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Chapter 22 - A little bit, at least

Hey guys! I've been sick and a little bit stressed about book 2 release, plus this chapter is... making me do more world building that I had planned out. However, Book 2 is releasing tonight! I'm super excited, and if any of you can leave reviews, I would be forever grateful for the boost. <3 Thanks for your support!

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In one of the last paragraphs Camille is talking about how Jadeโ€™s body has stabilised, with the paragraph ending in Jadeโ€™s head. There does seem to be missing quotations when Camille finishes talking, however.

Aaron Canning

You can type lying down ;). Get well soon kidda. On a comment note, this chapter provides a little more context to our MC. It does seem a little short and I am intrigued as to how Jade copes with what I hope are Misogyny, racism that she has had absolutely no experience of yet.

Mark Taylor


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