The Little Lorna WebToon: Part 1 - STRIP
Added 2024-06-14 14:55:23 +0000 UTCLittle Lorna is in a WebComic story that is TOTALLY vanilla about an average life of an average American girl just living an average life.
As with all young girls, man she calls "Daddy" is not her real father, her mother is a porn star and her brother (who is not her REAL brother) torments and exploits his little sister constantly, and her next door neighbour is secretly obsessed with her.
Of course, just like every American girl, she channels everything that happens to her through her imaginary friend "Bunny" who is both her confident and nemesis.
I apologize in advance for telling such a mundane and average story of what any American girl needs to do to navigate the world of adulthood infested by a world of devious men.
Please try and stay awake while reading this!
UPDATE:
July 15 - Part 2 is finished! Lets all hope for Little Lorna's safety!
July 14 - Coach Carter uses every resource at his disposal to make sure he gets quality talent to his school... and that starts with getting quality talent on the cheer squad!
July 11 - I didn't like Little Lorna's outfit so I changed it! I think this one looks a little classier to contrast between her and Holly.
July 10 - Well, thank goodness there is a code of conduct for erotic comic artists! Can you imagine if there wasn't?
July 9 - Busted!
July 8 - Someone was mentioning that I need to draw out the sex scenes a little more. Well, HERE YOU GO! I sometimes get so impatient to keep the story moving that I forget to linger a little more on the action sequences.
July 7 - When a girl starts fantasizing about something it is really a rabbit hole where there is no escape!
July 4 - Happy Treason-day!!! (aka Independence day outside the Commonwealth) I thought yesterday was Tuesday! I was going to take Wednesday off which I thought was TODAY! Well, as promised, here is Thursday's panel. I'll take Friday and Saturday off and hopefully next week I'll keep better track of time. Enjoy! This one was a lot of fun to draw!
July 3 - I realized that the story I want to do with this does not jive very well with page 2 so I updated it. No more finish and bunny talk. I hope to get bunny in the story soon! I think he would be a perfect antagonist and narrator of Little Lorna's peril.
July 2 - I had the next three pages all roughed out but I just got an idea that I think you would all enjoy instead! I hope you enjoy Part 2!
July 1 - I'll start a new chapter every 10 pages to keep the image size down but as a bonus, I'll draw a new sexy cover for each chapter. Cover for Part 2 posted!
June 25- I lied! As always, I'm so untrustworthy and I apologize but I posted a page today. It's tough to wake up 5am and sit around until 10am NOT drawing so I hope you enjoy! I promise promise PROMISE I will take the day off tomorrow!
This will be the last page in this post. I'm going to keep it to ten pages at a time. I am also going to retool how I offer these to different tiers. Be on the look out for a new post of the first 10 pages.
Have a great day everyone!!
Comments
I cant wait for the start of part 3!
James Katarn
2024-07-15 22:27:23 +0000 UTCHow about an explanation, Juilio? If the strips are better for some newbies, fine, but how about ALSO posting a panel/page at a time for your long time faithful REAL fans?
fannum
2024-07-15 20:34:06 +0000 UTCi feel the same. I preffer the 1 panel. Webtoons do not necessarily mean 1 gigantic file. And all this multiple posting has made me disengaged from posting and commenting. Is hard to do when it's all posted to one universal post. Apparently this is better for the new users 🤷♂️
Tinhy
2024-07-15 13:41:06 +0000 UTCIn the Little Lorna Universe, schools recruit families with hot daughters to move to their districts because it attracts athletic talent. The con goes down deep!
Julia Sinope
2024-07-14 23:15:51 +0000 UTCIs this the start of a “recruiting tour” where the heads from all the top universities come to give LL a taste of their school spirit? She’s gonna need some one-on-one time with each coach and maybe a group pow wow to thoroughly pump her full of their team fundamentals 😉
DConn Audios
2024-07-14 21:55:29 +0000 UTCI’m all too aware of the censorship regulations. I was there for your early work. When you had full control over what your characters said in your panels. I get it though. You’ve adapted well.
DConn Audios
2024-07-11 16:07:52 +0000 UTCHow did you know I edited the word out! Lol. oh well. Gotta play the game.
Julia Sinope
2024-07-11 16:06:08 +0000 UTCI miss the days when you could print the word “R@pe” in comic character quotes without being demonetized.
DConn Audios
2024-07-11 15:23:18 +0000 UTCI wanna love it but agree
Aaron S.
2024-07-09 09:20:41 +0000 UTCI don't understand the reason for, and don't like this strip of images format. C'mon, Juilio!
fannum
2024-07-08 23:49:31 +0000 UTCAnd!!! Maaaad props for fitting in public exposure (even if it’s in a day dream)
Aaron S.
2024-07-08 20:46:45 +0000 UTCMaximum 🥵 and 😜
Aaron S.
2024-07-08 20:42:34 +0000 UTCLMAO! The poop bag and the purple crocs hahaha
Aaron S.
