Beekeeping Guide
Added 2018-07-08 15:16:52 +0000 UTCThis is only video #3, so I'm still learning all of this. While I've yet to convert my notes to text, I will be making a beekeeping page on the guide. This newest release is me taking all the feedback you have provided and trying to make my videos higher quality. People have been very supportive with constructive criticism and I am grateful you took the time out of your day to give me your thoughts.
Even though I do believe that I did much better there's still more to improve. Hopefully people on mobile devices have a much easier time hearing me now. I cannot improve audio quality further as far as I know, without better equipment. That would be worth doing later on in this process assuming it works out. You'll probably notice the video is more focused, the script tighter (Thanks, Kaitlyn!) and there's a better flow of information. I'm still looking for more feedback.
Comments
Love it! I genuinely didn't know that Honey provides a moodlet to protect Sims from weather. Much easier to watch now that it's shorter too. Maybe add an intro - hi and welcome to carl's sims guide - and then at the end plug your website and patreon and social media. if you'd like to know more, please visit our website etc. Maybe link similar guides like the gardening guides at the end too! You've got a bit of dead air at the end to use up with that kind of stuff =)
magneticsouth
2018-07-09 02:18:22 +0000 UTCI just started beekeeping this week. Yours is a very timely video and really informative. l needed to do some research on the bees and now I don't have to. Thank you so much for making my Sims playing that much more fun.
Jeannette
2018-07-08 20:52:57 +0000 UTC
