Toxic Attraction: Chapter 21

This would be an excellent direction for the story, espcially if Otis was portrayed as gentle, loving character in juxposition to the other depraved wretches in this yarn.

Ike turner

Margot Robbie

King40

My choice will be Scarlett Johansson

Pr

Rjh Even in the real world If this scenario played out, even in a much less dramatic way! Tell me what woman would keep their respect for their husband and long term stay with them? Especially with Lester and perhaps Byron disparaging Dan’s character, while they fuck Sarah into submission. Perhaps she starts subtly agreeing with those disparaging remarks. Then mentally or verbally agreeing with Lester and Byron willingly, while in the throws of intense orgasms. Dan will have to become a terminator and go scorcher earth on all of his rivals to achieve Sarah’s respect, as her husband.

Gee

Gee - all of this sounds reasonable. The only wildcard is Dan, he has shown an ability to act and attack when he is backed against the wall, e.g., how he went after Jesse, how he went after Lester when he felt Lester crossed the line. Perhaps he does this to fight off all of the alpha males to reclaim his wife and stake out some business success. It seems Byron is a major problem, we will see how Dan handles this; by all accounts it looks like he will want Sarah to submit to Byron, but what happens after this? Even if Dan is successful, this does not mean that Sarah does not have sex with other men, it is just that she stays with Dan.

Rjh200m

As much as Sarah loves the sex with Lester! I can’t see her trusting the care of her daughter’s, in Lester’s hands. He is to hedonistic by nature & if she had any idea of the plans Lester has for her children, she would run and go into hiding. At the moment Sarah is maximising her access to great sex while she can keep the different parts of her life seperate. When it collides and it will! She will be forced to make some tough decisions. With both Lester and Byron being Alphas, they will disparage Dan’s standing, in Sarah’s eyes. I believe Sarah will ultimately see Dan as undependable when it comes to their protection & will leave Dan for a better man with all the values, ability to protect, success, ambition, a nest to provide for her and her daughters, big dick and GREAT kinky sex! Dan will have to heal, grow and move on I believe. He will find some success in his consultancy and provide for his daughters with shared custody. Lester will be pissed……maybe? I believe he move on reluctantly after he achieves all his goals with Sarah. Then he will tire of her. Then he will only target married beautiful young women moving forward.

Gee

Hi Gee, This is what I would call a bumper edition in more ways than one. Has to be 9.5 out of 10, with only one slight blemish. However that fault is really my preference. So others might find it a plus, and award a 10. Really enjoyed it tbh.

Royston smith

Where will this story end, what are your thoughts.

Pr

Jessica Alba

Gee

Ok, on a different note, imagine if the story was to be produced as a movie or series, who would you want to play Sarah’s character.

Pr

Good morning fellow insiders and readers. Can any of the insiders who have read the Chapt 22 Draft, please provide a score out of 10 on this chapter.

Gee

Good morning From Aus Royston, Jesse won’t be able to help himself. He won’t give up the opportunity of Having a shot at Sarah and twisting the knife in Dan. Jesse has no restraint with his adolescent brain

Gee

Yes, I wondered that too Gee. Lester seemed to have given up on Jesse, but may go back to him now as a more pliable accomplice. However, Jesse may turn Lester down now he has another route to Sarah’s pussy. This would certainly make Lester wonder why, when he was so keen before. His antennae would certainly start twitching.

Royston smith

Hi Royston I believe Lester may let Sarah’s little nymph monster out. Lester utilised Jesse in chapter 15, on the dance floor. Jesse followed Lester’s instructions to the letter. With Vernon, Lester lost control. I believe Lester May utilise Jesse. It’s a plus for Lester that Dan hates Jesse. It will put Dan and Sarah off balance.

Gee

If the next chapter involves Dan/jesse and Sarah flying to Minnesota to see Byron, imagine the scene on the plane there. Will Jesse try anything with Sarah before they get to Minnesota? Also, how will Lester figure in the chapter? Will it be the first chapter where he is barely mentioned? Will he get wind of what is going on?

Royston smith

Good pick up Royston I checked that chapter after I read your chat. You are spot on! He more than likely is white or perhaps mixed.

Gee

I’m with the seedier side of town, for a Lester date night. Dancing, drinking and partying at a night club to set the mood. Then heading off to a strip club for Sarah to perform one or two dares, inside of the seedier club! In both venues Dan is contained by the clubs managers & bouncers, who are in the know of Lester’s set up.

Gee

Archer rang Harry after Harry’s many attempts to ring Courtney. He allowed Harry to Listen to Courtney’s screaming orgasms before calling Harry a dumbass as he hung up. I’d say Archer is happy to ridicule and humiliate Harry Rjh. If Byron & Archer are friends, colleagues as well as competitive with each other, within the Lincoln Group. Then I believe both men will parade the pair of trained & submissive white wives as their dates, in-front the knowing Lincoln Group crowd. The spoils of war for the conquering Captains.

Gee

I’ve spoke with Don about this Royston. He is in the process of going back so that he can clarify, this overlooked point about Byron ethnicity. Don has not confided in me wether Byron is black or white. I guess we will find out soon enough!

Gee

Anything is possible in the Silver-verse! We know that Archer’s task was to basically take down Courtney’s company by stealing their best business prospects; and as a side benefit, Archer got to take Courtney. We also know that Byron is using Dan to achieve some business purpose, but he also has his sights on Sarah. Both work for Lincoln Group, so it is very feasible that they know each other and, based on their personalities, may have similar interests outside of work….including talking about and even sharing their conquests…..assuming this, we could see a situation in which, as you mention, they have a Lincoln Group event that includes Courtney and Sarah…..we know that Byron is very antagonistic to Dan and wants to humiliate him; I don’t recall if Archer feels the same way toward Harry. If he does, both may come up with a way to humiliate Harry and Dan.

Rjh200m

Yes it would really up the ante and push her boundaries.

Royston smith

Yes, I agree. Would love ti read Don’s take on it or some sort of variant around this scenario.

Royston smith

The problem with this line of reasoning Gee is that Don doesn’t say he is black, but he does say Archer is. There is also no physical description of Byron. We only think he is big physically because he acts like he should be! The only piece of description I can think of that may give us a clue is in 6, when Jesse commits the faux pas on sustainability at the dinner table and Byron goes “Beat (sic) red”. This, to me, infers he is white not black.

Royston smith

My pitch was to Lester’s stated aim of setting dares for Sarah. So,while I agree Lester may want revenge over Dan, I wasn’t covering that territory. I also wonder if his “revenge” will be more subtle. His Vernon scenario, although it got out of control in terms of Sarah at the end, actually succeeded with Dan. He was spellbound by the situation and unable to interfere due to his wish to watch things unfold. Lester found the right buttons and didn’t push it too far. The male territory thing comes into this also. Notice how both times Dan has reacted badly to Lester’s sexual taunts have been in his own home. Lester used similar language in the apartment to that he had used in their Middleton home but didn’t get the same reaction. Lester needs to find the right balance to control Dan, which I am sure he will do. I agree another carpark adventure may be a dare scenario that could be utilised. Perhaps Lester tells Sarah she must bring a stranger off without letting him in the car. That is her task. She can do anything she likes (open the window and stroke his cock, etc.) but he can’t enter the car. Don’t like the Lizzie scenario and doesn’t fit with Lester’s mindset to me. I like the bondage route, but not sure how it would work as a dare. Perhaps blindfold and tie her and then feed her to Cash!! Anal I am not sure about, more from the physical limitation of it wont fit, rather than not wanting it included.

Royston smith

I like the restaurant idea. But I wonder if Lester would go in a different direction. He felt exhausted and almost cuckolded having some guy literally hovering above him, shoving their cock down Sarah's throat. She was obeying a different master and not listening to him. Would he really risk that again? I think it would be about him exerting control, reclaiming her and reclaiming control, or at least this feeling that he's in control. I could see a few different directions. For instance, he might go anal. Claim that virginity. Something her husband never approached, something that no one else has touched. Conquering her body. I really think he might opt bondage and blindfolds. If his sense of control and power is threatened, then doubling down would be having her allow him to tie her or blindfold her. Or if he felt humiliated, he might opt for an equivalent humiliation - feeding her to Cash. The thing with Lester, he's very "tit for tat" oriented, if he is embarrassed or humiliated, if he's upstaged, he has to get back, and get back in just the right certain way. That's why the elaborate subterfuge at the nightclub to trigger Dan and then get him manhandled the way Dan had manhandled Lester. So he may feel the need to get back, consciously or unconsciously, in very specifc ways. Another approach would be parking and take it the next step. He's done this. It would be similar to the restaurant thing, but an environment if not a person, he's got more control over. Or he might try something with Lizzy. Sarah's definitely not into it. Lizza doesn't want to. But he might push Lizzy into something sexual with Sarah.

Darrow

I’d imagine the husbands are seperate from and unaware of each others plight with their wives and marriages. Perhaps they are lodged in the hotel in different rooms obviously. Perhaps they meet by chance in the hotels lobby bar. Who is to say Rjh. Tell me your thoughts. You have had some insightful input into the chats on here

Gee

Love the stripper idea because what if Walt or some of Dan's co-workers happened to be there? Or even Jesse? And don't forget the private rooms available for some extra cash for the family . . .

Sigma

What would be in store for the real husbands, Harry and Dan? Confined to a hotel room to commiserate about their fates until their wives returned later that night or the next day? Forced to observe the “date” and be humiliated? Byron especially seems to have it in for Dan and would want to make it as hard on him as possible.

Rjh200m

I like the first scenario. Sucking multiple cocks in Lester’s apartment or dancing in a strip club may excite Sarah, but do not seem like a big stretch for her at this point. But acting like a slut in a fancy and formal restaurant and seducing a waiter and then blowing him in the kitchen is really pushing her past any previous barriers. Think about the risks here, especially if the restaurant is in the William’s area and not near Lester’s apartment. She would be acting so slutty not with people that are “below her status”, but with people that are at the same or higher status in life than she and Dan. What if she saw someone at the restaurant that she knows? This scenario could be loaded with risks and decisions that Sarah would need to make on the spot, with no opportunity to think it over or talk with Dan!

Rjh200m

Yeah I don’t know why I didn’t say “editor”. Anywho the “editor” confirmed TA is in the final arc (duh) but he didn’t know how that affects the chapter count. Another tease he mentioned I forgot about, DS plans a sequel to TA.

J Lewis

So what “dares” do we want Sarah to attempt for Lester as part of date night? My wish list is as follows:- 1) Lester takes Sarah for a meal to a restaurant. He has instructed her to wear a low cut blouse and a short skirt showing plenty of cleavage and thigh. Her task is to give the waiter an erection by any method she likes and then offer to relieve him of it. If he concurs she has to blow him or jerk him off in the kitchen whilst being taken by Lester from behind. 2)Lester says he is taking her out to a “club”. He won’t say what sort of club it is. He asks her to dress in the most revealing outfit she can find. They have a meal then move onto the club. As soon as they enter she realises it is a strip joint. She wants to leave but Lester gets her a drink and sits her down. Then he tells her he has booked her in as a stripper. She is on in 15 minutes. Her reward is the experience of stripping in front of all those men. Something he knows she will love to do deep down. 3)Lester invites Frank the building manager over for drinks. He also invites Ned, Greg and Charlie, the nerds. He ponders over Eugene and in the end decides to invite him by extracting a promise from him that he will do what Lester says in return for Sarah sucking his cock. Lester tells Sarah to tease the guys in any way she wants to arouse them. When she gets them all hard she must blow them all. Her reward is to be fucked senseless by Lester afterwards.

Royston smith

Hello fellow perv’s Bare with me if you will. We know most of Byron’s traits, his influence, his ruthlessness, his ability to hold a grudge. What we don’t know is his ethnicity. My preference is leaning towards a dominant black man. My reasoning is due to Don’s overlapping of his story series with each other. Imagine Byron having Sarah submit sexually to his BBC and cum loads, while poor Dan is helpless to intervene. Now Let’s overlap this with Don’s Dangerous Liaison’s , with Archer’s dominance and taming of Courtney. Maybe Archer and Byron are known to each other, due to their leadership roles within the Lincoln Group. Perhaps there could be an annualLincoln Group function night. Courtney and Sarah are blackmailed through leverage over their husbands, to be Archer and Byron’s dates. Imagine a scene where both wives are getting the fucking of their young lives, while Archer and Byron’s entourage bare witness. The entourage cheering and encouraging the wives. By telling them how much they are enjoying getting fucked, being watched by the team, sexually smeared with rude names etc Your thoughts?

