The Mindtaker War (Full Story)
Added 2023-05-06 22:54:22 +0000 UTCThe complete novella of The Mindtaker War, including never-before-seen epilogue.
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Ahh look, again without giving too much away... I'm very conscious of the narrative dangers a multiverse can bring. As demonstrated pretty aptly in other media, having infinite universes etc. can really destroy your sense of stakes and impact... rest assured of that I am acutely aware.
2023-05-12 21:26:11 +0000 UTCThanks for subscribing - great to hear you're keen :) In terms of the blood thing, maybe hold that thought - I won't say much more other than you never quite know what's going to happen in the sequel.
2023-05-12 21:23:41 +0000 UTCAlso that's an interesting and ominous epilogue, but it leads worryingly into the domain of a multiverse and that is a whole bag of worms I hope this avoids.
Patrick Chang
2023-05-12 05:36:02 +0000 UTCGot me to subscribe so I could read the whole thing, great story although I do wonder why they couldn't drop the Mindtaker a sample of Matt's blood, and it would at least end in a better timeline than that one. It kept bugging me as I read, I understand the theory that it still would be inferior to the canon ending, but this timeline seems needlessly sub-optimal in that way. Ridiculously keen for the sequel, keep up the amazing work! :)
Patrick Chang
2023-05-12 05:33:39 +0000 UTCGlad you liked it! I had a lot of fun writing it :)
2023-05-11 10:52:28 +0000 UTCjust binged the whole thing, fantastic
Matthew Dauber
2023-05-10 16:13:53 +0000 UTC
