I need your feedback on Fantasy Act 1
Added 2022-10-22 14:25:02 +0000 UTCHey FreshMen,
We wrote the first Act of Fantasy, and we need your feedback.
Read and give your opinion here: https://form.typeform.com/to/xfDS275T
Your answers will let us know if we are on the right direction and adjust as necessary.
Comments
Portal failed for me. Not gonna try again. Just summed up: MC must clearly have full knowledge of his role and expected sacrifice in Act 1. He must have agency. If not, Elf is made a villain and King's actions have less of an impact.
Michael Hawk
2022-10-22 23:49:52 +0000 UTC