Gee

Don deserves credit for developing the characters such that we are not sure how they are going to act or react as the story progresses. Yes, we will see what direction Sarah goes in and as we have seen by all of the comments, some people will be happy and some will not no matter what she does. Regardless, she will be super busy dealing with all the stuff that is coming her way!

Rjh200m

Good point well made RJ. I did make the point in a post after ch 20 that Francis the building caretaker would make a good candidate for a 2nd cock for Lester/Sarah, but Don went for a new character. As for the nerds, I believe Lester pondered on this in 21 but rejected it, as Sarah would have been too much for Ned/Greg to handle(which seems reasonable) and he didn’t want to hand Eugene further access to Sarah. Regards your wider point re: Sarah talking the talk but not walking the walk, yes it isn’t a given I agree, but the sense I have had all the way through the series is that she is a very strong character who is on a sexual journey whose ending may surprise us and her. She has been manipulating Dan’s fantasies to get what she wanted, perhaps subconsciously at first, but now more openly as she connects with a new Sarah and shrugs off the old. We shall see what Don has in store for her.

Royston smith

In almost every chapter Sarah and Dan talked about regaining control, having rules, checking in with each other, etc. But every time Lester starts, Sarah loses control. So whatever actions Sarah would think about to protect herself or make sure she decides what happens or what doesn’t happen with Lester or others is highly suspect! The mistake Lester made with Vernon is that Vernon did not know Lester and didn’t really care what Lester thought or wanted. Next time, Lester needs to use guys he has control over, D&D members, his building’s superintendent, or anyone else that Lester has leverage over. Regarding Sarah with Byron or Richard, same issue, she will have a plan but what will she actually do when the dicks come out?

Rjh200m

So what is Sarah thinking in the following passage from 21:- “Tonight had made a few things crystal clear to her. Despite Lester’s protests, Vernon still found a way to get what he wanted. Not that she was complaining but if a situation like that ever arose again, Sarah would need to be the one to protect herself”. Interesting. To me she is thinking ahead to the possibility, nay probability, of similar “stranger” situations occurring, either with or without Lester. She rightly surmises she needs to “protect”herself. What better way to do that than by taking the initiative. Lester has said he will ask her to undertake “dares”. I think she will actively become involved in setting the terms of those dares. It will excite her beyond imagining to stretch her boundaries. We have seen how she responds to putting herself on display for strangers but now she has realised that men are “putty in her hands”, she can be the one to manipulate and get what she wants. It will be interesting to see how she uses her feminine whiles with Byron and Richard. Is she going to go on the attack? We shall see.

Royston smith

Did the editorialist (sounds like a Netflix serial) say how many more chapters of TA there will be?

Royston smith

Thanks J. Good to know.

Royston smith

A couple interesting tidbits on Discord via a editorialist for DS…1) Some characters from TA will continue in a different story after the conclusion of TA ; yes DS has mapped out how TA ends and 2) while one chapter remains of TC, DS has plans for another TC character(s) based story (TC Book II ?). The editorialist alluded to the fact that DS envisions a universe of stories with the participation of characters across his works. I hope my take is fairly accurate. And remember NE should commence into the meat of that story soon.

J Lewis

one would hope. and yes, 100% i hate the mystery box approach. It get it if you're hands are tied and you need to use it for a desperate reason, but he employs it as an intentional technique, which i absolutely hate.

hab

Agree 100%! I did reread the whole story from Chapter 1 and you can clearly see Sarah’s transformation, or her awakening of her desires. And yes, it is her desires……I was never convinced she was doing it just for Dan, even in the early chapters. This is why I think a key part of the story going forward is how does her relationship with Dan evolve. She will become not only more independent of Lester, but also Dan. Perhaps Dan already accepts this based on how Chapter 21 ended, but I don’t think he has fully embraced it yet. A key issue will be if he asks Sarah to dial back her sexual adventures, she will likely not be receptive to this.

Rjh200m

Do you mean Lex Luther Mark?

Royston smith

I agree completely. It's all about Sarah's desire, and all she ever needs is permission.

Darrow

I do. I haven't much in the month or so due to some family health issues. But plan to again sometime.

Mkm560

Not me. Computer always says no. Cant get on it.

Royston smith

Interesting Hab. I bow to your superior knowledge. However, I was careful to say “basic storyboard” not detailed foreknowledge. Certain themes are developed and elaborated on/repeated with variations, as the story progresses. I honestly think Don has a vision of his “story” in his head. Some writers have this gift. As an example Enid Blyton always said she could see the story laid out before her as if on a cinema screen. JK Rowling and Lee child have said similar things. Anyway, I agree with your request for the Minnesota showdown to be next. Bring it on.

Royston smith

An example to supplement the last post. In ch 3 Sarah allows Dan to pretend to be Lester and fuck her from behind on her marital bed. That is one way of looking at it. The alternative is it is actually Sarah who deep down craves to be fucked by Lester and indulges Dan ‘s kink in order to fuel that fantasy. She is the one who initiates it, in fact it is always her who initiates this type of fantasy with Dan. She is already in touch with her dark side and her fantasy of being worshipped by a hard cock that isn’t her husband’s. Don’t forget by this point she has seen Lester’s cock and is impressed. She has received his tribute on her chest in ch 2. The motif of Sarah’s sexual awakening is ultimately driven by her desires, not Lester’s or Dan’s. They are merely the catalysts. I don’t think Lester will be able to close Pandoras box now it has been opened.

Royston smith

Now Sarah has taken the fateful step of taking Vernons cock whilst she bestrides Lester, I believe she cannot go back. Whats more, I believe she wont want to. It has been coming for a long while. She has enjoyed the wildness of being mercilessly fucked by Lester, but this has awakened something deeper within her. To use her own words, she has revealed to herself her long buried longings and desires. Lester has awakened her inner sex monster. To those who say this has happened all too quickly I would counsel: read the whole saga again from chapter 1 and you will find her sexual awakening foreshadowed in almost every chapter. To those who say she cant want both to be dominated and dominant herself, I would say this is perfectly possible. Some women crave varied sexual experiences both during a solitary sexual experience and during a relationship. This can vary over time as well. Of course they will be predominately one or the other. At the moment Sarah enjoys Lester’s fucking her with no thought for her pleasure. She is definitely fixed near to this sexual pole ( figuratively speaking), but she also now wants to enjoy being in control sometimes. Who is to say which tendency will win out in the end?

Royston smith

Yes I think you are not far off Gee. I have advanced the theory in previous posts that the best candidate for Cronos amongst the current cast of characters is Byron. He is wealthy, sleazy, unscrupulous and likes to dominate. It would also be a nice reveal/twist to the story/plot. If it is him then Jesse’s “information” on the Lester/Dan/Sarah axis of cuckoldry may well have provided Byron with the vital missing dots to identify the mysterious “white whale” in the video. Remember his questioning of Lester on who the woman was who is watching Lester fuck Lizzie from behind from the doorway? If I am correct then Sarah certainly will be in for a torrid time! If not then she will still have trouble controlling Byron from all the information we have on him. Notice how he has made Dan call him Sir. This is only the beginning of his revenge on Dan. He won’t stop before he has totally destroyed him. Sarah is part if that revenge!!

Royston smith

Who here posts on the Discord channel for Don Silver Stories?

Sigma

One possibility is that Lester cuts her off from sex. Now as you said, she is close to going off on her own, but she still can’t resist Lester and if he cuts her off, it could impact her. He could also combine this with telling Sarah that she has to cut Dan off for some period of time. Lester has mentioned this several times. Would be interesting to see how this plays out, Lester would need to be disciplined but I think he could do this much more so than Sarah!

Rjh200m

Good thoughts both of them. Lester's definitely possessive and very thin skinned. He's already come up with elaborate schemes to "punish" Dan for his transgressions which worked. He definitely feels like he lost control of Sarah and lost control of the situation, and I can see him wanting to "punish" Sarah or teach her some lessons that she needs to be obedient. I'm not sure how he'd go about that. His problem is that he's never ever found Sarah's limits. Any place he tried or wanted to push her, she was already willing to go there. Remember the first time they had sex Lester didn't even ask for it, she just walked into his bedroom and fucked him. Every dare he's faced her with, she's picked it up and gone further. How does he control or punish someone like that? At the same time, I think Sarah's very close to going off on her own. She's actually talked about it to Lester, telling him during sex play, that she could get a stranger online literally any time day or night. And she's had three visits to parking lots, so if she feels like dogging... nothing's there to stop her.

Darrow

I did love to see Sarah going off her own though, hope we get to see more of that once in a while to keep Lester in check :)

ojapa O

I think it would be interesting to see Lester “punishing” Sarah and making her submit to him after she went too far without his “permission”

ojapa O

I believe it’s time Dan’s meeting with Byron must happen! Dan and Sarah turn up with a fight plan but we all know how planning for the worst and hoping for the best can turn out. I believe Byron is not only dominant by nature but posses all the attributes it takes to walk the walk and talk the talk. He is physically strong, loud, abrasive, & crude. What if he posses a cock like Lester, the sexual stamina of a stallion and the kinkiness of a DOM. Byron might shock Sarah like a flash bang in a small room. Imagine that he rides and sires Sarah all night till she passes out from exhaustion. Even then not stopping! Taking her again and again in her exhausted state! Any thoughts fellow perverts?

Gee

Byron is definitely going to be dipping his wick in Sarah. I don't think that either Dan or Sarah even has any doubt of that. Byron knows about their games, and he's been damned blunt about his intentions to Dan. Earlier, he was pretty crude about his interest in Sarah. But now that he's got Jesse, and the two of them have Dan under their thumb, he's crystal clear about it. Dan has no doubts of his intentions, and Sarah's been told. She might think she can handle Byron, but I think if he moves, his dominance and Sarah's submissiveness will make it happen. I think Sarah knows this and is likely to roll with it. And let's face it, Byron's not afraid to threaten Sarah with ruin.

Darrow

Different writers have different approaches. J.J. Abrams 'mystery box' has not actually paid off much. It's not just Star Wars. It's also Lost and Fringe. The advantage is that it keeps the narrative going, but eventually, you need to produce a result. I wouldn't guess at Don Silver's process. But I'd assume from some of his comments that he has an ultimate end and rough narrative arc in mind.

Darrow

Well yeah that's writing 101 though. Do you know how many big time hollywood writers just write shit without even having a clue where it's going. It's actually something JJ Abrams is famous for - he calls it he mystery box - the idea is you write a scene early on with a mystery box, even if you don't know what it is yet, you figure it out later. Just like he wrote the mystery of Rey's parents in Force Awakens without having any actual idea of what it was. Now, that is an extreme (and awful awful awful) version of it, There's also a lot of stuff that you just call back to as you're writing. You can go back to something you did previously and say - oh what if we do this as a call back. More time than not it's that vs actual preplanned. It's major arcs and moments that are usually preplanned, and only usually because so much changes along the journey of writing. I know it all too well, because narrative writing is a world i have much experience around. you'd be shocked how many things aren't planned out that seem so clearly so. (one of my favorites has to be the "i am iron man" line in End Game...it was the editor's idea when they were cutting the movie. How much time did they spend creatively on that project and no one had thought of that line as a rebuttal until the editor? it seemed so obvious.)

hab

You may be right Royston, but maybe Sarah and Dan will surprise us! When backed up against the wall so to speak, Dan gets pretty aggressive and determined. And Sarah may combine her sexual allure and her management/administrator smarts to outmaneuver Byron. This is not to say that Sarah won’t get taken sexually by Byron, but perhaps there is an end game here in which Byron is too overconfident and gets compromised by Dan and Sarah such that he has to back off from his threats and very obnoxious behavior.

Rjh200m

I think Don has a basic storyboard in his head several chapters in advance. For example, re-read chapter 3 and notice how the sex scene with Dan pretending to be Lester foreshadows chapters 18-20. Coincidence?

