CYOA #5: BIGSTARS, PART 3 (+ PINA/BILL POLL)
Added 2024-09-14 10:05:29 +0000 UTCEhehehehehehehehehe >///////>
Well, so
Maybe this one got a bit spicy, a bit out of hand--it has a bit of setup, to feel organic, and ah...then, you know...maybe a 4,000+ word growth scene that pumped it into the biggest installment thus far <.< I gave it the usual once-over, to try and improve the flow and keep repetitive words to a minimum (between weeks, it's probably easy to notice, I' m aware <3)
Side note: I'm super-happy to see how close CURVES keeps getting, knowing that this is a major muscle crowd, for the most part! It warms my heart that one Curve even made it in!
With that said...back to MUSCLE XD Timing! This next round is one that I actually have no idea on, how it'll go .3. I have a rough guess, I mean, but I can't really call it. It's always fun as hell seeing the polls come in, gauging what folks want, and in what quantities! I love eet ^^
Right, back to Legoshi-Louis style! Multiple choices again! Have fun!
--Dh
Comments
Though not my most well-liked characters, I'm very curious to see how this will play out between Pina and Bill. Especially since both characters are full of themselves as it already is, and have gone against each other before. It may just results in a battle of "Horns vs. Stripes" kind of ordeal.
Mr. McTIM
2024-10-01 23:22:57 +0000 UTCT///////T <3
Dnapalmhead
2024-09-14 12:47:40 +0000 UTCTired indeed, her determination is no joke >.> Well I certainly believe you wrote her quite accurately then, heck everyone’s been so written on point, great job bro <3
Ryuakira
2024-09-14 12:40:29 +0000 UTCHehe, she goes where the action is! X3 T is for Tired!! And yeah, going back over Cosmo's chapters in the manga, she seemed capable of both sides--she just found her own turn-on <3 Thanks, bro!!
Dnapalmhead
2024-09-14 12:38:31 +0000 UTCMan…that was a hell of a read Big Blue, it’s a bit surreal how Cosmo was just putting on an act with Juno at the start but once the growth kicked in, heh, well…hard to NOT feel any enjoyment out of it, no? X///3 And this Operative T…she’s sure seen a lot, and been nearly killed…amazed she answered the phone O_o
Ryuakira
2024-09-14 12:22:26 +0000 UTCIt's a win-win, windeed! <3
Dnapalmhead
2024-09-14 11:57:10 +0000 UTCWehehehe, such are my ways! But thank you! I was looking forward to writing them, for...pure reasons! >.>; Yes!
Dnapalmhead
2024-09-14 11:56:50 +0000 UTCAnother great story, really loved the attitudes in this one especially. Cosmo and Juno played off each other excellently. Though I am slightly confused about the tally of ten giants. Am I right in thinking others have happened in universe and we just haven’t read their stories yet? But that leaves roughly 9, so the tenth is a mystery. Still! Mysteries are good to look forward to so I’m excited!
Saatchi & Co
2024-09-14 11:42:55 +0000 UTCMuscles are great. Seeing them getting bigger and bigger is a joy (for our crowd anyway). But, there is something equally if uniquely delightful with some gorgeous curves.
Vadric
2024-09-14 11:19:55 +0000 UTC
