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Teen Queen [TG, Bimbo] Chapter I
Added 2021-03-19 17:47:02 +0000 UTC"Mr. Nelson is a teacher at college who refuses to raise the grade of Rachel Summers, one of the rich bratty cheerleaders.
She makes him understand how difficult some classes can be for a teen girl."
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It's okay, I sometimes get too close to the story, and your corrections are quite helpful. Fixed :)
Steven Barry
2021-03-20 21:03:00 +0000 UTCSorry to be a pain in the ass but some mistakes are still not corrected :p Page 12 = Howarld's lips Page 13 = Howard Neslon Page 19 = "Howarld's lips" Page 33 = "Fucking herslef harder and harder"
lala284
2021-03-20 20:37:33 +0000 UTCWow! That's quite a work you've done here. Thanks for pointing it out. Fixed!
Steven Barry
2021-03-20 15:48:18 +0000 UTCGreat story but be careful. Page 12 = Howard x2 Page 13 = Howard Neslon Page 18 = Howard's face Page 19 = "Horarld's lips" Page 24 = Howard's fingers Page 25 = Howard tried again. Page 26 wrong color = "Dont you remember that night ? Brad was only lying about the pool party. The only person who was invited was you." Page 31 ="Howard's mind* Page 34 = "Fucking herslef harder and harder"
lala284
2021-03-20 12:29:21 +0000 UTCThank you, Erika! I hope you have a great weekend too :)
Steven Barry
2021-03-20 11:51:32 +0000 UTCThank you, David! Fixed ;)
Steven Barry
2021-03-20 11:44:49 +0000 UTCπππππ hope you have a wonderful weekend
Eric Herrera
2021-03-20 11:40:37 +0000 UTCLove it did notice 1 issue on page 24 wrong color at bottom of the page Rachel is taking but u have it pink witch is Holly's color
David Smith
2021-03-20 11:05:09 +0000 UTCThis is one of the cutest stories of yours I have seen in a while.
Robert Drew
2021-03-19 21:55:52 +0000 UTC
