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[M4F] "Long Take" [MATURE] [trapped] [enemies to lovers] [angry guy] [hands above you] [it gets spicy]

Your lab partner and you have never gotten along, and now you're trapped in a room with him. How are two hot film geeks going to pass the time?

This is the [SFWM] (safe for work mature) version of Long Take. A full [18+] version will be out soon, exclusive to Patrons!

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[M4F] "Long Take" [MATURE] [trapped] [enemies to lovers] [angry guy] [hands above you] [it gets spicy]

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I hope you enjoyed!

Tombanter

Tom!!! This was awesome!!! Less than a minute in and I was already laughing at the frustrated and annoyed declaration of “I don’t care how hinges work!” I’m a sucker for the verbal jabs and witty banter…ie. “Pom-Pom” was great! LOL 😉 I love these enemies to lovers tropes. I love stories where it’s discovered that one or even both characters were perceived incorrectly…their actions/words/intentions misinterpreted. I think we have all either done that or had it done to us, so it’s extremely relatable and always very satisfying as the listener when the truth comes out. I can’t wait for the rest of this story!!!

Miss_Please_N_ThankU

Don’t apologize, it’s amazing stuff 😂

DanseTheAtomBombDance

Sorry for commenting again, but I was listening to this again last night and I had a realization! The protagonist of this story reminds me a lot of Sawyer from Lost! Like the nicknames, the snarky one liners, the hot headedness, using anger as a cover up for more complex emotions! I just wanted to share my realization lol

Whatsacheryl

Lets be honest: THE DOOR WON!

DanseTheAtomBombDance

always the best kind of insult lol.

DanseTheAtomBombDance

So many things to love about this! Two of my fav tropes: enemies to lovers and forced close proximity. <3 "Pom Pom". A broody yet emotionally intelligent film geek? Yes, please. And all of the references made my own inner film geek so happy. XD "Pretty girl, I'm only responding to your energy towards me. I don't want to be mean." I liked that line for some reason. Anyway, looking forward to the spicy full version!

Gingersnap

I love the way your “enemies(ish) to lovers” characters banter, like party guy from shy girl. I love that you can make us laugh as we’re getting insulted! 😂 Also, I love how the tension is present from the beginning and it’s subtle, like some of those insults were lowkey compliments. Even your very simple plots always feel so full and thought out! Also, the tags didn’t lie, it got spicy lol Can’t wait for the full version!

Whatsacheryl

Not the film AND the choir callout 😳🤭

Nikki

I... just... 🥴 (Also, spinoff audio idea... photo students in the darkroom...? 😉)

Anna G.

i love you make a simple situation so engaging. You are always making me feel things. It's scary okay lol. But don't stop, please.

Jen

Dude the beginning made me jump so much because I forgot to turn down my volume from my gaming session. Oof. Anyways! Another wonderful audio Tom!

bubblebeluga

lmao

Tombanter

I love the word "dilettante." It sounds fancy and then you realize you're being insulted. :)

Velveteen Rabbit

Love the minimal sound effects, it made it sound even more personal. I felt really called out at the line 'stop apologizing, you are not responsible for everyone's happiness.' Like excuse me Tom get out of my head. Also this is the first time I had to google the definition of a word bc I had no idea what dilettante meant.

Brit_a_Filter

The way my stomach dropped when he said, "found it" with the bra unclasped sound made me check mine lol. Oof this immersion is getting pretty deep

Doses of M.O. Sass

spoiler: [angry guy] turns into [contemplative guy] BUT still continues to be [brooding bad boy]

upward bow


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