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Update page 73!

With Betty's optimistic smile 😁 I announce that two out of three tiers containing Mary's figurine have already been taken, only one remains! 😃

THANK YOU!! 🥰

And for all of you here is finally page 73! https://pleasurebonbon-next.com/comics/volume/1/page/73/

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Update page 73!

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Wooo! New page! And congratulations on the statues sold, Vanessa! Well done! So we start with the lovely Betty. Man, does she look pretty here. :) There was something that felt off with the way Betty worded herself here, but I can't put my finger on it... Oh well, her guests are loyal, smart, have agreed to help, and are ready, at least. :) Oh! Hans and George got their hands on a camera! Now how did they do that, I wonder... Their dialogue looks fine, although I personally would suggest Hans said "anything" rather than "everything," as "anything" is a bit more limited than "everything," but that's just me. Heh, did Violet get "convinced" or intimidated? :P Lol! Keeping that thing at hand, you know, just in case he's into it, or you need a bludgeon. XD Betty is absolutely convinced her plan will work... Why do I get the feeling it might not, this time?Well, she's still really pretty. :) Here I have some suggestions for the dialogue. "Why don't you bring a nice snack for us as well?" I'm not sure what else Miss Io is gonna do, but ok. Also, since Violet answers Betty, I would suggest Betty instead says, "Violet can give me a nice massage in the meantime..." It feels more like an implication with a "can" rather than a "could," as that makes it sound more like an option, I think. Anyway, good page, Vanessa! Well done!

Erold

This page is freaking incredible, Vanessa! :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD It's so good to see the 3 girls again once more. ^/////^ Wait a minute....... *reads the page once more* ......Is this scene the follow up to what happened in the original first issue when William woke up, Vanessa? o////O (I'm curious how many more pages will be left before the first PBB-Next issue will be finished. :D) P.S. Congrats on selling 2 of the figurines so far, Vanessa! ^o^

Kanbe Namura

Congrats to those who managed to claim a slot for the new Mary Blue statue. Although I currently cannot afford it, I hope that the rest of us might get access to a downloadable file of the model itself, so we can get it printed for ourselves. That would be great.

ToddRogue69

Hey, what happened with the Lumière brothers? Did they get their device stolen again? Sometimes I think that in the world of Bon Bon, they didn't manage to invent cinema because the French brothers couldn't present their invention. Have you seen the videos they made? They really transport you to that time, it's beautiful.

J.V Angel

Well, that's good. I’ll read the new page later, I just discovered a big secret about Betty, actually I discovered it a long time ago, but I just remembered. By the way, I just finished doing something a moment ago... But I’d rather not bother you with that now, I’ll tell you later if that's okay, nothing urgent. Instead, I'll ask about the "cloud cat". How is it?

J.V Angel


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