[Insiders] Toxic Attraction: Chapter 26 Alpha Draft
Added 2025-01-21 01:42:36 +0000 UTCHey folks, happy new years! Hope all is well on
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I can't wait to see Sarah belly swollen with Lester baby. Sarah will divorce Dan and marry Lester. Lester will want to have custody of Dan children. Leaving Dan with nothing. Lester deserves her because his huge cock has conquer her and made her his.
Timothy Whittaker
2025-01-29 01:36:29 +0000 UTCOnce Sarah is fully conquered, which will happen soon, I think. Would he move to a new conquest If so, Would like it to be the CEO's wife
Tushar Srivastav
2025-01-28 03:33:09 +0000 UTCI think Dan should be the one pushing new men to try and pull S away from L
b g
2025-01-26 23:15:38 +0000 UTCI like the unsatisfied option, pushing Dan to find other potential bulls
b g
2025-01-26 23:13:28 +0000 UTCI wonder if Lester’s comment about her ass and job security is foreshadowing a possible future encounter with Richard. Will Sarah become the hospital slut?
Todd
2025-01-26 14:31:12 +0000 UTCDoes anyone know if the final version will be released today?
Bob James
2025-01-25 21:19:43 +0000 UTCIt would be interesting if Lester convinces Otis and Mary to engage in demeaning sex. Sarah can get her revenge while getting hot watching their coupling.. This will allow Sarah to initiate sex with Lester so she can properly thank him for avenging her
Charlie_Chuckles
2025-01-25 15:58:13 +0000 UTCMaybe Lester blackmails Dan, leaving Sarah in blissful ignorance of what shenanigans' her 'men' are negotiating behind her back.
Waratah David
2025-01-25 08:06:14 +0000 UTCOh yeah good point. That doesn’t make any sense
KB
2025-01-24 21:26:55 +0000 UTCThe Jesse scene was ok. It makes sense to check in with him after his big night with Sarah to see what he is thinking. I would wager he will turn up and try and stalk her. Could add an interesting twist to the story further down the road. I think he could still be important to the story He has been a crucial part of driving the plot forward in the past..
Royston smith
2025-01-24 18:55:00 +0000 UTCMy third observation is Dan really needs to make more progress in his operation “take down Lester”, in this chapter. At least 1 significant lead to push his investigation forward should be proffered. It’s also weird that he doesn’t ring Sarah to further talk things through a la Lester and Jesse. Tbh this scene doesn’t work. It doesn’t offer us enough. I finished reading that scene and thought, is that it?
Royston smith
2025-01-24 18:45:01 +0000 UTCJL agreed. I also have a criticism, but it’s more style based. Isn’t Mary’s tirade against Sarah a tad over done? No fewer than 4 paras of Mary’s Sarah put downs when 1/2 para would make the point.
Royston smith
2025-01-24 18:33:20 +0000 UTCMark, you may well be right, but riddle me this. Why should Lester abandon his efforts to conquer Sarah emotionally as well as physically. In her own words: “at least she had someone on her side in the hospital”. He has worked hard to gain her trust, by reversing the hospital hack, saving her job and putting Mary in her place. Why would he throw all that away by directly blackmailing the couple? No, he will pose as an anonymous person in the hospital and ride to Sarah’s rescue by paying the blackmailer (which will be him). She will then be financially indebted to him, won’t be able to tell Dan and further emotionally entwined and dependent on Lester
Royston smith
2025-01-24 18:27:55 +0000 UTCI personally think it will be direct. I think Dan and/or sarah will find out about what Lester has been up to and to keep them quiet he will blackmail them with the tapes. Sarah’s going to be upset and hate Lester for a while despite the physical stimulation being amazing but once she gets knocked up she will slowly go back to having feelings for Lester.
Mark
2025-01-24 16:27:29 +0000 UTCIf Sarah believes Lester that someone else other than him taped her with Otis this story will have officially jumped the shark.
