Misanthropy 0.2
Added 2024-05-30 20:17:44 +0000 UTCHello everyone, hope you are all doing well. This is the first upload and it is a 0.2. I'll try to post an update once a month, however... keep in mind I am doing all of the work :' ) so if i get ill or an anvil fall on my head, it might disrupt my schedule. That being said, i hope you enjoy the latest update and I'll keep you informed on how progress is going in a couple of weeks. Bye.
~There are 2 cgs, 1 animated
Misanthropy 0.2 Mac
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Misanthropy 0.2 PC
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Misanthropy 0.2 Mac
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1frxc0e8PeP-NyO1eIjXO4tIVUtL1Qzuw/view?usp=drive_link
Misanthropy 2.0 PC
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1S0NF1NGPIbf9dvEm7BnKjmY0OI7Kfl03/view?usp=drive_link
Misanthropy 0.2 APK
https://mega.nz/file/UnxCiCBb#Z-cFw01bKjnj7fuyhvYjvlVnqtedz_l9qMce0dTsSt8
*(Just to let you know the APK version may be very buggy. I do intend on cleaning it up, but until the just be aware some of the dialog might be messed up.)
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Comments
Hello, and thank you for your support and comment. You've said some really kind things here, and i appreciate that a lot. And this is a really great critique of my work. Cheers for the recommendation, I will definitely look into SORA's work, as I agree this is a area that could use improvement. As for sound effects and voice work... ect, this is more of a money issue and trying to find the right sound that fits is a long and tedious job. I personally, at some point would like to hire voice actresses for the moaning, so if you have any recommendations there, that would be awesome and i would look into that. And when it comes to spelling mistakes, I do try to catch as many as I can when I proof read it, but I sometimes go word-blind... I could be dyslexic lol.
Killerdav
2024-06-09 15:27:29 +0000 UTCPlayed the update and found it very good! You have the three most important things down for an NTR story, pacing, a firm grasp of the basics of NTR, and erotic writing. Not to mention you've done an amazing job with your characters, as besides Joel and David, they all already have some complexity in their personalities which helps give your story depth. In particular I like how Leon holds both cowardice and an inner strength that sets him apart from the average cuck which adds real weight to the story. In particular I enjoy how you didn't lay on his incompetence or weakness to hard but made it a natural part of his character that attracts characters to him and serves as a goal to be overcome. I can't wait to see his future growth but also how his own inner weakness holds him back from saving his loved ones. Next, I love how you wrote Hayden to encompass both the stereotypical big dicked fuckboy delinquent type which is balanced against his real natural urge to be healed from his past traumas. That and how he has some actual personality and chemistry with the heroines. I strongly suggest adding more Non-H scene where all the characters simply enjoy each others company and grow to like and love each other more in a non-sexual manner. It really adds tension to the story as allows for real emotional cheating and tension between the characters and helps develop the characters. For example seeing how Ren gets along with Leon as opposed to Hayden was a real treat to witness and I hope we get alot more comparisons in the story both sexual and non-sexual. For all these reasons I will continue to support you but would have preferred to purchases a year long subscription. Though that isn't to say that some features don't need some improvements. To begin with while I find your art to be pretty good, as it has a uniqueness/character and you did an amazing job with the breast (Your depiction their weight and natural sagging) and the overall lewdness of the characters. In particular I love how you've drawn Ren and I personally found her sprites and CGs to be my particular favorite, with my personal favorite being her hoody sprite due to how her breast lay. I also love how you decided to contrast Kim and Ren's bodies between each other by comparing the differences in perkiness in their breast, but I do believe you missed a chance to contrast their figures more by showing that Ren's waist and butt are more toned and slimmer. Mainly due to the difference in age and physical training that each female does. Though my main advice for the art lays with the composition of the CGs. That being they need some improvement as they presently aren't very complimentary or erotic angles which weakens your art. Though I've read that you plan to redo some of the old art on F95 and believe your composition skills are improving by evidenced by the handjob CG which was masterfully done and very erotic. My last suggestion on art and this goes for the handjob CG is to work on your semen to better depict the volume and thickness of the fluid. For references SORA is a great artist on Pixiv who does a great job with excessive semen in NTR art. As for my final advice this is the quality of life issues. Firstly, to fix some of the spelling issues. Some of the spelling issues were consistent which makes them easy to correct. I'll post them later when I make a list of the few that stuck out. Lastly, to beef up the sound effects so that they better match and add to H-scenes. They presently have a weak presence in the scenes and need to be scaled up and diversified a little.
Austin Pugh
2024-06-08 19:51:45 +0000 UTCNice Art Nice Story!
HaruChicken
2024-06-07 02:56:36 +0000 UTC
