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Live, Die, Waifu 11

Part 2 of 2

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Possible edit From I let her for a couple minutes, before, seeing some of the locals heading over, I murmured, “Got to go,” patted her on the arm, and gently peeled her off, To I let her CLING/'STAY LIKE THAT' for a couple minutes, before, seeing some of the locals heading over, I murmured, “Got to go,” patted her on the arm, and gently peeled her off,

Goron201

Just be careful of deals from a certain “Company”….

Tyric Gaias

Edits and Mal nor Simon -> and neither didn’t take cover, along -> cover along

Meudon

I'm enjoying this. Time loops are had for me to get invested but having multiple characters AND the villain all be aware makes it interesting. One thing I do not understand at all is 'Cultivation' but that isn't your responsibility to hand hold me through and your explanations are to the point that I still follow the story even if I miss some of the nuances.

Rapthorn2ndform

I wish I had half your talents in writing...

Seto Kyba

Mel is just grating on my nerves at this point. She is everything Lee says she is and WORSE, if only because she has her head so far up her butt that she's practically letting out farts each time she opens her mouth.

SoraWolf7

The main cast of Gwen 10 are fairly chill.

PublicLee Speaking

Will Lee ever not deal with assholes?

Tyric Gaias


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