weakness aware.
Added 2018-05-24 17:05:56 +0000 UTCAfter making 3 or 4 comic.. I finally realize I kinda weak in dialog conversation. haha.. =w=;'
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To be honest, you are fine. It's not like you are making a comic that requires a huge exposition !
2018-05-24 17:45:49 +0000 UTCYou're dialog serves it's intended function. There are a few minor grammar errors, but it's still fully readable.
Leivve
2018-05-24 17:17:19 +0000 UTC
