Shrine Maiden (page 1)
Added 2022-10-10 17:05:29 +0000 UTC
UPDATE: thank you all for the corrections, I thinks thats all of them edited now :)
thankyou!
ok Dolls, the new nine page comic is about the start, Really hope you like this one!
alot longer then any of my other comics!
as allways would love to know what you think! and if there are any mistakes i may have missed please let me know, thankyou!
Part 2: https://www.patreon.com/posts/shrine-maiden-2-73418565
Comments
This is brilliant! Just a few corrections finally > finally you’r > you’re spirtes > spirits (I guess) honner > honour/honor anthour > another choicen > chosen there > their But great job in general ☺️
Mark Wicker
2022-10-11 07:37:59 +0000 UTC'Spirtes' is presumably meant to be Spirits? Or Sprites?
Amyphist
2022-10-10 20:23:44 +0000 UTCHonnor is a misspelled word
ServantofQueenLuneko
2022-10-10 17:42:27 +0000 UTCI love the mask <3
Enrise89
2022-10-10 17:23:06 +0000 UTCChoicen is misspelled
Ivy
2022-10-10 17:08:11 +0000 UTC