Royston smith

I think they will be on the plane to Minnesota Hab. Quite how she think she will be able to “handle” Byron and Jesse whilst Dan plants the device though I don’t know. She is too confident in my opinion. Byron will outmanoeuvre them I would wager. Sorry Hab, but they need Lester’s help!!

Royston smith

i know mr.silver has a shit ton of feedback and must be difficult to decide where to go with this story - but for the love of god please let the next chapter be the jesse/byron stuff. Lester has gotten so boring. Pleeasse

hab

Deprivedone - not a problem at all!!! We are all just trying to generate discussion….

Rjh200m

Dan and Sarah still think Lester is “fixed” and there is still the issue of whether she is on birth control; if she isn’t, it’s just a matter of time until she is pregnant! But you are exactly right, Sarah couldn’t resist and Lester got what he wanted. I think at this point, Dan may not have anymore rules given Sarah’s behavior.

Rjh200m

Mark Albright

My bad man didn't mean to ruffle any feathers. I said "I would classify" because I was trying to make it apparent that it was my PoV not an objectionable fact. I don't honestly know the actual definitions of hotwife Vs cuckold. I always felt there was a difference though and having more accurate ways to categorize the stories was helpful.

Deprivedone

Where is the next tainted conceptions

Raymond Arnott

sorry, Dan,

Traycir

Yes, this story refuses to be put in arbitrary categories.

Royston smith

This story is veering between both….Dan has been humiliated in the straight definition of the work but it turns him on. When it becomes what he perceives as a real humiliation, he aggressively pushes back, e.g. throws Lester out of the house, reclaims his wife. And in many respects Sarah is acting like a hotwife although currently with just one partner (but this could change soon). Based on the end of this chapter, it looks like Sarah is taking outright control of the sexual relationship with Dan, or will be more explicit about what she wants and needs, and Dan has moved to a new level of acquiescence of her behavior and recognition of how it turns him on…..so the relationship continues to evolve!

Rjh200m

Bill?

Royston smith

Okay deprive. I didn’t realise there was a difference tbh. I bow to your superior knowledge of the genres.

Royston smith

I would classify it as a cuckold tale. Once the tale has an aspect of humiliation or power imbalances it crosses the line from hotwife to cuckolding. For instance if Sarah is now 'taking control' and her and Dan are going to 'win' via her sexcapade. I feel the story turns from a cuckold tale to a hotwife tale.

Deprivedone

Jeez….I dislike this site! All kinds of fuckups happen that don’t anywhere else!

Raymond Arnott

Tainted Conceptions is my favourite. It’s the only one left that the underdog might win! Sarah in Toxic is now going to take charge and yes will take on more than one person again but Lester will not come out in charge! So Saul is what I am hoping Don keeps running the show and Brooke ens

Raymond Arnott

Great chapter! As much as I enjoy the whole Sarah becomes Lester's submissive, I always find the problem in these stories is the ending. Either the writer gest himself in a corner and abandons the piece (Avid), or teh wife is lost t her lover, or there is some sort of regretful ending. Having Sarah embrace her inner slut and fuck her and Bill out of their problems is different and really reflects that she loves Bill and he is really into this adventure, but she loves being a slut and he loves her for it. Well done!

Traycir

This was a huge change in Dan’s demeanor compared to when he threw Lester out of the house and pretty aggressively took Sarah in their marital bed. This time he just meekly slinked away to his room and started jerking off, he didn’t have any expectation of having sex with Sarah…..

Rjh200m

I love Sarah leaving Lester unanswered when he asked her who is her daddy and who owns her. While I love seeing her submit to Lester it was also nice to see things not going completely according to Lester’s plan with Sarah taking control of the situation and fucking Lester into submission And also the end with Dan just stroking his cock in his bed by himself was a really nice detail

ojapa O

I think Otis would be a great character to bring down Thornhill. As a janitor, he is overlooked and disregarded, so he maybe happens upon some piece of info or records a conversation that incriminates the new ceo and offers to give it Sarah. For a price of course… personally, I think Thornhill is a plant from the previous ceo. He would know all the right things to put on a resume to appeal to the hospital board and he probably holds some resentment towards Sarah for getting him fired. Plus, he would be able to direct the firings of those who are on her side, as has already been happening.

Dodge1109

I would have thought it would be of great interest if it was illegal, which it is. Anyway, Peter’s employer wants to know what TLG are doing there. Until they find out they wont know whether it’s of interest to them or not. Also, this is a hot wife tale, so it would make sense for it to be a gentleman’s resort, where every sexual peccadillo would be satisfied.

Royston smith

It would make sense, yet, of what interest would that be to Peter and his so-called 'employer'? LG is a conglomerate with fingers into many different industries. Who knows what they need to secretly build to sell to some "client" who needs secrecy? There's plenty of easier ways to have safe houses for powerful men and compromised women. So its the Peter-factor (double entendre) that makes me question the hypothesis. The term "subdivision" could simply be a euphemism or code-word for anything but a "subdivision." Dan doesn't even have the plans and specs to know that its a subdivision.

Sigma

You know, the more I think about it the more I am inclined to agree with those that have hypothesised that the mysterious LG facility/subdivision is a “gentlemen’s retreat”.Somewhere executives and other powerful men can be “serviced” by compromised women, such as Sarah/Courtney. A place where LG can “entertain” corporate guests with “hospitality” they won’t get from other firms. Why else have it built out in the sticks, away from prying eyes? Why else would it need to be self sufficient? Byron has admitted he is “into that freaky shit”, referring to the Dan/Sarah/Lester menage a trois. He has also made his intentions clear with Sarah. Archer, in DL, has used Courtney to gain a client by letting him fuck her. It all starts to add up. Watch out Lester!!

Royston smith

Seems to me like the Lincoln Group is Don’s version of Umbrella. And us nerds know how well that corporation managed things.

Chazz

Yes, if it’s the plane to Minnesota we could be faced with no Lester involvement at all which would be strange. I think I would prefer another Lester plotting episode at this stage, with the Minnesota trip a bit further down the line. I really want to see how he responds.

Royston smith

Yes, the alpha version is out. The final version should hit soon .

Royston smith

So I notice Otis seems to have disappeared from view recently. Thornhill and Byron/jesse have both moved forward in terms of their plot development but Otis has not. I think his time will come soon. A note put on Sarah’s desk perhaps?

Royston smith

Mark Albright

Lester wants to control Sarah sexually so he will try to escalate things but he will want to make sure that he can control the person and Sarah at the same time. It’s in the body is Sarah got a taste of her own power and I wish that the writer had expanded on that before closing out this chapter, because it will make much better storyline if she turned the table on Lester and Dan, because what she needs to do next is for her to bring someone into the scenario that she can control and Lester has no power over it. Maybe it is someone new like her Boss but now she has is in a bind because remember what she said about not having a friend in HR that could help her and he has already put his hands on her in a very public setting, what will he do in private?

FU

Always interesting to speculate when/where the next chapter starts…minutes later, next day, or week(s) later. Maybe 22 starts with Dan and Sarah on a plane headed towards Minneapolis or Lester waking up the next morning plotting his next move. I am curious how the transition to Chapter 22 occurs.

J Lewis

The thought of crossovers in the Silver-Verse are interesting. Being mainly a TC and TA fan, I think it would be good for Sarah and Brooke to come across each other (no pun intended) and share their experiences and find that they have the cuckolding/ extra marital sex thing in common. Maybe it happens through Saul hiring Lester for some dodgy IT sabotage work or something.

Sean Thomas

I think we have got to be careful not to make the Lincoln Group all powerful. Like the deep state conspiracy theory bollocks life is never usually so joined up. The state, or in this case the LG, is seldom as competent as we believe. Agree with you, however, on the Byron as epitome of bad boss/person. If he does get his hooks into Sarah then watch out Dan/Lester you ain’t seen nothing yet. If one of the current characters in the story is Cronos, then Byron is my bet. He has the money, the sleaziness and the devious mind to fit the bill. Probably not, but stranger things have happened in this story. It may be that the mysterious facility LG are building is a “gentlemen’s retreat”. Somewhere executives and other powerful men can be “serviced” by compromised women, such as Sarah/Courtney.

Royston smith

Agree wholeheartedly. Go Sarah.

Royston smith

Don’t think Peter works for Courtneys’s company. They are on their knees after being bled dry by TLG, so couldn’t afford Peter. However, it was Courtneys company Byron was referring to. They are in the accounting space and that was the type of company he mentioned they were taking over. It may be Courtney becomes an employee of LG and eventually Byron establishes a harem including Courtney and Sarah. Hmm! Perhaps a speculation too far Royston!

Royston smith

It would be nice, but after Lester’s experience with Vernon, would he want it? We can but hope.

Royston smith

Scenario 1 is ridiculous as you say. Scenario 2, 1) a test? I doubt it. It seems that the device would give Peter all he wants, at least in the James Bond world we have entered. 2) a trap? this is much more plausible. Peter did seem to give in too quickly. In particular he didn’t press Dan on how come he was suddenly pals with Byron again. A big flaw in the scene. On balance I would reject the trap scenario as I just think Don has cobbled this scene together under time pressure and has gone with the simple but fatally flawed scenario of the spy device. 3) again has a certain plausibility, but Dan cant afford to blow Jesse’s cover as Byron knows about the “freaky” Sarah shit. He is caught in Byron’s trap. So, what would Dan gain by throwing Jesse to the Lions? Nothing. 4) the sacrifice. Could be. But Jesse isn’t delivering the goods according to Peter, so, by the internal logic of the scene, Peter needs Dan. Conclusion: Don needs to write a chapter a month so occasionally the internal logic of the plot gets compromised. This is one of those times. Totally inconsistent scene which doesn’t match up with the previous Peter scene either. This Peter is altogether less in control/plausible than the previous one.

Royston smith

Interesting FU. Love your straight to the point comments. No beating around the bush for you. Yes, Sarah has said Jesse’s cock is “considerable” so there may be some truth in your speculation. It would be a very hot/interesting development I must admit.

Royston smith

No, the spy in the camp must be there now or else how does Peter have such good info. on Dan and Jesse and their connection with TLG? And how could Peter be sure he could infiltrate somebody to retrieve the device? Your 2nd point may have validity but Peter apparently doesn’t want Dan to report anything only fit the device, so again my point is that the person already on the inside could do that. Why does he need Dan or Jesse? It’s just poor plotting/inconsistency to my mind on Don’s part, as with the ridiculous notion that Jesse could get a plum Director’s job with a prestigious firm we aren’t even told the name of. Please!! At least tell us how he has got that job. His Father’s influence? Even with that factor allowed it would be difficult as Jesse has been sacked by Walt’s firm and won’t have good references/CV. I agree it would be good to see Dan take Byron and Jesse down as Byron is a thoroughly unpleasant individual and Jesse is just completely unlikeable. Lester seems a paragon of virtue in comparison and at least has some character. However, I cant see that Dan has much choice but allow their games with Sarah as he has no room for manoeuvre. As Sarah has said she could distract them while she fits the device. I think that is the way Don is thinking, which in my opinion would be well worth my subscription for that month.

Royston smith

Peter didn’t go to Jesse first because he knew he was the junior partner. Don’t forget he appears to have a spy within the LG organisation. He would know what was happening and who had the expertise on sustainability projects. As for your second point, I can see no evidence that Peter knows about the compromised position of Dan and Sara. If he did wouldn’t he use it to his advantage now and refuse payment to Dan? As for him being Cronos,, again there is no evidence to back this up.

Royston smith

Next thing left for Sara….a gangbang! With the D&D boys.

Raymond Arnott

But why did Peter go to Dan first, and not Jesse? Was it because of his expertise or was it because of his relationship with Byron? Why didn't Peter go to Jesse first? I wonder if Peter knew about Dan and Sarah well-before even approaching Dan. Could he in fact be Cronos? Could he be so smart and devious as to have hacked Lester's desktop and found his Sarah file and notes? Such notes would also implicate Jesse with whom Lester had been corresponding for the nightclub incident. If so, Peter would already have known everything to manipulate Dan and Sarah, with Jesse as the backup plan.

Sigma

I think Sarah goes to Minnesota and uses her sex to gain access and plant the device and finds out that Byron has a better cock than Lester, and pits the two of them against each other.

