Toxic Attraction: Chapter 22

AGREED. Possibly the hottest ever of anything I have read by DS yet, and after the 'bit of a let down' around the Byron scene, BOOM, DS comes out firing and slams me back into my chair.!

Jay Muney

Agreed. I wondered if I missed that and tried to find it but finally realized it wasn't addressed at all which was a bit disappointing as I bet that shower was one major mind (and body) fuck for Dan. Then suddenly they are in Minneapolis running this bizarre scheme for Sarah to swindle Byron with sex while Dan plants a USB into a high tech company's (NOT going to happen) computer tower under the desk (what is this, 2015?). Also, the actions or words spoken to Sarah by Byron totally turned me off as they weren't at all realistic after what we have learned and began to love about her character development. Sorry but without Lester's direct involvement or under his direction, I don't see Sarah just giving up the goods to that idiot Byron, the way she did. I almost felt like in that one scene, DS used a ghost writer while he was on vacation! I wouldn't be disappointed if DS did because he has provided such amazing content in all his story arcs, but that entire segment missed the mark of his standard intensity, for me.

Jay Muney

Amazing synopsis and theory. While I love DS stories, I'm finding the commentary and speculation to add an entirely new level of complexity to this extremely sexy story, and what you just said above is icing on an entirely wide, deep, and tall cake if you will. I just want to thank you and everyone else commenting here for making TA and all his other stories so much more complex from how they initially began, as totally HOT mind numbing sexual escapades blending the Hot Wife and Cuckold genres into a much more complex tale. I know I'm not adding to or expressing any further theories here (yet) but more so I'm just blown away at how this Lester the lower man in society with the huge cock is stealing the hot mother of Dan's children story...into a complex weave of a sordid tale involving potentially the FBI, High Class Sex Trafficking, and potentially government espionage, when I was initially getting fascinated by, and focusing on, when Lester FINALLY gets Sarah pregnant! Because seriously folks, we've had what, 11+ chapters where Lester has been 'breeding' her and STILL no positive pregnancy result?1?

Jay Muney

This might be the best chapter so far. Can't wait for more.

LH_reads

Any news on ch23?

Eden

The introduction of other sexual partners don't hit anywhere close to as the scenes with Sarah and Lester. Also, why would Lester want Sarah to fuck other men? He's not the cuck in this story nor has he claimed her yet. I can see him saying something like that well after he knows his child is inside of her, but before pregnancy confirmation? So out of character for Lester... The convoluted plot with Dan and Sarah's job is overemphasized and very, VERY, boring to read. I skip all scenes with Dan that aren't related to his relationship with Sarah. Same thing goes for this tension that's trying to be created in Sarah's work place. I find the story much more enjoyable reading the true plot which is whenever and ONLY when Lester is involved. I don't remember exactly what chapters it was, but when Dan caught Lester fucking Sarah in their bedroom, he later asked her everything that they did. Sarah spilled the beans and told Dan everything we knew at the time. I think the following chapter showed that Sarah failed to mention her session in Dan's office. I bring this up because I hope there will be more things Sarah will hide from Dan. It could have been an honest mistake and lapse in memory, but I'd like to think that she is holding back a bit of truth from Dan. Also, Sarah is by far the hottest when she is described as a young mom. I really hope we'll get to see her have a huge family with Lester.

Timmy

Is that Chapter 22 or 23 you're talkingabout?

Mark Albright

I've thought about another physical confrontation between Dan and Lester, but I picture it going differently. Remember how angry Lester was at himself the last time Dan got physical with him and pulled him off Sarah. I think the next time Lester is going to remember all the times kids picked on him and bullied him when he was growing up. He summons a strength he didn't know he had and pushes a surprised Dan away and then slugs him, knocking him out. Dan, recovering in a hospital bed, thinks at last Sarah will come to her senses. She comes to visit him in the hospital, but she looks upset at him. "Now, I'm sorry that Lester beat you up, but you shouldn't have tried to interrupt us. You mustn't upset Daddy any more. I'll ask him not to hurt you any more, but you need to be nice to him. I'm sorry I can't stay longer, but I'm going out of town with Daddy for a few days to try to take his mind off things. He's still very upset with you, but maybe I can distract him enough so he'll forgive you.

Mark Albright

Looks like we are in somewhat of a quiet period until the next chapter is out. Just to stimulate some discussion, here is a potential scenario that gives a little bit to both camps- the “I want Dan to stop being a wimp” camp and the “I want Dan to be humiliated and lose” camp. Lester and Sarah are going at it again in front of Dan. Lester is really pushing Sarah to say all the stuff to Dan about how she needs Lester’s cock, she wants to have his baby and that Dan’s dick does not satisfy her anymore. Sarah does not disappoint him. Dan is sitting there listening and watching, but he has been drinking and his violent side is coming to the fore. After Lester says that “Sarah is all mine”, Dan loses it. He jumps from his chair and beats the shit out of Lester. Lester is left sniveling on the floor, wanting no part of Dan at this point. Dan is feeling empowered and turns to Sarah with the intention of reclaiming her. However, he sees the shock in her eyes as she runs to Lester, hugging him and trying to give him comfort. At the same time she starts yelling at Dan asking why he would do such a despicable thing. She tells Dan to call 911 for an ambulance. Sarah insists on staying with Lester at the hospital to help him recover. Dan has no choice but to accept this and watch the kids. After a few days, Lester is released. Dan is relieved that this ordeal is over and that Sarah will be back home. But Sarah tells Dan that she needs to be with Lester for the next week to take care of him and help him with his physical therapy. Dan angrily and vehemently rejects this and says it’s not happening. But Sarah gives it right back to him and tells Dan that Lester’s recovery is her priority right now and that, by the way, Dan is very lucky that Lester has not gone to the police to press charges. She also adds that if he did this, she would have to be a witness to the unprovoked attack on him. Dan reluctantly accepts that Sarah is going to do what she wants. But he wants to make her feel guilty, so he asks Sarah why she would make Lester a priority over her children, being that she won’t see them all week. “Oh no, buster” she says. “Lester is staying with me and the kids in the house. You are the one who will be staying at the Chicago apartment for the next week”

Rjh200m

Really great chapter, loving that Lester is dominating Dan, stopping Dan from having sex with Sarah and her sleeping in his room now. Can't wait for more!

Reader79

I just can’t see Brooke living with or marrying Saul. He is old, ugly and has no personality! If Brooke is as hot as the story suggests, she can certainly get a younger guy with a big dick if she is done with Mark. Plus, the relationship between Brooke and Saul has not developed enough to see this happening. Contrast this with the Sarah-Lester relationship which has developed in several directions and Sarah has emotionally bonded with him. But anything is possible!

Rjh200m

So the hypothesis still holds…bad guy wins. BTW the TC storyline is more in align with TA than DL is.

J Lewis

Now that’s some deep shit conspiracy

J Lewis

What are the chances these stories all combine together? Saul and Lester could be brothers.

Mark Albright

I’m thinking that Brooke will miscarry and they will find out that Saul was the father but she will continue to fuck Saul but maybe use birth control or not care if he impregnates her. His age might make the pregnancy more uncertain.

Richardcat

Posted the same thing in the insider’s chat (No Spoilers). My hypothesis for how TA will end can be predicted based on the upcoming conclusions to DL (this month) and TC (Jan/Feb). First a little background, prior to retirement I worked years in the mathematical modeling field. We would build a model of a process, be it manufacturing, human decision point, inventory, airline crews etc. identifying the key variables in the model and tweaking them so you can predict future outcomes with some reasonable % of assurance. As a warning though: All models are wrong but some are useful. Ok with all that out of the way…in 1)DL I forecast Courtney going to work for the TLG under Archer and becoming a worker with benefits. She becomes a cheating wife. Harry has no leg to stand on since he knew she was fucking Archer so he cannot get upset at what happened in Ch4. I have a little less confidence in my TC forecast…more variables but I forecast Brooke leaving/divorce Mark and moving in/marry Saul as they raise their child. Again because of the drugging of Mark, the deception in conceiving, and the manipulation of text messaging, I’m not as confident in this outcome. But based on these two forecasts my TA hypothesis is the bad guy wins…Lester. This is all in fun remember.

J Lewis

Haven't seen it yet.

Darrow

Also makes commenting on what might happen in the story complicated since some readers have already seen the future!

Rjh200m

Sure it’s possible. Any network is vulnerable, especially if inside information can be obtained. Nonetheless, the opportunity is for Lester and Sarah to further bond, Lester working the IT system and Sarah working the CEO. Of course, the outcome of these efforts are uncertain, but the key thing would be the Sarah-Lester relationship, the Sarah- Byron relationship and Dan’s fate!

Rjh200m

Which would be provided by a remote self sustained entity with its own communications/resources etc., surely?

Royston smith

Royston, you are probably correct about the compound….but I think most agree that TLG has a role in the story going forward. Regardless of the specifics of TLG and its secretive compound, Sarah, Dan and Lester will be drawn in. I think Sarah will be used by Sentinel/Peter to get close to Byron, she has already done this and it will happen again. She seems to have a talent for extracting information from him! I think Dan will continue to be used for his technical expertise by Sentinel/Peter. And then on a personal “mission”, Sarah and Dan will work to protect themselves from Byron’s nasty intentions. What is Lester’s role? I think he will wind up also going after TLG. Why? First, from what we know of his personality, he probably does not like big, powerful corporations, so he is inclined to try and take them down when an opportunity present itself. Second, he wants to keep close to Sarah and control her interactions with Byron. Third, it’s another opportunity to impress Sarah and further separate her from Dan as he demonstrates his IT prowess and his willingness to help Sarah. It’s part of his effort to show Sarah that he can do a lot more for her outside of the bedroom.

Rjh200m

Note: I know who Anton Chekov is, I was just having fun.

Darrow

Royston, TLG may be a red herring, or simply a plot device. But there do seem to be a lot of unnecessary items being dropped around it. Generally, one goes with the rule of Chekov's Gun from Star Trek. If there is a phaser (gun) in the teaser scene, then sooner or later it will get fired before the closing credits. It was a genius storytelling rule pioneered by Roddenberry because in Star Trek, he had only 48 minutes to tell a story. He wasn't some tedious Russian novelist who could spend hundreds of thousands of words recklessly for novels of nigh-infinite length. It was storytelling reduced to essentials and any element introduced had to be relevant. So you see, by the inevitable logic of Mr. Spock, TLG must be important and significant to the story and each hint dropped about it and its activities (and every teasing bit of information withheld - such as the mysterious purpose of the subdivision) will eventually pay off and serve some huge plot purpose. Of course, there's an alternate perspective - Chibnalling from Doctor Who, where you just keep introducing and abandoning plot threads and subplots until the audience is totally lost, at which point you stop and escape out the back door with the money. J.J. Abrams is the master of Chibnalling. So I guess the question is whether Don Silver is Spocking or Chibnalling.

Darrow

Not just Epstein. Sean Combs appears to have operated that way as well, on a nakedly larger scale. And I don't think that was Weinstein acted alone, or that his activities were solely personal. But the rich and powerful don't need the kind of self sufficiency that TLG does. They need discretion.

Darrow

Mark Albright

Interesting RJH, but I don’t agree. It wouldn’t fit with the internal logic of the plot. Only a use that fits with a sexual purpose would fit with this type of story. Or else, why bother to include TLG? It surely cant be a coincidence that DL’s plot line gets mentioned too. Yes, the Byron angle is a subplot already exploited in the last chapter, but that could have been engineered in a different way. Why emphasise the “community” project so much.

Royston smith

I think the “new normal” means exactly what it says Mark. Lester has won a victory in 22 that Dan will find it difficult to come back from . However, this is mainly due to Sarah wanting that new normal just as much as Lester. She will use her “bad girl” powers to pretend Dan still has some semblance of control, whilst subtly working on his desire to see her be that “bad girl”. She wants to walk the bad girl path with Lester and I don’t think she can or will want to stop. TLG may or may not be the fulcrum for the 3rd arc’s storyline, but I am sure it will have an important role to play in the plot whatever happens.

Royston smith

Good call Darrow. I also think that the triumvirate will remain central. However, TLG is definitely going to be an important factor, although I am unsure if its importance may only be realised in a succeeding series. I disagree though that sexual trafficking only involves the underbelly of society. Epstein’s circle included royalty, presidents, Hollywood actors , etc.

Royston smith

Don't sell yourself short, Mark. A career in journalism and two novels is nothing to sneeze at. I'm struggling to put the pieces together. The Sarah/Dan/Lester axis still feels like the core of the story. And most of the developments - Sarah at the hospital, at home, Dan's work woes, etc. seem to be extensions or drivers of that dynamic. But TLG seems to be this shadowy presence, and it feels very much like there's some larger picture going on in the background.

Darrow

TLG is a made-up company that serves Don's plot nothing else. such a construction is very unlikely to exist in real life. It is even more unlikely that they would go to any lengths to undermine Dan to get to Sarah. This is yet another example of the storyline going off the rails for me, but hey, different strokes for different folks. I keep my fingers crossed for a nice new chapter in the new neighborhood story.

DrJensen

I feel like she's more in control then is being let on. she doesn't seem to be concerned about the pregnancy risk she was "MEH" about her sex with Byron. I think when she's alone with Lester she can let go of all responsibilities and just relax into letting Lester have control. Also, I think she understands Dan's kink and plays to it. Would she have kept the, Lester staying in their house if Lester had left when he was supposed to, a secret. it would have been telling if she had the house cleaned and ready for Dan when he got home and if she confessed or not.

J

We all know what turns Sarah on sexually, and we know that her professional standing and financial stability is important to her. But I think there is another factor that may determine the fate of her marriage and relationship with Dan. Outside of the bedroom, she seems to like when a man acts aggressively to achieve something. Two examples - first, she was impressed with how Lester did not back down from the previous Hospital CEO when he was resisting hiring Lester to restore the hospital’s IT system. Second, she was impressed with how aggressively Dan took care of Jesse when he tried to blackmail theem with the videos Sarah mistakenly sent to him. I seem to remember that she specifically liked how aggressive Dan was with Jesse during the face-to-face confrontation in the office. So, outside of the bedroom, she probably values this trait, a man who acts aggressively and decisively to protect their interests; basically someone who does not back down in the face of resistance. But at the same time, she enables and encourages Dan’s sexual urges which are headed in the increasingly passive direction. Even more, she has recently raised the teasing of Dan to a level of verbally humiliating him. So, what does she ultimately want? Does she want Dan to continue in this direction while Lester continues to be more aggressive and controlling in more aspects of her life? Or does she really want Dan to get aggressive and reclaim her and get their life back to some semblance of order; but not totally back to what it was pre-Lester because her sexual preferences have definitely evolved and there is probably no chance of going back to Dan and Sarah’s pre-Lester relationship). I have opined before that I think Sarah is more in control than we think. I still think this is the case, and maybe she is orchestrating events and purposely pushing Dan with the expectation (or hope?) that he is going to act aggressively and rescue her. This is something Sarah needs to resolve - what kind of Dan does she want- when she is not in the throes of passion with Lester.

Rjh200m

has Sarah emotionally left dan or is she playing Dan's cucky game and acting the cheating wife for his benefit as well as getting her sexy on also.

J

First of all, it's good to hear from Royston and Darrow again. I was a little worried because we hadn't heard from you. I've been accused of being over-analytical, but you two put me to shame with your well-thought-out analysis. I will digest what you've said and come back with my take on it. But for now, I have to say I'm not a tech guy, or a business guy, so I'll yield to others on all that. My background is as a journalist, then working in local government in a boring, beauracratic job. Lately, I've written two novels, one published, one not. However, I wrote them in their entirety before anybody read them. I think it would drive me crazy to read a bunch of people's reactions chapter by chapter. But I guess that's how Mr. Silver likes to do it. While I'm still formulating my next response, I'd be interested to know how you think Dan and Sarah and Lester fit into all this and how their relationship evolves. That seems to me the essence of the story, and all the other stuff, TLG, the hospital, just a backdrop for our odd triple to traverse through. I'll stop now.

Mark Albright

Quick analysis - the LG compound is not a criminal enterprise but an effort by LG to protect its intellectual property and key people in the event of a cyber war, EMP attack, etc. The compound is being designed to survive such an event. If we look at the world today, cyber attacks and the threat of more is out there. Separately, we also see very rich tech companies building stand-alone compounds to house their HQs and key people/capabilities. I think LG is going a little bit rogue on this and the federal government is concerned, hence the Sentinel/Peter angle, they want to know specifically what LG is doing and how they are doing it. Sarah, Dan and Lester will be caught up in this. Not sure if all of this holds up, but throwing it out there!

Rjh200m

That parallels a lot of my thoughts on TLG. I won't belabour it. The one area I diverge, and the most interesting point of divergence is this self supporting, off the grid, subdivision they're building. I don't get why a subdivision would need to be so self contained, but it looks like they're operating their own power and water systems. That makes no sense for a subdivision, the whole point is that a subdivision takes advantage of the gridded network of water/power/sewer etc., for efficiency and cost effectiveness. If you're interacting with the rest of the city, there's no reason for it. I don't think a 'sex trafficking compound' is the right answer. The whole point of sex trafficking is to plug into the seedy underbelly of society. This isn't a subdivision at all, it's an entirely self contained, self sustaining, and relatively upscale community. It's built or designed to exist without the rest of the city or rest of society. My initial thinking is that TLG is building for the Apocalypse - a community or community model like the Vaults in Fallout, that can be cut off from the grid and survive collapse or strife. They're crazy billionaire doomers. That might be it, or might not. Alternately, they're locating their communities in places where there's no urban infrastructure, or its unreliable. The rain forest, the desert, some third world hinterlands, antarctica, mars, on the other side of stargate (the last three are obviously crazy unlikely). But why? If it's a resource extraction compound, there's no need for the apparent standard of living based into the design. Look at rubber workers, coal miners, diamond miners, rare-earth element, coca farmers... the wealthy and powerful have zero interest in the well being and comfort of their victims. This is too upscale. Retirement compound for war criminals and drug lords? Maybe. But if they have enough money, they usually have refuges. Perhaps an overseer compound for extraction industries? Tht might be sleazy and violent enough. Or a third world urban compound, a subdivision in a third world city, designed to ride out disruption? Or maybe some weird Ideological/utopian/dystopian community? No idea yet. Oddly, the person most likely to know is Dan, although its slipped by the rest of us. Dan is being kept in the dark and told not to ask questions. But when Sarah got a drunk horny Byron to talk about the subdivision, he apparently yammered on quite a bit. Sarah didn't pay attention. But Dan could or should have been, and if Byron was letting things slip, Dan would have had enough background to start putting pieces together. Here's what we know of the subdivision project: * It is apparently relatively small, built to contain perhaps a few hundred to a few thousand people, max. * It is designed to keep these people at a relatively high, middle class, standard of living. So significant amounts of space, yard, etc., multiple single family dwellings, space or provisions for vehicles, amenities like pools etc. * If is not designed for either hyper-wealthy, or slave/serf labourers, either of those would have had very different requirements or leaped out screaming at Dan. * It is designed to be self contained - power, water, sewer, etc., and self-sustaining (recyclable, with minimal environmental footprint and minimized requirements for external inputs.) * The self sustaining aspects are the strangest. It's designed to be cut off the grid, and to stay off the grid for extended, perhaps somewhat indefinite periods. This implies either its intended location is where the grid is unreliable (third world cities), where the grid is anticipated to collapse (apocalypse), or where the grid is simply absent (desert, jungle, remote locations, hinterland, etc.), or where plugging into the grid is an unacceptable compromise (criminal enterprises, terrorist camp, secret prison or covert operations, some sort of espionage thing). * There's no sign that Dan is being asked to build for unusual environmental conditions. That lets out Mars, Antarctica, super-hot or arid deserts, super-humid deserts, underground cities, underwater cities, alien environments. Doesn't rule out the other side of a Stargate (being silly and recalling SGI where we discover most of the planets in the Universe resemble British Colombia). Environment appears to be within North American norms. So.... remote but not appalling, unreliable, unacceptable or apocalyptic. We just don't know enough yet. But whatever it is, it's almost certainly part of something larger, and likely something dangerous or illegal. The degree of secrecy tells us that.

Darrow

So, having asked for, and read, your predictions (very interesting ones as well with some excellent points) on how the specifics of the story will evolve, I want to now posit a macro overview of how the story will develop, using the 22 chapters we have before us and any allied D S texts which may bear on the TA story going forward. Even if I am way off beam at least my synthesis can act as stimulant for debate. It is clear to me that TLG have now become the fulcrum of the plot. Most of the characters are now being pulled relentlessly into TLG’s orbit. Byron sits there at the centre of its web seemingly pulling the strings, whilst Jesse,Dan, Sarah and now even Lester, are attracted by its magnetic pull. It seems the story doesn’t revolve around the Sarah/Dan/Lester relationship completely now. More and more TLG influences and bends the parameters of the plot. Why? Well let’s look at TLG to see if we can get a handle on it. Ironically, perhaps the clearest factual description comes from someone who has only just become aware of it, Lester:”From what he could tell, Jesse’s company had The Lincoln Group as their client. And those guys seemed shady as hell, a typical multinational corporation that said all the right things to Congress but had their fingers in all kinds of different pies. Completely vertically integrated, with very little information available about them. For such a large and powerful corporation, they mysteriously weren’t publicly traded, which meant there was very little information he could dig up”. (Ch22.) So, multinational, privately owned, vertically integrated. Let’s unpick those phrases. Multinational/ so must be a very large corporation and probably very influential within the political sphere/congress/the senate. But privately owned? There are not many privately owned corporations of that size. So what is the advantage of that? More control for the owners and board and less scrutiny by public bodies or regulators. Vertically integrated means they control their own supply chain, owning companies within their group that supply them in the manufacturing and distribution phases. So, everything screams control, power but most importantly for our story, secrecy. What else do we know? Well Byron has told us they fight dirty, when he says to Dan: “Get on our bad side again, and you may just find that the real estate division here buys up all the homes around yours, and we’ll rent them out to crackheads. We’ll tank your neighborhood and then buy out the rest of the homes for pennies on the dollar. It wouldn’t be the first time.”So note, “it wouldn’t be the first time”. They clearly fight dirty all the time, which we know from Don’s Detestable Liaisons. Archer, who works in TLG’s accounting division, set up Courtney in a threesome with a “Mr Tanner” a client her company were keen to sign up. We know what happened. Then, Archer moves to dismember them , as Byron says: “For example, this next meeting I’m going to. We’re there to discuss a hostile takeover of a leading accounting software company. They have a better product, better team and are all around better than what this arm of our business offers. But we’ve been attacking them and dismembering them for months, slowly bleeding them dry. My colleague found a really interesting opportunity and took full advantage of it. Now we’re going to take them over, integrate their operations, fire some of their employees and the ones we want to keep, and they won’t be going anywhere anytime soon.” I wouldn’t mind betting Courtney is “one they want to keep”. And this”subdivision” we keep hearing about, what is it? Byron tells us:”“It’s way more than a subdivision,” Byron said ... It’s a whole new community designed and controlled from the ground up.” A whole new community”? For what purpose? Why would a company like TLG want/need such an entity? Secrecy springs to mind. And given what we know about the nefarious methods and activities of TLG the probability is its purpose could either border on, or be illegal. Then we have Sentinel security. How do they fit into all this? Their security vetting, the type of computer they assign Dan, which Lester (who should know) recognises “wasn’t an off-the-shelf computer. It was an unknown variable ..All of the traffic seemed to be encrypted, and he suspected the laptop used some kind of VPN or tunneling software” all screams government clandestine agency. They are based in Washington DC, where the FBI headquarters is. They want to establish a “data center project” we are told in 17. In 18 Martin, Dan’s chief contact at Sentinel says: “We work very closely with a certain three letter government agency. This data center project is one of theirs. Thus the extra security measures. I hope you’ll understand.” We are clearly in spook land here. It is also interesting that in 17, after Dan’s teams with Sentinel, the next scene involves Peter, who asks Dan to spy on TLG. So, we have all speculated on who Peter represents, is he a PI working for a corporate or is he working for the FBI? Whichever he is, he is also part of TLG plot line. So let’s pull all this together. I believe TLG’s “community” project is an illegal front for sex trafficking or something similar. Sarah/Courtney and presumably other compromised women are being groomed to work there. The FBI are aware of TLG’s activities but probably cant pin anything firm on them as yet. Sentinel are interested in Dan as he has connections with them. Their cover is asking Dan to consult on a data centre for them, given his expertise in that area, but they are more interested in his connections with the Lincoln group. Similarly, Peter is an FBI agent interested in Dan due to his connections with TLG. I presume Sentinel and Peter are aware of each other’s activities and are approaching from different angles. So,again, everything seems to be converging on TLG.Lester is the one variable no-one else is aware of, yet. If he is not careful he could alert both TLG and Sentinel to his activities. Perhaps, though, he is ironically Sarah and Dan’s best chance of extricating themselves from Byron’s clutches. So, I have presented an overview which I think makes sense, given the information we have to hand. Obviously, the specifics of how this will all play out are only known by Don. One thing is for sure it has the potential to be an epic 3rd arc. Please do come back at me and question my theory. Happy to debate. However, I will expect a constructive alternative to be put forward outlining your own macro synthesis, not just criticism of my theory. Oh, and by the way, I am aware the hospital doesn’t fit with this analysis. To me it is a side plot that may provide secondary entertainment.

