Would like some opinions...
Added 2023-03-28 05:17:15 +0000 UTCPlanning on having book 5 be mostly from the girls' perspective, with Brock getting a few interludes. Since the chapters with the harem girls' POVs is usually called A Harem Interlude when it's more than one of them, I thought this would be a fun subtitle for the book and make it clear just what it is. Thoughts?
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I like the idea a lot. But I think to be safer with the harem market such as it is it would be better to make it 50 50 at most between Brock and the girls viewpoints. I loved the interludes you have had in the books so far but the genre is so uptight and rigid I think you have to be afraid of losing readership in the series. That said if there is a time to experiment it is deep into the series like this book 5. You know the people who get that far are invested and wonโt be put off as much as a new reader on a book one might be.
M. Ryan
2023-03-29 04:07:48 +0000 UTCI think that'll be interesting; the slice-of-life moments, to me, are the more interesting part to the superhero aspects, so having a pivot for a book would be a refreshing change. Especially as entry 5, I like the idea of fleshing out the existing cast with additional POVs/plot agency, than I do the normal genre convention of just adding another proverbial Pokemon to catch, so I'm all in for it, ha ha :D
El Jefe
2023-03-28 17:05:59 +0000 UTC
