2023-05-28 16:52:13 +0000 UTCAbout how much dialog do you want? I can see there being quite a bit for page 1 and page 4, page 2 and page 3 is grunting and "ahhhh!" and "I'm not a...I'm not a....I'm a nurse...I'm a sexy nurse..."
z
2023-05-28 16:51:12 +0000 UTC
