devotees
Added 2024-06-29 18:56:33 +0000 UTCI made 2 more finalized examples based on the suggestions. But I still feel like it can improve.
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Bottoms: Design #1: I think Design #1 is a great design. It feels cohesive. I like the way the hair covers his eyes and flows down his face and into his beard braid. If I have One minor nitpick I have is the womb tattoo. I love the base design, especially how the top sperm is implied to be actively impregnating the egg cell. I feel like theirs is too much negative space. Try to add more sperm around, the egg in the style of Design #2’s womb tattoo Design #2. This design Is my favorite. I just have a few minor nitpicks with it. The first issue is the hair. I like the way you styled the 4c texture better in Bottom design B. I think it's the way the shapes of the hair texture interact with shadows that cover his eyes. It’s subtle but their combined effect makes the shadows bigger and darker and in my opinion more visually impactful. My second suggestion I would consider making its texture more consistent with the texture on his head, chest, and pubes. I think the shoulder hair of Bottom design E is perfect. I would just copy and paste, take the shoulder hair and styling of Design E onto design 2 and extend it down his deltoid exactly the way design 2 does currently. The last issue I have I have is with the cowbell. I feel like it's too close to his face. I don't think you should place it between his beard and chest hair especially with how detailed it is. The area is too busy. My suggestion is to position it where the crease of his pecs meets the top of his belly. Other than that I think he is perfect. Design 1&2: The alternate womb tattoo design you made for bottom 1, got me thinking about alternate design for the both of them. The best way for me to describe it is sort of a combination of the tattoo’s for bottoms one and two. Imagine the egg cell is being approached by 3 sperm cells from 3 different angles sort of like this ⅄ . The idea is that sperm cells are pushing into the egg cell shaping it into a heart. The bottom 2 sperm are pushing into the egg forming the tip(bottom) of the heart. Meanwhile top sperm penetrates the egg forming the crease(top) of the heart. Think of it like an onion: the head of the sperm is centered around the belly button and the heart(egg cell) is centered around the sperm head. Lastly The crease of the heart meets where the sperm's head connects with the tail. Tops: The tops feel really bland and generic to me. I think you should consider playing with the theme of them being cows a bit. To make them more visually interesting. What is the in-universe reason why the top and bottom bulls are together in the first place? They’re cows right, so Maybe the Tops are breeding bulls? Maybe they own and run their own ranch/dairy? And the womb tattoos aren’t just tattoos, They’re womb brands. Maybe they aren’t just for decoration, maybe brands are enchanted, not only do they mark the bottoms as property but allow the bottoms to get pregnant and or be milked. Maybe the tops have their own womb brands that allow only them to impregnate the bottoms. The last thing is something I think you should seriously consider: design them in pairs. Use the bottom designs that feel the most complete so use them as a baseline, and design the tops around them so they complement each other. Top #1 : For Design #1 I would use design F, but remove his chest hair, and give him Design 3 Beard and Design 4 Nose/mouth, Nose ring, and stripe across his chest. Top #2: I suggest using combination Top D as a base to create a complement to Design #2. I like the horns, beard shape and facial structure. I feel they better compliment design 2 especially the face because the Brow of Top D greatly mimics the shadows giving that same gruff visual effect of bottom design B. Then I would give him Top B’s beard texture, chest hair, and head hair Of Top #1 &2: I like the idea of the cowbell in bottom design 2. Try exploring the idea of cowbell’s as accessories to spice up the top’s designs. Maybe cowbell’s are purity rings so the top’s like to wear them as proof of their sexual conquests. A monument to their virility and sexual prowess. Explore hanging them on their horn’s, or dangle off their nipple rings, explore using cowbell’s as dick piercings. Maybe tie cowbells around the dick and balls as makeshift cock rings.
Ty
2024-06-30 06:00:02 +0000 UTCI'm not able to provide suggestions, but one thing that I like about your art is how you give the muscles weight especially the pecs. I ADORE how you drew the pecs in these examples. 😩😍
CoffeeKing
2024-06-29 19:39:03 +0000 UTC
