How would you grade this writer?
Added 2022-05-03 02:57:18 +0000 UTCHey Guys,
I asked 6 writers to write the same scene and send me the results.
I'm going to post 1 script a day and you'll have the power to read it and judge.
Is this story good or bad? You decide!
Your votes will help me hire our next co-writer. Choose Wisely!
Click here to read the full story
HINT: SIMON = MAIN CHARACTER
Leave your comments below.
Comments
I liked the writing and it was pretty smooth reading and English is my native language so I can definitely enjoy his writing.
KaoruCG
2022-05-03 17:22:56 +0000 UTCI know the writer likely doesn't speak English as a first language and it frankly shows. I don't want to sound harsh, but it reads around the 5th grade level.
Damian Scisci
2022-05-03 14:36:02 +0000 UTCGreat stuff, I think this game has always had a good balance between what is shown on screen vs told in words. This seems to maintain that balance. Apparantly there were spelling mistakes but I didn't notice them anyway.
2022-05-03 09:20:29 +0000 UTCI think this is good. I think FW and DiK are not comparable. DiK is darker while I see FW is a light-hearted Romcom, as we can see from the dancing lesson scenes and Chole sex Scenes. I think ultimately, the goal is to keep a coherent tone across the whole story. Nobody wants to see people die in Romcom, or sudden gag in Serious Tragedy.
2022-05-03 08:42:36 +0000 UTCI read the whole document, and I'd say this is enjoyable writing overall, but there are a few spelling and grammar errors that really shouldn't be there, so I think the current average of ~3.75 stars is fair.
1x912
2022-05-03 05:57:18 +0000 UTC
