Size queen stalker #2 feedback
Added 2021-04-29 18:35:45 +0000 UTCWell, it seems this one's finished too. It's been pretty fun writing it, to be honest. I wanted this size queen to be a real freak, as opposed to the more submissive bimbos we've had so far. But now I want to know what you guys think? Did you like it? Tell me your thoughts in the comments! :D
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Wow! That's really a lot of feedback. I'll make sure to take it all into consideration for future stories. Thank you! :D
Nick563
2021-05-02 07:33:39 +0000 UTCI think it was excellent. A few ideas for the future. I think it should have started with serious cock worship. An obsessed size queen would be mesmerized if she found a cock significantly bigger than she's ever seen before. She should still have her dress on a bring herself to her first orgasm just by touching a sucking it. Then she should take her dress off for the boob-job and there should be some cum that she can spread all over her tits. And when he picks her up to eat her out at some point there could a a standing 69 because she loves sucking his cock. The chains are very good, there would probably be a seat or or saddle though, to take stress off her limbs, and she wouldn't be in doggy position because she's suspended by her arms and legs which would be pulled up towards the ceiling. She would be splayed, either face up or down. Then you could have Dan be able to manipulate the chains to really spread her legs into a split position so she would be truly wide open for a deep pounding. Now she wouldn't have been able to take all 13 inches in her mouth while she's kneeling, maybe standing 69, but not kneeling while he's standing because his cock can't bend like that if it's hard. But after he's cum in her pussy he might be a little soft, so he could manipulate the chains again so he head is now below her feet. Now that she's angled down his erect cock has a straight shot into her throat. She could have really trouble with it's girth but he could power through her gag reflex, grab her hair to pull her head up and really give her a brutal face fucking. She might be struggling but he could tell her if she wants his cock in her ass she had better get him hard again. After he says that she could say harder, harder, harder, barely audible because she choking on his cock, but the thought of the ass fucking gives her strength to take it. Now that he's hard again he pulls the chains again so her ass is down. He's so big that she's really suffering but when he offers to stop she takes offense because she's the size queen and she's going to take all of this huge cock in her ass. So she taunts him to fuck her deeper and harder. Finally when he's about to cum he could fist her pussy so he could feel his fist with his cock in her ass. Then she cums not once but so many times so fast that they blend into one long multi minute orgasm. These are just some suggestions to make the fucking even harder, which I like reading about and it seems you like writing about. Thanks for your stories
Lyme24
2021-05-02 03:26:44 +0000 UTCI thought it was a great spin on things - happy to see it continue!
Just
2021-04-29 19:47:13 +0000 UTC