FU

I keep getting the feeling that maybe he works for Courtney's company from DL. Also was wondering if the Company Byron was referring to taking over was Courtney's as he said there have been new developments. Maybe she's going to help LG. Just a wild assed guess.

Mkm560

There is a baroque possibility. That Peter isn't actually representing anyone, and that he's working for the Lincoln Group. That this whole charade is for Byron to basically co-opt Dan into working for him. The Spy vs Spy shtick is just to wrap Dan up and keep him quiet and submissive because of the 'mission.' But that seems ridiculous to say out loud. I have no sense that Dan is so unique or irreplaceable that anyone would need to go through those contortions. So let's go scenario two - Peter is real and either represents government agencies, overt or covert, or private concerns. Does this mean the whole cloak and dagger thing is real? It does seem silly. Possible scenarios: 1) It's a test, to see if Dan can accomplish anything. The real mission comes later. 2) It's a trap, once Dan does this, he's in too deep. He has to do what Peter tells him, or Peter basically gives him up. That's why Peter agreed to $200,000 - he has no intention of actually paying him. He just wants Dan compromised, and once he is, he's stuck as Peter's monkey, for whatever Peter cares to pay him. 3) Dan is the Butt Monkey. Jesse is first, he's pliable, and he's the real agent. Peter doesn't need or want Dan at all. In fact, Dan is a risk, he might blow Jesse's cover, since he figured out that Jesse's enlisted. What do you do with a guy like that? You have to bring him inside the tent or he'll burn it all down. Then you jolly him along, give him useless things to do, and carefully compromise him, so that if he is caught or decides to blab to Byron... no one will believe anything he says about Jesse. 4) Dan is the decoy/sacrifice. Dan is being set up to fail and get caught. Maybe Jesse is the one that catches him. Then Dan is discredited, the Lincoln Group's wrath falls down on Dan and Sarah. Jesse is either unscatched and exonerated, or maybe even the hero of the hour for catching the spy. Gads, these are all horrible outcomes aren't they. Let's just hope that Peter is on the up and up, and that his scheme, however silly is for real. One thought though - Peter definitely knows all about Sarah and their little games. Jesse has definitely spilled to Byron, and probably used that as his "get in the door" (particularly given how his rep got trashed and he got disgraced). To persuade Peter that he could get in the door, he'd have had to share with Peter. Alternately, after he got in the door, Peter would have demanded to know how. In fact, Peter may know a lot more than Jesse told him. He's a detective, he's very good at finding out information. If he started looking into Dan's life, he could easily find Dan's living situation, he could find out that Sarah and Lester went to restaurants together without Dan, or that Lester travelled to Sarah's home town when Dan wasn't there. Maybe he even has pictures of Sarah's naked breasts pressed up against the window when Lester was fucking her in her office. He may know or suspect a great deal.

Darrow

Yes it’s going to be interesting to see how Don handles his spinning plates. Will he keep them spinning or will they come crashing down? Will we be satisfied with his solution? I rather think Byron and Jesse will get a piece of her ass, but happy for your scenario to play out Sean. I think Lester may get wind of what is going on though before the Minnesota plane takes flight which will be interesting.

Royston smith

Absolutely agree.

Royston smith

If she has sex with Byron and or Jesse as a means to help Dan, I think she will tell Lester about it. He would then intervene to control it and may try to take Byron or Jesse down as revenge or to control what happens going forward. I think Sarah would welcome this and be grateful if Lester can extract Dan and her from the Byron/Jesse trap…..another way for Lester to get Sarah to see him as more than just a bedroom partner.

Rjh200m

There are signs here that Sarah may end up with other guys but for me, I think sex with her should be exclusively with Lester. Byron, Jess and Richard can all get close to having her but ultimately Lester is her weakness and I hope he rescues her from their clutches somehow. Maybe that leads to Sarah falling in love with Lester or a deeper emotional attachment to him.

Sean Thomas

I think the scenario is not as unrealistic as we think, the person that Peter has on the inside of TLG may not have current access to Byron’s office, but may have it in the future. But Peter needs the device planted as soon as possible, so hence his interest in Dan. Or perhaps Peter just wants Dan to think Peter has someone in TLG that could validate what Dan reports, so Dan has to be careful of feeding Peter false information. Regardless, getting access to a company’s or a CEO’s system is valuable whatever the purpose, whether economic espionage, leveraging among competitors, etc. Don’t think Peter is law enforcement since they would need to let Dan know, but it’s possible. While this is definitely a tangent from the main storyline, it will be interesting to see how it plays out, I am rooting for Dan to take down Byron and Jesse, but it may not before they get a piece of Sarah.

Rjh200m

Interesting speculations Darrow. If Peter is say FBI and not a PI ( I first raised both these possibilities a while back if you remember) then if we take the FBI or other government agency explanation as being the most likely, it may be they are onto TLG’s illegal activities. It is obvious that whatever they are up to is illegal or why the secrecy? The rather ridiculous( to my mind) ruse of planting a device on Byron’s computer could have come straight out of a James Bond Spy novel, so I think this is the way Don is thinking. If peter were a PI he would be more interested in the project itself than anything Byron is typing on his computer. Dan’s compromised situation is manna from heaven for Byron as he can be assured of Dan’s silence on the project, whilst exploiting his expertise. Again, though I am very pissed off with the obvious flaws in Don’s setting up of the peter scene( if he has a person already on the inside to retrieve the device, then why does he need Dan or Jesse to plant the device in the first place) I am prepared to grant poetic license in this instance as the overall story is so good.

Royston smith

Agree with all of that RJH. Unusual for me to be in complete agreement!!

Royston smith

Yes agreed, Sigma.

Royston smith

I apologize Royston, I meant Jerry - not Drew. Of course Drew was an incompetent but Jerry was quite competent. I edited my comment above to correct it to Jerry. Again my point is that Jerry could have some future influence.

Sigma

I think that if Thornhill and Lester meet, they will get along well and Lester will have some role at the hospital, if not head of IT, perhaps an ongoing advisor role. This will keep Lester close to Sarah, with no Dan in the middle. And provide a multitude of opportunities to further win over Sarah outside of the bedroom. If Lester can help bolster Sarah’s position at the hospital, this would further put him in a positive light in Sarah’s mind. By building up Sarah, he actually makes her more dependent on him, and less dependent on Dan. This is not to say that Sarah does not still love Dan and want a life with him, but she also wants a way out of the constant financial struggle she and Dan are in and, as we know, she wants to regain her professional pride and standing. If Lester can help with this, Lester becomes more influential in her life not just in the bedroom. This furthers Lester’s goals. Who knows how things will turn out, but Lester does not necessarily have to tear Sarah down to make her dependent on him and have her start to think of him more as part of her life than as just a sexual relieve valve. Of course, this does not mean that Lester will stop trying to further push Sarah’s sexual boundaries!

Rjh200m

All good points. However, Lester has shown he is capable of smartening himself up, both for Sarah and for his bid to rid the hospital of bad rabbit. It’s not beyond the bounds of possibility that he would do it again, In order to gain strategic advantage. Thornhill will know of him even if he hasn’t met him, as he obviously knows about the IT breach. It would be logical for him to at least speak/perhaps meet up with Lester to establish what actually happened, as he wont want it to happen again on his watch. However, I agree he may want a former crony of hi in the position. We shall see.

Royston smith

I don’t think Drew was blamed for the Bad Rabbit ransomware, but he was implicated in taking backhanders from Swan systems. That’s why he got fired. My understanding is that Lester actually provided them with that info. it’s also possible that Lester may be the new IT head of dept, which would turn the possibility of him being implicated in bad rabbit on its head. It would certainly fit with his desire to be near Sarah. I also think it’s very unlikely that Lester would leave anything lying around that would implicate him in the bad rabbit debacle. Finally my impression of Drew was that he was stupid, so if Don reintroduces him it wont be in that way. He hasn’t the brains to get into the hospital system. Sarah, herself, calls him incompetent in the last chapter, which seems pretty accurate to me.

Royston smith

I want to see our heroine get her dues however she has to. But sexual blackmail would be the best option. I want her to leave all the men drowning in her wake, even poor pathetic Dan. She needs to realize that only she can save herself and her girls, and that her husband is a weak POS that can’t help her or himself. I think she just got a taste of what she can do to take the power from the men for herself and be in control of them. After all the pussy is mightier than the cock.

FU

Or…Lester’s ace in the hole is he will implicate Dan/Sarah as co-conspirators in this scheme whose primary objective was to make Sarah look like a heroine. It’s fiction so with some creative writing maybe.

J Lewis

Sentinel Systems appear to be a very high end operation. A hospital, even a small one, could plausibly be a low end client. So, not impossible, but given Richard's slapdash approach to things, unlikely. I did wonder if the Lincoln Group might have a hand in things. Maybe the new hire could havw associations with Minnesota? Could be some nice kickbacks there.

YouTensil

Regarding who the new IT Director may be - Jerry was not included in the decision-making to bring in Swan Systems, the old IT security company that missed Lester's Bad Rabbit ransomware. Put that item on a shelf for a moment. Now Richard will likely fill the spot with a crony who may or may not be that qualified. If the crony isn't that qualified, there could be lapses and breaches in the future that may put the hospital - and the new executive team - at risk. If the spot happens to be filled by someone competent, isn't it possible that individual may look at how the prior breach happened, investigate the vendor sourcing and learn Drew wasn't involved and seek out Drew for more info? And if that competent director is very competent, perhaps he could find some leftover code or crumbs that Lester sloppily left in the system that traces back to Lester. Perhaps that might lead to the undoing of Lester Marshall toward the end of this story. Bring the Jerry hought off the shelf now: Jerry has got to be pissed at getting canned and blamed for the IT incident. Drew isn't stupid. One possibility is he has a back-door into the network and with all his free time looks around until he finds some of Lester's leftovers. Or, he feeds info to the crony-director who may use it as a power play over Richard. Doesn't seem like Don would leave this story hole open for long, and it presents numerous possibilities, one of which could involve Sentinel Systems, right??

Sigma

Those are some insightful comments and I agree. Lester regularly makes deals, and then breaks them. His attitude towards any kind of deal or bargain is that it's a step towards getting what he wanted, but not binding on him. Sarah, I think, has absorbed some of that. As you've noted, she's copying some of Lester's methods, unconsciously. Part of her corruption? Like Lester, I think that her agreement with Dan is a step towards getting what she wants, rather than a real agreement. I don't think she fully realizes that - she's kind of still in a "Good Sarah" mode where she's a loving wife, and "Bad Sarah" mode where she's sexually satisfied, and I don't think she's really confronting contradictions or making choices between the two.

Darrow

I agree. Thornhill is recruiting from his golf buddies. It's not going to be Lester.

Darrow

I agree, though it does feel like it's set up as a significant reveal. Will it be a prominent lackey for Richard? Yet another paramour? Maybe they will just be the tool that uncovers Lester's misdeeds? Personally, I would like it be the lackey (having worked with Richard many times in the past) and become another thron in Sarah's side (and possibly Lesters). but hqve them be a woman. This could introduce a new character with a distinctive dynamic. And one that doesn't necessarily have to be a sexual in nature. Do you have have any thoughts on who it might be?

YouTensil

Whilst this chapter made some choices I wasn't mad about, it is still a great piece of writing and remains one of my favourite ongoing erotic stories. It has, up till now, largely been a very emotionally taut tale of burgeoning sexual desire and wicked manipulation. It has functioned with a very small main cast of characters and only a handful of locations, giving it an intimate feeling. It is clear the story has been changing gear and things are now opening up in every way. I feel we have a clearer idea how the story will end, but how we get there is a mystery I'm looking forward to finding out about.

YouTensil

I don’t think Lester will be the IT Director. He’s hardly able to dress business casual much less as one of top management in an entire department. Plus he has total disdain for the staff and I doubt he could manage them without causing huge personnel issues.

