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Shrine Maiden (page 2)

if there any mistakes i would be very great full for the miss speeling followed by the correction <3

ok so, first page done, we've set the stage... Now, this is where the fun begins. I nice and slow TG magical transformation! XD

Page 1: https://www.patreon.com/posts/shrine-maiden-1-73128404

Page 2:https://www.patreon.com/posts/74038179

Shrine Maiden (page 2)

Comments

It says "the gods turly favor you" instead of truly

Newton

yes allways, but this is seprate from the Dollhouse hun :)

JesscaTG

This has been bugging me, but do dolls always start as male? Always tg?

Auris A.

Bottom panel has cheast instead of chest.

Coconutties

Top panel has prefect instead of perfect

Coconutties

I see a couple of typos: in the top panel “gift of the kitsun” should be kitsune; “see how the god’s” should be gods since it is referring to a group of gods not something owned by a god same thing in the bottom panel, also the bottom has gods capitalized and the top doesn’t; in the middle panel “there getting bigger” wrong there it should be they’re. Otherwise it looks great

wolffang 1000000

yes, all shall be foxgirls!

JC

lets hope so!

JC

All shall be fox girls

Lux

And so it begins the transformation to something great <3

Enrise89


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