Opinions on the end of Alien Bodysuit
Added 2020-03-30 22:35:51 +0000 UTCIdea by ahhitz: At the end of the sex scene, Sarah tugs on Gabriella's hair out of passion. When she does, Gabriella's face slides back, her mouth stretching open to reveal Jessica underneath. Sarah freaks out but "Jessica" deflates her quickly. The scene could end with Jessica, her face still sticking out of Gabriella's mouth, looking down at Sarahs skin.
Idea by Shapeshiftfan: After Thomas became Sarah, he could fool the 911 cops. Thomas (as Sarah) could call the motel owners and say that she called 911 and ask the police to go to her room when he arrives. One male policemen arrive and he goes to the blonde's room. When the policeman knocks on the door, the blonde answers covered by a sheet. She reports that someone tried to break into her room, so she called 911. Startled, she called 911. But it was a mistake, she apologizes. The policeman enters the room to look, the blonde drops the sheet. The cop has an erect penis. The blonde says the police can help in "another emergency". They have sex. After sex, the police officer leaves. The 911 plot is solved and Thomas is free to use his powers without interference. The blonde served to finish the 911 plot. Thomas could then take the form of Jessica again, enter her room and have sex with her boyfriend. Completed the plot of the fight between Jessica and her boyfriend. Thomas would leave all the skins in their respective rooms, keeping only the skin of the aliens, to maintain their power.
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Alien Bodysuit was planned to be short (50/90 images) but things went out of hand π²
Any idea is welcome! Thanks! π
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German
2020-04-17 03:04:52 +0000 UTCAll ideas are very good! β€οΈ
German
2020-04-17 03:04:43 +0000 UTC+1
2020-04-05 16:46:01 +0000 UTCThose endings actually suck please don't use those
Simon williams
2020-04-04 23:14:55 +0000 UTCone of the guest should try on the male alien skin
2020-04-04 14:47:03 +0000 UTCJust had a thought, it would be pretty great to get a sequence of every skin being taken off with a face stretch for each one
Earl Sherman
2020-04-01 23:29:27 +0000 UTCI would definitely like to see more skinplay and stretching before the end of the story.
Earl Sherman
2020-04-01 19:33:19 +0000 UTCHere's a different idea for #2: Thomas has sex with Sarah and then deflates her, and instead of the police coming, it is the FBI/Government Area 51 agents. This would be because of all the missing people, green lights when people are turned into skins, and aliens reported in the area (they are in the desert so they can be near Area 51). The two female FBI agents come, and one of them goes into Sarah's room, and Thomas (as Sarah) turns the agent into a skinsuit in the bathroom, so the other agent doesn't see the flashing green light. Thomas then wears her and then either gives them the male alien skin or reports that she found nothing (only a bunch of people playing around). Thomas then either covers his tracks by pretending to be the female FBI agent and either turns her partner into a skinsuit, or she tells her partner she'll stay behind to keep searching, and then he masturbates as her.
TG Lover 2
2020-03-31 19:38:00 +0000 UTCIdea 2
Crocus 6
2020-03-31 16:21:05 +0000 UTCI am curious how german would fit the alien squirting green if they have sex
2020-03-31 13:23:48 +0000 UTCIt would be kinky for Thomas to live as Jessica forever, while Thomas retains his self-control.
2020-03-31 13:06:47 +0000 UTCWhy not both, just combine the two and keep it tight if you can, German. But maybe Thomas (as Sarah) should just flirt with the cop(s) instead of having sex. That way, you save the sex for Thomas (as Jessica) for the boyfriend. That way you wrap up the 911 plot, the boyfriend bit and end the comic with the possibility of a sequel; showing more of Thomas and the aliens in future comics.
2020-03-31 07:05:24 +0000 UTC#2 is better. Maybe if there is a twist at the end, like the male alien suit is missing and the last pair of boy and girl is leaving...something like that can make the story more interesting and also split the storyline for future use.
kk9700
2020-03-31 06:20:17 +0000 UTC