Sigma

Some thoughts on what is next for Sarah and Lester’s relationship and impacts on Dan….. I re-read the sex scene between Sarah and Dan at their home on the couch. I was struck by how Sarah treated Dan is a similar way to how Lester treats her during sex….she would repeatedly ask Dan to say what he wanted, the way Lester makes her say what she wants as opposed to just saying yes….basically Sarah got Dan to agree to continue the relationship with Lester by riding him and getting him to say what he wanted….she was manipulating Dan….and then of course she called him Daddy, another thing she transferred from her sex sessions with Lester…. But Sarah and Dan also agreed that they were in this together, she would not have sex with Lester without Dan being involved and that they have to maintain control of the relationship with Lester….. Jumping forward to the session at Lester’s apartment at the end of the chapter, it was clear that Dan lost control and so did Sarah in the sense that the sex with Lester and Vernon completely captivated her and it was more about her satisfaction than anyone else’s including Dan. So did Lester “win” in terms of showing Dan his place. Yes he did, but Dan loved it, he was so turned on by it. I think Lester wants more than this, he wants to hurt Dan by breaking the “We are in this together” bond between Sarah and Dan. He will arrange to have sex with Sarah again without Dan involved and make Sarah break her promise to Dan. And of course, Lester will record the session showing all of Sarah’s dirty talk about how good Lester is, how much better the sex is than with Dan and how she wants to be impregnated by Lester. After this Sarah will not be able to tell Dan again that she is sorry and could not control herself. How might Lester arrange this? There would be many opportunities if he is the new head of IT at the hospital, business trip? Working late? I think this will lead to the transformation of Sarah and Dan from thinking that they are in control and in the fantasy together. It will become clear that it is about Sarah’s sexual satisfaction and Dan is only along for the ride.

Rjh200m

Posted this in the community as well, not to sure if people visit that site often.(Lester) will actually have to give up some control to gain more control in the end. He may be mad about losing control while she rimmed and throated Vernon. I still hold out hopes of the D&D gang coming back into the picture, and Cash. I am in the "how depraved" can she get group. I would like to see her don a costume/sexy for another D&D game. I don't know much about the game but she must get a "serum" from each of the members including Dan and lastly Lester. For the first member, she teases and starts stroking him via a card with instructions from the game. The cards says to help get the serum, allow this member to reach into her top and fondle her tits while she strokes. When he cums rather quickly she extracts the cum serum into a small shot glass. She then has to slowly drink the gooey serum, long clump into her waiting mouth and down her throat. The next card instructs her to move on to the next member to get his serum to save the group, this can be a wet BJ with ball play and rim tasting to get the serum into the glass for her to digest for the strength of the group, each member and game card makes her do more depraved acts in front of and including Dan. I will stop there but could write forever about that scene. The next scene would be, since Lester is mad she needs to hit rock bottom and hunt down Cash, she would have to willingly defile herself, little did she know Cash was hanging with his morbidly obese friend that night and another cripple. She finds herself servicing them all and being completely used by them with no regard for her. Which she loves. They have months of pent up sexual frustration and cum waiting for her. Maybe even a golden shower. Could ramble on here to with ideas, but you get the point and picture. Done with my diatribe but those are some of my Sarah desires and wish lists. I dont know how much of a turn on the office guys are with her, kind of hoping it doesn't go that direction but will read either way. Also still want to go back to Lester hammering a pregnancy (talk) into her fertile womb. That is a hot side bar to their sex scenes. Sorry about lack of paragraphs, every time I tried it would enter the story.

whiterhino

One thing about Byron and Sarah. Byron, my impression is, is a lot physically larger and more powerful than Lester. My sense is that he's definitely taller, broader, probably significantly stronger and used to using that strength. I think he'll show his dominance by manhandling Sara, physically picking her up, putting her in positions. She'll be cooperative, but he will put her in positions rather than let her take them. I think they'll use more positions, but they'll all be dominating positions. He wouldn't let her ride him because that's her dominating position. There'll also be very Byron-controlled blow jobs, to the point of his moving her head, but also his ordering her. And he'll want her ass. Although if he thinks she's not on the pill, he's going to save most of his cum for her pussy. Sarah is going to find Byron a very different sexual experience, one where she's denied any control, and is there to be used. I think this will send her submissive tendencies into overdrive.

Darrow

- The three exhausted men just sat there in silence. Dan was the first to get up quietly, and after a last look at the room, he somberly walked to his bedroom. Lester looked over at Vernon, “Get out.” Both men’s naked bodies were still on display. “Not gonna pay me?” Vernon said, putting on his pants and pulling his shirt over his head. “You broke the deal.” Lester sneered. A knowing smile spread across Vernon’s face, “It was fucking worth it.” Lester shut his eyes, trying to process everything that happened. He didn’t notice that Vernon had palmed his wallet from the coffee table before hurrying out the door of the apartment. - Loved the part about the wallet.

Matt Helm fan

Unless Dan can come up with some way to neutralize Byron, he is going to make it extremely hard on Dan, he doesn’t like Dan and he is going to humiliate him, literally make Dan offer Sarah to him, probably in front of others, say at the bar. Then Byron will kiss and feel Sarah up in front of everyone while having Dan respond to his questions by saying “Yes, Sir”. Sarah will willingly let this happen as part of her desire to help Dan….but perhaps after this, she will figure out a way to manipulate Byron in private, learn more about him, possible vulnerabilities…..then insist Lester to help neutralize him….

Rjh200m

I don't think so. It's never been referred to that I can recall. The descriptions of Byron consistently paint him as a bullying, borderline alcoholic with boundary issues. I can't recall race coming up.

Darrow

With Archer being a Black man Have we established if Byron is also a black man?

Gee

Actually your right Royston

Gee

Or £200k?

Royston smith

That’s certainly a possibility, but as with Jesses supposed ability to go from incompetent to Directorship at a prestigious firm, I am not so sure. It may just be poor plotting.

Royston smith

Byron doesn't seem like the sharing type. Jesse's out of luck, unless Byron decides he's bored, or unless he feels like he has enough control to punish Sarah or Dan by having her do Jesse. Byron is the type to put Dan in a chastity cage. He loves to threaten and browbeat. And Byron is definitely going to be taking Sarah. He's basically told Dan he's going to. And while Sarah knows about Byron's interest, she's still treating it like a sexy game. She doesn't appreciate how dangerous or ruthless he is. That means that she'll underestimate him, try and play with him like she does with Dan and Lester, and while she's doing that, he'll simply move in and take her. And he won't bother with pussyfooting and manipulation like Lester. Byron is not going to use a condom, because as far as he's concerned, if she gets pregnant, it's her problem, he's perfectly willing to mock her up and force Dan to raise the child. If he gets an STD it's definitely her and Dan's problem. Basically, if Byron had his way, Sarah would have her ass tattooed with the Lincoln Group logo, and join Brooke in a stable of Lincoln Group whores.

Darrow

It wasn’t a tough join the dots with regard to Detestable Liaisons. Now that Archer has broken Courtney’s company up and is in the process of breaking Courtney in and absorbing her into the Lincoln Group, we can see the similarities here in TA. The Lincoln Groups captains seem to fit a mould. Archer plays dirty, no doubt But Byron plays for keeps and is a dangerous personality. If Byron gets hold of Sarah, I believe he will become very possessive of her. Regardless of her marriage and children. I don’t see how Jesse get any of Sarah’s tail in this series. At least without Byron’s say so!

Gee

Not a bad guess.

Darrow

Dan has at least negotiated $200k for his part. It may go some way. If Sarah is helping Dan She may get caught up being fucked by Byron while the couple try installing the flash drive in the back of Byron’s Computer server

Gee

I was thinking the same Darrow

Gee

I assume this telegraphs to us that Peter's not trustworthy and running a game on Dan.

Darrow

I was thinking same kind of off the grid raunchy resort where their executives, customers and friends can do whatever they want with woman brought into entertain. But there is a lot of merit in your theory also.

Mkm560

Wow, maybe Sarah will sign up with Disney or lucas films and beat up a martial arts expert twice her size.

LesterstheMAN

No, he's fulfilling the wishes of the majority posts. It may be garbage, but that is the problem with a lot of patreon. You aren't creating for your viewpoint, but you constantly change your view for the whims of the majority . It ain't you working for the Pope and and that's the view you worry about, now it's the masses of peasants who think a colour by numbers is high art.

LesterstheMAN

One final thought: What the F is going on with Lincoln Group. It's been repeatedly lampshaded. They've got a major project, but whatever it is, it's not a subdivision. Dan keeps asking these basic questions, and Byron dodges them. At the same time, the plan seems to be for complete self containment - indications are autonomous water, autonomous power, no clear connections to any grid. Some sort of super-bunker complex for the super-rich? A Vault as in the Fallout Universe? A refuge from the End of the World? Maybe some Drug Lord's complex? The fact that Don Silver keeps lampshading it makes me wonder if there's something major to do with it in his storyline. Maybe it is the Bunker for the end of the World, and Sarah, Lester and Dan end up alone in it.

Darrow

Dan's actually smarter and more competent than I'd expected him to be this time out. His kicking of Lester's ass seems to have invigorated him. He has to put up with Byron's crap. But he's negotiated at least half way effectively with Peter, and he's building his portfolio. I don't know that he's actually winning or leading with Peter. The guy's a professional spook and they've always got games. Peter is almost certainly lying to Dan about the unit. And about his plans. Dan is a tool, and things often don't turn out well for tools. But on the positive side, he's sorted out his feelings and fetish regarding Lester, he's definitely into the game, even if it creates emotional conflict, and he's deferring to Sarah. They're honest with each other (although Sarah is less honest about Thornhill and his sexual harassment) and Sarah is now well aware of Byron and Jesse, the blackmail, and Byron's designs on her. The weird/interesting thing is that Sarah seems to be taking Byron in stride, she even uses the thought or threat of Byron to tease and excite Dan. This is weird and risky because Byron is a real threat, he's not simply a game player like Lester, but seriously bad news threatening both their lives and livelihood. You don't play with rattlesnakes, and Sarah acts like she's willing or interested in playing with Byron. That can go very very bad. Given that this is porn, we can be pretty sure that Sarah will end up in Minneapolis and on the end of Byron's cock, and that Dan will either be watching or at least aware of what's going on. I think the vibe will be very very different from Sarah and Lester. I have to say, I do like this stronger, more confident Dan. I like that Dan and Sarah are acting as a team together as they face their adversaries and have their adventures. But the sea of troubles are rising all around them, stormy weather ahead, looking forward to what's going on.

Darrow

All right, I've had the chance to do a full reading. Impressions? Jesse is completely out of his league. Peter's basically confirmed that Jesse is his plant. But he's also confirmed that Jesse's failing. Jesse's been pushing to go to Minneapolis, but no luck. Reconstructing, it's clear how it's gone down. Jesse got enlisted, he approached Byron, and to get his "In" he fed Sara and Dan to Byron. But it's clear that Byron's not particularly fond or respectful of Jesse. And that's sinking in for Peter - when Dan slags Jesse, there's more or less acceptance. So where does this leave Jesse? A frustrated little man, in over his head, in tow to Byron, in deep with Peter, full of impulses, desires, unrequited passions and resentments, and with no one to take it out on but Dan. He will go to lengths to make Dan miserable. And even if he doesn't know Dan's working with Peter, his emergency plan to save his ass will be to throw Dan under the bus as Peter's stooge (the fact that it'll be true is just bonus). Let's hope that Peter's not stupid enough to let Jesse know that Dan's his guy as well. Byron... by the way, did everyone notice the reference Byron made to Detestable Liaisons? Geez, Byron is the epitome of every bad boss ever. Short tempered, bullying arbitrary. There's no point to his little bullying session. He's just a creep. Makes me wonder how he managed to get so far. He also feels deeply stupid. One of those stubborn assholes who got through life bullying and mucking about with everyone, a narrowminded creep who simply gets off on belittling people. His world is full of tiny victories of self aggrandizement. A more toxic version of Thornhill. Which makes me wonder if Thornhill is connected, directly or indirectly to the Lincoln group.

Darrow

People aren't cheese. That is to say, they aren't one thing, all the way through, all the time. They have their ups and downs, their struggles, their moments of ambition and triumph and their expressions, one way or the other. Lester's character is all over the map - he's always the same guy, but he makes mistakes, he has wins and losses, he schemes, sometimes he feels triumphant and dominant and sometimes a beleaguered loser. Same with Sarah, sometimes she's a sex goddess, sometimes she's a slave, sometime's she gives in to cravings, and sometimes she's ascendant.

