BumDay Posting - Girl's Road Trip Page 4
Added 2023-11-20 17:20:29 +0000 UTCSorry that I ran out of time for the Funday Posting. The page just needed a few more hours of work but I was pretty busy for a Sunday.
I'm really liking how this story is going so far but I was wrestling with Harlan's dialogue because he is a bit of a scumbag. His last bit of dialogue on this page was WAY worse as he calls Holly something racist but I figure this is a bit better while still getting the jist of what Harlan is like
I hope this brightens up everyone's Monday!
(The comic is pinned to the top of my page when I'm working on it or you can click the tag "girls road trip" and scroll down to the pages).
Comments
;) I must have rewrote Harlan’s line a dozen times!
Julia Sinope
2023-11-21 01:45:25 +0000 UTCOh crap now you’re making us go down the racist joke possibilities… “Shit, it wasn’t even in her Chorizo 🌮 , that shouldn’t even count!”
Aaron S.
2023-11-21 00:21:50 +0000 UTC
