Friday Posting: Lily In America Page #4
Added 2025-04-11 13:00:12 +0000 UTCLily seems to have found a solution to her conundrum she is in with her professor but is it more then she wants to give to the problem? I hope you are all enjoying reading the comic. I am having fun drawing her and telling her story!
The style is still a work in progress but it is starting to settle into something that I can show a range of emotions while still staying "on sheet". I really appreciate the feedback from you where this style is failing and when it is moving in a positive direction.
Have a great weekend everyone!!
Comments
Thanks for the critiques! Lily’s hair is a pain to do but I’ve made a brush to make it easier. I’m still adjusting her boobs. I’m thinking a smaller breast larger nipple. I’ll try a few more sketches and maybe something will pop out at me (hopefully not putting out an eye!).
Julia Sinope
2025-04-12 14:12:08 +0000 UTCUpon second look… or maybe third or fourth… there are a couple intriguing details that are super well executed. And deserving a call out. The hair, one. Wow. (Compare to Lorna hair, i like Lily’s way more, and I love Lorna’s do) And nipples, two. Shape of boobs is super nice too, but nipples on Lil’ are just perfection. Areoles are less puffy then LL, and slightly smaller. Fits the character really nicely. This girl could cause accidents.
Aaron S.
2025-04-12 07:20:37 +0000 UTCThe anger and grimacing/wincing faces are my favorite. And the rest do make sense the way they are, but just curious if showing teeth more consistently might add to her or will it take away??
Aaron S.
2025-04-11 14:57:39 +0000 UTCPage/Story—🤩 But i would like to see adding in her chompers here and there… like when she is mad, happy, or forcing a smile—😅😃😁🤪😬
Aaron S.
2025-04-11 14:47:57 +0000 UTCI love how she gets feisty!
James Katarn
2025-04-11 13:46:53 +0000 UTC
