Caleb - 80
Added 2023-11-11 14:58:26 +0000 UTCThanks for your patience.
You guys really need to thank Dr Mark for his outstanding performance in turning this around in less than 36 hours. I only got this to him late thursday night and he had it back to me in the early hours of this morning.
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If you read back -although they are living together they aren't actually married.
Flyingdoc
2023-12-01 21:39:48 +0000 UTCI'm curious about the quotes around husband and wife in relation to Chris and Jane at the end. " while her ‘husband’ brought..." & "over his ‘wife’s’ shoulder..." are two examples.
Jeff Hughes
2023-12-01 18:32:00 +0000 UTCMany moons ago we were told that Mary was a journalism major and Amanda was going to be a primary school teacher.
Flyingdoc
2023-11-30 21:23:03 +0000 UTCAnother great chapter. Amazing work as always Dr. Mark
ron see
2023-11-27 02:41:41 +0000 UTCAmazing chapter I’m curious on something and I probably just don’t remember or didn’t “read it properly” but what are Mary and Amanda’s careers?
Javier Delafuente
2023-11-26 14:26:06 +0000 UTCAnother outstanding episode. I have never read a story with such compelling characters and intricately woven plots. Truly outstanding 👏
glennog
2023-11-24 22:26:22 +0000 UTCExcellent as always. And yes, a big thanks to Dr Mark for all his work!
Azaria
2023-11-13 05:13:16 +0000 UTCOutstanding! Gordon’s reaction to their cooking skills was awesome. Chris and Jane, wow! Can’t wait until they join everybody.
David Long
2023-11-11 19:42:20 +0000 UTC