Royston smith

Well said 👍

Richardcat

Recognizing that more time elapses in the story than the scenes we read, it could be explained as both are in a little bit of shock and are resisting actually talking about what has happened. For the longest time, Dan and Sarah explained what happened with Lester as “things getting out of control”, “not sure how it happened” and going forward “we need to plan better and keep control of what we do”. But clearly this has gone out the window. From Sarah’s perspective, her relationship has moved well beyond being part of a Sarah-Dan fantasy. Her wants and needs have come to the forefront. From Dan’s perspective, he has evolved from confronting Lester and reclaiming Sarah to just an observer, and he is struggling with these emerging urges/desires. And their sex life is on a noticeable downward trajectory in terms of frequency and quality. Given all of this, it could be understandable that Dan and Sarah are now less inclined to directly speak since the issue has become so much more complicated and they may be afraid to confront their emerging feelings and behaviors. But yes, this has to happen to move the story forward.

Rjh200m

That's a pretty big editing error. So what really happened? Dan went to the bathroom door and it was locked?

Mark Albright

One of the most important parts of a hotwife situation (including IRL) for most people is when the couple have 'The Talk'. To discuss boundaries, turn-ons, concerns, etc. It can also be one of the hottest parts. As you've pointed out, we're not really seeing/hearing that conversation here. It's a stretch to believe that two professional, articulate people wouldn't be having regular 'talks' with how the story has developed. I have to assume that's deliberate, though I don't understand why, other than it would hold back the narrative. I've already said several times that we also aren't really hearing Sarah's thoughts/feelings about what's happening, not on any deep level.

MV

I mentioned the shower scene on Discord and was told basically that was an editing error so didn’t happen in the story line. Agree it’s a stretch to think Dan and Sarah didn’t talk about her overnight stay in Lester’s room during the trip to or back from Minnesota but that’s the prerogative of DS

J Lewis

Likely this weekend

J Lewis

It seems to be indicated that Dan and Sarah have not talked about what’s happening. But after Sarah spent the night in Lester’s bedroom Dan joined Sarah in the shower in the morning. What went on in there. Plus they flew to Minnesota together. Those conversations could have provided some clues for the future.

Richardcat

Any word on discord about the alpha release of CH23?

Robert Smith

This story has turned sad and pathetic.

Tim

It’s likely that Lester will get her to fuck someone else but not until she is pregnant by him. = VERY HOT SCENARIOS

WILLYBOY

The fact that she drew a line in the sand on this is why I would see Lester pushing that point. I would think as a parent bringing someone like Lester into their life, whether direct or indirect, would break that boundary.

GW

I think the next step is for Lester to show Sarah he can be her provider. He's already bought her sexy outfits to wear. Next, he buys her clothes for work, professional, but sexier than what she usually wears. And then furnishing for her home. Sarah starts to like not having to worry about money any more. If she needs something, Lester will simply give it to her. When she asks if he's buying her stuff so he can "stuff her" he smiles and says "I get to do that for free." She blushes and says "Yes, you do, Daddy."

Mark Albright

As we all know, the children are basically not addressed in the story, except for being at the grandparents house a whole lot! However, to the best of my recollection, Sarah has explicitly mentioned them twice. First when Lester initially came to her home and was roaming about the upstairs level; she told him forcefully that the girls room was off limits. The second was in this chapter when Byron made a very crude comment to her that referenced her children (by the way, I think Byron’s comment hints at what a dangerous character he is and his devious intentions for Sarah). She did not respond to him and her internal thought was that she definitely did not want to think of her children given what she was doing with Byron. So, clearly the children are a red line for Sarah. But, as we also know, Lester is all about pushing her boundaries and I would expect that the next time he is in her house, and the kids are not there, he will try to get her into the children’s room. He has made specific references to having sex with Sarah in all parts of her house, and this could be next. Also, remember his numerous comments to separate Sarah from the kids so she can spend more time with him; this could be another psychological gambit by Lester to further remove all of her resistance. If he was successful in broaching this red line, I would see it as the final collapse of Sarah’s willpower and control of her life. And this could push Dan, if he found out, to end the marriage. And then Lester wins again.

Rjh200m

i'd prefer more romance between dan and Sarah because the greater the love between them the juicier the cheating becomes. if Sarah just keeps on breaking promises and stepping over red lines and boundaries, she's a lot less Sarah and a lot more slut which some like I suppose. I don't care for a HEA or a BTB but whatever ending comes has to feel natural and not forced or sacrificed into.

J

Heard this chapter was back on point, and am glad to see it's true. The bits about Lester during the Byron scene felt a little bit tacked on, like Don was trying to soften the scene for those of us who prefer Sarah and Lester, but I appreciated that they were there... they just needed to be merged in a little bit more seamlessly imo. The comments are always a fun ride... it's clear lots of people want totally different things, and as ever, there's a collection of hotwife story lovers who want Dan to somehow win, and others who want Sarah to just fuck anything that moves. I'm here for Lester/Sarah, and am more than happy to watch Dan's original fantasy continue to cost him everything.

Chris

Mark, I like your idea of Dan realizing he can’t compete sexually and financially with Lester so he bides his time while he gathers dirt on Lester and then tries to convince Sarah how bad he is. But I don’t think Dan and Sarah are leaving the Chicago apartment without some reckoning of what happened. As you say, I think there is a very good chance that Sarah winds up in Lester’s bedroom after waking up on the couch later that night. As opposed to the last time, Lester makes sure that Sarah does not leave his bed after they finish another marathon session. Dan wakes up that morning and realizes Sarah is gone and suspects immediately where she is. At this point, he is not angry, but he certainly wants to reconnect with her. And he does not want to wait. He goes to Lester’s door, but it’s locked. Before saying anything, he wants to see what they are doing, so he goes to his room and looks through the peephole. He is shocked by what he sees. It’s not them having wild sex, it’s simply Sarah sleeping with her leg and arm across Lester’s body, and her head resting on his chest with her face clearly visible to Dan. She looks so peaceful and content. Dan immediately remembers Sarah’s comments about how lumpy his bed is and how hard it is for her to sleep in it. But in Lester’s bed, she looks so beautiful and comfortable as her head slowly rises and falls with Lester’s breathing. It finally crashes down on Dan how much things have changed since he and Sarah first visited the apartment. But more alarmingly, he realizes that he is on his way to losing Sarah. In his wildest imagination, he would never picture Sarah as she is now with Lester. Dan’s first instinct is to get Sarah up and both of them out of the apartment immediately. He went to Lester’s door and started knocking. “Sarah, you need to get up, we need to get going” Dan yelled. Sarah immediately raised her head from Lester’s chest when she heard Dan’s voice. But before she could say anything, Lester yelled out “Sarah and I were up all night and we are very tired. We’ll be out in a few hours”. Dan responded forcefully “Sarah, come out here immediately. I am still your husband and we need to leave together, right now”. But while Dan was yelling, Lester took Sarah’s hand and placed it on his rapidly growing cock. Without even thinking, she started slowly stroking it up and down…she couldn’t believe how hard it was and how Lester’s body warmed her all over. But she knew that she had to respond to Dan…….she was just struggling with what exactly to say….

Rjh200m

I think the "new normal" that somebody mentioned is that it has gone from Sarah and Dan to Sarah and Lester. And it happens without Dan and Sarah even talking it over. The next chapter could start out right after the last one ended with Dan waking up during the middle of the night and hearing Lester and Sarah going at it again. He finally goes back to sleep, only to be woken up the next morning by them going at it again. He gets up and watches this time through his peephole. He hears Sarah saying "Only you, Daddy, I only want you." After they finish, he watches as they keep kissing, with Sarah saying "I love you" over and over. About six chapters too late, Dan realizes he may be losing her, but he thinks all they need is a good talk. But then Sarah and Lester take a shower together, and shortly after they come out of Lester's room, dressed and carrying bags. Sarah tells him Lester is going to be working at the hospital, so they're just going to drive back to Middleton together. She gives Dan a peck on the cheek and tells him she'll call him later. After being depressed for awhile, he decides he's going to fight for her, not physically. He knows he can't compete with Lester sexually or financially, but he also knows he's a good guy and Lester's not. So he decides to go along with her being with Lester on the surface. Meanwhile he's starting to figure out all the ways Lester has deceived them. But he has to wait until he can get Sarah alone to tell her. Does the good guy prevail? Only Mr. Silver know for sure.

Mark Albright

any chance Lester decides to remove her priority as a parent and gets it on in the daughters bedroom while they aren't home or if they are home he takes her upstairs to the bedroom?

GW

Thank you, Pete.

Darrow

Sorry Darrow, when I commented on your post, I somehow had only read the first part about Byron and his belt! The rest of your comment made excellent points about Sarah’s possible thinking. If we go back to the start of TA, we see a very active sex life between Dan and Sarah with, of course, their mutual interest in Sarah having sex with someone else. It was sort of a harmless fantasy and, presumably at the time, they had no actual experience. Fast forward to the present and we see a huge advance in their experience and possibly as you mention a divergence in their perspectives. Maybe Sarah’s experience with Lester and Byron have opened her eyes as to what really turns her on sexually and what she wants/needs in a man. Ironically, it could be a situation in which the more Dan gives in to his true desires, Sarah starts to realize that there are some aspects of his behavior that she may not be comfortable with. What they are doing is now real and no longer a harmless fantasy. We will see how this plays out. But there are a few things we do know — Sarah does not find sex with Dan as exciting as she did at the beginning of the story and Lester is definitely at the center of her sexual desires. Also, while she may have emerging feelings of resentment against Dan for being weak and pimping her out, she is definitely not blameless for the current situation. And just as Sarah may be reevaluating Dan, it’s likely he will do the same to her. The fate of their marriage depends on whether Sarah and Dan can come to grips with and balance their desires, urges and behaviors.

Rjh200m

I don't see it that Dan is 'into' being a cuck. He's into seeing her lose control and get fucked stupid, but he didn't start out this story as a beta, like the hubby's in Don's other stories seem. A victim of his desire to watch her and his deteriorating financial security, he's been backed into this corner. Apart from going to Minnesota when she needed him home, he hasn't *done* much wrong, imo, just caused himself problems by inaction.

MV

Except that she's going to be in a position where she literally has to go along with it, and play along with it. And once her motor revs to a certain point, I think she'll get caught up in it. But yes, I think Sarah's going to have all kinds of emotional baggage and processing to do. I don't think she'll form an emotional connection with Byron, the way she's forming one with Lester. Byron's too stupid and narcissistic to even bother trying to develop that. But I think he has a chance at dominating her. Sarah's life is going to get very complicated.

Darrow

None of this would be surprising based on what we know of Byron so far. How will Sarah react? I would say that Lester is a soft dominant for Sarah, but Byron seems to be a more explicit and forceful dom. We will have to see how Sarah reacts to this. I think Sarah responds more to an emotional connection, so I don’t think she will take well to Byron’s very strong handling.

Rjh200m

Something I missed earlier: "“Why don’t you get down on your knees and see?” Byron suggested. Sarah stood staring down at him before slowly lowering herself to her knees. Byron unbuckled his belt and pulled it out of the hoops on his dress pants before unzipping his fly." Byron pulled it out of the hoops. He took off his belt completely, even before unzipping. He dropped his pants and boxers. Why take off the belt completely. Why not unbuckle and drop them with his pants? I think Byron has his own little kinks, or maybe big ones. I think that he unbuckled and took the belt completely off and out of the loops because he's got a taste for bondage. I think that the belt is one of his 'go to' thing - look around the neck, as a n ad hoc collar and leash. Wrap it around her wrists as cuffs. Around her torso to immobilize her arms. Maybe a light slap(s) across her tits, or on her bottom. Even just slapping it against his palm menacingly, just to let the bitch know who is boss. Notice how he played with her body like a toy, and gave instructions. And especially, notice how he moved her into a chair, and positioned her in that chair, right up against the window. He could have just as easily fucked her on his desk, or on the couch in his office, or anywhere in the office in any position. He could have sat back and had her ride him. But instead, he's extremely deliberate in where and how he positions her, as if perhaps, he enjoys placing women in positions. But if Byron really is a bondage freak deep down, why didn't he follow through and use the belt on Sarah? Either around her wrists or as a collar and leash. A couple of reasons. First, like all guys like him, he's a bit hesitant at first. He likes control. This is first time with Sarah, he's a little hesitant to bring out the kink. Second, and more critically, I think Sarah moved too fast. She went right down on her knees at a word, she was sucking his cock right off the bat. I think she moved faster than he expected, was way too compliant, too submissive, the belt wasn't necessary and even if he wanted it, things were going so he just didn't have the opportunity to bring it in, without breaking up the flow. But if he does have this kink, then I'd expect him to draw Sarah into it on their next encounter. He's declared ownership, he knows how willing she is, he won't be taken by surprise and he won't rush. Instead, he'll take his time. It might be interesting. It would make for a completely different dynamic. As it is currently, he's just sort of a lesser version of Lester, more demanding and thuggish, but basically the same shtick, except cruder, clumsier and now as well hung. If he is a B/D guy, that might make things more interesting because he'll be doing things that Lester doesn't. Just a thought. *** I don't know if I've pointed it out already, or if anyone else has picked up on it. But regarding Sarah's encounter with Byron, she ends it by feeling unfulfilled and horny. Basically, she leaves Byron wanting more, much more. But then when she goes back to her husband, she shows no sexual interest or enthusiasm for him. She lets him know she fucked Byron but the mission was a bust. But she doesn't even bother to talk about it with him. Where's all that sexual energy gone? She walked out of Byron's offices horny and looking for more. But with her husband, it's ... poof, 'I'm tired.' Of course, it reappears instantly and volcanically when she walks into Lester's apartment. I think that's major. Of course, that's not the only time she's shown sexual disinterest or indifference to Dan. She did that again after DnD night in the shower. And of course, she is increasingly fantasizing about Lester while doing it with him. I think that Lester has wound into their sex life so much that Sarah's just not interested in Dan anymore, unless Lester is somewhere in the mix. *** Finally, I think there's something really significant that Sarah may not even realize herself. Dan pimped her out. The Byron thing wasn't a sex game, like they were playing with Lester. It wasn't for mutual excitement or adventure. None of the dynamic and slow seduction and escalation, the mutual sense of play and excitement, the mutual fun, and mutual consent, none of that was in play. Instead, Dan simply goes: "My new boss is riding me really hard, and he wants to fuck you." And more: "I need / want you to plant a bug on Byron's computer, and to do it, we're going to put your pussy in front of his cock." Clearly, they had communication, and there was a lot of teamwork, marital reconciliation and bonding, 'Dan and Sarah together' and even affection, romance and commitment. So I think Sarah has glossed it over, and she's definitely into teamwork and commitment. But on some level: Her husband pimped her. This wasn't a game, he made her his whore, and whored her out. And worse, he was a weakling pimp, ineffectually handing her over to a bigger stronger man, a superior. On some deep subconscious level, Sarah feels Dan is a weakling, who has made his wife into a whore because he's not strong enough to be a man. She may not be facing or dealing with it on a conscious level. She may not at all. Or she may start thinking in those terms in a later moment. Or if they have an argument, it's likely it's going to come out, possibly shocking both of them. But I think it's operating on subconscious levels. She was extremely enthusiastic about handing herself over to stronger pimps: "Byron's Bitch" "I'm yours Lester." Byron uses the word pathetic for Dan, Sarah repeats it when with Lester. I think she's got some unacknowledged resentment. I think her disinterest in Dan, after leaving Byron and feeling unsatisfied and horny, had an aspect of that resentment. An unconscious 'fuck you, Dan.' The resentment will increase. Particularly if Dan keeps pimping her out to Byron... as he's almost certainly going to be forced to do, even despite Lester's order. On the surface, they're together in this, they're a team. She needs to do it for the man she loves, and for the good of her family. But this entire mess is his fault, she's the one that has to spread her legs, and it complicates her thing with her lover. So fucking Byron again is probably inevitable. But it's also going to keep increasing subliminal resentment towards Dan.

Darrow

My bet that the new normal is Lester's exclusivity. That doesn't mean that Dan gets cut off... not right away. Only that their sex play / games are now going to involve either Sarah or Dan explicitly getting his permission, or Sarah and Dan doing it behind Lester's back... having an affair with her husband behind her boyfriend's back. The damnedest thing is that I think Dan would get into it... when he's horny. After he comes, he's going to be pretty conflicted about it. But the problem for him is that when he's aroused and horny, he's ... compliant. And after he's come, he's ineffectual.

Darrow

I agree with you, but I feel like we're outnumbered around here. So many others just seem to 'want the cuck to suffer'. I think the next chapter will give us a good idea of where things are headed. As others have said, it's fairly certain to start with Dan waking up to find Sarah gone to Lester's room.

MV

Grandeman made a comment in the Discord about the next chapter demonstrating the new normal (possibly). To me, that means 2 things; 1) Sarah ignoring Dan's hurt. 2) Sarah finally missing a period/getting a positive test. If either of those things occur, or even more if it's both of them, we are definitely in a new paradigm. It could also include Lester's exclusivity, obviously.

MV

A good post. The unknown here, as we've touched on before, is will she carry on like this when she knows for a fact that Dan is no longer enjoying this, in fact it's hurting him? I may be wrong, but I've been very much under the impression that she believes Dan secretly craves this. What about when he doesn't? Probably the pivotal moment of the story. If she forges ahead, all bets are off. Definitely for a time, what comes after is down to Don.

MV

Someone (Royston or Darrow?) asked for opinions on what is ahead for the TA story given the parameters of the story and what we know, not what each of us may want to happen independently of the information in the story Here is my take, based on some of the “internal thoughts” of Dan and Sarah during the last scene of Chapter 22 . First the internal thoughts - — Sarah: She had been craving Lester ever since the night before with her encounter with Byron. No one made her cum as hard as Lester could. - Sarah: She’d never kissed another person so intimately and completely. She’d never wanted someone as badly as she needed Lester right then. - Sarah: Her face contorted into a near-demented mask of pure pleasure that only Dan could see. — Sarah: Admitting these things in front of her husband was driving her wild…..She didn’t know what would be crossing the line for Dan, but at that moment, all she wanted to do was make Lester happy. — Dan: Dan couldn’t help but stroke himself harder at the unprecedented sight in front of him. Watching Sarah cum this explosively was too much for him to handle. — Dan: A memory popped into his head, where Sarah had vehemently expressed her disgust at the idea of any sexual act relating to anyone’s asshole. — Dan: As his balls emptied, his mind finally seemed to come back down to his body, and he began to process the illicit scene in front of him. A look of genuine horror spread across his face. — Dan: His brain felt like it had been shattered into a million pieces and was desperately trying to put itself back together. He had no idea how to chart these unknown waters or how to react to any of this. He had no map for what came next. He just sat and stared at the taboo coupling in front of him. What will happen going forward - — The best sex for Sarah is and will be with Lester, not Dan. The difference is that both Sarah and Dan now realize this, including the shocking intimacy part of Lester and Sarah’s coupling. Sarah has sexual needs that Dan cannot meet; she has evolved way beyond what Dan can provide. It’s now about Sarah’s needs, not Dan’s fantasy. Sarah and Dan’s marriage will have to evolve to accommodate this reality. — Lester has set the ground work for regular and more private time with Sarah……as Lester said “Did you hear that?” Lester grinned, “Your wife wants me to stick my cock in her ass and fill it with cum. I’m gonna save that for a private date when you’re not around.” — Lester will exercise increasing control over Sarah sexual life. As Lester said: “You. Don’t. Fuck. Anyone. Else. Unless. I. Say. So….Got it? Not even him.” Lester nodded in Dan’s direction. — Lester will follow through on his intention to control Sarah’s sexual activities with Dan. As Lester said: “It doesn’t matter what Dan wants, do you understand?” “Yes,” Sarah breathed…. — This will include Sarah denying Dan with regard to fucking her……as Lester said: “Tell Dan you like it raw. Tell him.” Sarah didn’t turn to look at Dan. With her eyes clamped shut, she was focused on riding Lester’s huge cock, “I love it raw, Dan. I only want Lester to fuck me raw from now on.” This last statement by Sarah can be interpreted in two ways, Lester will fuck her raw from now on…..or only Lester gets to fuck her raw from now on, no one else. Since Lester has already been fucking Sarah without a condom for a long time, I’ll go with the second interpretation - essentially that Dan will not be allowed to fuck Sarah anymore or that he has to use a condom. But based on all of the above, I think that this will happen naturally (not forced by Lester) as Sarah’s desire for Dan to fuck her diminishes going forward.

