Kylie returns (comic) p. 1
Added 2015-07-26 08:14:07 +0000 UTCAt the request of laborers, I've begun continuation of Kylie comic. But now, looking at this page, I am afraid that is no different from previous comic. The only difference is a creatures.
Anyway, let me know about mistakes in text.
Comments
I gonna make next page during this month. Unfortunately, comic pages take much more time than single arts.
Flick
2015-08-31 05:24:28 +0000 UTCAwesome! You say it's alot of same stuff again? If someone needs ideas feel free to ask :)
AGlassOfMilk
2015-08-11 17:25:38 +0000 UTCAwesome. Looks great. thanks for all the hard work
MrHalfawake
2015-07-26 21:16:39 +0000 UTCThanks! I've updated image)
Flick
2015-07-26 17:38:57 +0000 UTCA brand new Kylie comic!!! Yes please!! :)
SLIM
2015-07-26 13:54:52 +0000 UTCThe grammar this time is pretty solid, but if I could suggest a few edits Panel 1: "We can cover more ground if we split up." Panel 5: "Where'd did they come from!?" would sound more organic. Anyways glad to see you working on a new comic. Looking forward to seeing what kind of fix Kylie finds herself in this time. Though I think we can all guess.
MrHalfawake
2015-07-26 08:51:39 +0000 UTC
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