[Insider] Toxic Attraction: Chapter 29 Alpha Draft
Added 2025-04-21 21:45:38 +0000 UTCHey all. Hope all is well and that those of you
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well ... bye
neegan
2025-04-30 06:12:29 +0000 UTCBye
John Lewis
2025-04-27 11:19:09 +0000 UTCLater dudes. I hope some of you have a modicum of self respect and abandon this abject bullshit. You are being exploited. This dude is George R R Martin with no talent for character development or consistency.
Elfy
2025-04-25 03:49:34 +0000 UTCNever have I read a more bullshit story that makes so much money by ignoring everyone and simply focusing on demented individuals. There is a lot of criticism i can offer but clearly it doesn't matter. The core fans thrive on a plot that goes no where, with characters that are in no way consistent or realistic. This story is fascinating.
Elfy
2025-04-25 03:29:18 +0000 UTCThis was a great chapter and well overdue. Some minor recommendations for consideration. 1. Would love to see Sarah tell Lester she loves him in front of Dan and maybe things like, 'I wish you were my husband..' or something equally gut wrenching and new. 2. Would love to see Sarah tell Lester she won't let Dan cum in her again. 3. Would love to have the inclusion of Lester cumming on the wedding ring in front of Dan and maybe Sarah saying ' I wouldn't let anyone do that to our ring..' referring to Lesters. 4. I think for the next chapter, Lester can ask Sarah to divorce Dan...maybe initially only as a roleplay thing, but with some inference of meaning it
Bob James
2025-04-23 22:35:46 +0000 UTCLoved Dan's humiliation and realization of his position which he has not wanted to embrace. His wife is his room mate's woman and she prefers it.
Chris Casey
2025-04-23 19:03:09 +0000 UTC