Rjh200m

Not sure it is a right versus wrong discussion. She could love Lester and still find it difficult to leave her marriage. But if Lester could provide financial security, professional opportunities and great sex then it is possible. I agree 100 percent that the story needs to address Sarah’s thoughts and motivations beyond what has been revealed to date, as well as some decisions have to be made by her. As you said, hopefully in the next few chapters.

Rjh200m

Ok guys, I think Sarah does have feelings for Lester, but they stop short of love. Mark is correct that Sarah has grown fond of Lester for the reasons he has given. I also think she likes the fact he is obviously loaded. She was impressed with him paying the rent, his $250k fee for the hospital work etc. She craves financial security after the years of struggling, and Lester can provide that. Notice how she had a dig at Dan by praising Jesse’s new job and contrasting it with Dan’s. Dan thought it was her bad girl game but I am not so sure. What we badly need, as I and MV have said, is to hear her internal voice on her feelings in the next chapter. That will tell us who is right.

Royston smith

Not really. Dissecting a character doesn't necessarily mean he'll be a large or small thing in the story. Byron is essentially an emotionally immature, selfish little boy in a grown up body and he's spoiled rotten. He's toxic in different ways than Lester. And he's in the picture somewhere, so its worthwhile to break down the character to see what he will do, and what he will want to do.

Darrow

Just a thought on Byron's perspective. Byron's a petty, bullying guy. Alcoholic. Self absorbed. Not really into work. Early on before everything went pear shaped, he threw his weight around on Dan and Jesse, insisting on using business meetings as drinking opportunities, and nakedly ogling Dan's wife... and not shy about it. I don't think he's a competent businessman, but he doesn't give a shit about that, because he hires and fires competent business men. He's connected, very well connected, probably a college football player, probably a fraternity bro. He's found he can use his connections and bullying, and he's very good at abusing people to stay on top. He's also got a huge temper. That whole nuking Dan's entire company over Jesse's email? That was Byron. His approach to Dan after, nakedly lusting after Sarah while trying to recruit Dan, that's heavy handed. He misread the situation, he thought Dan was desperate, and Dan would snap at a lifeline. Dan pushing back set him off like fireworks. This isn't a guy who takes no from people beneath him. Jesse buying his way back? I don't think he's got an ounce of respect for Jesse, but he might use him as a drinking buddy. And absolutely no promise he makes Jesse will ever be kept. Byron simply doesn't think like that. He has no sense of obligation or fairness, only what he can take. He's like Lester in that respect. But Jesse was useful in letting him know that Sara was obtainable. And Dan could be captured and paid back for his troublemaking. Anyway, let's look at the Sarah encounter from Byron's point of view. He meets Sarah, Bill and Jesse, and immediately, he corrals Sarah to himself, literally cutting her away from her husband. She's smiling, flirting, seems totally into him, encourages him to be self aggrandizing. She flirts openly with him, right in front of her husband and he loves that. Then she asks - SHE ASKS - to go off with him alone, to be shown his offices. For a guy like Byron, that can only mean one thing. Up in his offices, he gets some water, and finds her behind his desk. And get this, she's looking to see if she'll fit. The Bitch wants him. She goes down on her knees in a heartbeat, eagerly sucking his dick, totally willing and into it. She wants him. She's eager, submissive, and totally attracted to him. She can't keep her hands off him. She's totally out of her loser husband's league and just going for the real Alpha male. She does every single thing he tells her, willingly and enthusiastically. He takes complete control and she gives it up willingly to him - first the top, then the slacks, puts her on a chair, takes the panties. He rawdogs her, not even bothering with a condom, and she lets him. Whatever he wants to do, she's into it. There's no pretending, this isn't some hooker (and he does a lot of hookers), this is a drenched piece of pussy, and she's totally into him. I think for Byron, he sees her as being captured in instant, overwhelming sexual magnetism. Hell, she's eagerly swallowing down his come, can't get enough. She orgasms as he fucks her, and there's no faking that. He looks down on her loser husband, and best of all, she looks down on the loser too. The girl has chosen her real man, as far as Byron is concerned, and its not her husband. And the best thing: She says it out loud, she shouts it, she says it to the absent Dan. "I'm Byron's bitch now!" It's not just sex talk. For a guy as nearly sociopathic as Byron, it's like wedding vows, or a bill of sale. As far as Byron is concerned, he owns her now, owns her completely, she's handed over deed and title, and she wants to be owned. That's how his narrow mind and gigantic ego takes it. So where does it go from here? Emotionally, Byron is a spoiled toddler. He wants what he wants, he wants all of it all the time, and he'll throw an epic tantrum if he doesn't get it. Which means that if Dan shows up in Minneapolis without Sarah in tow, Byron's fury will be fucking epic. He'll throw the tantrum of all tantrums, and he'll do whatever he can to hurt, humiliate and wreck Dan or his life. Lester's handling will be gentle in comparison. It also means he's going to be incredibly demeaning instantly. A lot of business meetings in Minneapolis that Sarah will be required to accompany her husband for. Byron may well demand her in Chicago, or demand that she travel places. He wants Sarah, he owns her, so in his mind, he's going to fuck her every opportunity, and as far as he's concerned, she wants it too. But even if he realizes she doesn't, he won't care. Having her when she doesn't want to be had just makes it better for him, shows his power. He'll want to possess her completely. It's going to be race between Byron and Lester to see who takes her anal cherry. Also, he'll insist on Sarah's monogamy to him - no more Lester. Maybe eventually no more Dan - for sex at least. And he will absolutely insist on humiliating Dan. He's going to make Sarah say "I'm Byron's bitch now." And likely in a public place, a bar or restaurant. He'll act as if he's her husband or owner in public, making sure Dan is at a distance. Like french kissing or groping her in a restaurant, while Dan sits quietly at the other end of the table awkwardly, iike some guest. In private, he'll make her blow him or fuck her in front of Dan, just to consecrate his ownership. Then he'll kick Dan out of the room. Once he's demonstrated ownership, the only reason to let Dan stay is to humiliate him further. The general abusiveness of his behaviour towards Dan will escalate. If Dan ends up in a chastity cage, that will 100% be Byron. Hell, Byron might go there really fast. If Dan is lucky, it will only be for visits to Minneapolis. Jesse will be up for some humiliation as well, and he'll get put in his place. But he's a nonentity as far as Byron is concerned. As for Sarah, well, as far as Byron is concerned, she's dismissed her husband as worthless, she's willingly and eagerly traded up to him, she's signed herself over to him. As far as he's concerned from this point on, it doesn't matter a damn what she thinks about anyting, or if she thinks. She's his toy, and she no longer requires ideas or opinions, just do as she's told and be his private, eager, wlling nympho. As long as Sarah keeps stroking his ego and playing the game, she'll be fine. The more she expresses herself, the more he'll consider it something annoying to discourage or train her out of. Rebellion, refusal or rejection - wild fury and all kinds of revenge. Sarah is going to be stuck with Byron, she's smart enough to play him. She's pumped him for information easily, and she's very good at manipulating him and his erection. As long as she plays willing personal sex slave, he won't even notice. One thing Byron is going to do with Sarah is share her. When you own a toy like Sarah, you want to brag and show it off. He'll take her to social occasions, show her off to friends, and definitely share her pussy. He might even let Jesse have a go, to both reward and humiliate him. The difference between Byron and Lester, is that Lester seduces, everything Lester does is seduction, even now when he fucks Sarah into oblivion, he starts off with seduction. He intrigues and draws Sarah, excites her. Byron will simply demand. He's not going to seduce, he'll order Dan to bring her, and when she's in his company, he'll order and demand. Lester cultivates her orgasms. As far as Byron is concerned, she's there to cultivate his orgasms. If she has orgasms of her own, its because he's so damned hot and potent, not anything he has to work at or build up. It's all about his satisfaction, her satisfaction is the pleasure of giving him satisfaction. He doesn't realize that she's been well trained. As a lover, he'll be selfish, demanding and relentless.

Darrow

I think they are a government agency (FBI?) looking into sex trafficking. Dan would not normally pass a security check. I think they wouldn’t give him any classified information but hope he leads them, in some way to get some inside information into the Lincoln group.

Richardcat

I agree, I think somewhere in the past chapters that Lester indicated that one of the problems with women is that they develop emotional attachment. I think Sarah does have some feelings for Lester. However he does not have the same feelings. If someone took her away he would be angry because it’s like taking one of his possessions away. He would have no problem causing her significant problems if she rejects him. Look at the way he exposed her to problems by having sex in front of a window in her house and at work. If it causes her pain he doesn’t care as long as it shows his power over her.

Richardcat

But does she love him enough to leave Dan? To have a life with him, including raising her two kids if she divorces from Dan and has custody? I don’t think so.

Rjh200m

A ton of great comments on where the story may go. I would add a few thoughts - — Royston mentioned completion of the arcs, the first being when Lester first fucked Sarah, the second at the end of this chapter (22) where Lester achieved his “final victory”, and now we are in arc three. I would say that the “final victory” could be defined as his victory over Dan where he showed Dan the power he has over Sarah sexually and how he got Sarah to do and say all sorts of things in front of Dan. If we look at how far the Lester - Sarah sexual relationship has advanced since their first encounter and what Lester wanted to achieve, it certainly could be considered a total victory. However, I think the third and current arc is really about whether Lester wins Sarah out of the bedroom. And a lot of the comments revolve around this, including what Lester will do, what Dan will or will not do, how Sarah will evolve, and the fate of Sarah and Dan’s marriage. — I don’t think Lester will be a monster, destroying Sarah and Dan, I think he will try to win Sarah totally by giving her what he thinks she wants/needs in her life in and out of the bedroom. I don’t think Sarah will mindlessly fuck everyone, she has other goals in life other than great sex; and this includes using her sexuality to her advantage, for example, sexually manipulating her boss Thornhill. And I don’t think Dan will evolve into a mindless cuck. He will rebound and try to come to a middle ground regarding his sexual urges. However, I don’t see any possibility that Dan and Sarah’s sex life returns to what it was pre-Lester. Those days are gone forever. And unless Dan and Sarah get their financial situation in a much better place, I think their marriage is in real jeopardy, especially since Lester is not going away. — I think Peter’s goal was not to install a UBS drive on a LG computer, but to actually get Sarah into a sexual relationship with Byron. He used Dan to achieve this. I think Peter has plans to use Sarah to compromise Byron in some way. — I think the Sentinel Group could certainly be aligned with Peter or even be his employer. Why would DS have such a powerful and secret group in the story as opposed to some generic company that could purchase Dan’s services? Possibly to play a role in taking down The Lincoln Group and indirectly helping Dan and Sarah escape LG and Byron’s clutches. Dan does not have a lot of ammunition to take on Byron, so he needs help. Sentinel/Peter could provide this. And if Sarah can convince Lester to go after LG, you could see LG being taken down. Again, this would help Dan and Sarah, including their financial livelihood.

Rjh200m

Another possible use in the story of Sentinel could be to give Dan more resources in his fight against Sarah's prowlers. Perhaps Dan makes some good contacts and friends within Sentinel, or maybe they have other resources that will be at his disposal, or their 3-letter friends may come to have an interest in Dan (maybe through Peter?) because of his getting in to LG.

Sigma

Ultimately there will be a comeuppance with Lester. He'll slip up, especially when he's emotional. Much of his crime is hacking. So where can he mess up? One way is trying to hack a very mysterious, devious, amoral company as Lincoln Group. He may have opened a Pandora's Box of trouble if they "let" him in with a honeypot just so they can track him back. Another way is when another high-security firm is involved that includes a super tricked up secure laptop in the hands of Dan. Lester can't stand Dan beating him, and having a laptop he can't crack will undoubtedly tempt Lester. So what if he hacks it somehow, trouble ensures perhaps even involving Dan, but it gets traced back to Lester?

Sigma

On the other hand, maybe it had nothing to do with the USB. Remember Bridget Fonda in Point of No Return, when she was trained as an assassin and her first "job" was a test to see how creative she was? She followed the instructions but the supposed escape window was bricked up and she had to innovate. Maybe Peter was willing to sacrifice Dan. Maybe it was a test to see how far Dan could get inside LG. Maybe it was a test of Dan's willingness to put himself at risk. Maybe Peter works for Sentinel, and this is a test to see his abilities. Maybe there's really no one else inside as was claimed. Maybe it was just to confirm the network setup within LG that there are no hard drives, but a central hub. So far Don hasn't really introduced many irrelevant people, so there's got to be a purpose behind Peter and his subterfuge.

Sigma

So , the Sentinel group. What is their place in the story? The story doesn’t need a security conscious company, probable secret government agency, employing Dan. All he really needed was employment outside of Walt. So why??!! Could it be that they are monitoring the LG? They know they are up to no good. They wanted Dan because he had worked with them? Perhaps they are employing Peter too. If so, I don’t think much to their judgement. I’d be interested to know what you others think because it is dang sure puzzling me.

Royston smith

So, Peter. What a waste of space! He is a PI ( we think) and yet hasn’t done his homework on the LG properly. He doesn’t even know that they don’t use PC’s with a usb plug in. What a berk. If I were his employer I’d ask for my money back.

Royston smith

That's a very good point you make at the end. I think I'm guilty of not attaching enough weight to certain incidents or words because I don't think they are significant at the time.

MV

No, I think you are correct MV. We hear Sarah’s internal voice on her lust for Lester, how she can’t seem to resist his advances, crumbles quickly when she sees his horse cock, but nothing on her feelings toward him. We heard her ponder on Lester’s feelings for her in 17, she thinks they are akin to love, that look he gives her etc., but nothing on her feelings for him. She is jealous of Lizzie though, which perhaps tells us something.

Royston smith

Yes Pete, I think that may happen further down the line, or even sooner if Dan pursues Lester’s “Jesse” slip and has an insight/ revelation on Lester’s subterfuge, as I said in a previous post.

Royston smith

It’s so much fun to speculate on this story and to read everyone’s thoughts. So here goes. I don’t think marriage is in the cards for Lester and Sarah. He’s a narcissistic sociopath. He wants to control her, possess her but I can’t see them living full time together. He’s a slob who doesn’t care what others think and it would eventually drive her nuts. I do think he would like to impregnate her as that would be the ultimate victory over both Sarah and Dan. Remember they are the type who considers him a loser and he has strong feelings about that. He has to be wondering why she isn’t pregnant yet. I believe she is using some type of birth control and he will get her to stop it. There may be some more action with Byron but he doesn’t satisfy her like Lester and I think Lester will interfere effectively with Byron’s business which will sideline him. It’s likely that Lester will get her to fuck someone else but not until she is pregnant by him. I see blowjobs for Richard and Otis in the future although not necessarily due to Lester’s pressure. Richard has her keeping her job as leverage and Otis blackmail. It seems to me that if Lester wants to keep her as his personal sex slave but not live full time with her it would be a benefit if Dan could work at a job in Middleton. He would be able to watch the kids while Sarah sees Lester. I’m still puzzled about the group in D.C. and where they fit in. Federal agent involvement? If they did any kind of background check on Dan it’s obvious he would be a security risk. Lastly when this is done I would love to see a prequel showing some of Lester’s previous conquests.

Richardcat

💯

MV

In a lot of cheater stories, the cheater's excitement is the secrecy of the affair and that excitement dissipates once the affair is discovered. In other cheater stories, like TA, the cheater's excitement is the spouse's knowing of the extra-marital sex. That excitement, however, depends on the spouse agreeing to some extent with their spouse's extra-marital activities, maybe being sexually excited by the illicit nature of their partner's sex, maybe like Dan being subject to various fetish fantasies. When that spouse stops agreeing with it, then the entire story changes. What happens when Dan comes to realize this has all been a setup of massive proportions? Someone earlier mentioned Dan having a "revelation" of sorts if-or-when he realizes the videos, pictures, subterfuge between Lester and Jesse, etc. Once the accepting spouse realizes the extra-marital liaisons of his partner are not organic but calculated and conspired, the thrill is gone. No longer a thrill, but now a threat of massive proportions. Just as Dan immediately realized the Jesse threat and took decisive action, my bet going forward is that whenever Dan has that revelation (however it comes to him) then the story will take a massive turn. IMO this has to happen to Dan. He cannot remain a cuck forever and just let things happen, he's not that weak and it doesn't advance the story. He's proven a few times the ability to get control of himself. He's aggressive in trying to become independent with his own business and accounts. He's not been afraid of physical violence, nor of confronting people like Byron ("fuck off Byron") or Jesse, nor of negotiating with Peter. And since he's not always in the thick of things with Sarah and Lester, he has cleaner eyes than his wife so he will come to the realization much earlier than her. What will he do? What can he do? What risks is he willing to take? What losses is he willing to accept? We'll have to wait and see.

Sigma

I don't believe Sarah *truly* loves Lester at this stage. I know she's started saying it a lot, but is it genuine *affectionate* love, or just love for his twisted mind and his cock? Is anything about Lester truly affectionate? The thing about Sarah's feelings, this is a big hole in the story for me. We hear about her feelings about the thrills, or being turned on by Dan's reactions, etc, but unless I'm missing stuff, I don't feel like I'm hearing her internal dialogue on an emotional level. Her thoughts about how she is comparing Dan and Lester in her own head, other than sexually. If she is to genuinely give herself to Lester, hurt Dan, etc, I'd want to hear in depth her feelings about stuff like that. If I've been missing her doing that, I apologise.

MV

So Grande-man, our esteemed editor, has told us, on authority, that we have now reached the end of arc 2. Presumably, arc 1 ended in 7 when Lester first fucked Sarah. Ending arc 2 with Lester’s final victory in 22, seems somehow fitting. Arc 3 now proceeds. What will it bring? A battle royal between Lester and Byron for Sarah’s pussy? Richard establishing his hospital empire, with Sarah as its temptress empress? Otis blackmailing Sarah for a a bit of slap and tickle in his broom cupboard? Dares galore for Sarah to negotiate, including a date with someone she hates? Jesse hovering in the background waiting for his chance. The Nerds queuing up outside the bedroom door hoping for more. So many plates Mr Silver, so many plates, spinning, spinning….who can see the way forward? Can you fellow members of the silververse? I must confess if Don can weave all the above together convincingly he will have created a masterpiece of hot wife ( sorry Pete) fiction. The first two arcs kept me glued (literally) to my seat, the final arc may finish me off completely (no pun intended). But what of matters of the heart? Will Sarah really leave Dan for the troll Lester? Does she really love him? Is Dan her one and only love or will it “all turn to dust” as “she starts screwing around”? Even Lester thought they were a “tight” couple. He could see their closeness, their love for each other. Will he be able to break that? I think we need to hear Sarah’s internal voice on whether she loves Lester or not. Dan’s internal heartache and thoughts, too. Finally, we also need to hear them discussing/talking things out; are they “still good”? When you look into your crystal ball my friends what do you see? We have had a lot of speculation on here , some informed, some wild and unlikely. So let’s hear from you. Make it credible though, basing it on the text we have in front of us not what you would like to see. I will start the ball rolling. Ch 23 or perhaps 24, will probably partially shift the focus back to Middleton hospital. The Richard thread will develop along the lines of Richard making clear to Sarah if she wants to keep her job then she needs to “be nice” to him, or she will go the way of Jerry and Marcie. In a succeeding chapter Otis attempts to blackmail Sarah into sex. Sarah resists, but soon realises her job will be forfeit if she is reported to the new Richard HR appointment and has to acquiesce. There will be a “crisis” in Sarah’s and Dan’s marriage after the “I love you” admission, unless Dan loses all agency and just becomes a cardboard cut out character. Dan will contact Peter to say: “we can’t fit your device as there is nowhere to fit it, dumbass. Call yourself a Private eye”? Lester will continue his invasion of Jesse’s and the Lg’s IT systems with some success. But he finds LG have a very sophisticated firewall defence in place that he has trouble breaching. In the meantime Byron and co are alerted to his attack and endeavour to find out who is behind it. Byron tells Dan he has to come to Minnesota again. This time Byron invites his drinking buddies along to meet Sarah. He has promised those who meet their sales targets for the month a bonus. Guess what it is. Jesse tags along hoping for his chance. On D &S’s next visit to Chicago Lester tells them he has booked a restaurant with a table for 2 for date night. IF Dan wants to come along he will have to book his own table and pay for his own meal. Sarah’s dare is to wear the low cut black dress Lester has bought her, with matching black stockings. It is very short, reaching only her upper thigh. He tells her she is not to wear any underwear and during the meal, on the pretence of visiting the restroom, she is to drop her purse and bend over to retrieve it, giving one half of the room a view of her bare bottom and the other half a clear sight down her cleavage. When she returns from the restroom she is to give a repeat performance by bending over the table to kiss Lester. Lester tells her if she does this he will reward her by taking her to see the stranger from the carpark and letting her suck him off through the window while Lester takes her from behind. Don can follow in his car if he wants to watch. And there inspiration fails me. Over to you.

Royston smith

Dan barges in and yells “Pineapple”. Sarah turns to him and says “No, I need a huge Banana”, then grabs Lester’s cock…..sorry, my attempt at humor!

Rjh200m

Yes, I agree. But this is what Lester has said he wants, Sarah available whenever he wants; Sarah able to show him affection whenever she wants. The extreme Lester takes this literally, so no Dan, no kids, no professional life to distract her. Will a more reasonable Lester emerge?

Rjh200m

From Chapter 6 when Sarah was jerking Dan off on the flight from Minnesota- Sarah - you want your wife to open her legs and let that man fuck her? You want to see me writhing in pleasure as he pounds into me while I moan his name over and over. Do you want him to fuck me so hard that I forget all about you? Dan - Fuck, Dan whispered harshly as he came. His cum shot out and hit the inside of the blanket, dribbling down onto his naked thighs as she pumped his shaft. Dan closed his eyes, spent. That was one of the most powerful orgasms he had ever experienced. The dirty talk from his wife had been next level and sent him completely overboard. Way back in Chapter 6 it seemed like sex/fantasy talk that Lester would fuck Sarah so good that she would forget about Dan. Now? It appears inevitable unless something changes….i think the “forget about you” part refers to Sarah no longer yearning for Dan sexually like she did at the beginning of the story. Between the amazing sex with Lester, the other partners that Lester facilitates or not, and work/kids, she may not have time for intimacy with Dan, nor would she need it.

Rjh200m

Yes I agree Mark. A writer should follow his muse not be beholden to the tyranny of the crowd.

Royston smith

Yes, I think Dan will want to have good evidence before he shares with Sarah. Especially as she seems to be in thrall to Lester physically and emotionally. I presume his immediate priority will be talking through what she is feeling for Lester as the “i love you” admission seems to have shocked him. But making enquiries through Jesse I can see happening straight away.