J Lewis
2025-01-24 13:04:53 +0000 UTCSmall criticism about the timeline. The end of Ch25 was Friday night. The next Sarah Lester scene is the next day which would make it Saturday but yet it was a typical work day…on a Saturday? I don’t think so.
J Lewis
2025-01-24 12:51:35 +0000 UTCIn relation to Mark’s observation that Lester’s filming is to do with blackmail, this passage is revealing;”Otis was the perfect pawn to push the next phase of Lester’s plan. Sarah had already let herself go with Jesse. Now with Otis in her workplace, his financial strangehold on the couple could truly begin”. Is he going to threaten Dan with the videos of Sarah being released on the internet? I think so. As exhibit 1 I would bring forward his conversation with Sarah about hacking. She seems suspicious, obviously after listening to Dan’s theory about Lester being the one who has hacked both the hospital and Jesse’s firm. Lester knows this, so he is going make sure they are trapped within his blackmail web. I don’t think he will do it directly, but he will pose as someone in the hospital who has filmed Sarah and who is blackmailing her. She will, if course, come to Lester for help…
Royston smith
2025-01-24 08:37:38 +0000 UTCHonestly as someone else mentioned Sarah needs to occasionally initiate some of the sex. The other thing that’s missing is she needs to have a sex scene with Dan again. Maybe it ends up just a handjob or she is unsatisfied. I will say that I don’t think Lester is cucking himself . I think it’s blackmail. At some point I think Sarah’s going to cut things off with Lester because of what Dan uncovers and Lester will blackmail her into submission. That could work really well and be hot if done right. As long as she actually despises doing it despite the physical reaction it gives her.
Mark
2025-01-23 22:24:28 +0000 UTCSo, 2nd observation. The sex scenes between Lester and Sarah are too samey. I can almost predict the dialogue and the development of their scenes before it happens. These Lester/Sarah scenes need to be freshened up. Surely Lester, loving smacking her ass as he does would develop his BDSM tendencies further, by perhaps handcuffing her or gagging her whilst he fucks her. Be more creative Lester for God’s sake!! Also, as others have said Sarah could even take the lead down that path and ask for it.
Royston smith
2025-01-23 20:23:02 +0000 UTCThis chapter, to me, although I enjoyed reading it, is unbalanced. There needs to be a sex scene at the end and beginning of the chapter, 2 Sex scenes together at the end doesn’t work. Why not move the Otis scene to the beginning? It would also make sense to have a pre-Otis scene where Lester talks to Otis after fucking Sarah over her car hood in the hospital car park in a previous chapter. This is where Otis discovers them and Lester says he will talk to Otis about it at the end of the chapter, presumably to keep him on side. It could be a flashback scene where Lester could enforce Otis’ silence by offering favours to him with Sarah, which would give him “eyes” around the hospital and tie him to Lester. Otis needs to know Lester has bestowed the favour, rather than Sarah randomly seeking out Otis as it seems in this version. The Sarah Lester scene could then be the end scene. I kind of get why it is in Lester’s office. He has done her in her office, now he gets to do her in his office. Its a play on the change in the power dynamic.
Royston smith
2025-01-23 20:15:02 +0000 UTCMr. Frost great ideas! I'm a Don fanboy for the most part but this last chapter is sub par IMO. Having Sarah be a bit more aggressive in initiation of sex with Lester would be a good turning point. Need to have her get him back into the house. Unless Don has a very good reason to keep Otis in the picture it's a bit boring. If the Otis scene is to set Sarah up to get fired then that seems counterproductive for Lester. Sarah would see it as a betrayal. Now having Her pay cut by Mary or Richard would serve to put them in a financial bind. Maybe renting Lester their basement would help out?
