The Birth of Samurai[ENG]
Added 2023-01-08 19:21:18 +0000 UTC
This is a sequel to the previously uploaded "The Birth of the Queen."
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I mean the introduction says this is a sequel to the previously uploaded “The birth of the Queen”.So I think the image of the character in the story should match with that in the corresponding story instead of being disconnected.Then it may be better to be called sequel. It's obvious that this is a nice work.But I hope it can really be called a sequel.Thank you for your patience and persistence.
heishizhifang
2023-01-09 16:01:43 +0000 UTCYour analysis is valid. Certainly, this work does not connect with the previous work and the plot. The series is called "The Birth of Villains" and uses depravity as its main material. However, the previous character appeared. The story may follow.
TFWorld
2023-01-09 12:23:55 +0000 UTCI agree.It's a nice work with high quality.However,I don't think it's a sequel to “The birth of the queen”. First,from the perspective of characters，accorading to my observation,the queen in it is not the queen in “The birth of the queen”,but as same as the character in “Parasitic deformation slime” Second,from the plot,it alone represents a birth of a villain.It has nothing to do with the plot of “The birth of new queen”.So I don't think it's a sequel to the “The birth of the queen”.It seems like an independent story. Since it's a sequel,maybe you could show us how does the new queen reign over terror more than the former queen,and how can a stronger warrior find a way to defeat her. Of course,I'm just offering some general suggestions for unreasonble points after I saw it.Thank you for your hard work.
heishizhifang
2023-01-09 06:23:26 +0000 UTCAnd there's also an intention to emphasize the coolness and brutality of the villain. It can also show the ability to transform weapons.
TFWorld
2023-01-09 03:22:49 +0000 UTCIn fact, he also tried to change his last name, but I quit because I was afraid the volume of the work would be longer.
TFWorld
2023-01-09 03:19:51 +0000 UTCNice work. However, I think killing the fat guy with Kunai was unnecessary. Thank you
Ramf966
2023-01-09 02:35:25 +0000 UTC