Royston smith

Lots of discussion on how Dan will ultimately react to verbal humiliation from Sarah at the urging of Lester and Byron…..here is some narrative way back in Chapter 5 that portended what is now happening - Sarah: What was your favourite part of last night?" Dan: The words you said and the dirty talking you did with him also turned me on, especially when you talked about me. I don't know why, but it almost made me explode right then and there when he had you talk to me." Sarah: I thought you might like that, I’ll remember to up the intensity a little more next time. I think there is more to come on the humiliation front!

Rjh200m

Definitely. In many ways, for me, this will be the defining moment, when she consciously belittles Dan outside of sex. I'm kind of hoping she doesn't, because when he began giving in to his weakness, I don't think that's what he signed-up for. But just as important as her making that leap, I really don't think he can realistically not step up or say Pineapple. I know him enduring further suffering fits with the narrative of where this is (apparently) headed, but I think that if these crucial steps are not portrayed realistically, the story is starting to lose something for me personally. Everyone has their breaking point, and it wouldn't be true to Dan's character if he didn't have his. Similarly, it wouldn't be true to Sarah's character if she didn't suffer internal anguish when she realised she was hurting Dan and possibly risking her marriage. I think, as we get to this tough stage of the story, hearing Sarah's internal dialogue is going to be crucial.

MV

In the bedroom, Dan has seen everything between Sarah and Lester, including her verbal humiliation comments to Dan in this chapter. Dan seems to be good with this. But I think that if Sarah carries some of this over outside the bedroom, Dan will be impacted. Both Sarah and Dan have always seemed to cope by saying things “got out of control”, etc., but to date Sarah has not carried through on any of the verbal promises she made to Lester during sexual passion. We will see how this plays out. I think that this would be the next step for Lester (in addition to pushing her sexual boundaries)….to make Sarah commit to him and separate a little bit from Dan in a public setting. Nothing crazy to start, but little things to get Sarah to be seen with Lester in social settings, show affection for him, a little bit of back and forth flirty bantering…perhaps first without Dan present but later with him seeing it. This would be a big step for her and also a key decision point for Dan if she goes through with it.

Rjh200m

But does she cut herself off from the girls? Would her parents really accept Lester, when Dan has done nothing 'wrong' to their daughter. I have known women who've left their kids (and hubby, obvs) for a new boyfriend, but they are few in number. I'm just not convinced that Sarah is that kind of woman.

MV

Lester wants Sarah to be his completely with no obstacles between him and her. Compared with his previous conquests which included coercion and blackmail, I think he has deeper feelings for Sarah and he wants her to fall for him naturally. He wants his “princess” to love him not just for the sex, but for the whole person, including his physical appearance. He seems well on the way to obtaining this. But what then? Your vision is one of the happy ending scenarios. But it could be a dark ending. For example, once Lester has Sarah totally, the thrill goes away. He is a predator and he got what he wanted, but now he wants to move on. He cuts a deal with Cronos to deliver Sarah to him. Just one among many possibilities. Key issue seems to be does Lester remain on the dark side or does he evolve with Sarah’s help into someone who wants a life with a partner/wife.

Rjh200m

I agree that the story could go on much further. I admit I'm Team Dan. Not because I want it to end in sweetness and light, I don't expect that, I just don't see him as the weak cuck that appear in Don's other stories. He's tolerated much, and probably has more to endure yet. He tolerates it because he loves seeing her abandoned sexual release. She gets extra turned on because his hard-ons and lack of safe word convince her she's doing what they both want. It doesn't *have* to end with a total victory for either Dan or Lester. It wouldn't be hard to write one of several endings that people have suggested (Lester going to jail for a time, etc). The people who want to see Lester Crush Dan for being (becoming) a cuck, we didn't all come here for that. This has been a truly brilliant story series. Why alienate a lot of readers when there are ways of keeping both 'sides' on-board? Maybe neither side gets everything they want, but Don retains a bigger readership. I thought all authors wanted that.

MV

All good points and questions….and yes, we shall see…but even if Dan finds out what Lester has been doing, he should not be surprised. He knows Lester has been trying to take his wife, Lester has told him this on many occasions. Dan has to know that Lester is not a nice person and would do things to undermine him in order to win Sarah. A related question is what does Sarah do if Dan tells her everything he has learned? Would both even consider cutting Lester off and figuring out how to counter him? Presumable they would do something to protect themselves, but would Sarah be willing to stop having sex with Lester?

Rjh200m

You fucked someone else on your trip, didn’t you? DIDN’T YOU!?” Lester said. “Yesss,” Sarah breathed. “Who?” Lester said. “Byron,” Sarah squealed, “Dan’s client.” “Not Jesse, huh?” Lester grunted as he pounded Sarah from behind…. Something about what Lester just said scratched a part of Dan’s mind, but he couldn’t put the puzzle pieces together at that moment”. So, Dan will now start to wonder, why did Lester think Sarah would be fucking Jesse in Minnesota? As far as Dan is aware Lester doesn’t know Jesse. He professed ignorance as to who he was after the dance hall incident in 15. So, what will Dan do? Will he come right out and ask Lester? Take a while to think things through? Tbh the logical thing to do is to ring Jesse or ask to meet him for a chat. Then ply him for information. The more knowledge Dan can gather about Lester’s subterfuge before confronting Lester or sharing it with Sarah, the better. Jesse is already backed into a corner over Dan’s threat to tell Byron about Peter, so it shouldn’t be hard to extract the info Dan wants. Eventually Jesse will confess the nightclub dance was a set up and Lester and he were in cahoots over it. Also, his recent conversation with Lester will come out in which he rejected Lester’s overtures for a repeat performance. But then will he go on to query other things. Vernon for instance. Was he a set up? Was it a coincidence cash showed up when he did? The increase in rent. Dan already voiced his suspicions to Sarah over that. WIll he go and talk to Frank? Suddenly, Lester’s game could unravel and it could be liberating for Dan. It could act like a revelation that gives him new strength. He may even decide to confront Lester over it all, once he has made full enquiries and use physical force to obtain a full confession. We shall see.

Royston smith

I hope Mr. Silver ends it however he wants to and doesn't do a reader's poll to figure it out. He's taken us this far. Carry it on home.

Mark Albright

I might have a bad memory but what was Lester's ultimate goal? I think the direction of this story hinges on what's going on in Lester's head. Is he just a sex addict? Is it just about getting a kick out of having control (not necessarily all about sex) or is the objective for him to be Sarah's man (her and Dan split) I feel for Don here because he's caught in-between a rock and a hard place. Reading comments on here, discord and literotica, there's probably a 50/50 split when it comes Dan / Lester fans but one side is going to end up disappointed in the end. I just want this story go on forever (I know it won't), I'm loving the ride and as a Lester fan I hope he continues to get victories even if she ultimately ends up with Dan. My preferred outcome is (after another 20/30 rollercoaster chapters) for Dan and Sarah to recognise that Sarah and Lester have something special and there is an amicable parting/divorce. When you really love someone, sometimes the best thing is to let them go. I would like to think that Sarah is able to change Lester. They enter into a serious relationship but he becomes her servant because of his IT skills and special capabilities in the bedroom.

Sean Thomas

Wait til she starts lactating....hopefully she shares it with Cash and the nerds, lets see how low she can go.

whiterhino

Mark Albright

I expect us to get to a stage soon when she is hiding more stuff from him, or just doesn't value his opinion. Once a couple isn't on the same page, Problems are soon multiplied by lack of communication. Dan discovering she hasn't told him stuff will cause major blow-ups. When the couple get to the other side of all this, as I really hope they do, will Sarah see she risked everything for her addiction to the dick? Conversely, I want there to be a TA2, because I don't really want Sarah's Adventure to end. Should there even be a TA2? Why can't TA1 just evolve? Characters come and go? Scenarios come and go? Is there a baby as some suggest? Does Lester die or go to jail? Do other powerful men with big dicks come into Sarah's world? Does she fuck Richard and Otis, but then move on to work for Byron? In some ways, Don has *too* many choices. I don't envy him.

MV

Related scenario - Sarah finds out that Lester is not fixed, but she also knows that she is not pregnant. What does she do? Does she ask Lester to wear a condom? She has already said “never” . Even if she does, Lester will certainly not agree, and he will work his magic on her like he has done many times already. Under this scenario, I think the TA story would have to address the pregnancy issue. Sarah’s internal dialogue would either say that “I am ok since I am on birth control” or some variation, or if she is not, then she has a real decision to make. Also, does she discuss this with Dan or not?

Rjh200m

Agreed.

Royston smith

Yes, the pregnancy is the obvious one. Does Lester tell her not to tell Dan? If that happens, Dan is going to blow up when he finds out she hid it from him. I was more thinking about other stuff they find out; the rental agreement, the underhand computer stuff he's done, maybe Dan works out how he's manipulated some of the situations but Sarah defends him? There are lots of possibilities.

MV

Mark Albright

I don't understand the people who only want her to fuck Lester, not other men. Lester's hold on her is already established. If she fucks Richard for Lester, or Otis, because he gives Lester access to certain rooms, what difference is that to fucking Lester *for* Dan? She's already fucked Byron, and it hasn't stopped Lester wanting to have her.

MV

Sounds good to read 📚

keith kingsbury

I think this may allude to the videos. At the moment Sarah is enjoying herself too much to regret things. But if things changed, maybe she finds out that Lester has been lying to them, maybe she feels betrayed by him. Don’t forget his slip over Jesse in the last chapter which Dan picked up. If his web of lies unravels he may go for the nuclear option with Dan and reveal his dirty videos of Sarah. Threaten to sell them on the internet if Dan does not comply. Then we hit a downward spiral and all bets are off.

Royston smith

I’d like to see a happy ending where Dan gets to fuck someone! One night Sarah says to Dan “ Lester and I are going up to the bedroom, you can watch if you want”. Dan responds “Sorry, boo, I’ll be fucking one of the nurses at the hospital tonight, she’s crazy about me.”

Rjh200m

I think there will definitely be a confrontation between Thornhill and Lester at some point. Lester will offer Sarah to Thornhill for a price. Sarah goes along with it to please Lester. But Lester intended for it to be a one-time thing. But Sarah ends up liking it, and decides to use her body to advance her career. She starts to go to lunch every day with her boss, and they can take as long as they like since he's the boss.

Mark Albright

Three characters struggling with (or trying to balance) their inner and outer selves. I think we all do this, but probably not to the extent in this story! I think your comment very nicely lays out how the three characters influence each other, but also have personal choices to make.

Rjh200m

Great point Sigma, when I read that line for the first time I wondered about it and what it could portend. Twenty plus chapters later, you can certainly see many potential causes for regret.

Rjh200m

There is a huge anger in Lester, probably since he was unmercifully picked on as a kid and to this day women are initially repulsed by him. This is why he goes after women by using any means possible including subterfuge and blackmail. As you and others have discussed, it is different with Sarah since he seems to have feelings for her. But at the same time, we are all speculating as to whether the dark Lester will emerge to get Sarah to be totally his. With men, we have seen that he is very vindictive and he is probably capable of what you are alluding to, However, I don’t think he is going to get personally violent with Dan, he said he could have done this, but he did not, instead he went to his SUV and started yelling and banging. He will use others to go after Dan if he decides to do this, e.g., ruin his career. Or he will try to do more of it via Sarah. I would be interested in how he goes after Vernon since he not only got the best of Lester with Sarah, but also stole his wallet!

Rjh200m

I think that Thornhill, her boss, would not like that since he would want to further demean her at the office party and, of course, try to take her into his office for some personal attention!

Rjh200m

Re a happy ending to the story: Recall the line in Chapter 1: "It was a website that she would eventually wish she had never remembered." "Eventually" implies a realization down the road. When, we don't know. Sarah's "wish" of never remembering seeing Lester's apartment ad implies something bad. As in, deep regret from consequences. What regret, and what consequences? We don't know, yet. But it will have to be some sort of loss. Perhaps of family, husband, reputation, career, health. Anything but happy.

Sigma

So, this is an interesting passage. Sarah is being fucked by Lester and looks up to see Vernon staring at her: “She shifted her eyes to look up at his face and found him staring back intently at her. With a lazy, knowing smile. Sarah was entranced by his beady brown eyes. The crows feet at the corners narrowed as he stared back at her. She felt so exposed, some random stranger seeing her for who she truly was, what she really wanted. Beyond the shield of professionalism she usually wore”. “Who she truly was”. Hold onto that phrase for a moment. Now Lester earlier in the same chapter:”The two of them thought they were just playing a game. That they could use him for their own fantasies and cast him aside when they were done, but they didn’t know anything. They didn’t know who Lester truly was or what he was capable of”. So, “who Lester truly was”. An echo of Sarah’s phrase. This story is about the mask slipping, how desires you thought were buried, you are barely conscious of, can suddenly bubble up to the surface and catch you unawares. Sarah is dredging up things she was barely aware of in her inner psyche, Lester is experiencing feelings he thought he had long defeated:”He hadn’t felt like this in a long time. Not since he was in high school”. And Dan? Well his mask hasn’t slipped, it has been ripped from him and smashed on the floor by Lester. He is exposed and naked to the world. The following reverie of Dan’s is the real Dan:”The time Lester roughly fucked her in the parking garage, and that bum had watched intently. He’d seen his naked wife exposed to the eyes of that dirty stranger as she fucked another man. He thought of Sarah exposed in other ways, all of those nerds watching her, surrounding Lester’s bed as she had rode his cock. Maybe Sarah taking on two random guys, both at once, in some shitty motel in a rough part of Chicago. Her picking up a stranger from the bar and bringing him back to their room, giving him whatever he wanted, serving herself up to be taken”. This is rather a nightmare vision. Dan, you need to get a grip or all will be lost. You will lose the lovely Sarah, only the taste of ashes in your mouth, as the final drama plays out.

Royston smith

Mark Albright

Another possibility of opening thing up would be Sarah and Lester going to a work party together. Sarah is no longer wearing her wedding ring since that is disrespectful to Lester. She tells her co-workers she and Dan have been separated a while (technically true) and that Lester is her boyfriend. Lester us in seventh heaven as Sarah fawns over him in front of everybody, calling him baby and honey and even Daddy. And she brags to her female co-workers how good Lester is "where it counts." She even sits on his lap at one point and tells him she loves him. This allows them to be more open without Dan's approval (or even knowledge). It also makes the casual touching of each other at work not draw any attention.

Mark Albright

Since crazy predictions are out here (are they really crazy? ) Only Mr. Silver knows. Here’s the final scene to the story. Sarah calls Dan and tells him she and Lester won’t be home until 7. Final sentence of this insane masterpiece; Sarah and Lester walk hand in hand into Planet Fitness. Sarah working off her baby fat and Lester at Sarah’s request trying to get in better shape. 🤪

J Lewis

Anyone notice Lester’s choice of viewing before he fucks Sarah at the beginning of 22? Ichi the Killer. A Japanese, Yakuza, gangland gorefest. One of the most violent films of all time. Is Don trying to tell us something? It fits tbh with Lester’s violent reaction to Dan humiliating him in 21. Remember how he scoured the “internets underbelly” for contract killers? In his imagination is he Ichi the killer gunning down all his enemies? “Vernon. Dan. The Lincoln Group. Jessie. It was time to burn them all to the ground”.

Royston smith

I can't personally see Dan accepting that, because then it's not about the sex dynamic, it's purely about degrading him.

MV

Time for Lester to push the boundaries…..he has already fucked Sarah multiple times in their house, including in the marital bed, living room, Dan’s office, etc. And with Dan watching and with him not there. Lester should convince Sarah to have a gathering at her house where some friends or neighbors are invited. Lester is introduced as Dan’s roommate in Chicago and a colleague of hers at the hospital. Lester flirts with Sarah during the party, nothing crazy, but enough so that the other guests can’t miss it. Sarah has a few wines so she gets increasingly touchy-feely with Lester in front of the guests and Dan. At the same time, it is clear to everyone that Dan does not seem to mind the flirting, and that he also seems to have most of the responsibility for making sure that everyone has enough to drink and eat, running into the kitchen at Sarah’s request. At one point, even Lester asks Dan to get some more wine for Sarah and him. At the end of the night, the guests leave and say polite goodnights, but some are wondering what is going on, especially since Lester is not leaving. After everyone is gone, Lester takes Sarah up to the bedroom to fuck her all night. Sarah tells Dan that he can come up and watch after he is done cleaning up. Not sure if this is realistic within the context of the TA story, but it seems that a next step for Lester is to get his relationship with Sarah more out in the open and not just confined to the bedroom. This would be a big step for her and Dan, but the question would be whether they go for it.

Rjh200m

The grandparents certainly seem very accommodating. Maybe they take on even more of a childcare role, enabling more action to happen at the house? If there *is* to be a third child, they look after that, too, maybe? Maybe the house is child-free all week, enabling Lester, Richard, or a visiting Byron to come round and put Dan through it at home, but on weekends, Dan stays at home, whilst Lester takes Sarah back to the Chicago apartment, and Dan is sent teaser video clips of what she gets put through?

MV

Completely agree. If we stop seeing flashes of the inner Sarah and the inner Dan, the story loses so much power, imo. If Lester, Byron, etc, are making her act depraved, it has to have something to be measured against, imo.

MV

Mark Albright

I was kind of thinking Richard is going to be more than just a passing character, that he would open up a new avenue for power/sex games. I think it's good for the story for Lester to have rivals, not always get what he wants. I've suggested the thing about Dan possibly ending up as a house-husband myself. The problem with that is that it kind of takes him out of the story. Sure, we'll get Sarah lying to him and we'll get him being sent videos to taunt him, but he's effectively out of the picture?

MV

Mark Albright

I agree. On your last paragraph; I also think Sarah is more in control/aware than we think. For now. As we've said previously, the crunch will come a) if Dan gets upset/angry or uses the safe word (loudly) b) if, as we expect, she finds out she's carrying Lester's child. Those will be crunch moments. Maybe she finds out, tells Lester, and he won't let her tell Dan till it's too late. I'm hoping that if that happens, it doesn't kill off the amount of sex, definitely not just with Lester. Lester may feel that if she's pregnant, he is suddenly OK with her fucking around? I'd prefer a non-pregnancy story, but I think I'm heavily outnumbered. Either way, I hope the volume of sex stays high.

MV

Agree! Lester will be using all of the levers to get Sarah to willingly fall further under his influence and to separate her emotionally and physically from Dan. This has been his strategy all along, including his comment to Dan a while ago that Dan will not even recognize her when he is done. Now that Lester has won Sarah sexually, I think he will focus on providing to her or help her achieve financial stability and independence and a renewed professional standing, which are both very important to her. He will still push her sexual boundaries, but to win her totally he also wants to provide her with other things that are important to her. Basically, Lester will continue to cause a steady degradation of Sarah’s attachment to Dan with a growing realization on her part that Lester can be a compatible partner that will help her achieve her goals. Of course, she has to weigh all of this against her relationship with and love for Dan. I have posted before that I think Sarah is in much more control than we may think. I think she is cognizant of the direction things are headed in, and she has to decide what to do. But no doubt, Lester is a huge and growing influence on her.

Rjh200m

Looks like it.

MV

Now that it has been established that Dan can’t protect Sarah from Byron and they need tech access to Lincoln Groups network, Lester is primed to come to the rescue and make greater demands for it. Same potential at Sarah’s job.

Dallas87

I think Lester, as the new IT director, becomes Sarah's confidante at the hospital, as well as her daily dose of dick. Richard continues to treat Sarah as a subordinate/sex object. He starts to grab or swat her butt when no one is around, she threatens to report him to HR, and he tells her the new head of HR is a "good-looking piece of ass I've been tapping." He then offers Sarah a job as his PA, although he calls it his secretary. Sarah storms away from him and goes to Lester's office, fuming. Lester consoles her, holds her and asks if there's anything he can do. "No, I just hate Richard. Make him go away." "Ah, you hate him, huh? Well, in that case..." Sarah, realizing what he is saying, shakes her head, "You wouldn't make me do that...would you?" Lester smiles.

Mark Albright

Agreed. We don't know yet what all of these other characters are packing. If Lester's taken out of the picture down the line, either permanently or temporarily, if she is regularly fucking someone who is only slightly smaller than Lester, but isn't a troll, that would change the dynamics of any future Lester/Sarah relationship, which I think would be a good thing. I'm really hoping that Richard and Otis are fucking her at the hospital, but that she's also having trips to Byron's office, and getting heavily used there, to protect both her a Dan's income. Even if the other cocks aren't in Lester's league, the power exerted over her could be just as strong, just in a different way.

MV

Yes, apart from 9, I think.

Royston smith

Agree that Sarah having sex with others without Lester would be very interesting. The dynamics between Sarah, Lester and Dan are very compelling because of all of the encounters that have had. Sarah’s session with Byron lacked the emotional connection she now has with Lester, but Byron was certainly different, more forceful and crude and he really focused on the humiliation of Dan which got Sarah very worked up. I think Sarah having sex with Thornhill, her boss, would be more interesting than her session with Byron as Sarah seems to admire Thornhill in some ways as Royston pointed out. I could see a strong emotional connection between her and Thornhill as he would seem to combine the take charge attitude that Sarah likes with a softer side (massage, “ you don’t have anything to worry about, Sarah”). Similar to her current relationship with Lester!

Rjh200m

MV I don’t disagree with you. That is why in my “is Jesse the one she hates post” I referred to her obvious desire in 22 to see if Jesse’s cock rivalled Lester’s in size. My point was really aimed at that type of cliched story where that is all that matters and the hot wife has no agency or personality of her own. I love that Sarah defies Lester occasionally, is a strong capable professional woman who has gradually fallen into hyper-sexuality and forbidden desire. Yes, she will continue to desire Lester’s large cock and wonder about the size of others, but she needs to maintain her inner Sarah and not become a total I love big cock bimbo. So, I suppose what I am saying is we need to see situations where the story develops based on what we know of her inner world, and not go in directions where we hold up our hands and say:”sorry, that is not the Sarah we know”.

Royston smith

Tim, I have answered your first point in another separate post. Regards BDSM I have often wondered if Lester might take Sarah there. After all she likes being underneath his large mass, feeling powerless and dominated, being pinned to the mattress. I am not sure about whips and chains. She doesn’t mind her bottom smacking, but being whipped is another level. Perhaps being tied up or handcuffed would feed into her liking for Lester’s domination of her whilst he pounds her from the rear. It certainly would be the next step.

Royston smith

I agree. Your last sentence, though, I can't see her desire for large cocks ending. That is a genie that you can't put back in the bottle, imo. It doesn't mean that everyone she fucks will have one, though. Maybe in some of her other adventures, it's the situation she's in that turns her on more than the cock itself.

MV

Yes, I'm hoping for a few gangbangs at the Lincoln office. Maybe she's offered to clients to seal deals? The thing about Lester's control, I like to think she's only going to pay lip service to that. Little comments she's made ('You don't know me, Lester') give me hope that, although she's playing-up to Lester's games, the feisty girl inside her is more independent than she's letting on.

