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Negotiation with Kera (Work in progress)

Negotiation with Kera (Work in progress)

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Would fold immediately

[Chaotic Cowboy]

I'm bouta bust

Red Brachydios

The dialogue is peak! I think I would prefer for the 2 textbox to be slightly lower than the 1 textbox if possible, but overall I think it's quite readable

Pablamon

Damn didn't know shohei was that big

Skengo

now get someone to voice it.

Solano_Hakuno

listen, the dialogue builds the scene.

Solano_Hakuno

Personally I'd feel tempted to reserve space on the side just so it can breathe better, but Kera does look ravishing either way

Norman A. Letterman

Pleeeeeeeease with the dialogue. I like seeing the characterization. All that being said, the layout is fine when you include the numbers. They are unobtrusive and make it very legible.

Trangularcube

Readability’s great and god this is some Grade A dialogue! She can make me sign over a company any day with tactics like that~

LiroDax

Dang, she's good at getting what she wants

Blacktail51


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