RCH
2025-01-23 15:33:22 +0000 UTCI would liked to have seen Sarah meet Otis willingly. Maybe next time and without Lester's knowledge.. Sarah craves humiliation. We all know Lester is the main man. Sarah loves him controlling her and the sex is mindbblowing. Sarahs and Dans original fantasies were about Sarah with men who were so obviously beneath her. She is drawn to Lester like a moth to a flame regardless of who she is with. Dan could have never given her the sexual adventures like these. He didnt even bother to call or text her. But she didnt calf or text him either. Where is this with Jesse going? Has he become obsessed with Sarah? What is he capable of? This chapter leaves me wondering what Lesters plan is for Otis as some kind of pawn. Does it fit into some kind of birth control pill/pregnancyf scenario? Lester has saved Sarahs hospital, her job, and now from Mary. She has all the reasons to love Lester or least admit that she is his.
leggys_hub
2025-01-23 15:31:15 +0000 UTCIt definitely is a filler chapter. I take note of last few paragraphs of him lurking and that he was filming her again. Same as when she was fucking Jesse. He made mention of financial means against her. I believe he plans to keep gathering blackmail to eventually drop a bomb against her and Dan if need be where she is forced to be with him or something remaining to be seen
KB
2025-01-23 00:29:09 +0000 UTCHe always makes mention of it being recorded afterwards. Same with Jesse. Further evidence as blackmail against her. That’s my assumption. He plans to use all of this against her at some point.
KB
2025-01-23 00:27:18 +0000 UTCI also think that this was the best opportunity to have start an interaction where Sarah is taking the lead like the BJ scene quite a few chapters back. Have her drag Lester into the office and lead the sex or beg him to come home with her because she knows the kids are out with her parents or sth (after the office scene). Lester could ask her how she plans to pay him back for kicking him out earlier and then Sarah could pout and ask him to come home with her for dinner. Or some combination of those ideas. This is me just throwing out ideas lol because I really hope don replaces the Otis scene with something else haha
Jackfrost
2025-01-22 22:53:39 +0000 UTCExactly what i’ve been saying. The otis scene makes no sense not just because of how there was no buildup but also because it goes against both Lester and Sarah’s character development(the whole scene). I would say the same thing about the jesse and vernon scenes as well but this one seemed way over the top. I can see where Don might want to go with this but I dont think it makes much sense. Sarah and Lester are both behaving out of character at this point and it interrupts the flow of the plot as well.
Jackfrost
2025-01-22 20:18:46 +0000 UTCRobert you said it better than my comment. Not so disappointed in the sex as just weird and Otis scene seems unnecessary.
RCH
2025-01-22 19:02:11 +0000 UTCThe first part of the chapter 26 is good the meeting with Mary good! Sex in the Lester's office good! Then it lost it for me. The Otis scene is a distraction. Unless Don has a good reason for this scene? Move things on to a more critical point. Lester has established himself as a protector of Sarah in the meeting with Mary. Sarah has proven her slutty-ness and willingness to submit to Lester's whims. Let's move on. Getting Lester back into the William's home. Not looking forward to reading chapter 45 next year.