MV

Again MV, I find myself in agreement with you. You are spot on. This story, as opposed to many hotwife stories, does allow us to suspend disbelief. The way Don has slowly developed Lester’s dominance over Sarah, Dan’s simultaneous fascination and repulsion for it, and Sarah’s gradual recognition of her wild side/ her inner “monster,” has been thrilling to behold. I too don’t want to see it degenerate into just another “ the wife loves big cock and the husband capitulates tale”.

Royston smith

MV, I like your “others at the Lester group” throw away line. I, myself, have wondered if Byron, to extend his power over her, and to further demean Dan, might have her gang banged by his drinking buddies, whilst Dan watches. Lester, you better get a grip soon or that may well happen.

Royston smith

I agree with most of that, but not that Dan was a pussy. Sure, they had normal, boring married sex, but I've never regarded him as a pussy. He discovered a kink, and unfortunately, he discovered it in the apartment of a devious monster. Wrong time, wrong place. I still think the real Dan is under there and will eventually show himself. From little things she's said, I actually think the real Sarah is still under there, too. She's just getting everything she can from this ride while she's on it. Her and Dan will never go back to what they were, that's for sure. I think Dan will let her have lots of sex with other large, powerful cocks and carry on hotwifing.

MV

What was going on as he didn’t know about it. Similarly with the hospital and Richard/otis. Although he has access to the hospital and may even be the new head if IT.

Royston smith

Yes MV I agree. I have said before I like the different angles/plate spinning in the story too. Definitely would like to see Sarah go off piste, rather than fucked endlessly by Lester. The nerds chapter was a great one and would love to see a sequel. I think the problem Don has with opening things up beyond the Byron/Sarah scenario, is Lester’s desire to keep control. He does not like sharing. Therefore, the Byron situation is one where he couldn’t control

Royston smith

The best hotwife stories are the believable ones, the ones you can empathise with. I do think that if this story becomes too 'out there', it won't have the same 'attraction' for people, or at least only for a niche crowd.

MV

I have to be honest, I hope she fucks all the people you listed, at different times, for different reasons. Just having session after session with Lester is getting very samey, imo. I'd like her to fuck both Richard and Otis. I'd like her to fuck Byron, Jesse and others at the Lincoln Group. I'd like to see a scenario where something happens with the nerds at Ned's shop. I get that the tensions of the Lester/Sarah/Dan triangle form the core of the story, but I want it to be more about sex situations coming up than all of the story being about Dan's torment by Lester. Just my opinion. Although the sex with Byron wasn't 'great', it was a refreshing change. All of these sex sessions can be used to tease/frustrate/torture Dan in various ways.

MV

Yes, I do. Surely Dan must be beginning to feel really pissed iff once he is free of the hypnotising effects of watching Sarah be bad. He surely must challenge her on loving Lester? If he doesn’t he will have lost all agency and it won’t bode well for the story going forward. Remember the arguments we have witnessed between Dan and Sarah in the past? I think there must be another one on the horizon. But what bothers me is how easily he gave into Byron. I am worried he is past redemption now.

Royston smith

So, I previously put out a post on Lester’s threat to Sarah to make her “fuck somebody you hate to teach you a fucking lesson”. Mr Tim Drury’s post (welcome Tim) seems to have made it topical again. My previous post covered Jesse and the conclusion was it definitely isn’t him, as she would quite like to see just how big his “not small” cock is. But let’s do an analysis on Richard now as he seems to be everyone’s favourite for the title of Sarah’s “somebody you hate” (sorry Tim it has been mentioned before). TBH I don’t think it is Richard. Here is why. If we look at the evidence from ch19-21 in which Richard start’s to take up his role in the hospital, you will see Sarah feels: 1. Disdain for him. He is unprofessional in waffling on for 20 meetings at the beginning of meetings about something unrelated to work matters such as last night sports game. 2. Thinks he is a hypocrite. He turns up late to meetings after making everyone else turn up 10 minutes early. 3. She is “impressed and horrified” at how quickly “he was consolidating power and eliminating any potential challengers”. 4. Thinks he is slovenly in his appearance. He was wearing “a new suit since Sarah had seen him last. He looked more respectable, but Sarah still felt an underlying slovenly impression about him”. 5. Finally we have stronger emotions after he “creeped” on her by making her make the coffee and rubbed her shoulders in front of the assembled meeting in 21. He “makes her skin crawl” and she thinks he is “a misogynistic prick”. So, to me none of the above add up to hate. Hate is a much stronger emotion than those I have catalogued above. I think she sees him as someone who loves power and control and while she did not like him creeping on her, on another level she is quite impressed by his ruthlessness. Remember how she was “turned on” by Dan’s ruthlessness in getting jesse fired? Well I think she feels a similar conflict with Richard. She dislikes him (I wouldn’t put it stronger than that) but also can’t help but be turned on by his power play in the hospital. So, if not Richard or Jesse, then who? Well I don’t think there is anyone else who is a candidate for her hate amidst the current dramatis personae. Otis she hardly knows, the nerds she actually enjoyed teasing, Frank, the building manager, she has not met. Vernon/cash she is drawn to as characters who are beneath her. We are left with no-one then. Unless.. something happens in 23 to move her Richard dial from dislike to hate. Its interesting he says this in 21 after massaging her shoulders:”You’re so tense, Sarah,” Richard said, his hands leaving her shoulders as he continued walking around the table. “You don’t need to worry about anything anymore. All of our problems are in the past, and we’re on a bright new course here. I’m sure you’ll enjoy it just as much as I will.” This could be directed to the assembled meeting, but I think not. The sexual overtones seem obvious. He has just massaged her shoulders in front of everybody and made her go get the coffee like his PA. It is his power play on Sarah. Rather than sack her, like Jerry and Marcie, he wants to bring her close and make her his. Remember how he checked her out in 20, like a Lion sizing up a gazelle? So, if he makes a play for her in 23 she may end up hating him. There are other possibilities. It could be a new character that Sarah hates. Perhaps from her past. Remember Lester has access to her social media posts and could find something there. Or he could have found an interesting fact on Sarah’s hates whilst trawling through their documents in Dan’s office in 20. From Ch16: “think one thing is safe to say,” Sarah stared down the empty hallway. We never know what to expect from Lester.” Yes Sarah, that’s very true, we don’t. So who has he got in mind when he says he will get you to fuck someone you hate? We will have to wait and see.

Royston smith

I think that certainly at the moment, she does it because she's convinced Dan is into it. If Dan says the safe word, or lashes out at Lester, that is the test. Will she immediately come to her senses, or will she persuade Dan to back off, saying "You don't really want that, Dan?' I'm very much in the camp that thinks that if the marriage is over, the story is over, though. There are elements of the story that, if they are pushed *too* far, make the story unbelievable. I know some people want Dan to be made a pathetic cuck, but I think that would ruin the story, personally.

MV

I think it will get worse before it gets better. She seems to be getting increasingly turned on by it, but she is likely to adjust if Dan really starts to get upset or angry….she may still do it if Dan is not present….but perhaps she does not respond to Lester or Byron’s taunting if Dan is there…..but how Dan will react is also an unknown.

Rjh200m

Thanks for the response. You may be right, but I still think Sarah is still learning about her sexuality. After being with a pussy like Dan for years, they've had very vanilla sex. I think she likes the idea of being an object and used nothing more than for a man's pleasure. I guess we will see though. I definitely agree I have no clue where this is going to go with Dan. My guess is that Dan tells her she has to stop.seeing Lester and she starts going behind his back to start

TD40

Question for all: To an outsider, Sarah’s demeaning sex talk to Dan, her trash talking to and about Dan, all may seem disrespectful. While it’s all part of the sex play do you think it will lead to actual disrespect of her husband where it will affect the marriage?

Sigma

I think Richard is a fairly sure bet, though it could be someone else. I can imagine Sarah doing *some* BDSM. I'm not sure she's depraved enough for golden showers, though. So far, her focus seems to be dicks and joining in cucking Dan, which she thinks is turning him on. I personally think Dan will reach a breaking point with that. Is she so far gone that she'd carry on when she realises she's genuinely hurting him and risking her marriage. Even if Lester tricks her into thinking it's what Dan wants, would the realisation of what she'd done wake her up?

MV

I recently just joined DS Patreon. I also just finished ch. 22 & reading the comments below. I want to point out one huge subplot people MAY be missing and then share a couple of my hopeful fantasies for Sarah. 1. prediction: I haven't seen anyone mention this yet. Lester says at the end of the Chapter Sarah can only fuck who he wants & he was going to take revenge for her fucking Byron by making her fuck someone she hates. That has to be her new boss, Richard. DS preluded to it already when he was creepily rubbing her shoulders. My guess is Lester makes herself give herself to Richard. 2. My hopes - I am a lover of bdsm. I would see either Lester or Byron delve Sarah into bdsm. I think Sarah would love some whips & chains. Or maybe a golden shower? Maybe she will start calling Byron Master since he owns he when she comes to Minnesota. Looking forward to people's thoughts.

TD40

Mark Albright

Agreed. I thought the second comment was wrong. Dan agreeing to *that* level of degradation just doesn't seem realistic.

MV

Your first comment is 💯 correct. Without Sarah and Dan being a loving couple and still having a bond, this becomes a different story. I personally read Sarah's degradating comments as being her believing she's pleasing Dan. He doesn't use the safe word, he has an obvious hard-on. The fact that Dan hasn't said Pineapple in that final scene, I regard as a fault. Dan doesn't start this story as a beta, and there must come a point, when he feels like he's genuinely losing Sarah, that he either uses it or steps in? Although they've become changed by this journey, I struggle to believe the original person isn't still inside each of them. Part of me thinks/hopes that as soon as Sarah realises she is genuinely hurting Dan, not turning him on, she will come to her senses.

MV

This is a great post. Very similar to my thinking.

MV

Great points! Yes, it is not an “either or” situation, and as we see in life, motivations and actions have many influences. Lester has certainly changed Sarah’s life in a way she never expected and she has to deal with her growing feelings for him. And she has to deal with her fast evolving sexual relationship with Dan. And I agree that she has manipulated Dan’s desires to her benefit, but also it seems to work for Dan.

Rjh200m

Mark Albright

Mark, Darrow, Royston - thanks for your responses to my question on the meaning of Sarah’s comment to Lester…..”you don’t know the first thing about me Lester”. All very good points. But I would like to offer a wider perspective. I think Sarah’s comment to Lester was her way of saying that what happens between them in the bedroom does not define her as a person. Yes, she loves the sex, Yes, she likes being submissive to Lester, and Yes, she is getting increasingly turned on about the humiliation of Dan. But this is just one part of her life and, within this context, it is just something she does because she finds it incredibly exciting (and liberating). It’s not an act with Lester and Byron, Vernon, etc., but it also does not define her as a person and she knows this. In other words, she is not out of control. I couple her response to Lester here with her comments at the end of the last chapter - “ Tonight had made a few things crystal clear to her…..Sarah would need to be the one to protect herself…..Men were like putty in her hands…..All the problems she was facing with Dan came down to men and their ideas of power. Byron, Richard – it didn’t matter. They were all the same.” We have spent a lot of time in this forum discussing the trajectory of Sarah, whether her behavior is out of control and whether she is on the road to total ruin. I now tend to think that she will ultimately prevail. This certainly does not mean that the wild sex will not continue, it probably will increase. But she has a bigger goal in mind. What is it? I think it could be the quest for financial stability/independence and professional success. She will gladly take the great sex, but she also wants to reach these overriding goals. Yes, the sexual adventures complicate her professional and personal life, but I think she gets this and is much more in control than we may think. And she will use her sexuality to help her achieve her goals. And Dan will continue to be a part of her life (although she may have a few surprises for him on the sexual front!) Anyway, I think it’s to the credit of Don and the TA story that we can all speculate to such a degree on where the characters and story are headed!

Rjh200m

Or he just cleans her up without anyone knowing, and it becomes his secret, eating away at him constantly, obsessing him. Every time he goes down on Sarah, he's thinking about it. Thinking how loose she was. Every time he has sex with Sarah, he's thinking about it, how much there was, how loose she was. He starts to think that even when he's in Sarah, Lester was there first, that Lester went deeper reaching places he couldn't, opened her wider than he ever could. He starts to feel Lester's presence in her pussy even with his cock in her, is she looser, more open, wetter, her body more responsive. When she comes is it for him, or is she thinking of Lester. And all the time, when he's kissing her, fucking, licking her, all he can think about is what it was like to lap up Lester's semen as it oozed from her ravaged pussy. No one else knows, but it haunts Dan, and he finds himself yearning for another opportunity, one that becomes irresistable.

Darrow

Rjh, I am an admirer of your posts normally, but I think Mark is right in this regard. Sarah has done that before with Lester on several occasions. She may enjoy a temporary victory, a battle won, ( as with the blowjob and throwing him out of her house in 19) but ultimately she loses the war. Lester gets back in the house and she submits to him in 20.

Royston smith

Dan seeing Sarah with open legs and Lester's dripping cum makes a very good scene for a cleanup, may be Dan cleans her up while she is still sleeping and while Dan is cleaning her up Lester peeks over and watches Dan secretly, later Lester lets Sarah know what Dan did

sean_1990

Denial. Not just a river in Egypt. I think she's finding her sexual adventures to be liberating. Lester was talking humiliation. She's react negatively to that. But there is some truth to this, she's much more sexually adventurous than either Lester or Dan realize, she's willing to go much further, she enjoys the power of it. Quite often, it feels less like Lester drawing her in, than simply giving her permission. Lester has moments where he fears he's created a monster.

Darrow

All, I have a question…when Lester and Sarah were having sex in the first scene of the chapter, he asked Sarah what she needed and she responded “your cock”. Then he said to her that it was more than that and he proceeded to tell her that “a beautiful princess” like her likes giving herself up to a guy like Lester, especially since she knows that he and Dan don’t get along, etc. He said that this makes her wet. Sarah then responded by saying “you don’t know the first thing about me Lester”. My question is should we read anything into her response? From my optic, Lester was right on point based on everything we have seen in previous chapters. Does Sarah have some hidden motivations that we are not yet aware of? Why would she so pointedly disagree with Lester’s assessment of her?

Rjh200m

Darrow - clearly Sarah has evolved in terms of her desire for Lester, it’s very clear that he, by far, excites and satisfies her the most. Question is whether she wants or needs the “more loving” sex with Dan, especially in light of the last scene in the chapter where there was clearly much more intimacy between Sarah and Lester.

Rjh200m

It may be the least exciting sex she has at the rate she is going!

Rjh200m

Just block the whiners. That's what I did.

Mark Albright

Forced cuckolding is a genre. Ive read tons of them on Lit. Idk why you're talking as if real world lifestyle choices should guide the storytelling. Thats not how fiction works. Dan and Sarah are not even in the official lifestyle. They didnt approach Lester to be their dom - he inserted himself as such. Also pointing out theres a formula isnt a sign of bad storytelling. All stories follow the formula of "hero gets into a situation, tries to solve it, fails and has to go back to the drawing board" Earlier on, I figured the chapter release meant it would have an episodic feel. Every month Lester would make a move on Sarah and push the story forward. Which it has. I also figured Don would use the slow burn progression and episodic format to explore some usual tropes - IE Sarah on her "wedding night" being the bride trope.

tim

To me, the darker the better. Lester is set up as a date rapist using a more measured approach to his most enticing prey. Thats much more interesting to me. Im terms of the plot point progression, its good enough to me. Ive had companies i worked for fuck with my paychecks and in fiction you can often dial events up to 11. Is it the most believable aspect of the story? Not particularly but its also a porn story so my need for iron clad plot points is meh. The example i gave a while ago was Dark Knight Rises. They tell Bruce he has no cartelage left in his knees... So he puts on a knee brace and is magically healed, even after the knee brace is lost. It makes no sense but adds drama. Thats a multi million dollar screenplay. If they can get away with it, then a story i found on Lit can have some wiggle room. In terms of Sarah's progression, most women Ive been with dont explore their sexuality. If i asked them their fantasies they would say they had none. Thats how I conceptualize Sarah. Her sex life was totally devouted to making Dan happy. Now for the first time she, her kinks are being catered to and explored. Its hard for her to process and she is getting lost in it. Dan isnt developed enough IMO. I dont like the extent he is sidelined so often but im hoping this chapter gets us closer to him being more involved and actually processing his feelings as he is confronted with the new reality. Depending on the ending, he should probably break down to Lesters victory. Or use the humiliation to propel himself forward and defeat Lester. We shall see. But all that to say - this is a solid story with great story progression/development. Commenting "this story sucks" as a few people do on occasion without any detail/constructive criticism are just pointless comments. Announcing youre leaving/not wasting any more money and then commenting on the next alpha cuz you "just had to know how much worse it could get" Yea. Okay. Sure. Lol Read for whatever reasons you want but dont act like youre enlightened while continuing to pay for something you claim to hate. Even the shit talkers preface that the story is well written so it is what it is. If its not your exact kinks, that sucks. Maybe Don will write something more to your taste in the future or he will continue writing what excites him and it wont align. Such is life.

tim

Well, it is nice of you to re-categorise your comments, even if it does seem a bit strange to apologise in advance if mocking was your intent. Now, could you please tell me which part of my comment gave you the idea that I felt singled out?

DrJensen

Good chapter, but can we please get finale to Detestable Liaisons as the next story? NC is ok but still months/years before getting to the “good part” while DL is right in the middle of conclusion.

Z

Gosh Doc, it's less "whining" and more "mocking." I find it slightly annoying but kind of hilarious. I'm sorry if you feel personally singled out and feeling the need to clumsily defend yourself. But I'm not that sorry, that's on you. Have a nice day.

Darrow

Indeed Darrow, what is the point of whining? It seems that your post is the singularly most whiny. This is a comment thread where people, you know, comment. If you do not like the comments, then don’t bother reading them.

DrJensen

Nothing personal. Good try, Pete. Better luck next time. You'll get the hang of it.

Darrow

Or maybe it’s just that Don wants to play both sides of the equation by keeping the is she /isn’t she speculation going. He added a throw away line in 20, which suggested she was taking precautions, but not enough to dampen speculation. Call me cynical, but isn’t this a good way to keep the pro and ante pregnancy factions happy? To me, if she does get pregnant that is the end of the story for obvious reasons. If she doesn’t we will have this endless speculation from the pro pregnancy crowd.

Royston smith

@Pete That's a very black and white and specific definition of the cuckold story genre and the term cuckold in general. Cuckold is actually a very broad term - "to make a cuckold out of him" for example is just a term for a man cheating with another man's wife. Not necessarily a BDSM fantasy, but usually with the man having some sense of dislike for the husband. So if a man takes another man's wife and he knows about it but stays in the relationship, especially if the other man becomes the main sexual partner, then the husband is a cuckold by the standard definition. Your definition of what cuckold is, is A definition but not THE definition. In TA, Dan is generally a willing participant, even if he has internal anxiety and reservations. So he is a willing cuckold for most intents and purposes, but definitely being cuckolded by all definitions. In TC, the husband is being blackmailed and drugged in order to let it happen, therefore he is being forced and isn't willing. So he would be a forced / unwilling cuckold by standard definitions. I can get what you are saying, you can certainly put TC into the blackmail/ non consent/ coercion category as well. But it is blackmail into cuckoldery rather than blackmail into sex, because the wife isn't being blackmailed and doesn't know about the blackmail. So in my mind that is a forced cuckold story, regardless if you believe that exists or not. People can have different opinions, but everything that can be done willingly can also be forced and it would be silly to think otherwise.

Gabriella J

I agree @Rjh300m It was an off the top of my head reason to downplay the pregnancy angle. But having said that, Lester has been manipulating women for sex for several years according to the story, and he hasn't got 20 kids running around that we know about. So it would make sense really. But maybe we just have to assume pregnancy is low risk without the explanation of why so we can enjoy the story without the pregnancy angle being at the forefront. Sarah is still playing along with the fantasy even though she thinks Lester is snipped, so removing the actual risk doesn't remove it from the fantasy play.

Gabriella J

DS has written Lester as a super villain bent on total corruption of Sarah. There is no indication that Dan or anyone else is going to rise up as a super hero. The reign of Lester will continue to romp going forward. Collateral damage be damn.

J Lewis

Geez, there's a whiny pack of virgins. Look Dudes, get a grip. #1 - The story is the story. Your particular fetish may or may not be catered to. Women can get pregnant very easily. And sometimes they don't get pregnant easily. You want something written to your fetish, write it yourself. The writer is going to write what the writer wants to write. If he writes something he doesn't want to write, because you asked for it, it's not going to be satisfying. #2 - The story is a wank story. You want literature, go read war and peace and see if you can stroke off to that. So enough with these endless complaints about characterization and story progression Hell, if he did what you wanted, you'd complain anyway. #3 - As a wank story, certain things go with the territory. Some characters are superhumanly endowed. Characters can have superhuman sex drives. And incredible orgasmic capacities. The truth is that some people actually do have amazing sex lives in real life. Get over it. #4 - Honest to god, I don't understand people who read a chapter, go 'this sucks.' Then continue to read the next ten chapters going 'this sucks' for each one. Get some therapy. I'm not singling out any person, I'm not attacking anyone specific. This is just general comments. If you feel it applies to you, then accept my apology. I don't mean no harm. But also, really, reconsider why you are sticking around if it's not working for you. What's the satisfaction in whining?

Darrow

A couple of additional things strike me as interesting. First, with both Byron and later with Lester, Sarah got very aroused at the humiliation of Dan. The thought of Dan being humiliated, of being Byron's bitch and telling him so, of Byron emasculating him, really got her off. Second, although she left Byron's feeling horny and wanting more, she wasn't interested in Dan at all. He wasn't the back up cock. She didn't ride him as soon as she got out. She barely talked about fucking Byron, and just kind of played low key, with almost no sexual energy at all. But the minute she's with Lester... Finally, sex with Lester, she absolutely got off again on Dan's humiliation and emasculation, that fueled some intense arousal. Maybe when Lester orders her to have sex with someone she hates, it will turn out to be Dan.

Darrow

I really hope that Sarah tries to play the love talk and everything else Dan just witnessed as well just talk only for it all to fall apart when Dan starts to question why he is being denied. Maybe Sarah even Denies Dan her pussy but avoids saying it by finishing him off with her hand or mouth(if that’s aloud) a couple times before Dan finally confronts her about it.

Mark

Lester having a low sperm count would be quite the story changer…..Lester’s ego and dominant demeanor with Sarah would take a huge hit; Sarah might find him much less alluring and exciting; and Dan would be rejuvenated in his battle with Lester for the most virile male in Sarah’s life!

