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Tess - Tentative Final

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Did the majority of this on stream at twitch.tv/raikoart

Tess - Tentative Final

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Sure, I'll try red again or removing the blood! I was trying to toe the line between "I didn't get it" and "It's too forcing", thank you for your feedback!

Hmm, to explain I actually thought of it initially as some kind of nano-tech because I was drawing inspiration from Nova(Starcraft) and Widowmaker who wears her inner suit like some kind of second skin.. Yup, I wrote a bit about the world, expect it soon with some art as well!

I personally don't like the blood on the buttons. The reason I liked it before, when the buttons were red, was because it was subtle. It's kind of too obvious now. It might be better if the buttons were just damaged, rather than bloodied, or if they were made red again.

I looked at her clothes - on what strength holds the upper half of her costume? I'm talking about the décolletage or more precisely such a deep cutout ... looks a bit not functional... and i have another suggestion - could you write some amount of story to your art with Tess? because the drawings you make - wonderful, but I want to learn more about the world in which this character lives.

JMPR01

Stop teasing and release the game.

Walter Joost Penning

Looks great! I like that she isn’t completely unscathed. Makes her look all the more bad ass.

Charles Hartford


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