Darrow

Excellent points

Rjh200m

I suppose that is a possibility RJH. However, she values her reputation as a work professional a mother and wife. The more people know what is going on the more Dan and herself are susceptible to blackmail/exposure. Would she want that? I think not. As I say it doesn’t sit well with her previous reactions to things. During the argument between the pair in the last chapter she brought up the Jesse situation and Dan’s dumb phone PW habits again, so it clearly still rankles. I don’t think her reaction to the new Byron/Jesse situation would have been so amenable as Don wrote it tbh.

Royston smith

lol that was the most ridiculous thing i ever heard. 250k??? I know Dan is a bit dumb, but dear lord. Peter think he's that dumb too? He could offer him 25k and it would be big for Dan. Jesus Don is just throwing shit at the wall at this point.

hab

Sarah has a plan to go after these guys, she as much as said so to Dan….and her thoughts in the last scene about men wanting control suggested she is tired of this and will start to use her powers to fight back (men are putty in her hands)

Rjh200m

Lots of differing comments on the last scene, Sarah’s “taking charge”, and implications for future chapters. One thing that intrigues me is that Sarah has had it with all the men that are trying to control her and Dan, particularly Thornhill, Byron and probably Jesse. She seems poised to use all of her sexual powers to fight back hard against these jerks. This should be interesting in how this plays out. Also, the last scene throws into question the whole premise of Sarah being completely submissive to Lester, out of control, etc. Before the last scene she told Dan explicitly that Lester is just a fuck toy. The last scene supports this and perhaps all of Sarah’s dirty talk is actually just a game for her, she tells Lester what he wants to hear, but does she actually believe what she is saying? I would say the last scene indicates that Sarah also had a secret plan! And the last scene is where she revealed it. I for one would like to see her take down Thornhill and Byron, they are such detestable characters (at least Lester has some interesting attributes). The dynamic with Lester will be way more complicated, as well as the evolving sexual relationship with Dan. Anyway, Don is doing what a great writer should be doing, keeping readers guessing and surprised, even if we all don’t agree on each aspect of the story. And to weigh in on the comments on Vernon, I agree that he is a very intriguing and entertaining character! And it shows that Lester is not in control of everything, despite his need to be. Again, a good twist in the story by Don. As in life, stories don’t always go according to plan!

Rjh200m

Love Sarah's aggression in the chapter. Hopefully this stays a Sarah and Lester centric story. I don't mind Sarah teasing the other characters in the story but not interested in having sex with all the other male characters. Sarah and Lizzie does have possibilities.

Nick Krueger

The other point I would raise concerns Sarah’s reaction to the Jesse/Byron situation. It appears Dan has told her of their nefarious intentions, but she doesn’t seem bothered. So, yet another person knows about the Lester/Sarah/Dan menage a trois and she’s not bothered. Think back to her reaction to Jesse finding out. She was really pissed. Would she not at least be a little annoyed? This is skated over far too easily in my opinion.

Royston smith

The Peter scene in simply doesn’t ring true to me. There are several flaws. The biggest flaw is that Peter says Dan only needs to fit the device , he will get somebody else to remove it. If that were true then this implies Peter has someone on the inside already. So why not have that person fit the device as well as remove it. Why does Peter need Dan or Jesse at all? —Another problem Sarah articulates:” You just need to plug something into the back of Byron’s computer.? And he’s gonna pay you two hundred and fifty thousand dollars for that?” Sarah said, “It seems almost too good to be true.” It does seem implausible! Very!!! The other point is a plain error. Dan asks Peter for £200k whereas Sarah has clearly been told by Dan its £250k.

Royston smith

So, this was a wonderful chapter, especially the final sex scene where finally we had Sarah’s desire for 2 cocks fulfilled. It was so well written and paced. The build up with the pizza delivery man, Vernon’s lascivious attention on Sarah, Lester’s taking of Sarah in front of the gawking sexually aroused males whilst taunting Dan by making Sarah admit he is the better fuck and he owns her pussy, and then Vernon’s intervention and Sarah’s hidden, but triumphant sexual alter ego taking centre stage, with Lester vanquished. I loved the Vernon character and would love to see him feature again, although he seems to have burnt his bridges with Lester! Don writes this sort of dissolute character so well. Vernon was every bit as good a character as Cash. Loved: “Be more careful whose lap you fall into dear”! So, all in all a brilliant chapter that didn’t disappoint, but I think it could be improved in some areas. The Peter scene in particular, simply doesn’t ring true to me. Will deal with that in another post.

Royston smith

Sarah definitely got into it... She was completely submissive. "Vernon was fucking her mouth like a pussy, and he was unrelenting, uncaring and dominating. Like he was just using her for his own pleasure. He wasn’t loving and sweet like Dan. And he wasn’t trying to corrupt her and dangle her in front of her husband like Lester was. This was pure unrelenting, pent-up sexual desire expressed in raw physical action. She doubted that he cared if she even enjoyed it. He just wanted her to make him cum. Something about that, just being used as a sexual object, turned her on and seemed to open a door inside her." and later... "Sarah’s tongue touched his asshole, but she was too lost to fully realize the enormity of what she was doing. Vernon held her head and swayed it back and forth as Sarah’s pristine tongue began to eagerly lick the dirty asshole of his stranger, her tongue swirling around it, eliciting deep moans from the weirdo. She felt dirty, disgusting, and so, so, so fucking wet." I don't think she did that for Lester, yet. She knew exactly what Vernon was, and she understood exactly what she was to Vernon - a piece of meat to use - and she was into it. Odds are if she runs across Vernon, he's got a good chance of coming in her. If he has even half an opportunity, he'll take it, and she'll let him do whatever he wants.

Darrow

Yep. I agree. He's all about control and domination, and he feels he lost that, and lost control of Sarah. He's been all about squashing Dan, but now he's got to regain control of her... while wondering if he ever had it. It makes an interesting dynamic.

Darrow

Just finished reading this latest chapter. Obviously everyone has different desired outcomes for the characters and expectations of what happens next. I thought this chapter felt a bit more like some of the earlier chapters that got me into the story in the first place. I was worried in the last chapters that we were heading toward a scenario where there were no likable characters left in the story and I felt like this chapter reset that a bit. I think if you skip around in this one looking for the action then you miss a lot of the story telling and setup. I think we actually got to see a bit of character growth in this one. Dan and Sarah communicating about what is going on at their jobs and solving problems together. This sets up a lot of the other scenarios for this that have been teased. Lester realizing that he may not be as in control of Sarah as he thinks, should make him come up with even more nefarious schemes. Dan starting to realize just how much he really wants this, Sarah starting to accept how much she wants it. I think it sets up a lot of future chapter and scenario possibilities. Nice job again!

InfamousFerret57

I wouldn’t say people are missing things, we each get something different out of the story. The entire saga works best as a whole, reading each chapter a month apart leaves us speculating and heading off in our worlds, with different expectations. But all that aside, this chapter isn’t without its merits, but it’s certainly not without fault. While seeing the ending with lester wasn’t what I expected, I can look past to it to what may come next. For me, the repetition is what halts things, I can over look character changes and all sorts of things, but after the last chapters massive shift with Dan, it felt like a major back track to head back to the apartment and right back to the status quo. Yes there are reasons for why they continue the game, why they give control right back. But even for lester, he’s an awful person and he just waited patiently at the apartment and jacked up the rent? The story for me, needs to progress, not regress characters, one step forward, two back. Again this is just my own thoughts, I’m glad people are enjoying this chapter and I myself got enjoyment out of it. I’ll be waiting for the next chapter, I’m here for the roller coaster ride! Others however, I’m pretty sure are here to complain. They just want to bitch, but with no actual point. Why do they stay? 🤷🏻‍♂️ but we can fully expect them next chapter, bitching and stating their leaving…again.

Jekyll

“Lester shuffled back to his bedroom with his fat feet plodding on the wood floors.” Lot of comments so far on the further corruption of Sarah but little on WTF happen to cocky Lester. Guessing he’s coming back with a vengeance in Ch 22. He will want his total control back.

J Lewis

I to have known guys like that and they do rack up quite the kill count. Seems there is something there, a skill perhaps to pick up on things in their targets. Or perhaps it’s the total not caring, or giving a shit about their partners, is appealing in its own way for certain people.

Jekyll

This is such a Karen post lol

tim

I agree Arc Right from the approach to the Chicago apartment and what awaits them, The renegotiated terms between Lester and the couple over rent increase and Dan’s temper, The dare of Sarah wearing the revealing attire, The exposure to Vernon and the black pizza delivery man, Lester cornering Sarah at the door and leaving her shocked and aroused of his taking ownership of her moving forward. While Dan is in the kitchen completely unaware of the exchange, The great sex scene that begins and then all of a sudden Sarah grows a back bone and becomes the dominant one. Taking on Fwo men, draining their cum, retreating to the bath room to clean up & then go back to service Dan in their room. I was a little disappointed tbh!

Gee

Good morning Readers In the past when Lester took Sarah on dates, Lester had an intention to show Sarah off to strangers, as she was fucked. All through TA Don has written about Lester’s goals to corrupt her. Lester’s thoughts have been revealed in most chapters. :- sharing Sarah with one or more cocks :- making money from customers who will buy Sarah’s photos, videos and perhaps blackmail of Sarah to perform who knows what. In this latest chapter Sarah is in a heightened state of arousal as she and Dan drive back to the Chicago apartment. Sarah is scared of Lester’s control of her bodies biological responses! Lester goes to the trouble to recruit Vernon. A raggedy stranger with a meaty cock bigger than Dan’s, smaller than Lester’s. Makes her dress in a transparent purple robe with matching panties, exposes her to a young black man & Vernon to strip her of control over her fantasy, Lester corners Sarah by the door and makes her understand that he alone owns and controls her, leaving her shocked at her arousal and willingness to obey him Lester successfully has Dan retreat to his paralytic state so as he is a helpless bystander to Sarah’s sexual corruption and change of ownership. But! Then Lester doesn’t want to share her willingly? I wanted to see Lester take ownership of Sarah from Dan in a dramatic way! Not behave like some love sick puppy that doesn’t want share his favourite toy. Lester is looking more like Jesse atm, which is disappointing!!! For me, it would have been better for Lester to have invited the Black pizza delivery guy in, Have Sarah tease all 4 men in the lounge room Then get Sarah back to his room, in her aroused state, give her ass, pussy and tits extended fore play, Have Dan retreat to his room to peep through the peep hole at Lester ravishing and stealing all of Sarah’s remaining resistance Mean while! Vernon and the black pizza delivery boy wait till Dan goes back to his room and closes his door. As Lester described to Vernon, would happen. For Vernon and the young black man to sneak quietly down the hall to Lester’s room and quietly let themselves in. Closing and locking Lester’s door behind them. Then have Lester lead the two men, to ravish Sarah’s shocked mind and body all night. Fucking her senselessly into sexual exhaustion and complete shock of submission to Lester. With Dan knocking & banging on the wall of his room and Lester’s door to try and stop proceedings! But In the end as he watches Sarah broken in and sired, he surrenders to his own fantasy and desires to watch Sarah completely surrender to a group of undesirable men. A moment that changes the balance of powers in the 3 original characters lives moving forward.