Rjh200m

I think the whole will she get pregnant / wont she get pregnant / is she secretly on birth control thing being up in the air is detrimental to the story personally. I get it to a degree, but most negative comments on the last several chapters have been surrounding this and how unrealistic it is that she's not pregnant already, and it is distracting. Don just needs to find a reason why it isn't an issue and tie a bow around the situation to stop the speculation. Maybe Lester has a low sperm count. Maybe Sarah had complications from her previous birth that makes her getting pregnant again much more difficult. Whatever the reason, just make pregnancy a super low risk and let's put that to bed rather than making it an obstacle to the story. Just my current opinion of course. The story could go off in a direction that makes me change my mind on that.

Gabriella J

I think the blowjob for Byron was a necessity for the storyline of her trying to plant the bug/USB. Getting in there and getting under his desk etc. I'd have preferred her to have some self respect to stop it there and not get naked and fucked so easily though. I'd have also preferred her to have been able to plant it rather than it being a failure mission though.

Gabriella J

Also, I agree there's been plenty of surprises and plot twists along the way, whilst also keeping the plot on course. Plot twists that completely divert the story into a different story would be bad storytelling / writing.

Gabriella J

This story is 100% a hotwife / cuckold tale. As are all of Dons stories ultimately. TC is a slight outlier but still falls into the "forced cuckold" category. Anyone reading these stories thinking they're anything else is probably in the wrong place. The niche of these stories in this genre though is that the "bull" (for want of a better phrase) is always portrayed as a conventionally lesser man than the husband, when usually it's the other way around in this genre of stories.

Gabriella J

"its never about the bull. Its never about corruption" This is a "dark" hotwife/cuckold tale dude. Thats the point. Thats why the focus is on the bull and the corruption. You wanting it to be something else doesnt make it that. Its a great dark fantasy. Is it perfect? No. Am I expecting Don to deliver pulitzer prize winning literature? No.

tim

I thought this chapter was pretty good overall. I wasn't too sure when Sarah went off with Byron so freely, but it came back together with Lester exerting so much control in the end. There's scope for the next few chapters. Maybe Sarah denies Dan for a while. Lester going back to Middleton and the hospital. Lester getting her to fuck someone she hates - likely the new hospital CEO going off recent chapters. Obviously it's hard to keep everyone on board with a story that is 20+ chapters and counting. This story is a real commitment and is more aimed at avid readers rather than the usual sex story crowd, so I can see why people may be getting bored. I think when this story is all finished someone could probably trim all the fat and edit it into a succinct 12 chapter story whilst still hitting all the key points. But that is hard to do when it's being written and published in real time without that hindsight. I'm happy to stick with it but I understand why others may bow out. Paying for this patreon membership is certainly an expensive reading hobby in some regards.

Gabriella J

I’m waiting to see when Sarah misses her period. It’s not if she gets pregnant it’s when. Chapter 23 or 24 will be about the right time. Any opinions on whether she has the baby or an abortion? Will Dan grow a spine about this?

Todd

Thanks for your reply Pete. Good to know more about your thoughts on the story. However, I am still a little confused about your position. You say it’s not a hot wife tale or a cuckold tale but is this true? Sarah is a wife. She is hot. She is playing around with another, considerably larger cock, that happens to be attached to a “troll” (or bull as that is the term normally used for the Lester type I believe) who is dominating her. So there we have the normal triangle that appertains to a hot wife/cuckold tale. If it is not a hot wife/cuckold tale then what is your definition of the genre we are both reading? I get your point about keeping it real and I agree with you as per my points in the previous post, but Sarah’s corruption, to take just one aspect of the story you say makes it unrealistic (and means it is not a hot wife tale, if I understand you correctly? ) is something Lester sees in her very early on, as j. Lewis has ably pointed out in his earlier “Prophecy” post. I believe Don very adeptly develops this tendency for Sarah to want to display herself to men and Lester exploits it. He then goes on to exploit her desire to be dominated and to experience other cocks than his. So the corruption arc is there from chapter 1 if you go back and read it. It is just that now, as you say, it may gave been overdone a tad. Again, I don’t agree there are no surprises or plot twists. The accidental pushing of Sarah onto Lester’s cock in 7, via Jesse’s texts was a plot twist/surprise. Jesse’s re-introduction in 15 certainly caught me by surprise. The Peter plot twist/the cash introduction/the stranger in the carpark/the shopping mallblowjob/ the nerds. Also, Dan putting Lester in his place on two occasions. I could go on. I don’t think though we are too far apart though, as I agree with you we don’t want phoned in cliched writing/plots. That’s why I don’t like DL and am yet to be convinced by NC, which seems like a cliched story waiting to happen. What attracted me to T A was its distinctiveness.

Royston smith

Oh for fucks sake, can we please have a break from Don Silver imitators on here!! I was being very patient but I am at breaking point now. I don’t want to read pale imitations of Don. I pay for the real thing, why would I want to read drivel from those not fit to tie his shoelaces!!!!!

Royston smith

Mark Albright

From Lester the Prophet: CH1: Lester says to himself, “I’m going to fuck her.” CH2: Lester pictured his end goal. Taking Sarah willingly on his dirty bed. He would pull her deep into his web and she would be his. She will moan his name. She would milk the cum from his cock. He would impregnate her. CH5: I am going to take her from you, dumbass. You won’t recognize Sarah by the time I’m done with her. I point out these “prophecies” only to point out to those disappointed on where the story seems to be heading…you should not be surprised. It’s been telegraphed for quite awhile. For those not disappointed, enjoy the journey.

J Lewis

Well said Royston.

Rjh200m

You know Pete ( and this is also addressed to Achilles and other negative posts) I think you have a point to a certain extent. I myself, although loving the story still, am a little worried that it will degenerate to the point where Dan and Sarah have no agency at all. Sarah, in particular, needs to recover her mojo at work and show more of her defiant side where Lester is concerned. I loved her being presented as a strong woman with a strong and distinctive personality and don’t want to completely see that portrayal of her disappear. I also did not like that Dan just let Sarah go off with Byron without a word. Even Jesse was indignant that he had done so. I also cannot see Sarah loving Lester. It just doesn’t ring true. Some of the wilder speculation on here of what Lester should do to Sarah also leaves me cold. However, these caveats aside, I am still a huge fan of the series, as all on here will know, and enjoy each chapter as it comes out. I think you are wrong that Don is just influenced by the majority opinion. As all insiders will know Don rarely alters his basic storyline in response to insider feedback. I have only known him do so once and that was more of a structure thing rather than story alteration. I also think you should give us some indication of how you think the story should develop, instead of just telling us how it shouldn’t develop. It is a hot wife tale after all, so part of the dynamic is Sarah becoming corrupted by Lester and Dan succumbing to his fetish and allowing it to happen. How would you have the tale develop? Do you want Sarah to return to being a loving mother and wife with no kinks at all? Wouldn’t that be boring and fly in the face of the genre you are reading? My own preference is for Don to continue to develop the multiple storylines he has introduced, as just reading about Lester fucking and trying to breed Sarah and nothing else was beginning to get boring. I love the dare angle and his threat to make her fuck someone she hates, as again that introduces different angles to the story and is hot for me. So come on step forward and tell us what you want to see rather than just criticising, all you nay sayers.

Royston smith

My favorite chapter thus far. It’s where the story logically needs to go. I think the dynamic is finally setting into place where Dan realizes he can’t stop any of this, because Sarah is now the one who needs it, and he can’t tell her no. In turn, Sarah is being corrupted and manipulated into becoming dependent on Lester physically and financially. Some of the story is far fetched but it doesn’t bother me- this is supposed to be fantasy.

CrazyKidd

Pretty impressive!

Rjh200m

Possible opening scene for Chapter 23….. Dan awoke on the chair in the living room and looked over at Sarah who was also getting up….”How are you feeling Sarah?” “Hey Dan, I feel like shit, I am so exhausted and I am stiff and achy from this couch. I really need a good nights sleep.” “Me too” Dan responded, “how about we go to my room, get into bed and get a good night’s rest?” Dan noticed a flicker of hesitation in Sarah’s eyes. “Baby, can I ask a big favor?” Sarah said in a low whisper. “Sure, anything” Dan responded. “Can I sleep in Lester’s bed tonight?” “What???” Dan said, his voice cracking slightly. “Yes, baby, I am so tired and desperately need to rest. Your bed is so cramped and lumpy, and it is impossible for me to sleep without tossing and turning all night. Lester’s bed is so much bigger than yours. And it is so comfy and warm. And his sheets feel so good against my skin. I promise that nothing will happen with Lester, I just need to sleep. And tomorrow morning, I will come by and we can make love like we used to do.” Is this ok, boo? “Well….Sarah” Dan stuttered while at a loss for words. “I am not sure how to respond, but I guess I understand why you are asking. You do look like you need a good night’s rest and I want to do what’s best for you…. so, I guess it is ok…I trust you completely and I love you so much” Dan couldn’t help but notice the quick sparkle in Sarah’s eyes. “Thank you, baby! Sarah said, “You are the best!” Sarah then got up, gave Dan a quick kiss on the cheek, and headed down the hallway to Lester’s room, totally naked….with her bra, soaked thong and sexy outfit remaining on the floor near the couch. From his chair, Dan watched her open Lester’s door and then heard her say “Lester, can I sleep in your bed tonight?” Then he heard the door close, followed by the faint click of the door lock. Dan then got out of the chair, gathered up Sarah’s stuff, and headed to his room. Once in bed, he realized how taken aback he was by Sarah’s request. At first, he was not sure how to react, but he did not want to say no. He took Sarah at her word that nothing would happen, especially after the marathon session between her and Lester just a few hours ago. And he did know that his bed was not the most comfortable and Sarah definitely looked very tired. So he agreed to her request….but he wanted to talk with Sarah in the morning about everything that has happened and how they can move forward together. Dan was also exhausted, physically and emotionally, and quickly was on the verge of falling asleep. Just as he faded into sleep, the last thing he heard was Sarah’s familiar seductive voice through the thin wall that separated his room from Lester’s – “….Put that huge cock inside me Daddy, I want you to fuck me all night….”

Rjh200m

"Look, for now I need to keep Lester happy, for God's sake, he is my boyfriend and I did promise him. I'm sure you can get some relief on your own, maybe Lester will let me help. But right now I'm going to keep my boyfriend happy." "What about your husband?" "My husband likes it too, he gets off on me and my boyfriend, so right now it's a win, win, win for everybody."

Michael Haase

"I can't Dan, Lester says I can't make love to anyone but him for now" "But I'm your husband." "Let me talk to Lester, I think I can convince him." "Unbelievable, you're asking Lester for permission to have sex with your husband?" "You heard Lester, he's upset I fucked Byron without his consent. I don't want to make him extra mad by doing something with you right now, so, for now, I'm exclusive with Lester. Come on it's just until I convince him to let me take care of you, he is my boyfriend after all and I did promise him.

Michael Haase

This was literally the hottest chapter yet love the loyal dedicated wife falling and being corrupted by that creeps cock.

Alicia Peters

Yes, loving humiliation is integral. Denial can be an option, Sarah can be the keyholder, with Lester's permission. Dan needs to earn his release, when Sarah is not in Chicago, Dan's ability to masturbate will be restricted. Dan will be obliged to treat Lester nice, or he may forbid Sarah from unlocking him, Dan may be asked to assume some household chores in the apartment and at home as part of "Good Behavior". Sarah's tease options increase, she's careful but learns Dan loves her discipline and tease. The chastity device has sensors that can detect attempted erections; Sarah can see exactly what excites Dan via the log on the Chastity device web page that Lester and Sarah set up. The screen shows locked status, how long it's been locked and when the next release is scheduled. It has a GPS tracker to follow Dans location and a skin temp monitor to verify Dan's ability to continue being restricted, green for no issues, red for rash or chafing alert. The release option allows tube removal, a full erection and climax is possible, but the retainer loop stays connected around the testicles. If the wearer is allowed a 1 hour release, after the hour the retaining loop will send a slight shock and audible beep every 15 minutes, nothing severe, but the wearer soon realizes he has no option but to replace the tube and lock it. The web channel set up for the chastity device also allows the Admin to invite other guest as view only participants. The ability to anonymously invite others is an unbelievable humiliation for Dan, but as Sarah discovers via the failed erection log, Dan is excited by it. Dan can not hide, will Sarah let him out, will he ever masturbate again. Wow, what a fun game.

Michael Haase

The foundation of the story is Dan's cuckhold fetish and Sarah embracing the fantasy and pushing the experience. Sarah's connection with Dan and her love is a basic tenet. Besides Lester's big cock, Dan's reaction to each incident turns Sarah on and heightens each experience. IMO, Dan needs to remain an integral part of the story or it loses its essence. Likewise, Sarah's appeal is her loving wife and mother appearance, if she becomes nothing more than a cock whore the story is over, Maintaining the story's foundation is the only way for it to continue with the same intrigue.

Michael Haase

Are you deluded Mark!! Lol!!

Royston smith

No Lester Tells her to stay bent over the table so he can look at it, he slapped her ass and told her stay there. He walks around the front of her and pulls his cock out suck it. Then he looks at the tattoo guy and tells him would you take a fuck for payment? Tattoo guy says hell yeah. While she sucking his cock, see baby you can pay for anything with that pussy.

FU

Just finished reading some comments before moving on..story itself is truly over..no reason to spend anymore money....take care

Mike Kogel

Since Sarah purposely didn’t make Byron cum quickly, would love a scene where she purposely makes Dan cum quickly and she can move on to Lester which is her favorite cock.

ojapa O

She was concerned about Byron cumming inside her for the same reason she was initially concerned about Lester cumming inside her - loyalty to Dan. But now it is loyalty to Lester. But she will let it happen with Byron.

Rjh200m

Mark Albright

Oh no, remember how disgusted she was by the homeless guy leering at them through the fence. I think it’s the janitor, somehow Lester got him a job so he would do his bidding. Now she’s going to get boned in her office by him.

FU

I’m thinking things about this so-called birth control or lack there of. 1. I think that she had a permanent IUD implanted and is not ready to tell anybody because of the sexual thrill. 2. Maybe she decided to be really careful, cause she didn’t like taking birth control and didn’t trust Dan to get a vasectomy, so she had her tubes tied after giving birth to their second daughter and she’s never told Dan. So at the time she never thought she would be in this position, but now makes the most of it, as she can tease him all she wants, because not only is it a big sexual turn on for Dan, but for Lester as well. 3. Or three she actually quit taking the birth control after Dan did get a vasectomy and taking chances with Lester, but Lester is sterile because of his obesity and other health issues. Otherwise, why would she be so concerned about Byron coming in her? 4. Then again maybe she’s got a purse full of after morning pills and is not really taking chances at all.

FU

But she did not let him cum inside her pussy, so there is hope for her yet!

Rjh200m

By this criteria, Lester would make Sarah fuck Dan, since he seems to have the smallest dick of all the characters in this story!!!

Rjh200m

I think Sarah would fuck Jesse in a heartbeat for the reasons you mentioned….and also because he is younger and probably has an in shape body. Something different from Lester and Byron. Also, does Lester know everything that you mentioned about Sarah’s thoughts on Jesse? Maybe Lester assumes Sarah hates Jesse because he tricked her into going into Lester’s room. Perhaps Lester sets it up with Jesse and then is aghast to discover that Sarah goes wild for it. Another example of Sarah slipping out of Lester’s control!

Rjh200m

For Sarah to hate being fucked by a guy, he just needs to have a small dick. Otherwise she could get fucked by any scumbag, she would enjoy it as long as he has a big cock.

Pascal

It’s Richard. But Jesse is probably in line.

Jerry Crabbe

Absolutely agree. Bravo that gentleman.

Royston smith

So, is there somebody Lester is thinking of when he says this: “It’s going to be your punishment,” Lester growled, “For fucking someone behind my back. I’m going to make you fuck somebody you hate to teach you a fucking lesson.”The clear implication here is that it is someone Sarah already knows. “ Somebody you hate” is in the present tense and implies the here and now. So, of the current list of characters we know of in the story, who could it be? Ok,lets go through them 1 by 1. First, Jesse. Actually, I think Sarah is quite intrigued by Jesse and wonders if he has some hidden talents. Remember in 15, this: “Jesse’s tongue on her neck, his body pressing against hers. The feeling of his hardening cock pressing into her ass. Her hand on his crotch. She hated that she now had some idea of the size of Jesse’s cock - he was not small”. Then in the current chapter she says that she wishes Dan could land a job like Jesse’s ( remember how she had a similar thought when Lester landed the £250,000 hospital contract) and backs it up by implying he would be a fertile (big cock?)partner for her with this phrase: “Jesse, do you know what they say about men who dance really well?” Jesse looked like a deer in the headlights, “No…” “Hmmmm,” Sarah said, gazing Jesse up and down, “Too bad.” So she has managed to get in financial security and the size of his dick in 2 sentences. 2 things she prizes. So, in my opinion she does not hate Jesse, far from it. She is kind of curious about what he has got to offer her. Just how big is his cock? Does it rival Lester’s? Dan certainly despises him, so he fits her profile for someone to tease him with. Someone to fuck whilst her husband watches. The problem now is just how does Jesse get his chance with his ideal woman? Lester won’t want to use Jesse as his pawn anymore. He wasn’t waiting ready to be used like Lester expected. He wants to burn him to the ground. So that route is blocked. Dan has frightened him with threatening to tell Byron about Peter. If Jesse was just a little brighter he might figure out that Dan probably wouldn’t do this as Byron would want to know what Dan’s involvement was. How does Dan know about Peter? But Jesse is not bright and it does not look like Byron will want to share Sarah either. So that route is blocked. It could be though that Sarah is just too curious in the end. After all Jesse is certainly a Sarah worshipper and she likes being worshipped. Will she take matters into her own hands? Will she slip off to the powder room and give him the look/ gesture that says “follow me big boy”. I am not sure, but I tend to think Don Silver may be curious about Jesse too. He has certainly allowed him to come close in 6 and 15. Will he allow Jesse to get his just deserts in the end? Will the underdog win through? Only Don knows. Next, the Nerds.

Royston smith

Byron is by far the most hateful and unsympathetic character in this story. And seeing Sarah give in to him so easily makes her extremely contemptible and as unexciting as a urinal.

Pascal

Oh, one more thing, Don. Those outfits may have inspired the outfits for Sarah and while they are very pretty ladies, they are not voluptuous enough to be Sarah especially in the derrière department.

FU

“You taste like ass”. Yeah do you like the taste of your own ass Lover? The story is about a man and wife that have totally succumbed to their sexual fantasies, and seem willing to pay any price to satisfy it, even if they are being somewhat reluctantly pulled along and into the debauchery. I think Lester talks to Sarah about what happened and why she was alone with Byron in his office. Sarah tells him all about trying to plant the device for Dan and she just felt caught and couldn’t get out without giving into him and giving away what she was trying to do. Sarah lets it slip that Dan has another computer, Lester hatches a plan so he can plant a bug on it and Dan will send it wittingly or unwittingly to the Lincoln Group. Now Lester has an in at the Lincoln group. He will tell Sarah that he is going to take care of things that she is not to go with Dan to Minnesota. Lester is also going to find a way and places to have Sarah alone even with Dan in Chicago, he will go to their home and have her there and then when she is supposed to come to Chicago, he will have her there. She won’t be allowed to fuck Dan even if Dan goes home, Lester will have sophisticated surveillance in the home so he will know, and then he will punisher and she will accept it, because in this last slide into debauchery, Lester just got control of her soul. As chapters continue, we will see Sarah in multiple different sexual situations Lester will put her in and for most of them, Dan will be allowed to be there, but all he is going to be able to do is masturbate. I think the most evil thing that Lester could do in front of Dan after working on Sarah‘s ass and making her work on her own ass, butt plugs and small dildos, is to finally get his cock in her ass. Dan will have to watch his wife take it and finally succumb to it and even have orgasms from it. Once she has succumbed to that he will turn her out and make good money selling her and selling the videos. Any feelings for hearth, home and motherhood have long been drained from her. Dan will go home to raise his kids having to depend on his in-laws and his parents for support. Dan‘s only sexual enjoyment will be masturbating and watching videos online of Sarah. @DonSiver well at least that’s how I would write it, but can’t wait to see how you finish out this story.

FU

Not specific to this chapter, but I was thinking about how some readers were put out by Sarah seeming to have had birth control plans this whole time, like some deus ex machina to cover a plot hole. But with the level of suspension of disbelief that I feel makes the story most enjoyable, what if she was actually hooked more and faster than even Ledter realized, and her idea of "being careful" had morphed a while back from "I'll secretly get back on the pill, just in case something unexpected happens" into "Lester's snipped, so why waste money we don't have on pills, and I'll avoid risky days to be extra careful" and then into "it's still three days til my period, it'll be fine". Pretty soon, she'll slip further, landing on, say, "I should be ovulating, but it will turn Dan on so much, and it's not like Lester can suddenly get unsnipped, right?"

Allan Harrison

Lester would certainly be angry and try to reestablish control of Sarah. Sarah would have to turn into a referee between Lester and Dan!

Rjh200m

Good analysis! This is why to me the heart of this story is how do Dan and Sarah evolve in the face of all the outside influences they face, the principal one being Lester. You are right, Dan seems to have greater self awareness and is working hard to solve their financial issues, but ultimately what will he do? Will he try to course-correct their marriage and regain some normalcy by moderating his and Sarah’s sexual behavior? Or will he “go with the flow” as he has been doing as both he and Sarah basically encourage each other’s behavior? Or will he just give up and try to start anew? Sarah seems to just be delving deeper and deeper into her sexual desires, with no ability so far to recalibrate.

Rjh200m

How about Dan agreeing to the three way with Lester and Sarah, as it has been alluded to in the past by Sara thinking it would be with her husband, and as Sara is blowing Lester and Lester thinks he is fully in control, Dan comes in behind Sara and takes her anal cherry just to spite Lester, Sara would love the domination and surprise while Lester would have to endure as Sarah would be reluctant to stop as she did during her last threesome.

Fuzzy Shark

Lester was and is thinking of ways to have Sarah's children eliminated. This is not that kind of story.

Jerry Crabbe

Good point!

Rjh200m

Lester has said several times to Sarah that a third person will not be Dan….but per your scene above, Lester can further humiliate Dan in a three way with Sarah….Dan is fucking Sarah from behind and she is moaning, and Dan feels like some of the magic has returned….but then Lester asks Sarah whose cock makes her feel better….and she responds “yours does”, then she turns to Dan and asks him to pull out, that she needs Lester’s cock so that she can orgasm as only Lester makes her do…..I can see Lester doing this three way despite his previous reluctance to do so if it means humiliating Dan further…question is how does Dan react? Is he so far down the cuck path that he just accepts it and falls back in the chair to watch? Or does he try to regain his pride and wife? Perhaps even more interesting is what does Sarah do if Dan hesitates in pulling out? Does she pull away from him and jump on Lester’s dick and tell Dan to watch?

