Alien Bodysuit 160-180
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have the alien leave Jessica on and then layer the next skin on top of body. I want to see the alien fully absorb Jessica and become her completely. Then have the new Jessica put on the new skins
Don P
2020-02-03 01:53:11 +0000 UTCI would like to see more of Jessica. Have the alien girl put her back on and then have her go around making skins out of other girls. Then when it is time to change bodies
Don P
2020-02-03 01:51:24 +0000 UTCAlthough I think your story telling has imporved, could you add more deflations and shots of the aliens actually putting on the skins? I feel like we haven't really seen many shots like that yet in this story. For instance the only character we've seen actually deflating was the little girl and we don't even get to see the fat woman as a skinsuit.
ahhitz
2020-02-02 22:16:54 +0000 UTCAs much as some people have points in something. I prefer to wait until you have "finished" this story to give what I found to be good and what can be improved. So far there are so many positive things and it also seems you yourself are doing better. Just keep making the story you want it to go. ^^
Unknown9
2020-02-02 21:53:16 +0000 UTCBesides turning into a skinsuit she gets possessed by the alien going into her body through her mouth
Gundam93
2020-02-02 21:43:23 +0000 UTCI appreciate it but more money won't be traduced into more content. Thanks for the kind words I will give my best!ππ
German
2020-02-02 21:30:08 +0000 UTCForgive my english Gundam but I didn't understand what you tried to say. You mean the alien enters into a girl by the mouth?
German
2020-02-02 21:24:16 +0000 UTCI would love to see that.
Shadowk18
2020-02-02 20:18:13 +0000 UTCI really like your work, I hope you can keep up, to more meaningful story, such as the bald men found the skin of the bathtub, put on the skin for memory to defeat the alien force for him, I can't wait to see the next plot, if you can always keep this update I am willing to make more money, come on GermanοΌοΌ
dengzihao
2020-02-02 19:54:00 +0000 UTCWish there was a scene where the alien just forces herself down a girl throat besides turning into a skinsuit
Gundam93
2020-02-02 19:42:21 +0000 UTCYour criticism is well received Pescatrix! Yes, I understand that I have not reached any mayor point so far but I will in the next few posts. The one who will have fun with the bodies is not the alien but the bald guy!!! π±π±
German
2020-02-02 19:01:03 +0000 UTCI don't want to sound rude, but you are beginning to wander, you started very well, but suddenly you have been diluting without reaching any point, I hope you know to accept my criticism, which is well intentioned, this story is great and can still be rescued, but please do not wander anymore and focus on two or three characters maximum making them do crazy, cool and fun things, Jessica with the bald guy, for example, and the girl could have had fun with her mother, before she turned her into a skinsuit. What about the bald guy finds the mother skinsuit in the bathroom? and gives it a try! that would be fun! You still have a lot of chances!
Rasalgheti
2020-02-02 18:30:01 +0000 UTC
