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Teen Queen [TG, Bimbo] Chapter I

"Mr. Nelson is a teacher at college who refuses to raise the grade of Rachel Summers, one of the rich bratty cheerleaders.

She makes him understand how difficult some classes can be for a teen girl."

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Teen Queen [TG, Bimbo] Chapter I

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It's okay, I sometimes get too close to the story, and your corrections are quite helpful. Fixed :)

Steven Barry

Sorry to be a pain in the ass but some mistakes are still not corrected :p Page 12 = Howarld's lips Page 13 = Howard Neslon Page 19 = "Howarld's lips" Page 33 = "Fucking herslef harder and harder"

lala284

Wow! That's quite a work you've done here. Thanks for pointing it out. Fixed!

Steven Barry

Great story but be careful. Page 12 = Howard x2 Page 13 = Howard Neslon Page 18 = Howard's face Page 19 = "Horarld's lips" Page 24 = Howard's fingers Page 25 = Howard tried again. Page 26 wrong color = "Dont you remember that night ? Brad was only lying about the pool party. The only person who was invited was you." Page 31 ="Howard's mind* Page 34 = "Fucking herslef harder and harder"

lala284

Thank you, Erika! I hope you have a great weekend too :)

Steven Barry

Thank you, David! Fixed ;)

Steven Barry

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 hope you have a wonderful weekend

Eric Herrera

Love it did notice 1 issue on page 24 wrong color at bottom of the page Rachel is taking but u have it pink witch is Holly's color

David Smith

This is one of the cutest stories of yours I have seen in a while.

Robert Drew


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