BONUS/SNEAK-PEEK: JUMBO MUMBO- JUMBO (BLOCK 1)
Added 2025-01-31 05:10:25 +0000 UTCIt's the end of the month, but we're not done yet! Batastrophe 4's first chunk will hit tomorrow!
Since I'm still working on Bigstars, but want to still give y'all some extra growth, I figured I might as well break out this bad boy; Some of you may be old enough to remember either when it first aired on TV, or back in the late 90s/early 2000s, when Toonami re-aired Silverhawks...
Well, this OG opener reel shows you what you mostly need to know, if this is new material for you; I've had this monster-sized CYOA building gradually, all about a WHAT-IF scenario, involving the baddy thug Mumbo-Jumbo getting overpowered...
For context, this chunk is the first 50 pages out of 644, currently, and it's nowhere near finished >.> It's still very, very rough, first draft material, but there is a LOT of big in it, already, and it's only getting worse XD It varies in content, but there are definitely adult threads, so be warned!
I'm still finishing up Bigstars, but if y'all have fun with the teaser phase, I'll certainly bring out more in the future! There's plenty left >////> Included is some more reference for Mumbo!
But yes, more Batastrophe tomorrow! Enjoy, in the meantime!
Comments
I intend to, it's been fun times working on it!
Dnapalmhead
2025-02-03 03:32:38 +0000 UTCOh my gosh, this looks so awesome! Can't say I know the show, but it's a nice introduction for that, and brings back sweet memories of childhood. As for the growth and lewd, my gosh, I am so into it! I cross all my fingers hoping that it will be finished one day! Pretty pleaseeeee...? 😍
Thomas Regel
2025-02-03 03:17:14 +0000 UTCThanks very much! All I want is a vast, cybernetic, evergrowing muscle minotaur--I'm a simple guy <3
Dnapalmhead
2025-02-02 22:50:01 +0000 UTCI love that your ambitions are just as big as your characters. This was an awesome read, and I can't wait to read the rest of it!
Ferren
2025-02-02 19:18:09 +0000 UTCRepeatedly! I'm nowhere near done, and in some stories he's COLOSSAL
Dnapalmhead
2025-02-01 03:15:55 +0000 UTCI'm actually writing it ON writing.com, using their interface to keep track of it, hence the italic/bold tool types on some of the stories in there X3 But yup!
Dnapalmhead
2025-02-01 03:15:28 +0000 UTCAh yes, the "lost" episode (by which I mean lost opportunity. Seriously, he bulks up like that all the time and you don't make an episode where he pushes beyond his limits and it gets to his head? At least that's getting fixed, finally!)
Vadric
2025-02-01 00:09:23 +0000 UTCOh how cool! Is this going to be a CYOA type story? The layout reminds me a lot of your old writing.com days (which were some of my all time pieces of content from you, even tho they were obscure)
Blizzard Wuffy
2025-01-31 21:21:59 +0000 UTCI am convinced a lot of 1980s through 2000s cartoons had writers who smuggled their fetish in to their shows
Chumlee99
2025-01-31 14:11:52 +0000 UTCThough I'm still interested in the next Bigstars Chapter, and your Bigstars series completion, it's nice to see you working on other CYOA ideas ahead of time. Especially with giving out some of the rough material, to see if your followers will be interested in it.
Mr. McTIM
2025-01-31 14:09:56 +0000 UTCI'll get my first exposure to him from your writing, which will be a very enjoyable way to get to know him! Funny enough when I first saw the title I thought it was going to be a Banjo-Kazooie story haha
Blizzard Wuffy
2025-01-31 12:52:25 +0000 UTCYou might like him, he kerbuffs up all the time <3
Dnapalmhead
2025-01-31 09:17:25 +0000 UTCCan't say I've ever heard of this show or this villain, oh well! I'm sure you'll find a way to make it interesting for us :)
Blizzard Wuffy
2025-01-31 09:07:31 +0000 UTCThere's plenty of that here; bad and good endings alike
Dnapalmhead
2025-01-31 06:20:41 +0000 UTCWhich is even funnier since they clearly have at least one macrophile on the writing staff for that show XD Not that it's funny they did it *at all*, but that there wasn't more going on with it
Dnapalmhead
2025-01-31 06:19:59 +0000 UTCThe worst is when they only tease it or it happens and then they never do it again aka when Harley Quinn on HBO did giantess Poison Ivy getting huge after slurping down growth chemicals and my first thought was, SOB why did it take this long for someone to do that idea?! Followed immediately by disappointment it went away
Chumlee99
2025-01-31 06:02:33 +0000 UTCI miss when shows had episodes like this. Let the monster grow massive and rampage for a bit, show off that size difference. Fun stuff!
Domadet
2025-01-31 05:53:46 +0000 UTCThat's the one
Chumlee99
2025-01-31 05:23:15 +0000 UTCAh, the one where she got huge, and went from being building-sized to carrying an entire ship (like, an oil tanker, even?) like nothing–good ol' scene-by-scene proportion changes!
Dnapalmhead
2025-01-31 05:21:34 +0000 UTCIf there is one thing I can respect about 1980s cartoons (as a 90s kid) They did whatever they wanted. THough for a brief moment I had this confused with Skysurfer Strike Force cause they had a dedicated macro grow spree episode
Chumlee99
2025-01-31 05:17:08 +0000 UTC