2024-07-08 20:40:45 +0000 UTClol I wonder why?
James Katarn
2024-07-07 13:45:30 +0000 UTCHaha. No one ever moves out of the neighbourhood strangely!
Julia Sinope
2024-07-07 13:44:49 +0000 UTCi love where this is going, I winder if any houses are for sale in that neighbourhood? lol
James Katarn
2024-07-07 13:31:01 +0000 UTCHmm. Good point. Could be a good sub plot like in “The Loophole”
Julia Sinope
2024-07-05 21:13:56 +0000 UTCDon’t think Larry would last long with all this foreplay been going on in each other’s heads for years…
Aaron S.
2024-07-05 17:08:44 +0000 UTCI love todays panel, the look of innocence in her eyes on the left and shock on the right, and the text matching perfectly
James Katarn
2024-07-05 12:28:55 +0000 UTCThat hole sure is your Larry!
Tinhy
2024-07-05 03:40:17 +0000 UTCOoooooh! That could be fun!
RH
2024-07-04 23:11:01 +0000 UTCI need to find a good place to work in Bunny. I’m just having too much fun atm and don’t want to ruin the flow (or ruin bunny when I write him in!).
Julia Sinope
2024-07-04 18:13:45 +0000 UTCDads and Sons are always in competition! Little Lorna is so caught in the middle of their dynamic.
Julia Sinope
2024-07-04 18:12:29 +0000 UTCAdding for this level of support. Full pages for higher level. Same resolution (almost).
Julia Sinope
2024-07-04 18:11:27 +0000 UTCMom may have some ulterior motives…
Julia Sinope
2024-07-04 18:10:37 +0000 UTCmom always knows! Curious, will you still be posting the new full pages or just adding onto the story
James Katarn
2024-07-03 21:09:10 +0000 UTCHmmmm . .. .. Cum on LL ! Listen to Mom! LOL
RH
2024-07-02 21:32:39 +0000 UTCI can't wait to "meet" Bunny
James Katarn
2024-07-01 15:46:11 +0000 UTCHaha… ‘No’ means Face, Tits, or Ass!! Cum on Luke, remember your training
Aaron S.
2024-07-01 15:19:55 +0000 UTCI love the new format for the completed strip!
James Katarn
2024-06-30 23:03:46 +0000 UTCOuu! I can hardly wait to see what Luke has up his sleeve that’ll get LL back and put her in her place
DConn Audios
2024-06-30 22:29:09 +0000 UTCPlease tell me where is the best place to place proposals? I wrote in the "technical support" section of the discord, but I'm not sure I chose the right place.
REB
2024-06-30 12:59:21 +0000 UTCThere will be a small update to the last page. Coming soon! Next post on Monday.
Julia Sinope
2024-06-27 16:51:09 +0000 UTCwow unexpected love the page, the perspective, like how you differentiated the dialogue between the two
James Katarn
2024-06-25 15:49:54 +0000 UTCtodays page a correction of the previous?
James Katarn
2024-06-22 15:16:50 +0000 UTCI’ll stop i swear, but long legs on short girls is just 😽🤤
Aaron S.
2024-06-21 04:20:06 +0000 UTCChoice pose👌🥰
Aaron S.
2024-06-21 04:18:26 +0000 UTCCorrection: “what is going *in* up there?”
Aaron S.
2024-06-21 04:17:26 +0000 UTCLol. Little Lorna always needs a little persuading.
Julia Sinope
2024-06-20 19:50:08 +0000 UTCI love Luke’s Assertiveness. Sometimes you just gotta put your foot down. Or in this case her head down…😂
DConn Audios
2024-06-20 15:33:20 +0000 UTCoppps, dad's gonna be pissed, or... he just may want LL for himself
James Katarn
2024-06-20 15:21:36 +0000 UTCLuke is like "i dunno what NO means, hyuk hyuk". Hopefully we get LL ragdolled now hehe. Just how she likes it.
Tinhy
2024-06-20 15:20:17 +0000 UTCYes. Strange rules indeed. They could never be explicit so when I submitted a comic they would just reject it and they said they could not detail which pages were in non-compliance. I just figured out the rules by trial and error. Tentacle sex is okay apparently! Implied penetration is alright.
Julia Sinope
2024-06-20 05:02:43 +0000 UTCSticking with my random questions (before i get canceled) WAaaaaaY back when, during the kindle days, was it not strange that you were able to show full nudity on the female form, but no stiffies or actual penetration? (Among other rules i’d imagine) Apologies from before
Aaron S.
2024-06-20 04:54:59 +0000 UTCif there were an LL movie, who would you see playing her?
James Katarn
2024-06-19 17:04:52 +0000 UTCI’ll update the pages. Lukes hair is supposed to be light brown. Only Linday’s hair is blonde and only Little Lorna’s halr is Chocolate brown because they have no biological connections to anyone in the WHOLE WORLD!!
