CYOA #3: MAID IN HEAVEN, FINALE
Added 2024-02-25 07:48:35 +0000 UTCThat's it, she's done! First full draft, that is o3o
I was worried I'd spent all the best stuff on the previous bosses, but with time a proper final boss battle emerged. And kept emerging. >.> And kept emerging >___>; By the time I forced myself to stop throwing in more ideas, it was already a monster of a chapter, and by the time it wrapped, eheh, it clocked in at 78 pages o3o
This final battle is considerably longer, I think, than any of the others, but I really did want to make the Archmage as intimidating and difficult as the story buildup kept insisting he was X3
HERE'S THE THING: I went so bonkers on the ending that, IF FOLKS PREFER, I'm including a softer, much shorter version as well, over 7K words smaller, and more streamlined, so if you just want resolution, you have it faster =3
If you want the big, bad, nutso version, hehehehehe, enjoy >=3 It's a game, so why not call it by its proper name, HARD MODE? You get more scenes of insanity and lewdness, and FAR larger sizes, too. Such is the reward for the soul brave enough to tackle 27K+ words!
This was a little intimidating at first, I won't lie; but damn, was it fun! Being forced to mostly work with what y'all pick made for interesting challenges! Thank you all so much for participating, and shaping it into what it's become! A 302/319-page behemoth of dirtiness, action, swelling, and wholesome self-affirmation <3
And swelling!
I'll start the full novel edit next week, then release the completed version! Illustrations will take awhile >.> But they are part of it! More FLEX is inbound at the end of the month, toooo!!
Comments
You're always most welcome ^;=;^ and I bet she was! :D
Jespe
2024-03-01 07:43:04 +0000 UTCThank you! ^////^ I'm so happy you enjoyed it! And yes, Jestmi was...very fun to write <3
Dnapalmhead
2024-03-01 07:36:10 +0000 UTC...not sure if the patreon cut last part of my comment: Goes without saying the chpt 6 was my favorite chapter, combined all the other pieces with the party, Gala, Grath, Jestmin, cabin, transformation, fights, the biggess - it's really like comparing which jewel is the prettiest in the crown :'D Althoug I still waiting the right time to get to read the hard mode in one sitting - Had to share my pleasure reading this phenomenal work <3
Jespe
2024-03-01 07:25:49 +0000 UTCI was waiting the whole story to come out, and holy moley was it worth it - even if I'm only managed to read to end of normal run's chapter 7 in two evening's sitting, and it's been a huge pleasure. Honestly I wasn't prepared how much I would loved the story and characters; despite being bigger enjoyer of visual comics, this along with "free lunch" are my new favorites in your work. To me this was the perfect balance of story, both situational humor and witty dialog, absurd turns and the characters! All baddies, companions and main charactes got to shine - The relational and emotional nuance, especially the final chapters, the conversation with cleaning the dishes (gosh, that scene) - That's the stuff why I love reading <3 Goes without saying the chpt 6 was my favorite chapter, combined all the other pieces with the party, Gala, Grath, Jestmin, cabin, transformation, fights, the biggess - it's really like comparing which jewel is the prettiest in the crown :'D Althoug I still waiting the right time to get to read the hard mode in one sitting - Had to share my pleasure reading this phenomenal work <3
Jespe
2024-03-01 07:06:00 +0000 UTCThanks so much, Blizz T///T Glad you enjoyed it!
Dnapalmhead
2024-02-28 08:36:36 +0000 UTCI haven't been able to comment about this yet because I had to read it, but wow DNA what fantastic work. Seriously just constantly blown away at your writing skills dude. You even got some out of control multiplying in there, simply sensational!
Blizzard Wuffy
2024-02-28 04:13:04 +0000 UTCHaha, that he certainly did! I must say I was quite happy to see that happen X3
Gréviste
2024-02-26 08:18:25 +0000 UTCGrath got his share, for sure ;3
Dnapalmhead
2024-02-26 07:45:03 +0000 UTCThe whole story has been a treat to read! And this finale had a delightful amount of growth and bigness for everyone involved, lovely ^w^
Gréviste
2024-02-26 07:39:34 +0000 UTCThe mode that really makes one hard :3
Borusa Ryalam
2024-02-25 18:28:03 +0000 UTCThanks very much! ^^ I think I know which ending you went with, then, wehehe =3
Dnapalmhead
2024-02-25 18:12:01 +0000 UTCGosh, a glorious end to a wonderful story! And so much BIG to oogle~
Borusa Ryalam
2024-02-25 17:44:26 +0000 UTCI’m a bit of a fast reader XD
Keiros
2024-02-25 12:04:56 +0000 UTCHappy it was good! Man, y'all read fast ^///^
Dnapalmhead
2024-02-25 10:49:00 +0000 UTCA beautiful end to an epically massive adventure ^^
Keiros
2024-02-25 10:47:44 +0000 UTC
