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[Insider] Neighborhood Encounters Alpha Draft

Hey all, this one has been peculating for awhil

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What a dog shit story. This is awful. I'm out. My gods is this horrible. It doesnt make any sense at all. 31 months for this? I have only been here a few months. You people are being exploited. This clown is almost on 3 years on a single story. Gtfo. Have some self respect and stop being exploited.

TD_Stowe

I wish you would continue with this story because it reminds me of my wife.

TRW

I wish Burt had got inside her bikini bottoms.

MV

I think the early chapters of these stories with the wife initially succumbing to the unsavoury man are probably the easiest to write and read because things move reasonably quickly and the moments feel more like huge events. So it doesn't surprise me that there's a wave of comments about this being better than TA etc. But if this goes 30 chapters it will probably hit the same level of slower, more mundane progression that TA has grown into. Maybe 30+ chapters of one story is just too much. So I'm interested in seeing where this goes and how quickly it progresses. As well as how many chapters it takes to get there. TA is obviously super long. TC and DL were incredibly short in comparison at only 4 or 5 chapters. Maybe this can be the happy medium of a 12-15 chapter story arc where it has a deeper more rounded plot than a TC type story but doesn't plateau out and get strung along with too many wild sub plots like TA has.

Gabby

Been waiting for this for awhile. It's the best story I've read since My Neighbor and Neighbor Chronicles. I can't wait for Burt to finally fuck her and her submit. I hope it will be a reluctant acceptance from her when she realizes how bad she needs it. Please don't take so long for the next part.

J

Reminds me of my favorite parts of TA..... the beginning of the hunt, the start of the conquest , the reluctant wife slowly being corrupted. I hope Once Burt succeeds a few times , Don can keep things more interesting and less repetitive then TA.

Fuzzy Shark


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