Julia Sinope
2024-06-19 17:03:50 +0000 UTCIm not insane, but Luke's hair changed colors. Also: hell yeah Luke, take what's yours. waking up to a new page is amazing, i love this Sinope!
Tinhy
2024-06-19 17:01:26 +0000 UTC"daddy is waiting for me" "My dad can wait" love it!
James Katarn
2024-06-19 16:58:13 +0000 UTCThere. Lol
Aaron S.
2024-06-19 02:47:38 +0000 UTCThat sounded wrong. Im not talking about Lorna. I would never go there with her, she has enough problems…
Aaron S.
2024-06-19 02:45:43 +0000 UTCLorna is turning into a reason to get up every morning ... wtg!
fannum
2024-06-18 17:08:34 +0000 UTCanother great page, building to some naughty fun?
James Katarn
2024-06-18 16:47:51 +0000 UTC🤔
Julia Sinope
2024-06-18 13:00:11 +0000 UTC…and at 18, they looked 21. So at around (17) they could have passed for legal age
Aaron S.
2024-06-18 04:25:32 +0000 UTCBtw… sorta random but LL looks like an 18 year old Linda Ronstadt mixed with an 18 year old kate bush!! Am i right?
Aaron S.
2024-06-18 04:19:00 +0000 UTCI was just thinking big bro Luke hasn’t been around much lately. Glad he still shows how much he cares.
Aaron S.
2024-06-18 04:14:02 +0000 UTCyou certainly have gotten my day off started on the right note :)
James Katarn
2024-06-17 15:50:57 +0000 UTCHopefully the pace is just right.
Julia Sinope
2024-06-17 15:40:56 +0000 UTCHehe. Its a never ending story. This is going to be the longest day!
Julia Sinope
2024-06-17 15:40:35 +0000 UTCGet your mind out of the gutter! Its sleep drool (okay, I lie! 😂)
Julia Sinope
2024-06-17 15:40:05 +0000 UTCI want to take days off of Sunday and Wednesday but its a little gift for all the daddies out there!
Julia Sinope
2024-06-17 15:39:31 +0000 UTC…not yet… soon! ;)
Julia Sinope
2024-06-17 15:38:50 +0000 UTCI hope everyone gets a good jerk in the morning before they start the day!
Julia Sinope
2024-06-17 15:38:17 +0000 UTC...poor Larry, lol
James Katarn
2024-06-17 15:37:27 +0000 UTCanother great page to wake up to, love luke hiding in the closet
James Katarn
2024-06-17 15:31:34 +0000 UTC... don't I get credit for the Quintuple Crowning ... and the gushing acclamation broad-minded Lorna so willingly accepts after energetically putting her ass on the line ... and all those other places!
fannum
2024-06-16 20:34:23 +0000 UTCDouble… triple… QUADRUPLE entendres!
Julia Sinope
2024-06-16 18:54:11 +0000 UTC... start the day with a bang, and you're ready to absorb the hard things that rise the rest of the day, opening your easy acceptance of whatever comes up!
fannum
2024-06-16 17:44:50 +0000 UTCIm liking the humor hehe. So close to his frank and beans, but yet so far!!! A good dicking does wonders for the start of the day LL!!
Tinhy
2024-06-16 16:50:17 +0000 UTCanother amazing page, the p[erfect "fathers day:
James Katarn
2024-06-16 16:37:01 +0000 UTCWell isn’t she a worn out, sloppy mess? I’ll bet it’s the late night IR gangbangs that’s got her so tired. Poor little LL
DConn Audios
2024-06-16 00:09:16 +0000 UTCYup . . the days just cum 'n go . . .
RH
2024-06-15 21:22:12 +0000 UTCHaha!
Julia Sinope
2024-06-14 20:53:14 +0000 UTCExcited by the prospect of daily LL adventures, TY!
James Katarn
2024-06-14 17:45:00 +0000 UTCWe just are here to spy on Lorna as she navigates the bumps of life (and thrusts and squeezes and gushes and ....!) with her alter ego Guilia.
fannum
2024-06-14 16:32:24 +0000 UTCI thought it a funny writeup as I constantly say how boring my art is and how you continue to protest. Well... it works here because I'm trying to pretend that Little Lorna's life is nothing out of the ordinary. Just what EVERY young girl goes through in America. Ha! Thanks! I have a feeling I may enjoy this format more.
Julia Sinope
2024-06-14 15:20:26 +0000 UTCAw i see what you are doing. Stop downplaying your content! let us have a say hehe. Every time you say vanilla i actually enjoy the content. I think you re finding out that you do better short format content with just hawt sexual stuff, and i feel you get more enjoyment from long form, more intricate and complicated story telling. I think you do not get enjoyment from this current approach, but you giving us some very hot stuff. Allw e want to see is daddy's having naughty funs with the petite gals. Simple hehe.
Tinhy
2024-06-14 15:01:11 +0000 UTC
