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[M4F] "Long Take" [MATURE] [trapped] [enemies to lovers] [angry guy] [hands above you] [it gets spicy]
Added 2021-07-04 19:11:43 +0000 UTCYour lab partner and you have never gotten along, and now you're trapped in a room with him. How are two hot film geeks going to pass the time?
This is the [SFWM] (safe for work mature) version of Long Take. A full [18+] version will be out soon, exclusive to Patrons!
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I hope you enjoyed!
Tombanter
2021-07-20 06:35:08 +0000 UTCTom!!! This was awesome!!! Less than a minute in and I was already laughing at the frustrated and annoyed declaration of “I don’t care how hinges work!” I’m a sucker for the verbal jabs and witty banter…ie. “Pom-Pom” was great! LOL 😉 I love these enemies to lovers tropes. I love stories where it’s discovered that one or even both characters were perceived incorrectly…their actions/words/intentions misinterpreted. I think we have all either done that or had it done to us, so it’s extremely relatable and always very satisfying as the listener when the truth comes out. I can’t wait for the rest of this story!!!
Miss_Please_N_ThankU
2021-07-11 07:07:12 +0000 UTCDon’t apologize, it’s amazing stuff 😂
DanseTheAtomBombDance
2021-07-09 02:06:43 +0000 UTCSorry for commenting again, but I was listening to this again last night and I had a realization! The protagonist of this story reminds me a lot of Sawyer from Lost! Like the nicknames, the snarky one liners, the hot headedness, using anger as a cover up for more complex emotions! I just wanted to share my realization lol
Whatsacheryl
2021-07-08 19:20:37 +0000 UTCLets be honest: THE DOOR WON!
DanseTheAtomBombDance
2021-07-08 17:24:57 +0000 UTCalways the best kind of insult lol.
DanseTheAtomBombDance
2021-07-08 17:22:28 +0000 UTCSo many things to love about this! Two of my fav tropes: enemies to lovers and forced close proximity. <3 "Pom Pom". A broody yet emotionally intelligent film geek? Yes, please. And all of the references made my own inner film geek so happy. XD "Pretty girl, I'm only responding to your energy towards me. I don't want to be mean." I liked that line for some reason. Anyway, looking forward to the spicy full version!
Gingersnap
2021-07-08 00:07:11 +0000 UTCI love the way your “enemies(ish) to lovers” characters banter, like party guy from shy girl. I love that you can make us laugh as we’re getting insulted! 😂 Also, I love how the tension is present from the beginning and it’s subtle, like some of those insults were lowkey compliments. Even your very simple plots always feel so full and thought out! Also, the tags didn’t lie, it got spicy lol Can’t wait for the full version!
Whatsacheryl
2021-07-07 16:15:41 +0000 UTCNot the film AND the choir callout 😳🤭
Nikki
2021-07-07 04:10:44 +0000 UTCI... just... 🥴 (Also, spinoff audio idea... photo students in the darkroom...? 😉)
Anna G.
2021-07-05 04:32:13 +0000 UTCi love you make a simple situation so engaging. You are always making me feel things. It's scary okay lol. But don't stop, please.
Jen
2021-07-05 00:45:28 +0000 UTCDude the beginning made me jump so much because I forgot to turn down my volume from my gaming session. Oof. Anyways! Another wonderful audio Tom!
bubblebeluga
2021-07-05 00:14:14 +0000 UTClmao
Tombanter
2021-07-04 23:02:47 +0000 UTCI love the word "dilettante." It sounds fancy and then you realize you're being insulted. :)
Velveteen Rabbit
2021-07-04 23:00:07 +0000 UTCLove the minimal sound effects, it made it sound even more personal. I felt really called out at the line 'stop apologizing, you are not responsible for everyone's happiness.' Like excuse me Tom get out of my head. Also this is the first time I had to google the definition of a word bc I had no idea what dilettante meant.
Brit_a_Filter
2021-07-04 22:03:26 +0000 UTCThe way my stomach dropped when he said, "found it" with the bra unclasped sound made me check mine lol. Oof this immersion is getting pretty deep
Doses of M.O. Sass
2021-07-04 20:55:51 +0000 UTCspoiler: [angry guy] turns into [contemplative guy] BUT still continues to be [brooding bad boy]
upward bow
2021-07-04 19:28:08 +0000 UTC
