Oolong's Proposal - Page 4
Added 2023-11-02 18:36:55 +0000 UTCScript of Page 4:
First, we see a close-up of a framed wedding picture of Goku and Chi-Chi, which sits on a stand not far from Chi-Chi and Oolong, who are out-of-panel. Moaning can be heard in the background. In the framed picture, Chi-Chi kisses Goku on the cheek on their wedding day. Chi-Chi’s discarded g-string is strung overtop of the framed picture.
Next, we cut to Oolong fucking Chi-Chi from behind, aggressively. Both are now naked. The look on Chi-Chi’s face is one of concern and embarrassment. She looks back at Oolong, who pounds her with all the strength he can muster.
CHI-CHI Are you… *AH!*... finished yet!?
Oolong pulls on Chi-Chi’s hair violently, causing her back to arch. He stares downward at Chi-Chi, looking possessed and lost in anger, mocking her.
OOLONG Not until you say it like I asked...!
Oolong takes his phone out again to film himself fucking Chi-Chi. He positions his screen in an effort to capture her saying the words he hopes to make her utter. OOLONG Like you’re saying it to… Goku. Close up on Chi-Chi, whose eyes are starting to well up with tears. Exasperated, she thinks to herself before speaking.
CHI-CHI [THOUGHT BUBBLE] Goku… if you’re out there… please don’t watch.
Comments
Be continuing this comic got a lot in the works, and you can join discord by clicking the link on my twitter account its at linktree at my Twitter description
Pasaway_Komiks
2023-11-23 17:49:00 +0000 UTCHow do I access the compiled pages? Tier said you use discord but I don’t know how to
Hohenheim
2023-11-23 17:33:56 +0000 UTCYes, im just waiting for the script for this to continue
Pasaway_Komiks
2023-11-10 10:57:35 +0000 UTCIs there gonna be more to this hopefully?
Kj
2023-11-10 05:34:07 +0000 UTC
