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Three new pages! I thought that I'd just add them to the old post rather than make a new one, but when I changed my mind and discarded the edit, the old images were still deleted, so we're going back to plan A!

This comic is now as long as the other two, but as you can see we're not done. Maybe like 2/3rds done? I have three more pages thumbed by good old past bee, and then it's present bee's problem again (but we can leave that to future bee). We've got another twist or two, some more sexy sex, and some epiloguey sorta stuff I have vaguely planned.

I'm not 100% sure how I'll finish this up. Maybe I'll leave it as a sketch and move on to other things. Part of me wants to use it to practice black and white rendering as a trial to see if I can do my next project that way. But the other two are in colour, maybe this deserves to be color as well? Comics are a lot of work.

Oh yeah, I've made some changes to the earlier pages. I wanted to do this thing where the new girl speaks the POV language as a 2nd language, and Brooke speaks hers as a 2nd language, but it's a little tricky to work out how to do that well. For the time-being I have put alternate language stuff in <angle brackets> as I've seen people do before. In a final render, i might use text colour, or font/handwriting as well or instead.

PREV COMMENTARY:
I got back into the flow of roughing out this comic, and I've tweaked some stuff in the earlier pages so have the first four again. I have been really enjoying it, the thumbs are really fun (thanks, past bee), and it has been compelling trying to solve the geometric puzzles of 3somes, which are many, and exploring a new character and new character dynamics

Thanks for your support, enjoy!

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Definitely hope you'll colour it! Maybe use it to try out something new about colouring so it's less of a chore? Anyway, we love it!

Rami Markus Maunula

COOL

Rami Markus Maunula


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