RCH
2025-01-22 18:53:45 +0000 UTCI am speculating, but my read through is if you couple Lester's video taping Sarah/Otis with his line about "financially ruining the Williamses" and make them more reliant on Lester... This isnt video footage to blackmail Sarah/Dan over embarassment. The hospital wont care if shes a slut in her "home". But fucking at the hospital is grounds for removal. Lester showing Richard a video of himself fucking Sarah would be kinda weird. Im assuming Lester is going to leak this footage to get Sarah fired. This way Lester can freely quit, and maybe even do it as a show of solidarity with Sarah - assuming he is able to make it seem like the footage leaked from someone other than Lester. Again just speculating because I agree - filming it doesnt really benefit im in any other way unless he plans on selling it on the web but he hasnt shown interest in that either for a while
tim
2025-01-22 18:50:07 +0000 UTCAfter 26 chapters and Sarah is still incapable of starting any sexual interaction with Lester. She is always the reluctant one. I would understand if this was the 2nd or 3rd time but those two had so much sex Sarah by now. Also why play up all the regrets by Sarah.? They are adults not kids and understand the consequences of the decisions they made. I disliked the whole Otis scene at the end. The scene made little sense after Lester’s declaration in ch.25. The whole not caring about minor characters, like Jesse and Otis as Lester was using them to gauge Sarah’s “growth.” Then suddenly Lester reneges his decision and has Sarah service Otis. Why? Sarah has throughly debased herself by now so what was that for? Favors? What happens if Otis becomes more interested in Sarah for himself and ignores Lester’s direction like Vernon did. I hope the gets a revision or removed in the final
Charlie_Chuckles
2025-01-22 18:41:40 +0000 UTCJust adding my thoughts because maybe Don reads these…. lol This is my least favorite chapter by far. There are less and less sex scenes of worth and yes, I find Lester’s cucking of himself confusing. He has way more than enough video to make Dan run from Sarah and/or manipulate and control them both. Why keep Otis involved unless he was using him for a favor? As it has been said already, Why wouldn’t his special favor be another go in the house with the kids there, anal finally, or a special date night in Middleton to show her/his ring off to potential friends, acquaintances etc…. Or just own it and ask her to stop taking the birth control. I did like Lester protecting Sarah from Mary and the following sex scene…. But we used to get two solid scenes and a tertiary bj scene. Totally a weird filler chapter. Not a fan of this one.
Robert Smith
2025-01-22 16:07:46 +0000 UTCI wish Don had Sarah watch Lester filming her while she was fucking Otis. Sarah staring over at him filming her knowing she was being recorded doing fucked up shit. That’s the type of stuff I’d like to see. I doubt that will be reworked into final story but that’s where I wanna see the story go. Her debasing herself that way.
KB
2025-01-22 14:28:49 +0000 UTCI’d like it if she saw Lester recording her and just allowed it to happen willingly and go with it. Knowing she was being filmed while she served Otis. Also I wished she was riding Otis while she looked over and saw Lester film her.
KB
2025-01-22 14:26:32 +0000 UTCSome considerations on this chapter. The build up with Lester defending Sarah was really good IMO. I think it leads well to a sexually charged encounter. The sex scene with Lester and Sarah was well written but it needs a real gut punch. Maybe Lester could ask Sarah to role play and ask her to call him her husband and say something like 'Im ovulating...' I think something like that links to how Lester will manipulate Sarah into getting pregnant. I do think for the sake of the story it needs to be done voluntararily..even in the heat of passion. I didn't like the Otis scene or where it is going, but maybe if the scene is kept it could include her actually watching Lester watch her and maybe mouthing things to him.. perhaps I love you or something like that. I think there needs to be something that talks about the lack of sex at the moment between Dan and Sarah. The Jesse perspective is a little meh for me. I think the real strength of this is the tension between Dan, Lester and Sarah ( I know this has been mentioned by someone else..sorry for stealing it.) so key plot points need to circle back on that.
Bob James
2025-01-22 08:44:06 +0000 UTCThe jokes about Lester turning into a cuckold and the new Dan gave me the following ideas. Lester's original charm was that he being a fat ugly nerd would get a major league woman effortlessly, just at the expense of his dick and psychopathic personality. At this point, however, Lester was very invested in his relationship with Sarah. He's even had to come out of his shell and take a management job in an office where he's forced to come in contact with a bunch of people. It's no longer much like an alpha male who takes the best and pays nothing for it. It's more like a husband who works hard for his wife. And while almost all of us have agreed at some point that Lester is a sociopath who will never change, that's exactly what's happening now. I don't know if this is a conscious decision on Don's part or if the need to move the plot along is dictating this kind of change in Lester's character. And of course that still doesn't mean that the ending where Lester becomes a loving husband and father is a foregone conclusion, I think it's still very unlikely. But the very presence of such changes in the story for me personally is more of a negative trend that makes the story a more vanilla version of itself, reducing the degree of Lester's dominance, his contrast with Dan and all the other things from the beginning of the series that set up the high sexual dynamic.
