R-18G ダンテラ拘束 English version
Added 2021-05-30 05:35:47 +0000 UTCI made an English version. I apologize if I made any mistakes. 間違っている表現や言語ありましたら、ご指摘いただけると助かります！ If there are any incorrect expressions or language, I would appreciate it if you could point them out!
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Alright. Let me tell ya about image 7. In Japanese version she said どうしたさっさと来い! Unfortunately, Eng version really doesn't fit with Original Japanese version at all. To express that expression in Japanese as much as possible, "[Da fck is going on?] (or) [Hey What's wrong with ya?] C'mon you bastard!!" would be more better I think. Ps. I'm S.Korean but quite fluent in Japanese and English
우흥우흥
2021-08-26 16:20:25 +0000 UTCThank you! I see, that's very helpful! I'll find time to fix this one!
HUTAGO（マタンゴ）
2021-06-09 02:48:16 +0000 UTCAmazing, thank you a lot for going through with this even though it's difficult for you. I saw you got it recommended on Twitter but "I'm going to throw up my stomach all over" is still not great really. "throw my stomach up all over" is grammatically better but still not an expression that actually gets used. I'd suggest just keeping it simple and going with "I'm going to throw up all over". The first two sound kinda awkward and really, you can't throw up anything but one's stomach contents. Are you going with "what tha?" instead of "the" to denote she has an accent maybe? If so that's cool. In image 7, I can't tell what "You're not com..." is actually supposed to be. Not a mistake, just a question on my part, what was she saying there? Are you using some sort of translation utility to help you? It's overall really good. Thanks for going through with this. Arigato gozaimasu.
mkdir21
2021-06-08 10:20:39 +0000 UTCThank you! ❤
MC
2021-05-30 23:00:57 +0000 UTCOh!! Sorry! I've updated it again!
HUTAGO（マタンゴ）
2021-05-30 17:02:44 +0000 UTCVery good! Thank you for the translation! I think image 10 from the original version is missing, and is a repeat of image 9 here.
MC
2021-05-30 15:25:16 +0000 UTC
