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[M4A] June 2021 - Serial 1 Ch 2 - Time is Change [MATURE] [lifelong love] [jealousy] [friends with benefits] [speculative narration] brief mentions of: [erection] [precum] [stroking him]

Tom speculates about the nature of feelings and love, and the power of change over time. The tension of desire and denial, and of missed opportunities and proof of time.

[M4A] June 2021 - Serial 1 Ch 2 - Time is Change [MATURE] [lifelong love] [jealousy] [friends with benefits] [speculative narration] brief mentions of: [erection] [precum] [stroking him]

Comments

Wow, that was amazing. Thank you Tom

Toni

Your words hit me right in my heart as if this was my own story

Lisa

Well I'm a crying mess now thanks for the feels

Stormageddon

This mini series pulls are my heart strings... I don't have many of those. I feel it for both parties. The gravity pull between these two, you can feel it expressed in the narrative it's so strong. Then him saying, "you know me, I just want everything to be perfect" kills me. I love it

Doses of M.O. Sass

"Years of frustration with Mina taught me that expecting anything only leads to disappointment." That hit me hard. This was so beautiful and bittersweet. So many quotes that resonate. <3

Gingersnap

The way you word things….Jesus my heart! 🥺 This serial is soo good! Im excited for the next part! 🖤

Whatsacheryl

Came here to leave a comment cuz I use the RSS feed and have been neglecting leaving feedback 😢 I still can’t fathom what it’s like to love someone for 10 years without letting the relationship progress. 10 years!! So long but apparently not long enough to dilute the connection between these two characters, which makes this piece so touching.

Angela Onaip

The "reluctant smiles... like apologies" part is so bittersweet (and very relatable, for me). A bit of a punch in the gut, in the best possible way. The serial is lovely. 🤍

Anna G.

Sooo....some of this may or may not feel a tad familiar. You're killing me here 😂🤷‍♀️ I agree with the previous comment about feeling grounded because this is real life, well told by you.

Looloo

The pacing & music were so good! I love the whole serial so far. It feels so grounded (Probably poor word choice) and poetic. I NEED more!

Tankie

Timing, huh? The music you've chosen for this is really poignant, especially the instrumentals.

upward bow


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