Daniel
2025-01-22 07:30:17 +0000 UTCI found this to be a little dull. Mechanical. Maybe an idea to hot up the session with Otis would be to have Sarah start playing with herself under her knickers while she's sucking him. Otis notices and tells her to show him, she strips, lies on the table/bench and puts on an explicit orgasm show while he and Lester both video it. Could even have Otis on the cusp of successfully fucking her when he cums prematurely all over her and they finish both knowing there will be more meetings.
Waratah David
2025-01-22 05:57:27 +0000 UTCI have been waiting for Sarah and Otis to have sex for a long time. The scene was very hot. I hope there will be more scenes with Otis. Very, very good. Thank you!
Greyko
2025-01-21 23:55:55 +0000 UTCNot the raciest chapter but I can see where this is headed and I love the converging elements. Great writing as always DS. Getting Sarah to make that open ended promise by a guy like Lester shows her increasing level of depravity.
OdieK
2025-01-21 23:36:38 +0000 UTCIMO the interesting new item is two references Lester makes of "further weaken the William's financially" and "financial stranglehold."
Sigma
2025-01-21 21:41:26 +0000 UTCBy the way, is Sarah and Dan's marriage even still on the books? It's just that a week or two ago Sarah was fucked by her lover and Dan's enemy without her husband's consent while Dan was in jail all night. They had talked about it once and it can't be said that they'd come to any kind of unifying consensus and.... that's all Dan is engrossed in his investigation and does not even want to call his wife, about whom he knows that she works not far from her dangerous manipulative lover. But once again he pinches the bridge of his nose, of course. Sarah doesn't hesitate to fuck Lester and the other man without even the remorse of having to coordinate it with her husband. Surely they still care about each other at all?
Daniel
2025-01-21 19:11:04 +0000 UTCIt's becoming almost joke to read about Lester watching Sarah have sex with yet another man and convincing himself that this is the way he's turning Dan into a cuckold, even though Dan has long since been turned off of the situation and the only cuckold in it is Lester himself
Daniel
2025-01-21 18:34:30 +0000 UTCThis was the perfect opportunity to explore Lester and Sarah getting more and more intimate after the previous chapter, but we get yet another boring random man getting freebies. I skipped through the whole Otis scene because it's so mindless and unearned. Lester's careful manipulation feels pointless when man after man after man get to have sex with Sarah with zero protest and zero effort. At this point Lester is just cosplaying as the cuck as Dan has seemingly been phased out of the story. If the story is going the mindless bimbo direction then I'm afraid I'll drop out. I loved the previous chapter because of the ending scene, which is what I want to see more of. I'm being very critical because you are a great writer, which is why we're all here 26 chapters deep. I just feel that the story really needs to choose a path and stick to it now rather than going between intimate conquest of a loving wife to a mindless sex bimbo banging random worthless men
mia123
2025-01-21 17:46:31 +0000 UTCThe appeal of this series, for most people I would think, is to read an attractive, emotionally mature and intelligent woman abandon her fidelity and fall for a guy so beneath her. I wasnt a fan of the jesse scene but I can at least come around to it, knowing Lester wanted to prove a point to Sarah and Don. But when she starts doing the same thing with Otis and others it ruins the appeal of her character. Plus, it also makes Lester a resident of shareville as well which I dont think his character was written for. People like reading Don’s stories because they dont end with the hotwife becoming a mindless slut which i feel like thats where this story is headed. I feel like instead of the Otis scene the writer could’ve taken the opportunity to explore a more emotional/romantic connection between Sarah and Lester. Some people mentioned a pillow talk scene which I think is a great idea. If corruption was the route the writer wanted to take, maybe have Sarah give Lester something she’s never given anyone else(iykyk). I would really like these stories to veer off of other male characters at least in the sexual realm.
