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Slugman Octavio
Slugman Octavio

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Evicted Page 3(?) sketch

Was having some second thoughts with the comic, and I'm unsure if I want to keep going with the pages or scrap the first two and just start from here to kind of just get to it since I'm not sure if the work for the first two pages would really be cared for by the intended audience.

Evicted Page 3(?) sketch

Comments

Agreed, ultimately it is his choice to make. But Slugman Octavio did a GREAT job with the comic pages regardless.

Furry Murr

I agree but I also think you should do as you want with your art

Dovah

Agreed. It also has a nice comedic effect when this page is added

ThatGuyJDS

I believe you should keep the first two pages because it starts the story and shows us the main characters for this comic. And the overall comic and panel set up is really good, and as one of the intended audience I love the way this comic starts with all the pages!!!!!!!! And can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!

Furry Murr


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