Annoying Avery full comic
Added 2020-09-30 18:40:33 +0000 UTCdownload the .pdf or .zip below.
very happy to get this out, its a little bit of a longer format than usual and contains some more interactions that are not just feet
Comments
I loved the multiple sizes and how tiny the ones in the bus were. The only bit I didn't like was the scat bit. But it's your comic, so you should put what you like in it.
SmolDegen
2020-09-30 22:47:50 +0000 UTCNothing wrong at all with working out the kinks! And if it's anything like your art itself, it will only get better and better with time I'm sure. As I said, I look forward to it though man.
Cool
2020-09-30 22:25:48 +0000 UTChmm.. well ive got archived streams on my picarto: https://picarto.tv/fooooly, as for what use. in this comic i used paint tool sai, clip studio and affinity publisher
fooooly
2020-09-30 20:58:24 +0000 UTCthank you for the feedback, this comic production at many points was a bit of a mess, i added few extra pages to sorta fix it but still i agree its not totally reading as it should. im slowly breaking a mold i used to have for these comics, where i used to think of their only value being pov shots and dialogue. my next few comics will have a better flow im hoping
fooooly
2020-09-30 20:56:01 +0000 UTCOkay, I figured as much, just wasn't 100% on it
daKatzman92
2020-09-30 19:41:11 +0000 UTCMan I always love all of your work. I am really interested in your process and what you use. Do you ever plan on or have you already streamed or made videos before?
My Leg
2020-09-30 19:40:01 +0000 UTCI have to echo the story becoming a little muddled sentiment, but the art is too rock solid to be ignored man. That first part especially with the POV of the bus narrowly missing being crushed is just one of my fave views I can remember seeing in a while. It's damn impressive seeing something so massive from that sorta perspective, would love more like it. In any case, I look forward to your next comic as well. I know it's very time consuming but the format definitely let's you show of a lot of your most creative stuff.
Cool
2020-09-30 19:26:35 +0000 UTCAh yeah I've done the same thing before, so I totally get ya there haha. Love it either way XD
Guireyart
2020-09-30 19:16:45 +0000 UTCthankyou! i see how it gets confusing, i sorta drew this with pictures first and how they linked together was more of an afterthought. its something i want to improve going forward.
fooooly
2020-09-30 19:13:42 +0000 UTCi understand, i didn't plan ahead on this comic. in the last few pages is a flashback and at the very end, Avery is returned back to her normal size after her flashback. with more planing hopefully my next one will be easier to follow
fooooly
2020-09-30 19:10:23 +0000 UTCAwesome job! Really like this comic format, though gotta admit, I was confused a bit story wise in some parts. Didn't really hinder the overall experience though, the bus scene at the end was phenomenal! Hope to see more like this in the future!
Guireyart
2020-09-30 19:01:41 +0000 UTCLet's GOOOOOOOO
2KFSK
2020-09-30 18:59:01 +0000 UTCI'm a little lost toward the ending, and don't like scat, but love everything else here... Looks amazing!
daKatzman92
2020-09-30 18:46:37 +0000 UTC
