A lil self critic post!
As an artist itΒ΄s always important to be critical of your own work, especially on the sketching stage. When we draw and finish a sketch, we tend to go "blind" to our mistakes. My advice is to wait either a few hours, or a day or two to have a new vision! You will most likely instantly notice things that you didnΒ΄t before!
β₯ Her head was too big
β₯ Her ribbon too symmetrical which made it lose dynamic
β₯ Her waist and ribcageΒ΄s form wasnΒ΄t flattering.
β₯ Eyes too round and big.
β₯ Face too round.
Then there are things that you figure out way after--like after you start to colour!
In this case, during line stage, I found the right side of her hair much more appealing-- But as soon as I started to colour I realized the left side suited my shading style much more! Something to learn to next time! Hope you could also learn from this!
Cheers β₯