Rjh200m

Finally Lester has taken total control of Sarah and her sex life- which appears has become an overwhelming driving force in here day to day life. I want to see him follow through on his threat to make her fuck someone she hates as punishment for fucking Bryon. I want to see Lester fuck with Sarah’s mind, and continue to lead her further down the path to real depravity. Each sexual encounter just increases Lester’s control over her. When she eventually gets whored off by Lester, he should video the whole show and make Dan watch it! Make him jack off to his wife getting fucked like a slut, and video that as well. Then Lester can show it to Sarah and she can see how pathetic he actually is. Lester needs to continue to breed and reconstruct Sarah into the obedient slut he wants her to be! Keep up the good work.

Aj

Complete wildcard guess here….but he makes Sarah wear the wedding veil when he makes her blow the homeless guy through the back window of his SUV!!

Rjh200m

I think that after the last scene where Dan did nothing, Lester will get more aggressive and not worry so much about Dan attacking him. So, yes, you can see Lester rubbing it in by placing the ring on Sarah’s finger in front of the Dan.

Rjh200m

Well said

Rjh200m

Wedding rings go away to be replaced by matching rings of any style for Sarah and Lester…..Sarah just puts the wedding ring and engagement ring on a ring holder on the dresser in her bedroom, Dan sees this and the new ring she has on and realizes what is happening. No explanation from Sarah is necessary.

Rjh200m

What if Lester replaces her rings with some costume jewelry or some obvious bullshit and Dan can't get a straight answer about where the rings he gave her are? I think it would be fitting for a bull this dominant to mark her outwardly so that everyone understands she's his. I'm not crazy about the idea of tatoos ar scarring but I could see the ring serving this purpose.

Jerry Crabbe

I really enjoy some of the subtle hints that DS puts in his writing. E.g in CH21 Sarah moans, “I, I love your cock” to Lester. It gave the tease that she caught herself from spilling the truth. That hesitation is evidence that it wasn’t just sex talk. In CH22, she says, “I, I love you.” The truth spills outs. Now that the dam has broken, Arc 3 as mentioned by Jerry Crabbe (Grandeman) on Discord has begun. Anxious for CH23 to see how Don accepts all this.

J Lewis

Agreed RJ. I think they both know what Sarah is saying is just window dressing for Dan. She has now become a hyper sexual sex goddess, wanting as much tribute from cocks as possible. As far back as ch 8 she was craving Lester’s cock, whilst masturbating in the bath. She has now realised that she can have “any man” (ch 20) so why not? In the scene with Byron she loves that she has made him hard and he wants her desperately. She loves sucking cock, the taste of it. She wants to indulge herself, she is every man’s dream woman so why not take advantage of it? Dan’s fetish gives her the perfect excuse. She will manipulate Dan’s desires to get what she wants. She is too far down the road of luxuriating in her sexual goddess status now,whether Dan objects or not.

Royston smith

I read chapter 21 after skipping a couple of chapters as I found the story going stale and reading some of the comments here I will not read chapter 22. It started out great, but now it is getting too much for me. While it was nice with an extra person having sex with Sarah, but the rimming threw me off, even if it did paint a clear picture of her escalating depravity. There are only so many variations to the theme, and I find the chapters repetitive. Now we can expect full sex with a third man in a few chapters, then a handful of chapters more some anal and who knows maybe we end up with a DP scenario and/or impregnation. The plot is becoming way too convoluted and far-fetched for my liking, and the almost magical powers Lester has over Sarah make little sense to me. Without any likeable characters or captivating plot and too much repetition, I will skip the next two or three chapters and see if it catches up. I hope to see a new instalment of Neighborhood Encounter, which seems very promising.

DrJensen

"Dan, it's not just sissy's who wear these, Cuckholds wear these too. It heightens the fantasy. Look, little Dan is all excited about the thought. Little Dan never lies."

Michael Haase

“Was there a way for Dan to lose the girls while out in public? Two birds with one stone. Girls are gone. Sarah hates Dan. I would be her only comfort. That was an interesting idea that Lester needed to think about more. Surely it wouldn’t be impossible to arrange.” Bit from Lester’s thoughts in ch 19. Now “loosing” the girls while out in public could mean a lot of things, but having to “arrange something suggests some level of removing the kids by external forces. Mayne not kidnapping, but definitely holding them, so dan can’t find them.

Jekyll

Yeah, similar thought. Building some off-grid "subdivision" and being the company with the killer instinct and like-minded amoral employees, there's no way they would have a lightweight security system. Perhaps this is a mistake by Lester? Perhaps he thought he penetrated the system, when in fact he actually alerted the mysterious powers within TLG that someone was attacking them. TLG doesn't seem to be a company that would simply ward off an attack, but would heavily retaliate on the perpetrator. After all, if it was that easy to penetrate the system, wouldn't Peter and his clients have already done it?

Sigma

I don't think he wants them kidnapped, just out of her life. Drop them off with the grandparents, or leave them with Dan, or just send them into an orphanage. He wouldn't have them eliminated unless there was no easier option.

Darrow

The cheat code is not just for Lester to manage the timing of his seductions of Sarah to prevent Dan from getting violent or stopping everything, but also to use Sarah to say the right things to Dan at the right times. Lester is playing both masterfully. During the last scene of the chapter when Lester takes Sarah in the kitchen, Sarah looks at Dan with the “are you ok with this or do you want me to stop” look….i am not buying this anymore after 21 chapters of non-stop fucking between Sarah and Lester. She does not want to stop and certainly doesn’t want Dan to tell her to stop. I think her look is more along the lines of “I certainly don’t want to stop and I know you don’t want me to stop”!!

Rjh200m

Sooooo…since DS is a master of pulling back into the story subtle incidents from previous chapters when does Lester give Sarah her wedding veil to wear again?

J Lewis

Getting control of Lincoln Group’s IT system could be challenging if they are as secretive as they make out to be and they have good cyber security. This is where Lester may need some help to implant devices on machines in HQS. This is where Sarah comes in. With Lester’s knowledge, he could direct her to the right places. And given her new very close relationship with Byron, she probably could get access to places no one else could. So, Lester working from the outside and Sarah working from the inside - a formidable team! No need for Dan, other than to just do the work they have hired him to do.

Rjh200m

I could be wrong, but I don't think cages are in the future.

Jerry Crabbe

Lester is supposed to know who Jesse is, just not to the degree that she might be fucking him on their trip. Only Jesse knew that until he told Dan.

Jerry Crabbe

And fun little observation - Lester has figured out what Dan's "cheat code" is. Stick a fork in. Dan's done like dinner.

Darrow

There've been a lot of posts speculating in future chapters how Dan can be further cucked and humiliated. While some of that is sure to happen, I don't believe Dan is ultimately going to end up powerless. How he ends up might not be happily ever after, but I don't think he's as out-of-control as many believe. The difference between Dan and Sarah is that while both know what's happening to them, Dan's cuck fetish and Sarah's being controlled fetish, Dan is actually the one who is aware of his weakness and vulnerability. Sarah is not. Certainly Sarah at times considers why she's doing whatever but it happens to be while she's blowing Byron, for example. Compare that to Dan who realizes when he's getting a hard-on and struggles to control it, and at times has succeeded. In many of those times he's thinking he shouldn't do it, even fights against it successfully. Further reasoning on this, Dan is actively working his plan to get out of Chicago and build his own business. He's taking positive steps and working the plan. Sarah is stuck at the hospital, more of a victim of circumstance vulnerable to the demands and influences of superiors. It may be messy, the marriage might not survive, but Dan seems to be the one who has recognized the danger from Lester and others and happens to be the only one working to get out of this problem. Sarah's a ride-along who's enjoying the situation and getting in deeper. One could say they both got into this undesirable situation by not controlling themselves with Lester, true. But its because of Lester they're in so many problems: Lester basically blackmailed them in exchange for rent; Lester's hacking put her in a tough spot in the hospital; Lester's fucking her led to Jesse's knowing, Lester pulling in Jesse as a tool, and Jesse tying in Byron who is now blackmailing Dan. Sarah has been a willing participant in all of this, at times putting Dan in a tough spot. But Dan's been the one to come up with alternatives and solutions in-spite of his fetish weakness. I believe Dan will somehow extricate at least himself from all of this, at some price of course. Sarah's in so deep I'm not sure she really wants out off this.

Sigma

One small observation: Lester, as per usual, made a mistake. He mentioned Jesse and asked if Jesse fucked her. I don't think he's supposed to know who Jesse is. As far as Dan and Sarah are concerned, Jesse was a total stranger to Lester. Some rando that he had Sarah dance with at the bar. Totally suprised it was someone they knew. Dan picked up on it a little, but was too cockblinded to really register. It's possible Dan will forget about it. He's got a lot to process. But sooner or later he could remember, and if he does, pieces will fall into place. If Lester and Jesse know each other, the thing at the bar was a set up. If Lester knows enough to ask about Jesse, then he knows at least something about Lincoln Group and the arrangements. How much does Lester know and when did Lester find out? How much of what's going on is Lester's set up? Jesse is a very weak player. He's if Lester interrogates Jesse, he'll spill a lot, particularly if Lester dangles Sarah. Can Lester lie his way out? A couple of ways easily. I think Lester realizes that it was Jesse, not a drunken Dan, that sent Sarah to Lester's bed for the first time. So they know that Jesse knows who Lester is, after all, Jesse spilled about Lester to Byron, and Byron mentioned it. All Lester has to say is that Jesse called up Lester and talked to him because he was snooping on Dan and Sarah and that he bragged to Lester about what he was going to do. Plausible, close enough to the truth, that they might buy it. Alternately, this is the second best lie - Lester can say after the incident of the ring, he looked up Jesse because he was curious. Maybe even spoke to him. Also plausible. But if Dan interrogates Jesse, he's weak enough and stupid enough, he'll spill Lester's information. And that's pretty damning. Lester's lies might not work. So he either figures this out ahead of time and preps Jesse with the cover. Or he gets blindsided and sticks to his guns. The best part - even if Lester is exposed, Sarah is so cock-crazed and Dan so cuck-bludgeoned it might not even make a difference. "Sure, I used Jesse to get revenge after you manhandled me, so you'd know what it's like. So what? Sarah, suck my cock now."

Darrow

posted her pics in the chat lounge

whiterhino

posted her pics in the chat lounge

whiterhino

Great chapter and update from the alpha draft. There are a few scenes I would love to see play out... * Lester cumming on Sarah's wedding ring. * Lester/Dan/Sarah threesome where Sarah shows her preference to Lester..maybe she jerks Dan off but allows Lester to cum in her. * A setup where Dan has to wear a condom but Lester doesn't..maybe Sarah gets sick and has to get off the pill for a bit .. * A scene where Sarah makes Dan cum early so she can be with Lester. Great story, really interested to see how Sarah downplays this or where it goes..

Bob James

Yes. Even I want ti see those breasts.

Pr

My signature photo is the first outfit that Byron asks her to take her top off to grope her perky tits

whiterhino

"Lester wants you to wear this." "I'm not wearing a chastity cage like some sissy" "Lester won't let me fuck you unless you make him happy. he'll never let me fuck you if you don't put it on" "But, if I'm wearing this I won't be able to fuck you" "We can take it off silly....if your good he'll let you out" "So, Lester's permission is the only way you'll fuck me?" "That's what Lester says, besides, if you're not getting any you'll be beating off all the time, I don't want a limp dick. Put the cage on, keep Lester happy and you'll get out ready for action." "I don't believe this is happening, how could you do this?" "Come on baby, it might be fun, I think you like denial, it's perfect for our fantasy. It's a really nice device, web based, sensors so we know where you're at and there isn't any physical issues, a timer that can be unlocked anytime the admin presses the button, we can check your status anytime, anywhere." "We, status?" "Yeah, Lester and me and of course you, will be invited. Status, you know how long it's been locked, when's the next release date, how many erections you've tried to have and if your skin temp is normal, no rash or chafing, it's top of the line." "Who is going to control the unlock option" "I think Lester wants to do that, at least at first." "No way" "Oh, come on baby, I'll talk to Lester about the device, maybe he'll let me be the "Keyholder. Just remember, if you put it on and engage the lock, you'll need either me or Lester to unlock it." "I stared at the cage, my cock rock hard"

Michael Haase

So,any IT nerds/ experts out there know what potential levers/ power Lester could establish over TLG based on this passage:- “He opened his computer console again and rechecked the validation he had reviewed a few minutes earlier. Jesse’s company had been easy to breach access to. They used a common suite of tools with known vulnerabilities. He began downloading all of their communications that mentioned Jesse or The Lincoln Group, and he would soon find out exactly what was going on. Lester uploaded a package to Jesse’s work computer. Once Jesse unknowingly accessed it, the file would worm its way into his computer, allowing Jesse’s machine to be a slave to his. Lester could use Jesse’s work computer as a relay to push into The Lincoln Group’s network without it being traced back to him”. Even if he does get into the LG’s system what could he do that would sabotage it, or at least enable him to influence what they can/cannot do? Most companies are heavily dependent on their IT systems nowadays and struggle to operate if it goes down or suffers a cyber attack, so I presume Lester could cause some trouble for them. However, establishing control over a provincial hospital is not the same as going up against a multinational. Could he be the unlikely saviour of Dan and Sarah?

Royston smith

To ARC no I didn’t miss it Lester shows he can decide who and when Sarah can fuck and decides to throw Dan a crumb before taking Sarah to bed

Larry

Personally, from here I think Dan has limited options. 1. He can reclaim Sarah, much like he did after throwing Lester out of the house. Fucking her with the anger and harshness that she now gets off on. (I don’t see Dan doing this, I don’t think he had it in himself to maintain that level of anger, not is it his cup of tea. Plus, Sarah’s drifted even further now.) 2. He fully gives in and just goes for the ride. Coming to terms that his relationship has changed forever and it’s likely Sarah will be spending more time and doing more and more things different men. (I also don’t see Dan going this route. Be may, but there is still a fire in him and once he finds out about the manipulations he’ll break out of this weird trance.) 3. Dan can’t handle it, knows sarah ain’t going to change and he leaves taking the kids. (Something along these lines is my best guess.)

Jekyll

Great chapter, it seems like Sarah is really falling for Lester hard and is going to start to deny Dan. I don’t know why but this chapter really made me want to see real life breasts that Don might be drawing inspiration from. He makes her sound stunning.

Mark

Agreed

DrJensen

I find myself in the minority, but here goes: Yes the title is TOXIC ATTRACTION and I would find it not realistic for this story to have a nice happy ending, all sunshine and rainbows. Lester has succeeded in his stated goals. Sarah has fallen to unrecoverable depths after the last chapter. But Dans future is not a zero sum of complete loss of everything including his self respect to Lester and Sarah and Byron and every other dick that comes along. He has shown he can recover forcefully. The conversation to follow should be intense between Sara and Dan. If Sara is in LOVE with Lester, game over, divorce on horizon and Sarah on decline until she realizes what she lost to her addiction if she ever does. Dan can tell her to raise the boy she has promised Lester and Dan will take the girls. Ugly divorce collateral damage every where. Dan has to call her out and be willing to walk away at this point. Lester will eventually grow tired of Sarah, it's in his nature as well as being pure evil, . Sarah years down the road has to eventually find it harder and harder to satisfy her kink as the newness and excitement wear off. Just rooting for Dan to maintain a little self respect

Fuzzy Shark

I think the difference with Sarah is that Lester really wants for her to love him and choose him over Dan. And to be attracted to him as a whole person. This is what he has not had his whole life. And whatever acceptance he got, he had to blackmail and coerce. He struggles, however, with developing a real intimate relationship with Sarah, sure he uses this as a way to manipulate Sarah but it does not come easy for him and he is probably incapable of a close ongoing relationship. But as of yet, he has not reached his objective of Sarah choosing him over Dan.

Rjh200m

Amazing chapter! So much to discuss…obvious key developments for me are the explicit humiliation of Dan that Sarah participated in with Byron and Lester; Sarah’s complete submission to Byron even after she realized there was no hope of planting the USB drive; Sarah’s longing for Lester, not Dan, after getting fucked by Byron; and Dan’s complete inability to counter Lester during the last scene. During the last scene with Lester, Sarah committed to doing everything Lester wants. But is this just another example of sex talk? Or will we see concrete examples of her actually following up on what was said? In the next chapter, there cannot be another Sarah-Dan conversation along the following lines…..“wow, that really got out of control”….”yeah, not sure how it happened”….”the next time we need rules and we need to let Lester know we are in control”. It certainly appears that Sarah and Dan have moved beyond this. There should be tangible impacts to their life, beyond the sexual adventures of Sarah and the rapidly growing intimacy between her and Lester. Some ways this can happen? —Lester and Sarah team up to go after LIncoln Group and Byron (Lester remotely penetrates the IT system), Sarah tells Dan….“Just stay out of it baby, Lester and I got this”. —Lester and Sarah work together at the Hospital to upgrade the IT system per Thornhill’s direction. Sarah tells Dan….“Lester and I will be spending a lot of time together, including here at the house. You need to be a good boy around us and not upset Lester”. — Lester and Sarah spend some weekends together. Sarah tells Dan….”I’ll be spending the weekend with Lester, baby, I’ll need you to watch the kids. My parents have done so much for us and I think you need to start taking some of the burden off of them”. — Sarah becomes more direct with Dan about her needs. She tells Dan….”I think you really now understand how much Lester satisfies me in ways that you can’t. We can’t pretend anymore that it’s about just you and me. Our time together can be special, but I need quality time with Lester and others he lets me fuck. I would like you to be involved, but it won’t be like before.” — Sarah starts limiting Dan sexually. She tells Dan….”baby, I think we need to take a break, I am super busy at work, and Lester and I will be away for the next few days on Hospital business. And I want to spend quality time with the kids. While I’m gone, I will talk to Lester to see what time you and I can arrange to be together when I get back.”

Rjh200m

"No reason it can't happen the same way with Richard..." ...other than needing to get/have Lester's permission first you mean. She didn't have that restriction with Byron, when she agreed to fuck him... 🤔😋

Arc

She works in a hospital; it would be beyond easy for her to get something like a Nexplanon implant and be safe for *years*.... As an added plus (for a nascent sex addict), in some women it also can stop/reduce menstruation while implanted! https://www.plannedparenthood.org/learn/birth-control/birth-control-implant-nexplanon

Arc

I think it's interesting that Saarah declares love for Lester, but he doesn't reciprocate. I wonder if she really will go with the whole asking Lester's permission to fuck someone else. Also, is it possible for Sarah to be Byron's bitch in Minnesota, Lester's girlfriend in Chicago and Dan's wife in Springfield? I am really looking forward to seeing what happens in the morning after this chapter. Dan and Sarah definitely have to talk. Will Lester insist on a date with Sarah? Whose room does she wind up in? I am curious to find out.

Traycir

I agree with everything here. Lester is a scumbag, a resourceful scumbag with a big cock, bit still a scumbag. Jesse wants to take Sarah from Dan and live happily ever after, that's not Lester. Besides what's mentioned above, he wants to be able to let other men use her, at his discretion. From the beginning I have wondered what Lester's end game is. That's what makes writing this kind of story hard, coming up with a satisfactory ending. Even with his cuckold fetish, I don't know how Dan goes on after this chapter.

Traycir

“Tell your husband to take out his little thing and start stroking it. He’s not going to ‘reclaim’ you tonight...” Lol -- you apparently missed that...

Arc

Yeah, I was just having fun there. ;)

Darrow

Sarah fucks Dan quickly and returns to Lester’s bed to spend the rest of the night

Larry

I agree. Given their previous sex play, which is extremely verbal and some of their sessions which played with cuckoldry, she'll take to this like a duck to water. They both will. I think a lot of their sexual encounters are going to increasingly involve Dan masturbating, or her masturbating him to finish, rather than sex.

Darrow

Sarah commits to only fuck who Lester tells her. Sarah wakes up and goes to Lester’s bedroom with Dan watching. Lester though says she should go back and fuck Dan first by Lester’s order because he doesn’t want his night disturbed.

Larry

Given how quickly Sarah gave in to Byron, basically no pushback at all, its quite possible that when Richard makes his move that the emotional "training" Lester has done will kick in - just as it did with Byron. Basically with Byron she immediately fell into the emotional desire to be with the creep. No reason it can't happen the same way with Richard even with the risk to her career or professional respect.

Sigma

The story is titled "Toxic Attraction": I don't think it was ever intended to have a 'happy' ending in the traditional sense. It's playing out much more like an addict-tragedy, where Sarah's addiction to Lester, his cock, and her debasement, eventually takes over and destroys her life, even as she increasingly revels in the ever-growing debauchery. She should lose her career, her family, and her own self-respect along the way, as she spirals downward into the decadence of slavishly serving her addiction. I never sought nor expected a redemption arc for anyone: I'm here to see a human-trainwreck, in glorious, hi-resolution, slow-motion detail. Curious to ultimately see/find out just how gloriously ruinous it ends up being for the protagonist...

Arc

Sorry Sarah commi

Larry

I suggest a good time to reward/humilitate Dan. Lester has got

Larry

"I look forward to the night when they're making love and she says 'Fuck me Dan, fuck me with your pathetic little dick.'" Given Lester's new rule, she'd need to have his permission to let Dan fuck her. it's perfectly reasonable to expect that such permission would include requirements like her repeatedly humiliating Dan. Plus we've already seen that doing so turns her on, so she probably wouldn't even put up much, if any resistance to such an order...

