Writers Block
Added 2021-04-15 03:48:12 +0000 UTCHey everyone, having some issues finishing up this chapter. I'm not sure if I want Natalie to know because Maggie tells her, Natalie to know because she suspects or caught a bit of what happened, she always knew since high school or she doesn't know at all. What do you guys think so I can finish this chapter up and move on to 3.
Comments
I like the idea of Natalie having caught part of what happened, asking Maggie about it pretending to know more than she does and then Maggie spills the bean on everything. Natalie could then come into it either as her task master or accomplice/play pal.
Ferris Beuller
2021-04-16 00:05:13 +0000 UTCWhat if Natalie is the person that they were trying to protect Maggie from and she knows all too well what has happened. Natalie could even be have the remote control and literally bring Maggie to her knees.
Bob
2021-04-15 09:36:59 +0000 UTCI am not very good at writing plot, so do not take my suggestion too much into account. I like ambiguity in stories, where black and white are not so easy to be detected. So I was suggesting that Natalie suspects about what happened, it increases suspense and there are veiled references to facts in dialogues (e.g. Maggie wonders if a word from Natalie refers to some events). But as I said, I am not very good at suggesting plot.
tmpforum
2021-04-15 06:22:54 +0000 UTCI agree, and I think it would be cool is Natalie was 100% in agreement and wants to know more. Perhaps start some kind of intimate relationship
Dean Lanouette
2021-04-15 04:15:26 +0000 UTCI think it’d be good if maggie tells her
Anthony R
2021-04-15 04:01:02 +0000 UTC
