Diableret Castle CH 1: Doomed Device (complete)
Added 2025-10-06 06:20:53 +0000 UTCAfter a year and several months, I have finally been able to finish the first chapter of Diableret Castle. It has been quite an odyssey to bring this idea to fruition, one that I had since 2020 when I first drew the characters.
It's something I've wanted to do for a long time, and I hope you like the result.
The episode will be available exclusively here on Patreon until Friday, October 17. After that date, it will be published on other networks and websites dedicated to comics. This will be the case with future chapters: they will first be published on Patreon and then, after about two weeks, they will be released to the rest of the public.
If there are any problems with the dialogues, I would appreciate it if you would let me know, since knowing English is not the same as learning it in another country, which is speaking it as a native language.
For now, I'll let you enjoy this strange adventure starring monster maid girls :)
Comments
Thank you very much, I'm really glad you liked it. I'll take your corrections into account. I'll start working on the second chapter in December, at least the script part. I hope for my own sake that episode 2 is a little shorter. If there are any other details you liked, please feel free to let me know.
Kevin Arthur
2025-10-08 09:20:59 +0000 UTCIT'S PEEEAAAK!!! The translation is stellar. That said, I did catch some things. In slide 22, Bliss says "din't" instead of "didn't." In slide 31, during Bliss & Vella's back-and-forth, Bliss says, "Don't answer stupid stuff then!" I'd say "Don't answer with stupid stuff then!" or "Then, don't say stupid things!" Vella then retorts, "What if you just tell me how much the damn radio costs?" I'd say "How about you just tell me how much the damn radio costs?" or "Just tell me how much the damn radio's worth!" In slide 49, "dumb" is cut off from the kid's speech bubble so it's just "dum". Beyond that, I think the comic was amazing! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!!!
Luisischeese
2025-10-08 05:17:18 +0000 UTCYESSS!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
ForgedWolf
2025-10-06 06:30:22 +0000 UTC
