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PARADISE PART5 (Color)

Finishing up work on Part 5! I never imagined that the series which started in August would stretch into the next year, but thanks to all your support, I really enjoyed working on it. Thank you so much for all the encouragement throughout this year. Iโ€™ll do my best to prepare the remaining two parts well too. Merry Christmas!๐ŸŽ„๐ŸŽ„ Have a happy end of the year. Thank you!

part5์˜ ์ž‘์—…์„ ๋งˆ์นฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค! 8์›”์— ์‹œ์ž‘๋œ ์‹œ๋ฆฌ์ฆˆ๊ฐ€ ํ•ด๋ฅผ ๋„˜๊ธฐ๊ฒŒ๋ ์ค„์€ ๋ชฐ๋ž์ง€๋งŒ, ๋งŽ์€ ์‘์›๋•๋ถ„์— ์ž‘์—…ํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ๋„ ์ฆ๊ฑฐ์› ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜ฌํ•œํ•ด ๋ณด๋‚ด์ฃผ์‹  ์‘์› ์—„์ฒญ ๊ฐ์‚ฌ๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์•ž์œผ๋กœ๋‚จ์€ 2๊ฐœํŒŒํŠธ๋„ ์ž˜ ์ค€๋น„ํ•ด๋ณด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค ๋ฉ”๋ฆฌํฌ๋ฆฌ์Šค๋งˆ์Šค๐ŸŽ„๐ŸŽ„ ์—ฐ๋ง ํ–‰๋ณตํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋ณด๋‚ด์„ธ์š” ๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค

ใƒ‘ใƒผใƒˆ5ใฎไฝœๆฅญใ€ๅฎŒไบ†ใงใ™๏ผ 8ๆœˆใซๅง‹ใ‚ใŸใ‚ทใƒชใƒผใ‚บใŒๅนดใ‚’ใพใŸใใชใ‚“ใฆๆ€ใฃใฆใ‚‚ใฟใชใ‹ใฃใŸใ‘ใฉใ€็š†ใ•ใ‚“ใฎๅฟœๆดใฎใŠใ‹ใ’ใงไฝœๆฅญใ—ใชใŒใ‚‰ๆœฌๅฝ“ใซๆฅฝใ—ใ‚ใพใ—ใŸใ€‚ ไปŠๅนด1ๅนดใ€ใŸใใ•ใ‚“ใฎๅฟœๆดใ‚’ใ‚ใ‚ŠใŒใจใ†ใ”ใ–ใ„ใพใ—ใŸใ€‚ ๆฎ‹ใ‚Šใฎ2ใƒ‘ใƒผใƒˆใ‚‚ใŒใ‚“ใฐใฃใฆๆบ–ๅ‚™ใ—ใพใ™ใญใ€‚ ใƒกใƒชใƒผใ‚ฏใƒชใ‚นใƒžใ‚น๐ŸŽ„๐ŸŽ„ๅนดๆœซใ‚‚ๅนธใ›ใซ้Žใ”ใ—ใฆใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€ใ‚ใ‚ŠใŒใจใ†๏ผ

PARADISE PART5 (Color)

Comments

Happy new year! Thank you for the hard work and beautiful story so far. This has definitely been my favorite. I really enjoyed the setup to misakis fall last chapter with how her pussy is the perfect fit for Kurodas cock. This chapter reinforces those themes with the details of how she grips him with love and Kurodas enjoyment. I hope to see an intense fall after some struggle as she realize Kurodas cock is also the perfect fit for her pussy.

JessicaChung

Wow. I was truly touched reading your long and heartfelt comment. To be honest, thereโ€™s a huge difference between presenting a complete full story all at once and releasing it in fixed monthly installments. Especially in a system like mine, where I have to deliver a consistent amount every month, I often feel pressure to give each part a strong, intense impact. Nevertheless, Iโ€™m doing my best to stay true to the core of the story, convey the intentions I had from the beginning, and bring enjoyment to readers. The part in this chapter where I visualized Misakiโ€™s arousal level was something I personally worried about a lot. I was concerned whether it might break immersion or harmonize well with the art. Iโ€™m really grateful (and relieved haha) that you viewed it positively. Iโ€™m also well aware that there are many conflicting opinions about how this work will wrap up. I think this is a natural reaction that comes from showing the story in separate parts rather than as one complete piece. Since only portions are released at a time, itโ€™s completely natural for readers to want to predict what will happen nextโ€”and I actually see that as one of the biggest advantages of serialization. That said, what Iโ€™d really like to emphasize is that it would be even better if, in the end, you read it as one complete work and experience the overall flow. The meaning that comes through when reading the entire thing is incredibly important. In any case, this series was structured from the very start with a fixed ending in mind, and almost all the feedback Iโ€™ve received so farโ€”whether praise or criticismโ€”has fallen within the range I expected, so Iโ€™m genuinely enjoying it myself. I believe once you see the conclusion, the overall meaning of the work will become much clearer. Sorry for the very long reply. Have a wonderful and happy end of the year! Happy New Year! ๐ŸŽ‰

Han

Dear author, I congratulated you on the day you published the chapter for your phenomenal publication. After carefully reading the last chapter, I must say that I appreciate even more the effort you have made. As I said, it's clear that you've put a lot of heart into this work; the level of detail is extremely high. Misaki's posture, biting the neck. One can guess a similar future image, but with a different attitude. Misaki's level of excitement (video game style) is spot on. You can also see her erect nipples and the fact that she doesn't close her mouth when the male cums on her face. Of the possible options for dominating Misaki, it seems that it starts with deep penetration, rubbing and stimulating parts that the MC cannot reach. The effect on the female is undeniable. She senses that the next part will continue with the help of the other females. Perhaps anal domination while the females take care of the other erogenous zones? Who knows, only you can keep us in suspense with such high expectations, Laliberte. The light in Yuuka and Ryoko's eyes suggests remarkable levels of corruption. Ryoko's plot is somewhat complex, and perhaps not everyone will like it. But the important thing is that you like it. I have read some of your own comments, Laliberte. In them, you talk about your imperfect story. I understand that as an artist you are self-critical, but the story is great as it is. You have a large number of loyal followers, and it is impossible to please them all. We all follow you because we love your genuine stories. We've always liked them, and you've made them according to your tastes. Now you'll have a thousand and one requests, which could overwhelm even the most experienced author. Spoiler: as long as you enjoy doing the work and like what you produce, we'll all like it. As for the people who criticise netorare, if they don't like it, they don't have to watch it. You are very good at your job, and don't let any boring people question that. You have already made your position clear in previous comments, I just want to show you my support. Keep doing what you love, keep up the good work,, and I wish you all the best for the new year. I'm sure you'll be giving us new sketches soon, because you're a sweetheart.. PS. I can't wait for them to give Misaki a hard time. I know you love Ryoko, and she's really great. The good thing about having three female characters is that there's something for everyone! Hugs!

Xanapher

Plz i beg you 1) kuroda fucks YUUKA'S ASS , then immediately deepthroats her and cums in yuuka's mouth , right after that yuuka kisses mc making him drink kurodas cum 2) kuroda fucks yuuka and kisses yuuka while standing , ryoko rims kuroda , misaki sucks kurdas ball 3) mc is forced to lick all 3 girls creampied pussy . Lot of mc humiliation from girls

kronii

No 1 ntr artist in the world right now

kronii


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