Jackfrost
2025-01-21 16:48:37 +0000 UTCYes, Sara has become just a fuck doll. No more fight or independence left in her. Would have held out hope she was a little in control and have her escalate the scene with Otis and allowed him to fuck her at her urging dispite what Lester wanted, have lost hope that Dan and Sara can recover. In a sense, Don Silver has succeeded, my opinion of Sara has changed as her corruption has grown. I now think of her as poorly as I do of Lester.
Fuzzy Shark
2025-01-21 16:29:45 +0000 UTCYes, i’m not sure i like the otis scene here either. Lester specifically mentions not wanting to share her in the previous chapter. I don’t know how the otis scene fits in with what he said in the earlier chapter. It seems like the story is going in the direction of bimbofication of the hotwife which I’m not sure I like. Lester could’ve used his hold over Sarah to ask for another session at the house(when the children are out) in the marital bed, or another intimate date night or even anal.i’m not sure I like where this story is headed
Jackfrost
2025-01-21 16:07:57 +0000 UTCIt did a little considering she said she’ll do anything Lester tells her to do now but still could have been written better.
KB
2025-01-21 15:39:32 +0000 UTCI agree with this, although the sex scene and setting were hot, it did not make a lot of sense that Sarah just accepted to blow Otis with no reluctance at all.
ojapa O
2025-01-21 15:34:08 +0000 UTCPreferred if they had sex at her house over them having sex in the office. Again. We waited a month for a rushed story. How does this keep happening?
KB
2025-01-21 15:22:35 +0000 UTCSighhhhhhhh
KB
2025-01-21 15:21:56 +0000 UTCGreat chapter
Gmn
2025-01-21 15:17:09 +0000 UTCI did not find this particularly enjoyable. The Otis scene was not a good one. I think some enhancement in the dialogue would make this way better. More hotwife/cuck symbolism post the encounter with Mary. Frankly I would prefer a more intimate sex scene with good pillow talk then the otis scene.
Bob James
2025-01-21 11:22:06 +0000 UTCThe exclusion of Dan from sexual interaction really hurts the sexual chemistry of the story, and the Sarah+Lester scenes get pretty monotonous from chapter to chapter. Even the scene with Otis doesn't really make up for all that, because personally I find the hotwife/cuckold story, that this series was originally, more interesting than just a story about a woman being fucked by different men.
Daniel
2025-01-21 07:56:37 +0000 UTCPretty boring chapter with hardly any progress. I'm still looking forward to the next one and hoping there's something worthwhile. After the last chapter, i thought there'll be more intensity in the sex and focus on the impregnation/ birth control bit but they were barely touched here. Piece read pretty rushed with boring office quickies and new, unnecessary people getting added to bang Sarah. Lester is Sarah's boss now and staying in the same place she is. Dan is elsewhere and barely in touch with Sarah and this should be allowing Lester so much possibilities in terms of taking Sarah to his place, on work trips and spending extended periods of time with her. I would personally prefer some progress and the story to move ahead towards some conclusion, whether that be Sarah's impregnation/ being together with Lester line or Lester being exposed and Dan/ Sarah getting together or whatever Don wants it to be, rather than stretching things out. I really would like to see more sex in the next chapter between Sarah/ Lester rather than suddenly Jesse turning up again or Otis or anyone.
Northern Lord
2025-01-21 07:46:37 +0000 UTCFast forwarded through 90% of it. Complete crap. This series is over for me.
Vinny
2025-01-21 07:17:38 +0000 UTCA lot of great aspects to this chapter. Otis dick slapping Sarah was hot as hell. And the now 2 stalkers she will have to contend with eventually. While it was hot to see her do as Lester told her with Otis, I don't understand why she gives herself so willingly to Otis, Jesse, or whoever is watching at the time, but Lester is the one who has to work the hardest at cohersing her into sex. Every single time! It should have been her all over Lester when they made it to the office. I think it's time she starts pushing the boundaries!
Chris K
2025-01-21 04:52:16 +0000 UTC
