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My Only One | Part 33. His order

So we can celebrate an update of another part, I'm so happy I did it! ❤️

I will add comments to each picture later here (refresh the page some hours later after I sleep okay?... I need to refresh my brain) main comments on & Wattpad, right now I'm off to sleep and I'll notify about the update when I'm done ^^

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~part name updated~

Guys, please help me to decide a better name for this part?

Initial name of this part was "His Order" but I'm thinking to rename it  to "Sleepwalker", you tell me what you think?

I just thought that "Sleepwalker" would express Jk's sleep disturbance connected with his war trauma experience, fears and nightmares, while "His Order" title accents on the fact that materially supports Tae and doesn't want a "no" from him, he wants to help him and to persuade him he orders him to take his support.

~part name updated~

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Alright here we go with my comments, it took a while cause I'm trying to remember what I was thinking about when creating this, thousand thoughts actually, but I can't reveal all because of spoilers hehe.

"Good morning baby" is said by Tae here, but can be said by Jk either. There's a shirt on the bed that Jk left... and I don't make the the blood stains on it visible because the part is JK's POV and he doesn't remember it.

Also by the size of rich interior and king-size bed - it's Tae's house 👌

I think it's first time I'm drawing Jungkook cooking right? I can't remember. I wanted to give them that domestic vibe, coziness, tenderness.

I also accented on Jk's soft pretty looks and that's how he used to look before war changed him...

That's when his dream turns into a nightmare. Both are real events in past that happened and he sees them in his dream over and over again.

He woke up 😭

I think reality is always better than dreams, sometimes we should just open our eyes.

Nothing to put here but technically this was probably the most difficult drawing to make because it's full height 😭👌

*Somnambulism is a medical term for sleepwalking.

*Self-hypnosis is a technique to make oneself relaxed and sleep, also used as a treatment for sleepwalking or insomnia. There's a military self-hypnosis methods since it is necessary for soldiers to fall asleep fast at any time and any place, whether on the war missions when it's uncomfortable and noisy around, or to cope with anxiety, fear and panic.  (for example I do use the military method of self-hypnosis because I also have to deal with sleepwalking)

(Technical detail: also today I shared the references on my private Twitter for this scene cause some people wondered how does Tae's D fits there 🤭 well it fits!)

Did you notice the clock time changed in 1 minute? 👀

I actually thought he gave him about 10-15k USD because Tae will find a gift card inside 🌚 I heard that Hawaii, is the most expensive state in US so JK knew it.

The conclusion comments I shared on Wattpad and there's nothing to add more except... more spoilers!

In the plot of the next part I planned GYM, some muscles showing perhaps? Some interactions and mostly dialogues because they build the story. Also there should be Tae chatting with juliettkilo a bit to find out who is he. I'm still reorganizing the part and maybe I'll come up with better ideas for a change or additions ~

Yeah and they're going to Hawaii... JK, Tae, his squad of officers and the USA crew. The fact that in this part their relationship is smooth doesn't mean it'll be always like this later, remember that this AU is an emotional roller-coaster, I thought readers needed a part where they're nicer to each other, showing care and being more intimate.

To be continued ^^

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Comments

why? maybe it's slow internet connection. Try to download the files and open them on your computer.

humanlouvre

I am waiting for next chapter, super excited 💜

Amruta Patil

I can't see it😭😭😭 i click on to try and open it but it dont want to!!

Carille

wowwww!!! increíble!

Romina Gómez Rojas

NECESITOOOOO MÁS!

Elizabeth Cuervo

I have no idea how to reply at your comment :D so just wanting to add that - I wish people understood that too cause you never know that "why" is he like this ( we can apply at real people around as well of course ) he act this way because of some reasson. And there is not resson to call someone 'alway angry' or 'gloomy' as you said. People call me a lot 'cold hearted' or 'emotion less' without actually knowing me or even talk to me. So I'm happy here is also not that pretending he is ok when he is not cause lets be honest. When I think about how my fashbacks or attacks feels like... It would be too unreal to him act like nothing is happening. And kinda sad to show it this way. So I'm happy you choosed to make him this way :3 . Even when it hurts to see they like that. It's best you could do. Most realistic. But! Of course everyone has it different we are all different but from my point of view this is how I see it :3

Adalyn

This means a lot to me so that people can relate. I wish people could understand the character of Jk and stop calling him 'always angry' and 'gloomy', at least he doesn't pretend that he is "ok", a lot of people deal with trauma and it's stressful for them, they need compassion and understanding. And thank you for your feedback! <3

humanlouvre

As someone who is dealing with ptsd I have to say... Its really strong..I can feel his fear in nightmare. Ah you are so talented! Love your art! Love this AU so much! 💜

Adalyn

It’s so amazing how soft looking you managed to make Tae’s skin, I admire your style of painting 🤯 I loved this chapter, the way they were dressed uff 😖 looking forward to the trip to Hawaii ☺️ Thank you 🤍

vitr32

Once again, this update is to die for. You continue to dazzle us month after month 💜💜. I would have a lot to say here about so many things, but I would take away the pain of Tae, who wonders who JK was kissing in his dream (and who is of course convinced that it was not him), and who has must have felt very embarrassed to be naked on top of him like that (and HOW Jungkook managed to remain imperturbable: this guy is HEROIC in many ways ^_^). And Jungkook’s nightmare, of course.... (Actually it's a nightmare from the start, since it throws everything he's lost in his face...). And I hope it doesn't bother you, but would it be possible to have (later, when you have time) the references for this scene you're talking about on Patreon too, since not everyone can follow you on your private twitter 😊? Thank you so much! 💜

Mg

I LOVE IT. 💜💜💜💜💜

Nathalie Pieters

I should say 'Dream on'...😏

Saskia


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