Arc

Sarah's approach to the encounter is interesting. She knows about Byron's (and Jesse's) intention to fuck her before she travels to Minneapolis. She's not bothered by it. At the bar, she's literally dressed to kill, and openly flirts with Jesse, rubbing her bare foot against him his calf and teasing him. Jesse's the weaker of the two so she feels more confident and in control. But she flirts with Byron, she's not at all put off by his clumsy attempts to monopolize her. Byron talks openly about the cuck situation, and that she fucks Lester, and that he intends to fuck her. None of this phases her at all. After all that, she asks to go up to Byron's office for a private tour. No one at that table thinks anything other than that she's going to get fucked. Even Dan thinks that. Despite all that, she doesn't particularly want to have sex with Byron. She doesn't seem especially afraid of the idea. She's ambiguous but open, and manipulative with it. It's very much that she seems to be wanting to play spy and plant the gimmick. That's the primary goal and distraction. Sarah's previous sexual encounters have always involved manipulation, both on her part and others. She absolutely loves to raise the temperature, to tempt, tease and arouse. It's part of her own foreplay and part of building her own sexual excitement. Lester's key is that he does to her what she does to others, he's about raising her temperature, tempting, teasing and arousing, all the way through. He never just fucks her, its always about building her heat, the verbal play continues in the fucking. He's using her own tactics on her, and she loves it. And once she's aroused, she'll guilt free do anything as we've seen. With Byron, I think throughout, she's manipulating herself to arousal. She plays her 'turn up the heat' game from the moment she walks in the bar, and she enjoys it. She's got an ulterior mission distracting her, but she's also excited and engaged. I don't think we've seen her this ambiguous, where she sort of doesn't want to have sex, she wants him to wear a condom, doesn't want him to come in her, wants to make him come with a blow job instead of going all the way. Her sexual play is a more cold blooded manipulation. She's into it, but in a cold blooded way. It's different from every other encounter we've seen. But once the sex starts, she kind of follows the track - she's definitely into it, aroused building arousal, submissive and highly verbal all the way to orgasm. There's no question she's into it. But she's not emotionally engaged as with Dan or Lester, and she's not been lead into losing control. There's an ambiguity. Some things - she has no difficulty trash talking and verbally humiliating her husband in the office, even if he's not there. That comes startlingly easy, and she totally gets into it. I think on an unconscious level she's reached a point of disrespect and contempt. This is how she feels about him sexually, and it excites her to say it out loud. It's a warm up for the later scene. The submission and verbal self humiliation also comes extremely easy and naturally. If Byron had insisted on coming in her pussy, she wouldn't have liked it, but she'd have let him and quixotically she would have enjoyed it. She would have done anything Byron wanted to make her do, and the more he made it, the more she would have loved it. She wants to be out of control sexually, and one way to that path is giving up control. Once they were alone, there was absolutely no way she wasn't getting fucked and she knew that. I think she was distracted by the mission, but also that she wanted more from Byron. She was too in control at the outset as the encounter starts. Regardless, Byron has officially taken possession of her pussy, at least in Minneapolis, and I think she likes that. It arouses her, although the emotions are more complex. There's games within games here. But she's committed, and she knows it. Both Dan and Sarah know that it won't be a one time thing. If nothing else, she's still got the mission to plant the bug, and Dan is firmly under Byron's thumb and forced to pimp her. She feels whored, and on some level doesn't like it. I think she resents Dan for it. But it's also completely guilt free sex. I'm going to guess that the more she fucks Byron the more she'll uninhibitedly enjoy it. Less or no ambiguity. But also contempt and control It's very tough, I don't think I've properly articulated. I'm seeing something interesting there, but it's hard to pin down.

Darrow

Richard makes a lot of sense -- she doesn't like him as a person, and is currently desperate to earn his professional respect for her as a capable hospital administrator. As a result, forcing her to seduce and fuck him would essentially destroy any chances for achieving her professional goals. Plus, it starts the process of letting her ongoing corruption, in service of her ever-growing sexual needs, tear down the other pillars of her life (as anyone who's experienced severe addiction, first or second-hand, knows will happen!) Next up is her family (i.e. daughters + parents)...

Arc

Those little glimpses at redemption, disappear with Lester’s inner monologue. As you say, it’s chilling. Those moments plus his history, tell me there is no redemption for him. Wanting her kids kidnapped, to disappear, is dark thinking! Want to ruin her career so she has no choice but to rely on him, screams how much an abuser he is. Definitely not a good person!

Jekyll

"Well, if Dan's average that just means that 50% are bigger than him, and 50% are smaller." LoL -- it's almost certainly referring to a modal average, not a mean: as with almost all biological characteristics, the distribution will be a curve, with the vast majority of people falling in/around the same 'average' while only a very few outlying individuals will appear on the fringes/extremes. So the 50/50 split you're referring-to wouldn't really be an apt way to visualize the sample pool...

Arc

I agree. There have been small signs that suggest Lester might evolve into a better person. But catching his interior monologues, I think he's irredeemable. It was chilling to see him contemplating how he could get her fired from her job to make her more dependent on him, or how to get rid of her kids so that they won't distract her from him.

Darrow

As I said elsewhere, IMO, Lester having Sarah force Dan into chastity is the most-logical next-step: It locks Dan into his fantasies without letting him get out via orgasm, and it's obvious that, at this point, emasculating him that severely will also play well into Sarah's growing kink over viscerally degrading him too...

Arc

I suspect that Lester's track record with other room mates is not too different than with Sarah. Yes and no. He's perfectly willing to use drugs, to blackmail or coerce, and to heavily manipulate. But he's about control and seduction, getting inside head's and making a woman's body betray her. I think that Sarah may be 'the big one' for him. The one he wants to keep rather than use and discard like Lizzy. But what he's doing to Sarah, in terms of seductive and sexual technique he's refined on a lot of women.

Darrow

In recent chapters I have seen this trend of people wanting Lester and Sarah to get together, in an almost loving style relationship. To almost see him redeemed in a way. I don’t see this side of lester, or think it even possible. The man has been drugging and blackmailing women for years to get what he wants. Now with Sarah it’s different, he wants to corrupt her, so he’s playing a different game with her. Lester is not a white knight coming in to save Sarah. The only reason he gets upset about byron and others, is because he already believes Sarah is his. Not his gf, not the girl he wants to win and marry, forever in love. But that she is his possession, his to use and control. Lester is not and has never been a good character and I doubt there is any good in him. The man would literally drive both sarah and dan into more financial hardships, just to force Sarah to rely on him even more. I don’t see a happy ending with Lester.

Jekyll

Hmmm... I know that that's where they *usually* are, but there's nothing there on my screen for this chapter? After "...in post-orgasmic bliss." there's just some white-space, then the "🤍 🗨️ ..." and "Share" standard footer.... 🤔😕🤷‍♀️

Arc

This is a very accurate take on Byron. I think the scene between them showed a great deal about each of them. Byron is unlike any sexual partner Sarah’s had. Dan loves her, makes love to her. Lester wants her, wants to corrupt her and bend her fully to him. He makes sure her pleasure and needs are met, because this gets him what he wants. (I’m sure if we got to see Lester’s track record with his former “roommates.” It would likely be similar in style to Byron.) Now for Sarah, the one thing that really stuck out, was her inner monologue about how she should have avoided getting fucked by Byron. But her body wanted it and her body gets what it wants. I think Sarah is loosing control in a way, she doesn’t yet understand. It was the immediate way her body reacted to the dominant Byron. Sarah herself thought, she could have just given him a blow job, or side stepped it all. But instead she went to the chair, she showed no hesitation in insulting Dan and there was little to no delay and declaring herself Byron’s bitch. A lot of her “training” with lester is showing in this chapter. The dirty talk 100% stimulates her, but having her mind not consumed by pleasure at the moment, spoke volumes about how far she has fallen from grace.

Jekyll

They are at the bottom of the post

Mr Shuttlesworth

"P.S: Attachments are inspo for Sarah's outfits in this chapter." Attachments? I didn't see any (valid) links in the post? 🤔🤷‍♀️

Arc

I hoping we see a different side to Lester. A side that shows he cares for Sarah. He's been a devious creep and still is but I'd like him to declare his love for her himself and promise to protect her from Byron, Richard etc. I like the idea that she is able to tame him and his devious nature only surfaces when it's to protect his girlfriend (Sarah) and her family. I think Dan and Sarah will still be on friendly terms but surely there's a happier life for her with Lester? After defeating their enemies. Anyway that's just my weird thinking. Whatever way Don chooses to take this will be great I'm sure. Hope he doesn't feel pressure or stress over everyone's comments

Sean Thomas

Also, thinking it over, Byron's not a good lover. Consider how the session went. He didn't move on her, didn't kiss her, he didn't tease her nipples, stroke her pussy or go down on her. He simply told her to get on her knees and suck his dick. He ordered her to take her top off so he could play with her breasts, but that was for his pleasure not hers. Then he ordered her clothes off, bent her into a chair and fucked her. There's none of the skill that Lester or even Dan displays. He fucks without a condom, but didn't particularly care whether he shot in her mouth or pussy. His verbals are entirely self aggrandizement - putting down others - especially Dan his subordinate, but also Sarah (Bitch) and elevating himself by making her "Moan my name" "Your my bitch now, say it" "Tell your husband you're my bitch" He's not dirty talking to raise her temperature, although it does that. He's dirty talking to get off on his own power over others. He contributes nothing to Sarah's arousal, or her orgasm, that's basically her own lust using him as a tool. A dildo and a tape recorder could substitute for him. She's much more in control of her arousal than with Lester, her willingness to trash talk her husband and play submissive is very natural and unforced and it definitely arouses her. But she's also thinking clearly. His after-sex game consists of falling asleep on her. She effortlessly pumps him for information. I think that Byron may get a lot of sex, but he's definitely paying for most of it. He doesn't really know what to do with a woman or care. He's about his own ego and aggrandizement, and that comes with bullying and demeaning. I think he's outmatched by her. She'll zero in on his weaknesses, feed them, and wrap him around her little finger, all the while making him feel big and powerful.

Darrow

Further thoughts - Sarah has watched now while two men, Byron and Lester, openly and totally humiliated Dan in front of her. She's seen Vernon casually humiliate Dan. She's aware after the fact of Eugene's humiliation of Dan. And both Byron and Lester have had her participate in verbally humiliating Dan (usually when he's not there, but also in his presence). Even if she loves Dan with all her heart, that's got to have some subconscious psychological effect. On some level, perhaps on level's she's not even aware of, she's losing respect and perhaps developing contempt for Dan. Couple that with Dan's own cuck-fetish self humiliation, his sexual selfishness and his inadequate size compared to literally every other man she's seen lately, that's likely going to add to the effect. Even if she's not aware, I think it'll affect her behaviour. Casual remarks, casual attitude, definitely during sex she'll be increasingly willing and excited to play into his humiliation, or to inflict it. I look forward to the night when they're making love and she says "Fuck me Dan, fuck me with your pathetic little dick." And given Dan's fetish, that might cause him to ejaculate right there. Dan's only really asserted his manhood and his dominance a couple of times with Lester, and has paid for it each time, and successfully with Jesse. I don't think that's enough.

Darrow

I think it's going there, but not right away. Don likes to turn up the heat slowly. I think Dan's going to be cut off, he may well cut himself off, he got served a major dose of humiliation. He may be too traumatized to follow through. Even if he isn't cut off completely or cut off right away, I think his sex life is going to change. A lot more masturbation, self involved, or Sarah assisted. And definitely he's going t be wearing condoms. Lester is going to insist. Sarah and Dan can even rationalize it, she's had unprotected sex with two men, so she's at risk of STD... wearing a condom protects Dan. But the noose is definitely tightening. One chastity cage scenario is actually Byron. Byron doesn't hesitate to bully and threaten, and he'd dearly love to humiliate Dan with a cage while they visit Minneapolis. The only problem is that Byron might not let him out.

Darrow

Well, if Dan's average that just means that 50% are bigger than him, and 50% are smaller. That said, Sarah's recent run of men definitely seem to cluster on the far end of the scale. But Vernon is a ringer, not a coincidence. He was specifically recruited because he was bigger than Dan. Cage might be another ringer, assuming that Lester engineered or pre-arranged. Lester seems to be definitely freakishly big. But Byron and Jesse both seem to be smaller than Lester, but larger than Dan. Maybe Dan is on the low side of average or genuinely below average. Possibly his insecurity about his size drives his cuckold fixation. I don't think that there's anywhere in the narrative that gives us a real comment on Dan's size. Or, most realistically, all these characters might be living in porn universe where there is a large proportion of endowed males. Anyway, the point is that Sarah's experience and her standards are going up.

Darrow

Well done.

Bones

But she seems to have liked the Nerd gang. It would be like making her do the black pizza guy. She wouldn't mind. And frankly, she liked playing with them. I don't think she'd be troubled with Ned at all. The only one she might dislike is Eugene. That is tempting. On the one hand, major humiliation for Dan if the guy that kicked him out of the peephole fucks his wife. On the other hand, Lester doesn't like Eugene and is even more into keeping him in his place. Lester's not going to allow Eugene to cuck him. I like the idea of a DnD gangbang but (1) Sarah might be into it, so that doesn't work as punishment, and (2) Lester was specific that it was one. Cage is a possible, but definitely too wild a card. I'm maybe coming back to Jesse, because Lester likes control, and Jesse has the potential to be a useful tool. But maybe it will be someone new and vile.

Darrow

Had high hopes...but it's truly over

Mike Kogel

I hope its someone more disgusting, I think I will be wrong, but I would love the nerd D&D gang or the homeless Cash and friends. She is so perfect and they are so un worthy. The office guys dont seem low enough to me. She and Lester need to degrade her. Thats what she likes obviously.

whiterhino

Interesting point about every man she's interacted, sexually, with having a bigger dick than Dan. Assuming he's average, the likelihood of that is wildly improbable. She really needs to buy a lotto ticket, because thats gotta be 1 in 3-4 million to occur.

SierraDelta

I wouldn’t be surprised if she was getting a hormone shot every 3 months. Thus no pills around.

Richardcat

Yeah, Godzilla vs Kong style.

Darrow

Can’t wait to read this conversation. Does she offer to stop without prodding?

Robert Smith

Love your thoughts, Darrow. Just wanted to add that I’m excited for the Lester vs Byron showdown ahead. Now that they both know about each other and have both established dominance over Sarah/cucked Dan hard, there will be a struggle. It could play out so many ways, especially because we don’t know the true extent of Byron’s power and we’ve only seen some of Lester’s. It’s going to be good!

Robert Smith

That seems to be the natural choice. He's the only character she genuinely despises. But does Lester know that? I think his choice might be Jesse, but with impeccable timing, he's burned that bridge. Vernon might be sleazy enough, but no way that's happening.

Darrow

Dan is the new Ned!

Jerry Crabbe

Agreed

Jerry Crabbe

Mark Albright

Very very well done. To follow up - Dan is indeed the dumbest son of a bitch on the face of the Earth. He got rolled by Jesse, although he managed to fight back. Jesse is the second dumbest son of a bitch on the planet. He swallowed Byron's bull hook line and sinker. Byron isn't going to share his new toy. He blabbed to Lester, spilled just about everything, and has put Lester onto the Lincoln Group. That's going to be interesting. He was completely flatfooted when Sarah openly flirted with him. And he's allowed himself to be pushed around by Dan. If Dan is a Cuck, then Jesse is a Sub-Cuck. Speaking of Byron, it's now guaranteed that he's going to be seeing a lot of Sarah. In his mind, he's claimed her, that whole "Look at your husband" and making her say "I'm Byron's bitch now." That's ownership. Byron isn't nearly as smooth or manipulative as Lester, but his cock is bigger than Dan's and his bullying ways push Sarah's buttons really hard. He clearly pcked up on her submissiveness. And Byron knows he made her come hard, and she was enthusiastic about swallowing his cock and then his come. So basically, as far as he's concerned, he owns that pussy. He's not going to be shy about claiming her and telling Dan. He's going to be extremely demanding - not just of Dan, but demanding that Dan hand over Sarah, and he's going to get increasingly humiliating as he does it. As between Sarah and Dan, they'll need her to do it. He needs her to do it, pimping her to Byron is the only way to eventually accomplish the mission. And his cuck fetish is running away with him, I think as hard as it is for him to admit it, he's excited by Byron taking her from him... especially if Byron makes him watch. The degree of shit that Byron is going to feed Dan is going up exponentially. As for Lester, bravo - as wild as the sex was, as emotionally wrenching, it was absolutely bottomless. He's now promised to take her anal virginity, she's accepted his right to decide who fucks her, she's agreed to him choosing to make her fuck someone she hates (probably Jesse, maybe Cash), and he's just declared both the right to come in her, and put Dan in a condom, and perhaps a veto over her and Dan's sex life - only with his permission. I can't imagine what's going to go through her head when she recovers after that magnificent fucking. "I said what?" Some of that won't stick. Byron is going to be fucking her no matter what. She'll either disobey, not tell him, or seek or manipulate Lester's permission. Equally, I think she'll break whatever rules he sets for her with Dan, she does love him and they're a team. But she will either have to sneak around on Lester (have an affair with her husband behind her lover's back) or accept his 'punishments' perhaps even embrace them. One thing she's not going to do is give up Lester's cock. Even while Byron was fucking her, she was thinking of Lester not Dan. And let's be fair, it doesn't help Dan's case that every man that Sarah has played with in any real way has a bigger cock than Dan - starting with Lester and Byron, but also including Vernon, Cage and Jesse. And they've all been dominant over her and excited the fuck out of her, even Jesse in a sneaky way. As much as she loves Dan he's literally relegating to third string. As exciting and intense as it was, and as emotionally wrenching, there's promise of so much more.

Darrow

I'm not even halfway through, but Jesus H. Christ, Dan has to be the dumbest son of a bitch on the planet. Jesse rolled him. Jesse rolled right over him. He bluffed Dan into admitting he's spying, almost without effort.

Darrow

In an earlier chapter she said she had some errands to do at the pharmacy or something before heading to Chicago, implying plan b or birth control for many of us readers.

Sigma

I think she's doing something more reliable than rhythm. And I think now that she's submitted to Lester, he'll simply ask her, and she'll tell him, and he'll tell her to stop, and she will.

Jerry Crabbe

I think Lester will be having her put Dan into chastity. That would serve both to reinforce his newly-demoted status, as well as keeping him simmering in subspace without having access to the orgasmic release that seems to be the key that lets him break free of his cuckold-fugue state... Plus it's pretty evident that imposing that kind of blatant denigration and control on Dan, at this point, would really turn *her* on too...

Arc

I share your desire for more of this new dynamic, but Don really outdid himself here - the ending was perfect. As similar as it would be to how this chapter began, I think we get Dan's perspective of when she wakes up next. I think the thing I want to see most is her getting her husband to be ok with the savage cucking he just underwent while at the same time making her way to Lester's bedroom for more, making his statement that she'd find her way in that night the truth, whether she heard him or not.

Jerry Crabbe

Earlier on in the story (in the early/beginning chapters) it’s mentioned that she isn’t. Later on, when Lester first gets in her house, he searches for it and doesn’t find any. When Dan questions her in Ch20 she says she takes “precautions” but doesn’t specify and Dan never asks. DS hasn’t clarified the issue. I assume that she isn’t and perhaps her precautions is using the rhythm to know when she is fertile.

Robert Smith

Sarah, from Dan & Sarah's argument in Chapter 20: “It’s just some dumb thing Lester wanted. Something about him not being able to do it now and wanting to live out the experience. It’s just sex talk, Dan. It’s not real, you know that. He’s fixed, and besides, I’m not an idiot, okay? I’m not just going to have sex with someone and not take precautions.” Sarah added.

Jerry Crabbe

Is Sarah on birth control? I cant recall, I know Lester faked his vasectomy and his pumping Sarah full of potent seed, but forgot Sarahs fertility situation. Love the fuck a baby into me comments, needed even more dialogue like that. Good stuff DS. Cant wait for her to be commanded to fuck other scumbags soon.

whiterhino

Well, after the debacle of the whole Vernon-nadir, this chapter certainly goes out of its way to set the Lester + Sarah dynamic aright again. Thank-goodness! I do wish that Sarah hadn't merely passed out at the end though, and had, instead, after a few minutes of recovery, gotten-up, while looking abashedly at Dan, as she silently headed to her new boyfriend+lover's bedroom, leaking cum shining between her buttocks and thighs, where she lets herself in, without a backwards glance, and Dan catches the words, "Hi Daddy...", even as the bedroom door closes behind her... Cementing, with unambiguous words and action, the new hierarchy of her interest and affections...

Arc

"What does it mean Sarah" "It means I love Lester's Cock, I love fucking Lester, and you know what else it means...you love Lester fucking me, you get off on it sweety." "i don't" "Your boner says otherwise Dan" "Dan. I'm going to be fucking Lester a lot and we're both going to enjoy it." "Lester says I can't fuck anyone without his permission, I think he means you Dan, would you like that, would you like Lester cutting you off unless we get his permission?" "Oh look, little Danny is excited about needing Lester's permission." "Wow, we can cut little Danny off and he'll love it." "Are you going to constantly masturbate again, that may not be allowed, I'll ask Lester."

Michael Haase

I totally agree. First draft was awesome but this is even better. I really like the changes to the Byron scene (keeping Byron from cumming inside her and the emphasis on her longing for Lester afterwards), the few extra mentions of Sarah wanting Lester’s baby, and how Sarah throws out more “I love yous” without much prompting from Lester. Dan has been a cuck for a while but damn did Lester take that up a notch in the end scene. He got Sarah onboard with humiliating Dan and she agreed to cut him off? Crazy. Just wow with this chapter. I’m glad I stuck around!

Robert Smith

Don Silver literally just leaves you wanting more and more !! Pure genius on every level 👏

keith kingsbury

So, does Sarah need Lester's permission to fuck Dan? Or does Dan need Lester's permission to fuck Sarah? It appears Dan is cut off unless Lester lets his girlfriend give him some relief, maybe a hand job for the little guy. Dan is increasingly marginalized; he has to keep Lester happy. Dan becomes more and more like a teenage boy, while Lester (Daddy) and Sarah (Mommy) take control. Sarah loves it because Dan loves it. She'll give the little guy some pleasure if Lester says he's been a good boy. Dan's children become more like siblings as Dan is no longer the head of household. Dan should increasingly be assigned apartment housekeeping chores to keep Lester happy. Sarah notices Dan persistent boner when he's under their control. Dan loves it.

Michael Haase

I totally forgot about Lester switching Dan's mattress at some point! Good call back! I like how this chapter shifted back into toxic attraction category, with the 'I love you's' and her thinking of Lester while getting fucked by Byron.

Chris K

3 sex scenes plus Lester’s final triumph over Dan and Sarah’s full corruption and subjugation to Lester. Loved the bit where she told Dan to take his cock out “Yeah,” Sarah said, eyeing it, “Stroke it for me. Stroke that pathetic thing while Lester fucks the shit out of me.”“In that phrase is encapsulated Lester’s final victory. I can’t see anyway back for Dan now. The irony is Lester has triumphed over Dan but finds he has a competitor for Sarah’s pussy he didn’t know about, Byron.The Byron scene was pure gold. Sarah has to submit to Byron as she has backed herself into a corner by asking for a tour of his office. Then she finds there is no computer to plug Peter’s device into! So, it looks like they will have to go back to Minnesota again! Another irony. So far Mr Silver is keeping his plot line plates spinning expertly. Let’s hope it continues and we are in for an even more enjoyable ride.

Royston smith

Wow. Just wow. I'm like Dan right now looking for that box of kleenex

Sean Thomas

The changes made the final draft have a much different feel to it. The subtlety of how Sarah was much more willing to go to Lester and please him was great! Going to be hard to convince Dan that it was all just “sex” talk as he witnessed her complete submission. It was also a little telling that she wanted Lester to “reclaim” her after Byron instead of Dan. Looking forward to the next chapter for sure…

Dodge1109

Great chapter and one of the best! Cant wait to see where the story goes.

SmartSharks

Loved it!!

Rick57

Great, the story just gets better!

Lenbow spring

Not sure how Mr. Silver did it but the final version was better than the alpha draft which IMO was damn near flawless. Bravo

J Lewis

Wow. Perfect!!!

Mark Albright