Gee

You know, I've known guys like Vernon, and it is amazing the amount of pussy (or in one case, cock) they got. I'm not sure what it was. They were absolutely unfiltered, pure id. The knew what they wanted and went for it, there was no beating around the bush, no courting, they just wanted and would do anything to get there. And women seemed to like that. That crap of Vernon pulling Sarah onto his lap to groper her, that rings true to life for these guys, and they'd do stuff just like that. Sometimes they got slapped or punched, but a lot of times, they'd get away with it. They'd always treat it as a joke, don't mean no harm, having fun, always a party, and even if the woman didn't like it, she'd go along with it until she could pry free. Part of it may have been the environment - they were relentless drinkers all of them, some druggies, they practically lived in bars, or parties, laughing it up, being the life of the party, joking constantly, pretending to be everyone's friend. So women in those environments, drinking, laughing, getting high or doing some rails, easy mark for a pussyhound I suppose. Intoxicated women didn't turn me on, but these sorts would do anything for pussy, promise or say anything and degree of sobriety or even unconsciousness didn't really register. But honestly, there was something about these guys, women genuinely were attracted to them. They scored a lot of pussy. Some ugly ugly pussy. But also women you wouldn't think would take a second look at them. I don't know if there's some sexiness in them, or a masochistic impulse, or just that their cheap sleaze seemed sexy. But they fucking made out. And not trustworthy at all. They'd act like your best friend, but if they could steal your wallet, they'd do it. I remember one guy back home, went home one night with this girl, they were both shitfaced. Come morning, while she's sleeping he stole her Television, and any money he could find. Of course, her brothers tracked him down, beat the living shit out of him. But the television was gone, traded off for some rails. The fucked up thing? They ended up getting married, this was about a year later. The marriage didn't last, just long enough to knock a few kids out of her, ruin her figure and ruin her life, and as far as I could tell he never ever stopped running around on her. It was over the second time he infected her with gonorrhea while she was pregnant with their second kid. By that time of course, her brothers had given up on her, pretty much everyone had. Kind of sad. Of course, none of these guys ever amounted to anything. Most of these guys eventually crawled into the bottle, they were basically living there already. Or the got hooked on the needle. There comes a point of no return where the bottle or the needle or rails just wrecks you out physically, you go from charming sexy sleaze, to walking dead sleaze, your skin looks like its rotting, you get most of your teeth knocked out for you, your dick doesn't work any more and no one even wants to touch it, and all your happy, charming, sleazy life of the party bullshit isn't working on anyone. You either find some poor victim to play mommy for you, or you just keep spiraling. Sad to say, knowing these guys, I am not overwhelmed with the milk of human compassion. The truth is, guys like that aren't worth a lick of spit to anyone. But man, do they rack up the pussy. Unbelievable. In that sense, Sarah's reaction to him, and the way she got into him kind of felt authentic to. Vernon is very true to life, and a lot more fun to watch on a page than in real life. Odds are, if he ever ran into Sarah again, like alone or in the street, and he had ten minutes, he'd end up tapping her ass. She'd do her sex kitten routine, and he'd dive right down on it, until he was blowing load in her pussy.

Darrow

@Sigma -- I'd suggest that a more a pro pos interpretation of that post would be to suggest that @Royston (so it appears in this instance, at least) doesn't want to recognize/acknowledge what a "character arc" is, and how identifying some occasional incidents of Sarah's initial (and dwindling) assertiveness, even as she submits (until this sudden and abrupt 180), with ever increasing fervour to Lester's growing demands / instructions, actually illustrates the very ongoing (until now) gradual arc of moral decay that I've been speaking of, as she *had been* growing ever more attached / addicted to Lester's 'attributes', attentions and 'affections'... 🤔🤷‍♀️🙄

Arc

My god people here have a lot of thoughts. It was hot lol keep it up Don

Alan

Agreed.

Royston smith

Royston brought receipts!

Sigma

"Sometimes it does feel like we’re all reading different stories." FWIW, it's basically just a the application , and combination, of simple "Wish Fulfillment" and "Confirmation Bias"; two common, and well-recognized, human cognitive derelictions. 😕🤷‍♀️🤔

Arc

I think all you guys (and girls?) who are being negative about this chapter are missing something. Lester is still basically dominant over Sarah. If Vernon hadn’t intervened how would the chapter ended? With Lester firmly in control and Dan having to swallow the humiliation of Sarah admitting in front of him and another stranger that Sarah is Lester’s slut, she prefers his cock to Dan’s, craves it all the time and just wants to be fucked and owned by Lester. She admits her pussy is his. I don’t think in the end she will become the dominant one, she loves to be dominated by Lester too much. Her exhibitionist side comes out when she is exposed to strangers and she then desires to have their tribute in the form of spunk. This doesn’t mean she is suddenly a cock junkie or that she doesn’t still crave Lester’s huge cock. She obviously does. The most telling phrase from Sarah in this chapter is this: “They’ve had their bumps in the road lately but she wanted to find a way forward, to have everything she wanted”. She is thinking of her and Dan’s relationship and obviously wants to still have her Lester fix by getting Dan to come round to it.

Royston smith

"Groundwork has been laid for more adventures for Sarah." Was there somehow, somewhen, somewhere that anyone genuinely thought any further adventures for Sarah had become forestalled? 🤔🤨 Realistically, it's not whether there *are* going to be more 'adventures', I mean, as long as he keeps getting >$20 / user / chapter, I'm well sure that Don will find a way to keep chewing out chapters forever. So, the only meaningful question then, is whether it becomes just another stereotypical, and endless, slog of repeated variations on slut-wife-fucks-people-for-fun+profit, (and everyone sings kumbya and lives happily ever after), as this chapter appears to be setting up, or a tragic tale of a seemingly average housewife + mother who succumbs to her latent inner frailties in the face of a pernicious, and toxic, outside influence who slowly, but inexorably leads her to the loss/destruction of everything she once held dear, even as she nevertheless continues relentlessly chasing-the-dragon down into a bottomless well of depravity. I'm only willing to pay for *one* of those two scenarios, while the other practically stupefies me with overwhelming boredom and ennui...

Arc

Totally agree JL.

Royston smith

Yes you are correct, Darrow. He was very sleazy, but great fun as you say. I-thought he was a great character. He wouldn’t lie down, but kept trying to push Lester’s boundaries and succeeded in the end. He saw a moment of weakness and took full advantage! Loved the palming of the wallet and the comment to Sarah:”Be more careful whose lap you fall into dear”, when he has just pulled onto his lap, ground against her, and mauled her tits”. Brilliant!

Royston smith

Hab. Not talking about the 70's. Talking about the new trend of girl boss. What this story was, was great. Less is more. Her wanting to act with Lester instead of against him is what made this hot. It undermines everything this story had going for it, and now it's a whole new story. And it sucks.

Chris K

One really fun thing was how unbearably sleazy Vernon was. The guy just about oozed, he was so creepy. No taste, no class, a human packrat. He was just so icky, it was like he left dirt on everything he touched.

Darrow

@Chris K - yep, because Princess Leia was just a damsel in distress? 2 seconds into her rescue she's ripping on Han/Luke and taking control of the situation. 70s were about female empowerment also. So characters like She-Hulk, Captain Marvel, etc. never existed before? Star Wars was ruined in the prequels and worsened by terrible creative leadership of the sequels. You really just hate not being in control - maybe you're just not in control of your own life and are easily threatened or vulnerable and that scares you? Get a therapist.

hab

Sometimes it does feel like we’re all reading different stories. Sarah feels like she’s got multiple personalities at times. Sarah does get off to fantasizing about getting two cocks off, multiple times throughout the series. None of those moments show anything other than Sarah loves to be worshipped and have that adoration. That doesn’t speak to a dominant and in control person. My reasons above show the difference in character growth for Sarah. But we all interpret things differently and clearly each of us wants different paths. It is Don’s story and he has a vision, but I feel like he adds bits here and there to try and please everyone. Leading to the very divisive fan base on this chapter.

Jekyll

Absolutely disagree. Her sexual alter ego was foreshadowed all the way through the series. In ch 1 she gets off to imagining 2 cocks exploding for her, in ch 12, she kisses the stranger in the parking lot, in 15 she is really turned on by cash who comes on her tits, in 17 we read Sarah saying this:” Maybe tomorrow night I’ll come out here without my husband. And we’ll see which of you can last longer for me and whose cock is bigger. In chapter 19/20 her “inner monster” begins to emerge from her psyche most explicitly:”The idea of being bad,” She ran her manicured fingers up and down his shaft, “Just turns me on. So much. Whether it’s with you or someone else. I think you might have created a monster.” I must have been reading a different story than you.

Royston smith

That total female empowerment is ruining this. Disney did the same thing to Star Wars and Marvel. Sarah, welcome to the 'elite'

Chris K

Teach In a way it is a sudden change for Sarah. Sure, we’ve seen glimpses of her taking control from Lester, but in every one of those moments, Lester took it back almost instantly, or within a short time frame. All the way back when Sarah pushed Lester to the bed and claimed his cock as hers, he wrestled her back down moments later and was the dominant. More recently in the Williams living room, Sarah dictated terms to Lester, he allowed it, until he face fucked her into oblivion. Then in Dan’s office, we see a change in Sarah similar to this chapter. But in moments she’s back to being submissive to Lester. When she learns Dan is there in the room, she try’s to get up and what happens? Lester shoves her face back into the bed and keeps fucking her. Even in a moment where she realizes what she just said in front of her husband and knowing the rules she broke having Lester there, she keeps fucking until Dan stops her. (Let’s not forget how she was when Dan marched up the stairs, and fucked the shit of her. Not only fid she submit to that dominate move, she got off harder than ever with her husband.) Also to, how docile she has been with Richard. It all shows a trend, with men like Dan and the dnd crew, she exudes sexuality and control. Now with men like Lester and Richard, she still exudes sexuality, but in a different way. These moments were my belief of the toxic attraction, , showing her submissiveness to dominate men. And no Sarah has never been forced, coerced and manipulated, 100% So not a sudden change, just an oddly timed one. Next chapter will help define this moment.

Jekyll

It has evolved beyond a TA. But I am still enjoying it. Groundwork has been laid for more adventures for Sarah.

John Lewis

Also, coercion can come in *many* forms, force only being *one* of them. Addiction is also a form of it, as is peer-pressure, and a myriad of others. She hasn't been *forced* per se, but she's definitely been manipulated and cajoled along this path nonetheless. She *had* been embarked on a roaf of growing self-destruction, debasement and failing impulse-control, literally right up until the moment Vernon's dick found its way into her mouth. Then, *BANG*, she's taking charge, has no vulnerability-to, or need for, Lester, and, in a wholly un-presaged, sudden epiphany, now sees all men as hapless pawns that she can seduce, use and manipulate for her own ends... Whatever... without some serious retconning, this chapter indelibly marks the official jumping of the shark for this tale....

Arc

I get that some people want the story to *progress*. Everyone can't be pleased. To some we don't want *progress* for the sake of progress. Most people have probably made the journey due to two important aspects. First and foremost is the sexual fetish of cuckolding. Secondly and also important is good writing of the cuckold fetish. If the story moves away from the fetish people sought out most will find it elsewhere. The majority are here for Don's ability to tickle the erotic zone of our brains to get our own great orgasms similar to Sarah from Lester. Just like most porn the story is secondary and can be flimsy as long as it's on point. If the story is also good though people will seek it out and you will get things like subs. I doubt many people are more interested in the storyline than in their orgasms. Just like Dan we are mostly slaves to what turns us on and don't have control over it. So despite us growing to love Don's story and characters we cannot get off on content that doesnt turn us on.

Deprivedone

For 75% of the last scene, she's realising she needs Lester's cock to feel whole; she's telling him he owns her/her pussy; she's mentally acknowledging to herself that she wants to please him, and do what he tells her to do. Then, fuckstick Vernon suddenly gets up, somehow takes over the room, shoves his cock in her mouth, and she *instantly* becomes queen of the whole wide world and the story doesn't GAF about/abandons virtually *all* of her character-development over the past ~half-dozen chapters. I was here to see her corruption and defilement: her toxic addiction to Lester's cock and the perversions he induces her into experiencing, as they grow to consume her and lead her to into forgoing or destroying the things in her current life that should be important (Dan, kids, job, finances etc) even as she increasingly focuses on doing anything to feed the ever more voracious and rapidly metastasizing beast that deeply addicted people often come to see their compulsions as. A story about Empowered-slut-Sarah is genuinely nothing special, and what had been a promisingly novel plot about a woman's descent into depravity has suddenly devolved into just another stereotypical entry in an already-bottomless panoply of the slut-wife-sleeps-around for kicks and advancement genre...

