TQ 39-42 side by sides
Added 2022-02-23 13:16:56 +0000 UTC
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Haha yeah, basically the old versions were made when I had just finished with Persephone and I was still stuck doing a lot of horizontal panels out of habit even when it didn't work very well. Now I'm actually taking the time to organize them better from the thumbnail stage and it's helping a lot :)
Allison Shaw
2022-02-24 10:04:00 +0000 UTCThe art is dramatically better now, of course, but so is the layout, and I can’t believe it took me this long to figure out why. You’re making the panels vertical! And it’s brilliant! Subjects get more space, you have to draw fewer backgrounds, and every facial expression is magnified! I also love how you fit more into each panel, like Gomi’s reaction to Kizarasunga buying meat, and the military reject behind the other patrons in the first panel of page 40.
ABunchOTrees
2022-02-24 08:11:14 +0000 UTCI also really love the extra Thrrein grump expressions
Selah
2022-02-24 07:32:12 +0000 UTCAs an ardent Zuzendi I can't express how much I love these, they're SO good!
Selah
2022-02-24 07:29:20 +0000 UTCI loved the original so I had no idea you could improve them that much! Incredible!
Cascadia Rising
2022-02-24 01:55:34 +0000 UTC"If his arm's that big, just imagine the rest of him, Razendi!" "I am. Oh, yes, I am."
StLOrca
2022-02-24 01:08:42 +0000 UTCAhhh that's so sweet thank you
Allison Shaw
2022-02-23 15:56:01 +0000 UTCThank you <3<3
Allison Shaw
2022-02-23 15:55:47 +0000 UTC😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 I just love everything you do~❤️
Victor
2022-02-23 15:34:42 +0000 UTCPage 42 is still one of my favorite pages, and I love the extra details you added to it. Your comic is amazing, Alli, and it just keeps getting better!
Jack Newbill
2022-02-23 15:19:58 +0000 UTC
