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The Mindtaker War (Full Story)

The complete novella of The Mindtaker War, including never-before-seen epilogue. 

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Ahh look, again without giving too much away... I'm very conscious of the narrative dangers a multiverse can bring. As demonstrated pretty aptly in other media, having infinite universes etc. can really destroy your sense of stakes and impact... rest assured of that I am acutely aware.

Thanks for subscribing - great to hear you're keen :) In terms of the blood thing, maybe hold that thought - I won't say much more other than you never quite know what's going to happen in the sequel.

Also that's an interesting and ominous epilogue, but it leads worryingly into the domain of a multiverse and that is a whole bag of worms I hope this avoids.

Patrick Chang

Got me to subscribe so I could read the whole thing, great story although I do wonder why they couldn't drop the Mindtaker a sample of Matt's blood, and it would at least end in a better timeline than that one. It kept bugging me as I read, I understand the theory that it still would be inferior to the canon ending, but this timeline seems needlessly sub-optimal in that way. Ridiculously keen for the sequel, keep up the amazing work! :)

Patrick Chang

Glad you liked it! I had a lot of fun writing it :)

just binged the whole thing, fantastic

Matthew Dauber


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