Arc

I think it is about Sarah's freedom also I just see it differently. There is constant internal monologue of her stating she cannot control herself around lester. That is also part of why she is so fulfilled by their encounters. If Sarah was *in control* their relationship would never have started in the first place. She was already in control with Dan and would most definitely be in control if she forgoes the really good sex in her life and just sticks with Dan alone. I've said it before but the way I see Sarah being empowered and in control is her continueing on the same path. She gets the mindbliwing sex from Lester and the love and adoration from Dan. Dan provides her the control aspect she needs and Lester gives her a break from the need to be in control every second. Her engagements with Lester are so powerful she can give up that control for once and she had found that is what she wants. Sarah is getting what she needs and wants. If she was able to control Dan then she could get the best of both worlds. This also fulfills Dan's cuckold cravings which he begrudgingly acknowledges he also has been getting the highest high from. This is both Dan's and Sarah's toxic attraction.

Deprivedone

There's nothing wrong with group sex. I used to do a lot of it back in the day. It's hot. And honestly, in story terms... you have to keep on moving.

Darrow

I'm not so sure. Sarah's first sex with Lester was on her own, not Lester's seduction. She just walked into his bedroom and fucked him. And yes, there were text messages, Jesse egging her on, but she was the one that did it, that chose. The first time Lester went out parking with her, she ends up dirty talking a stranger, and even french kissing him while being fucked. The scene with the DnD game, that's all Sarah, playing and playing with the boys until Ned literally ejaculates in his pants. She strips naked in the hallway before going into the bathroom. Once in the bedroom with Lester, she grabs his cock and announces it belongs to her - it's her property now. There's a recurring trend with Lester's seductions, the games they play... wherever they want to take her, she's already there. If you read the encounters and progression carefully, this is really all about Sarah being given permission and freedom to do something, and she does it. That's why Lester is so fascinated.

Darrow

I love Sarah's Snarky Pussy Chronicles.

Darrow

I wouldn't call it a sudden empowerment. Sarah's been going in this direction for a while. She's always been the leading edge, and there's never been a moment when she was forced into something.

Darrow

Yep. I can see it going there.

Darrow

Yep. TA ended on the last one. Now is just Sarah's Snarky Pussy Chronicles.

Chris K

I like the idea of Sarah taking control. Remember, the dynamic that controls this story is Dan/Sarah/Lester, Dan's cuck fantasy, Sarah's willingness to stoke his fantasy, Sarah's evolution (Loving the tease, craving Lester's big cock, and now realizing she's in control), Lester's slovenly appearance and fat physic, his sexual performance, his devious behavior. Sarah's in charge now, Dan's cock belongs to her, no masturbation, He needs to recognize and enjoy Sarah having sex with other men, Sarah discovers her power and tries to give Dan his fantasy when possible, it's now her fantasy too and she deserves to enjoy it. Dirty talk is one of her strengths, she uses it to stoke passion. Sarah realizes once Dan has his orgasm the dynamic quicky dissipates, she considers a method to control Dan's orgasms, it's for his own good, she will definitely unlock Dan as soon as he's ready. Lester helps Sarah find the perfect device. Lester still wants Sarah as his own and Sarah stokes both Lester's and Dans fantasy/ego by denying Dan for periods. Dan loves it as confirmed by his arousal when confronted with the possibility, we need to control our little friend Dan.

Michael Haase

I'll agree with that. The last two chapters have oddly changed the Sarah/Lester dynamic (with him suddenly struggling to keep up with her in the bathroom scenes in the previous chapter and her now taking control from him and going far beyond him in this one) and it just feels like it both came out of nowhere and feels pretty off-putting. Obviously, it's Don's story, but eh.

Chris

Oh dear, that's it for me, happy strokes guys , this has turned into farce.

Kringle

Super hot, and going in totally the right direction right up until Vernon stuck his dick in it and literally fucked everything up... 🤦‍♀️😝 Sarah's sudden empowerment, out of nowhere, and concordant, newfound ability to just disregard/ignore Lester was a monumental disappointment, as well as being a vastly more effective instant-turn-off than being doused with a bucket of ice-water would have been. A score of chapters, and however-many thousands of words in this saga, all but entirely wrecked by the last few-hundred of this one... 🙄😠😝

Arc

It took this long, but finally a chapter in which the sex scene didn't even do it for me. - way too long, characters doing things that just dont make sense. Dan and Sarah give Lester all the control...again. It didn't really feel like much changed after alllll that discussion and after what happened in Ch20. Yay, she sucked a guy off on her own terms. It's ch21 ffs, that's it? You might as well have done this Vernon thing when Dan was out of town. What SHOULD have happened: 1. This chapter they take a break from Lester. Cut him off, the deal is over (this way when he works his way into her company and what not, it becomes 100% lust and cheating) 2. This chapter should've got right into the Byron/Jesse thing. It could have worked out great because: a) time passes and deep down Sarah is having withdrawals from her intense orgasms. She went from marathons with Lester, to good sex with Dan - but not the same. She yearns for that high. b) The 3some stuff has already been teased and planted in her head multiple times. c) she needs to feel in control (i take it that's part of why she took control with vernon - her work, etc. is making her feel less empowered) ^ Those elements combined with the excitement of the 3way, the taboo of using her against Dan, give them some bigger/thicker cocks than Dan and you have all the ingredients for her to lose herself and take them both at the same time, while she gives the marching orders. It would've setup a very interesting follow up. Instead we just got a rehash of old chapters. Don - if you want some feedback on your outlines before moving on to the writing, I have a background in narrative fiction.

hab

Bye!

Darrow

I had the same feelings about devolving into group sex but even more so about the deterioration of Lester's character and more importantly Lester and Sarah's dynamic. There was some discussion on the insider draft and you have each person rooting for their desired outcome. I can at least understand some group sex if people are asking for it but it's like throwing cold water on the whole ordeal the way it's going. I will say that if you're still around you will at least get 1 more awesome chapter of tainted conception. *no real spoiler here but just in case you really don't want any hints this is a spoiler warning for the tainted conception draft* Unfortunately it is being foreshadowed that story will possibly take the exact same direction. Still the draft of chapter 4 of tainted conception was worth a sub for the month. Ultimately, we can't know how the story will proceed. Perhaps Don will bring it back around, but like you I could consume so much more content with the 3 main characters in each story. Any group sex or side sex should be very short scenes that don't use the same language which depicts the engagements as being so intimate and powerful.

Deprivedone

Well. Interesting. I'll confess, I kind of skipped over a lot, so this is just preliminary. Richard Thornhill? Wow. He's both sleazier and more incompetent than I expected. He's left aside the mask of diligence if he's showing up late and wasting the first twenty minutes talking baseball or whatever. He's clearly a reacharound from an old boy's network, and he's clearly much better in the Golf Course, or the Golf Club Lounge than he is in the office. Despite that, he's predictably purging and installing cronies... or just leaving positions vacant. He's also talking sheer profiteering. He's a classic MBA old boys club type, shortsighted, narrowminded, the sort that fails endlessly upwards, screws up, loots a company, and then walks off into the next cushy position. Except... that he looked a bit rough and ragged around the edges on his first appearance, and was at least pretending to be professional. Which tells me he had a career stall, maybe a long one, and he's lucked in through connections... probably on the Board. There's probably a lot of golf games involved, and a lot of backdoor deals on the way. Certain people will be making a lot of money off of Thornhill's choices. And the hospital and quality of care will be paying for it. And that scene in the boardroom, free form massage, promises and thinly veiled threats? Jesus Christ, if you're going to sexually harass someone, don't do it in the middle of a Staff Meeting while everyone is watching! I suspect his career stalled really hard over a series of ugly sexual harassment suits. You just can't get away with that shit any more. It was never acceptable, but nowadays? All he's got going are that people are scared of him after he just took two heads. But he's brewing up a rebellion. There are going to be a lot of angry staff, and I don't think he's got the skills to finesse. Thornhill, as it turns out is so much less, and less effective than I had expected or hoped. He's not bright, he's not aggressive or decisive. He's just one of those pretentious, stupid little nobodies. *** Vernon? What sewer did Lester drag him out of. The guy's clearly a borderline alcoholic and unreliable flake. Also, as it turns out, a contortionist, if you map out the geography of that encounter. The man was practically teabagging Lester. It's funny, given how much of a sociopath and control freak Lester is, that he really can't help screwing up. In his mind, he's a spider spinning webs, a master of the universe. But he loses control of situations and makes mistakes constantly. I actually like that. Lester's fallibility makes him more human and in a sense, more interesting. He'd be less interesting if he was a machiavellian god always a dozen steps ahead of everyone. Instead, he's a sleazy, skeevy guy who takes notes, studies, constantly plots and schemes and has no limits and a lot of boldness, but whose boldness often leads to recklessness. A recklessness that occasionally backfires. Lester is often luckier than he deserves to be. But he's got limits. I think part of his overall success is that he just doesn't quit. Vernon was a mistake for Lester right from the start. He was unreliable from the start, and clearly prone to just doing his own thing. Rummaging in Lester's kitchen for Tequila, grabbing Sarah, the insertion and even stealing Lester's wallet. Lester did a terrible job vetting and picking. He would have done better with Ned. Or the Pizza Boy. Actually, I could see Lester using Ned the next time, or some time after. Ned would be putty in Sarah's hands, but he's completely obedient to Lester, and reliable. Of course, if Ned's in, I can imagine Lester requiring Ned to jerk off four times, then pumping him full of viagra, to make sure he doesn't spontaneously go off in the first few minutes. Anyway, end result is that between Vernon and Sarah, Lester's carefully cultivated and orchestrated fantasy ran away from him completely. I loved the moments where Lester starts doing his "Call and Response" routine on Sarah, and she just ignores him and keeps fucking and sucking - Lester has clearly lost control, he's desperately trying to get it back, and its not working. It's fascinating and appropriate that Lester comes away from the sex, not triumphant but almost traumatized. Yeah, he squashed Dan, but the whole thing ran completely out of his control and Sarah just did whatever she wanted. He goes to bed alone and unhappy. Normally, he'd have tried to have her sleep with him, but he's intimidated. And notice the conversation about payment almost front of Dan. There goes that little subterfuge. There's a good chance that Dan heard and knows Lester hired a guy to role play in that scenario, and lost control. Sarah definitely knows that Lester lost control, and I think she suspects that Vernon was a plant that got out of hand. Lester's also losing the ability or interest in any kind of pretense. He's deeply regressing to his slob self, to the point that his bedroom is a musty smelling pig sty. I'm surprised he's so easily and casually reverting. He's put a great deal of effort into sprucing up for Sarah, and if anything, his desire for her was escalating. Is it really beyond him to sustain? On the other hand, Sarah just blossomed. I've said it before, Lester doesn't so much push her as permit her. This is the first time, with Vernon, that she's gone way out of control. Lester was trapped with her riding him, and unable to control the situation. Sarah did Vernon willingly. She got surprised, but she went with it, and went hard, even to deep throating, licking balls on command and rimming Vernon. I don't think she's rimmed Lester? Her interaction with the Pizza Boy should have clued Lester in. Lester clearly wanted to use her as a sex toy. But she took that opportunity and ran with it. She literally reached into his pants. The set up wasn't right, but under other circumstances, she would or could have taken him in and fucked him. I don't think Lester understood how out of his his control she was, and how in control. The sex scene was hot and long awaited. I'm eager to see where they go next. Dan was pretty clearly straight out emasculated, and loved it. Lester's confused and intimidated. And Sarah's embracing goddess mode. It'll be interesting to see where she goes with that. If anything, she's energizing. After fucking two men to exhaustion and having massive orgasms... she's still raring to go at Dan afterwards. I remember when Lester wore her out to the point of exhaustion. As for Dan, the most interesting thing about the encounter is how shocked and appalled he was at seeing the anal play - Lester rimming Sarah, her obvious enjoyment, and then her eager rimming Vernon. She's going way beyond him. I'll be honest, I skipped over a lot of Dan stuff. I'll have to get back to read it.

Darrow

I am so bored with you, it's not even funny. Your story should have finished 10 chapters ago. Later. And don't expect me to refrain from agreeing on Literotica that it's boring

Elfy

Sadly, I think I'm out. I can't say it hasn't been foreshadowed (incessantly, of late), but I have no idea why every corruption plot has to devolve into group sex. Happy reading to those who are here for that.

Chris

I don't understand what the toxic attraction is? I thought Sarah was supposed to be falling in more with Lester, but now her and Dan are doing there thing and she is defying Lester. I think the constant defiance is running this story off the rails. I don't even know what I'm reading anymore.

Chris K