Ashton's Photo Shoot II (RC) WIP 3 - Script
Added 2025-12-29 14:32:55 +0000 UTCComments
Thanks, I'm glad you think so!
Blankage
2025-12-30 14:33:49 +0000 UTCThanks for the detailed feedback, and I'm glad you enjoyed the premise! I'm excited to see how the AI handles it as well!
Blankage
2025-12-30 14:33:23 +0000 UTCLove the premise of her kind of forgetting that she is even there for a photo shoot with her instead probably just thinking she has been hired for a completely different type of "job" by him, no longer understanding any words he says to try prove otherwise maybe even with her confused on why her "client" is being so difficult and why he insists on using such confusing words with her when a lot of words aren't really required for her new job. Also really like the shifting language changes using some words that are infamously pretty hard for some non English speakers to say before her primarily switching to Japanese with few English words mixed in. Excited to see how the AI and programs you use handle this and how it ends up for both the change in her appearance and the language shifts.
Void Butterfly
2025-12-29 16:53:50 +0000 UTCSo we may see more of this form of Ashton, very nice writing and it conveys the scene well
W0RR13Z
2025-12-29 16:46:54 +0000 UTCGlad you like it!
Blankage
2025-12-29 14:54:07 +0000 UTCSounds promising! I dig the language play at the end, and the planned personality shifts throughout.
Istmael
2025-12-29 14:52:17 +0000 UTC