TIER 2+: 5YL:R Chapter 5
Added 2023-02-18 01:37:13 +0000 UTC
Comments
Looks pretty good. You kinda misspelled "Petrosapien" during Diamondhead's introduction though. And there's repeating dialogue in Page 19, and in Page 30, why is Ben saying the line "Roger that, all you Ben"?
Diesel of Alrest
2023-02-18 02:44:25 +0000 UTCLooks good but there are duplicate speech boxes on top of page 19 just to let you know
Alec
2023-02-18 02:16:14 +0000 UTCLooks awesome!
Liam Animates
2023-02-18 01:57:19 +0000 UTC
