Maid doll order! sketch
Added 2023-01-25 00:31:13 +0000 UTCok dolls, we just got an order for a new maid doll!
gonna be working on this little comic page soon!
just a simple one page comic for now, im currantly usieng all of my two brain cells to work on two other "bigger" comic ideas... (more on these soon)
also any grammer or spelling mistakes please comment them below! thankyou! <3
Comments
Correcting myself: the you're in the graphic should be the possessive "your" not the contraction "you're"
Gage
2023-01-27 13:53:53 +0000 UTCSpelling errors: "received" missing an e, "payment" has no a, "paid" not payed, i should be capital I unless you are intentionally calling out the speaker to be submissive (lowercase I for the Pronoun is not grammatically correct, but is accepted in D/s circles), "you're" is missing the ending e, "shipped" should not have an o, and lastly, in "if that's everything, that's needs an apostrophe before the s, as that's is a contraction of "that is". Hope this helps 😊, the art is great.
Gage
2023-01-25 23:12:14 +0000 UTCBeautiful maid! 😍 im liking this one page comic a lot already! 😄❤💖 For spelling corrections: missing an 'e' in received And "Payment" instead of paymeant I believe its also "Paid" but i can see payed sounds okay Included an extra ' when i think its just "your doll" at the bottom
Maple
2023-01-25 01:00:42 +0000 UTC
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